广东高考英语基础写作指导

1、 广东高考英语卷基础写作指导（系列1）第一讲记叙文：如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。2对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出

2、事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。3正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。4注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。二、常用词语外貌特征：beautiful,bignose,blackeyes，fat,good-looking，handsome,healthy,near-sighted，ordinary-looking，pretty，short，strong,tall，thin,withabignose,withabigsmile,white-haired，1.80metrestall,etc.性格特点：ab

3、sent-minded,attractive，bad-tempered，bereadytohelpothers,bright，charming，confident,diligent，friendly,generous,haveagoodtemper,humorous，independent,kind,kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded,naughty，patient，thinkofothers,smart，talkative，warm-hearted，wise，etc.出生年龄：atwenty-five-year-oldyoungman,asaboyof15,att

4、heageof20,bebornonFebruary12th,1987,duringhischildhood,inonesfifties,liveahappy/hardlife,spendhischildhoodinthecountryside,thesonofapoorfamily,whenhewasasmallboy,etc.兴趣爱好：beangrywithsbforsth,beangryabout,bedelightedindoing,begoodatsinging,beinterestedinEnglish,befondofmusic,becrazyabout,bepleasedwit

5、h,besickfor,besorryfor,bestrictinoneswork,beworriedabout,dowellinhisresearchwork,enjoydoing,expecttodo,feelsurprisedat,haveastrongdesiretodo,lookforwardtodoingsth.,longfor(longtodo),makerapidprogressin,putonesheartinto,takeapleasureindoing;wishtodo,workhardathisstudies,etc.教育背景：beadmittedtoBeijingUn

6、iversity,beenrolledin,failinthetest，amastersdegree,getonwellwithoneslessons,givesb.apassinggrade,，goabroadtofurtheronesstudy,graduatefromPhysicsDepartmentofQinghuaUniversity,hisfatherwasverystrictwithhim,layagoodfoundationinEnglish,majorinhistory,receiveadoctorsdegree,passtheexamination,studyhardat,

7、takeseveralcoursesatschool,takeanactivepartinclasswhenatcollege,etc.经历事迹：becomeamemberoftheteam,concentrateoneselftodoingsth.,devoteoneselftoonesbusiness,dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverance,doresearchintothisfield,encouragesbtodosth,fightforourrevolutionarycourse,giveuponeslifeforsth,haveagoo

8、dwayofdoingsth,haveatalentforlanguage,makeuponesmindtodosth.,overcomemanydifficulties,receivetheNobelPrizeforphysics,serveasnurse,setanewworldrecordof110metrehurdling,tryonesbesttodosth.,winthefirstprizeinthecompetition,winagold/silver/bronzemedal,etc.他人评价：aninspiringleader,amodelworker,anadvancedte

9、acher,berespectedbyallhisstudents,behonoredas,beconsideredas,befamous/knownas,beregardedas,hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccess,makegreatcontributionstoourcountry,oneofthemostimportantpersonsinthepasttenyears,considersb.asagenius,considersb.asthegreatestleader,setagoodexampleforallofus,speakhighlyofhim

10、,etc.参考范文：DearManager，Iamwritingyoualetterinordertoapplyforapositioninyourcompany.MynameisLiHuaandIwasborninFoshanCityofGuangdongProvinceinAugust1981.IstudiedinFoshanNo.1MiddleSchoolfrom1994-2000,andthenIcametostudyintheComputerDepartmentofGuangzhouUniversityforfouryears.Istudiedcomputerscience,Chin

11、ese,maths,English,P.E,andnowIamworkingforacomputercompany.Ilikepopmusicandswimmingverymuch,andIoncewonthefirstprizeforswimmingintheschoolcompetition.Iamwaitingforyourreply.ThankyouYoursTruelyLiHua参考例文：Hi,everyone.Iwouldliketointroducetwofamoussportstars,YaoMingandLiuXiang.YaoMing,borninShanghaiin198

12、0,isaworldfamousbasketballplayer.HeisnowoneofthebestplayersinTeamRocketinNBA,andhehasbeeninAllStarTeamforseveraltimes.LiuXiang,whowasalsoborninShanghaibutthreeyearsyoungerthanYaoMing,isaworldchampioninthe110-metrehurdls.HewonthefirstprizeintheAthensOlympicGamesandbroketheworldrecordsoonafterthat.Bot

