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1、精品基础教育教学资料，需要可下载使用！四档作文晋升五档专练授课提示：对应学生用书第74页A（2018全国卷口）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏英语天地写一那么通知，请大家观看一部 英文短片Growing Together,内容包括：.短片内容：学校的开展；.放映时间、地点；.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：1.词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。下面是一篇学生的四档作文，请将它提升为五档。Boys and girls ,May I have your attention, please? Recently, I have 1 a good news to tell you that a goo

2、d movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us and enjoy it! Here 2 is some relevant details about it.To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together; which is about the development of our beloved school. 3 We think the movie will be meaningful and interesting. Besides, please note

3、 that it will be shown in the library from 2 : 00 to 4 : 00 in the afternoon on June 9th.Every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence tha

4、t you will have a great time then.Students Union考生能根据试题要求组织材料进行写作。It is everyones responsibility to protect the environment. If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the Earth. Lets take actionfrom now on!Students Union短文分段合理，第一段表达通知；第二段主要通知时间、地点。第三段提出几点建议。本文 得17分。2.考生驾驭句子的能

5、力不强，文中出现如下语言错误：【1】句中的a应去掉。【2】is应改为are。【3】句可使用it作形式主语以 提高语言的高级表达句式：It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting.五档作文Boys and girls ,May I have your attention, please? Recently, I have good news to tell you that an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcom

6、e to join us and enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. It is believed that the movie will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, please note that it will be show

7、n in the library from 2 : 00 to 4 : 00 in the afternoon on June 9th.Whats more, every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I hold the firm belief that you wi

8、ll have a great time then.Students UnionB(2016全国卷n)假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography dub)将举办国际中学 生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：.主题：环境保护；.展览时间；.投稿由B箱：intlphotoshowqmschoolo注意：I.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。下面是一篇学生的四档作文，请将它提升为五档。Dear Peter;How are you doing? As the International Students Photography Show

9、is approaching, Id like to invite you to take part in this activity.1 The photography club of my school will hold a photo exhibition for international middle school students from June 18 to June 30. Ive heard that you are quite skilled in taking photographs, so I hope you can offer some photos for t

10、his exhibition. 2 The theme of this show is about environmental protection. 3 If you can join in this activity, I believe you must win first prize. You can send your works to intlphotoshowgmschooLLooking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua.短文基本涵盖了全部的写作要点。本文得16分。.考生对时态的把握比拟准确，短文以一般现在时为主，穿插使用一般将来

11、时，偶尔 使用现在完成时。.考生驾驭句子的能力比拟强，文中语法错误较少。【2】中介词about多余，应去掉。.有些句子没有语法错误，但是语言不太地道。如【1】句，改为被动句，可以提升语 言表达效果：The photo exhibition for international middle school students will be held in mv school from June 18 to June 30. J. 3 句明显带有汉语表达的痕迹，可改为： If_youoin_in_this_activity,_Lbelieve_you_will_pobably_wir_first_p

12、rize/If_youoin _in_this_activity,_you_can_put_your_talent_into_good_use.五档作文Dear Peter;How are you getting along? Pm writing to invite you to join in the International Students Photography Show held by the photography club of our school.As your best friend, I know you are skilled at taking photos. N

13、ow the International Students Photography Show is a chance for you to display your talent. The theme is environmental protection, aiming to call on more people to do what they can to protect the environment. The show will last from 18 June to 30 June.If you want to join in the activity, please send

14、your photos to int/photoshowgmschoolbefore May 31. Dont hesitate to ask me for help if you have any questions.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua C(2016全国卷I)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简 历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意：1.词数100左右;2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。下面是一篇学生的四档作文，请将它

15、提升为五档。Dear Ms Jenkins,How is it going? The students really miss you very much. 1 Everyone of us excepts to see you soon. These days, I wrote some plans about summer vacation and my arrangements. I want to do a part-time job in a foreign company in my city. What do you think of my plan?I have written

16、 an application and personal resume. 2 Could you help me correct something wrong? 3 I really want to get this job, so please help me correct the unsuitable words and format. I have put it in the letter.Thanks for your help. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua.这封书信分段合理，正文由三段组成。但写作要点不完整。在第二段

