高考英语写作专题经典讲座二十三 句子美化技术2

1、PAGE 第PAGE 页码3页/总NUMPAGES 总页数3页Evaluation Warning: The document was created with Spire.Doc for .NET.写作专题二十三 句子美化技术2：定语位置句子美化技术2：定语位置一定语的形态修饰名词的成分叫定语。形容词、名词、介词短语、非谓语形式、定语从句等语言结构都可以充当定语。这里我们主要介绍最为普通的形容词与介词充当定语的现象。1. 形容词充当定语例题:The doctor spoke to the patient.The doctor was sympathetic.The patient was o

2、verweight.划线部分的doctor 与patient 同时可以用形容词进行修饰，一个单词充当定语时，该词放在名词前面，词组（两个以上单词）充当定语时，该词组放在名词后面。答案合并为：The sympathetic doctor spoke to the overweight patient.2. 动词变形充当定语Example:The farmer ran from the bull.The framer was frightened.The bull was charging.Solution:The frightened farmer ran from the charging b

3、ull.3. 介词充当定语例题:The dance club admits everyone.The dance club is for teenagers.Everyone is between 18 and 21.合并为:The dance for teenagers admits everyone between 18 and 21.二 定语的位置安排通过巧妙地安排定语的位置，我们可以组合出各种各样的新意义。公式短定语A中心名词B长定语C说明：定语修饰名词的时候，一个单词的定语放前面，两个单词以上的定语放在后面，定语可以是：形容词，名词，介词，分词等等。那么，定语组合AB型 短定语 a

4、big，open area BC型 长定语 an area with some sports facilities ABC型定语齐备 a big openareawith some sports facilitiesfor people to do exercise 例子1： 此外，还有健身场地和健身器材。 并列关系Besides, there is a big open area with some sports facilities for people to do exercise. 并列定语 中心词 斜体部分为后置定语思路：并列关系拆解为多重修饰关系。由于area是中心词，短的定语“b

5、ig open”放在名词前面，长的定语“with some sports facilities for people to do exercise”放在名词后面。例子2：经过了半个多世纪的伟大努力，一个贫穷落后，积贫积弱(weak)和被受屈辱的(humiliated)旧中国已经成为了一个独立(independent)自主(democratic)和初步繁荣(prosperity) 的新中国。第一步：缩句子：一个旧中国成为了一个新中国。An old China has become a new China. 第二步：在前面加短定语：一个贫穷落后，积贫积弱和被受屈辱的旧中国已经成为了一个独立自主的新

6、中国。A weak, underdeveloped and humiliated old China has become an independent and democratic new China.第三步：在后面加长定语：A weak, underdeveloped and humiliated old China has become an independent and democratic new China on the early stage of prosperity.第四步：加上剩下的部分：After 50 years of unremitting efforts, a weak, underdeveloped and humiliated old China has beco