13、hofthemlovemusic,butYaoMinglikeslisteningtopopmusicwhileLiuXianglikessinging.参考范文1.LiMing,themonitorofClass1Grade2,ishealthyandlively.Shedoeswellinallhersubjects,andsheisfondofsports,singinganddancing.Whenshecametoschool,shehadquitealotofdifficultieswiththelanguage,butwithgreateffortsshemadealotofpr

14、ogressinherEnglishlanguagestudy.In2006shetookpartintheNationalPhysicsOlympicCompetitionandwonthefirstprize.LiMingisverystrictwithherselfinherworkanddailylife,andisalwaysreadytohelpotherpeople.2请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：MyTeacherMr.MooreTheresateacherMr.Moore.Whoislovelyandthirty-four.Alwaysencour

15、agingustotry.Heleadsustoaworldof“why”.Wealladmirehimmoreandmore.要求：1.不得照抄短诗原文。必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。短文不能写成诗歌形式。只能使用价值个句子表达全部的内容。广东高考英语卷基础写作指导(系列2)高考英语基础写作指导(II)第二讲记叙文：如何叙事？一、写作指导叙事类记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等六个要素交代清楚。好的记叙文具有描述事件具体、人物逼真形象、故事生动感人、材料表现中心和写作主旨明确等特征。高考英语基础写作中的叙事类短文也需要具有记叙文写作的一般特点，但要求相对比较低，其考

16、查重点在语言运用正确、句子连贯通顺、信息点表述完整等方面。写作时要注意以下几个方面的问题：严格按照基础写作的要求完成各个信息点，不要为了文章的生动而随意添加信息。信息点的表述不要完全按照题目所给的顺序，要适当重组信息点。记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时，但也要注意灵活运用其它时态。叙事类记叙文的话题通常和中学生的生活阅历有关，如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。二、常用语句1.表达时间alongtimeago,atsixoclockinthemorning,attheendof,attheweekend,beforehecamehere,bytheendofl

17、astterm,duringthesummerholidays,inafewyearstime,inthepast,intheolddays,inthepasttenyears,inAugust2002,inwintervacation,inweekdays,lastmonth,nextweek,onSundaymorning,onOctober1st,sinceearlyinthe20thcentury,sofar,uptonow,not.until,while,etc.2.表达地点atthecrossing,attheendofthestreet,attheairport,atthevil

18、lage,atthefootofthemountain,atthebottom,atthetopof,belocatedin,behindthepark,besituatedin,fivekilometerstothenorthofGuangzhou,inthesouthofGuangdongProvince,inthemiddleofthepark,inClass3Grade2,inthefrontofthebus,infrontofthebus,inthetree,inGuangdong,inChina,liestothewestofSichuan,ontheothersideofthes

19、treet,onbothsidesoftheroad,ontheeastcoastofthePacificOcean,ontheright,etc.3.表达因果as,asaresult,because,becauseof,for,intheend,cause,resultin,consequently,originatefrom,since,so,therefore,Itisclearthat.,Itturnsouttobe.,Theprimaryreasonis.,etc.4.事件话题学校生活及学习成绩beactiveinclass,beinterestedin,beinterestingt

20、osb.,befondof,begoodat,bepoorat,betiredofoneswork,beweakin,dooneshomework,dosportsafterschool,dowellin;educationforall-rounddevelopment(素质教育)，examination-orientededucationsystem(应试教育)，failinthetest,getadoctorsdegree,getonwellwithEnglish,getan“A”intheexam,get90marksforEnglish,givesb.apassinggrade,hav

21、eagoodcommandofthelanguage,haveeightclasseseveryday,helpwitheachother,layagoodfoundationin,learn.byheart,majorinhistory,makefriendswithsb.,makeprogressin,putonesheartinto,passtheexamination,studyingroups,succeedindoingsth.,takeanactivepartintheactivity,takeseveralcoursesatschool,workoutaproblem,work

22、onamathsproblem,workhardat,etc.师生关系及其活动befriendlytosb.,bekindtosb,beastrictteacher,bestrictwithonespupils,bestrictinoneswork,besatisfiedwith,blamesb.forsth,correctthestudentshomeworkcarefully,devoteallonestimetowork,formagoodhabitof,getonwellwithsb,giveadviceon,givesbalotofwork,helpsbwithsth,makeone