17、的最后，应告 诉外教，希望她在什么时间修改好发给自己。本文得16分。.整体上考生能够使用正确的句子表达思想，但文中存在少量语法错误。【1】句中的 Everyone错误，应写为:Every one ;由于紧张或粗心，考生误将expects写成exceptso 2句为疑问句。应把something改为anything。.考生的语言基本功不扎实，语言表达生硬牵强：如【3】句应改为： I really want to get this Job, so please help me correct any mistakes you find ir_my_applicatior_ard_check_my_

18、format.五档作文Dear Ms Jenkins,How is everything going these days? Im writing to seek help from you.The summer vacation is around the cornerf so I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during my two-month holiday. As you know, working experience is of vital importance when I graduate from co

19、llege. Therefore Id like to gain some working experience by doing the part-time job. Besides, I can earn some pocket money to buy what I need.In order to apply for the job, I have written my application and personal resume. Please polish my application and check the format of my resume when it is co

20、nvenient for you. I would appreciate it if you send it to me by Friday.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li HuaD（2015全国卷工）假定你是李华，你校英文报外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗 和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：.栏目介绍；.稿件内容；.稿件长度：约400词；.交稿日期：6月28日前。注意：1.词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to w

21、rite an article for our schools English newspaper.Yours ,Li Hua下面是一篇学生的四档作文，请将它提升为五档。Dear_Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The new column Foreign Culture”, which aiming to introduce western cultures to the students, needs articles about American holiday

22、customs and the life about high school students.As far as Im concerned, as a native speaker; it is easy for you to introduce the custom and culture of your country to the readers. 3 Just tell us how you spend your traditional holidays and what you usually do at school. 4 One thing you should remembe

23、r is that you should write your article within approximately 400 words and send it to me until June 28th.Looking forward to your early reply.Yoursz_Li_Hua.短文涵盖了写作要求的四个要点。基本上完成了写作任务。文中多处使用高级词 汇和较为复杂的表达方法，提升了短文的档次，为短文增加了亮点。如：approximately , aiming to doz as far as Im concernedo 本文得 18 分。.由于考生的语言功底不够扎实

24、，短文中有几处语言表达不够地道，具体如下：1句中的关系代词which多余，应去掉；或在which后加is ,构成一个非限制性定 语从句。2句中的introduce与汉语中的介绍意思不完全相同。本句可改为：As far as Im concerned, as a native speaker, you have no difficulty letting us - - -L- - 1 “ - / - know_about_the_custom_and_culture_of_your_country,which_helps_us_broaden_our_horizons.这样更地道,表达更清楚。【

25、3】句显得较为口语化，且spend your traditional holidays表达不准确 应把spend 改为 celebrateo4句中的until 一词误用，应改为beforeo且remember 一词太常见，如果改为短 语bear/keep in mind ,可为短文增加亮点。五档作文Dear_Peter;_Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The school newspaper has started a column “Foreign Culture” , des

26、igned to introduce American customs and the school life of the students. I believe this is a wonderful opportunity for you to share your own experience. The subjects are about western festivals and customs, and you can also write about the students daily life. The article should be limited to 400 wo

27、rds or so. What you should keep in mind is that you have to submit your article before 28thz June.If you would like to make contributions for our newspaper, please send me your article before the deadline.Looking forward to your reply.Yoursz_Li_Hua假如你叫李华，是一名外语特色高中的学生。针对你市雾霾频发的现象，你校学生会决 定由你代表学生会向全校师生

28、发出建议：绿色出行，骑车上学。请根据下面的写作提纲写一 个英语建议书。内容包括：.保护环境的必要性；.列举骑车上学的好处；.向同学们发出呼吁。注意：词数100左右。下面是一篇学生的四档作文，请将它提升为五档。A Letter of AppealDear fellow students,We are writing to call on you to pay attention to the hazy weather; which frequently hits our city, doing harm to the citizens* health.1 It is commonly ackno

29、wledged that we should take effective measures to make the blue sky return. Riding a bicycle to school can help to improve the quality of air. 2 Riding a bicycle is also beneficial our health. Besides, we can reduce traffic jams in the street. Lets ride our bicycles to make our city a better place! Even a small act will make a difference. 3 Now lets join together to go green” with a bicycle. If we make a small change in our way of life, we can see the blue sky again!Take action!Students Union.本文思路清晰，结构完整。正文第一段陈述了雾霾频发带来的危害，第二段陈述发 出建议的原因，并列出了骑自行车的好处，最后向同学们发出建议。短文涵盖了大局部写作 要点，