23、slessonslivelyandinteresting,praisesbforsth.,preparefortomorrowslesson,questionsbon,teachsb.English,teachsbhowtodosth.,etc.课余活动及周末生活dosomereading,enjoyafamilytrip,enjoydoingsth.,goswimming,goforanouting,gotothecinema,haveanoutingattheseashore,haveaswim,havedancesonweekends,haveapicnicattheweekend,ha

24、veaparty,holdasportsmeeting,Internetbar,netfriend,onlineloveaffair(网恋)，playthepiano,playchess(basketball),seethesightsofBeijing,spendonestimeinmanydifferentways,teachinafamily,etc.(4)交通情况abigtrafficjam,atrafficaccident,beverycrowdedinthestreet,beseriouslyinjured,bybus(train/ship/boat),driveacar,flig

25、htNo.2130,inasmallboat,givesb.alift,keepright,lieonthestreet,meetsb.atthestation,onthebus(train),onboard,ononeswaytoLondon,onthejourney,onewayonly,pickupsb.,rideabike,rideahorse,seesb.offattheairport,self-serviceticket,takeaflighttoNewYork,trafficlight,travelthroughChina,turnright,etc.(5)度假旅游NewYear

26、sDay,WomensDay,MayDay,YouthDay,ChildrensDay,TeachersDay,Mid-AutumnDay,NationalDay,valentinesDay,theSpringFestival,ahotspot,aplaceofinterest,atouristdestination,afive-starhotel,agoodrestaurant,areturnticket,asingleticket,acitywithalonghistory,aquietvillage,athree-daytour,anexperiencedguide,Beijing200

27、8OlympicGames,beautifulscenery,inpeaktouristseasons,naturalattraction,ononeswaytoFrance,onthebackway,oneofthegreatwondersoftheworld,spendonesholidaysonthesea,the11thAsianGames,travelagency,thetourroute,theinner-ringroad,traveltoEngland,theGreatWall,theSummerPlace,ZhongshanPark,etc.(6)环境保护agoodenviro

28、nment,areapollution,airpollution,airqualitystandard,AntarcticCircle,atmosphericchemistry,aheavyrain,aheavysnow,bepolluted,behot,becold,becool,becloudy,berainy,besunny,beflooded,climate,carbondioxide(CO2),chemicalchange,chemicalcleaningofcoal,climatechange,dirty,drought,dry,flood,earlywarningsystem,e

29、nvironmentalbehavior,environmentalquality,feelcomfortable,globalwarming,minus20degreescentigrade(-20),30degreesabovezero(30)，sealevel,warningcenter,wastes,watersurface,watertreatment,waterpollutioncontrol,weather,windstorm,etc.三、典型例文参考范文：DearJane,Iamverygladtotellyousomethingaboutourschool,Guangdong

30、No.3Middleschool.Itliesinasmalltownabout15kilometresawayfromtheseaandithasahistoryofover80years.Ourschool,coveringanareaofnearly150thousandsquaremeters,hasmorethan200teachersand3000seniorstudentsIthasthreeteachingbuildingsandsixdormitorybuildings,withmanyflowersandtalltreesallaround,soitsverybeautif

31、ul.InourschoolwelearnChinese,maths,science,English,computer,PE,artsandsomeothersubjects.Wewarmlywelcomeyoutovisitourschoolinthesummerholidays.Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiHua参考范文：AbriefIntroductionoftheChineseSpringFestivalTheChineseSpringFestivalcomesonthefirstdayoftheChineseLunarYear,whichisusually

32、inFebruary.Thereisanameforeachyear,suchasthedog,themonkey,thetigeroroneofthetwelveanimals,andthisyearistheyearofthepig.BeforetheNewYearsDay,theChinesepeopleusuallygivetheirhousesagoodcleaningandonthelasteveningoftheoldyear,allthemembersofafamilywillgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Onthefirstorseconddayoft

33、henewyear,peopleusuallygotovisittheirrelativesandfriendsandgivesomeluckymoneytochildren.IwishyouhaveagoodtimeduringtheSpringFestival.参考范文1.OnJuly27th2007,Friday,we18classmates,includingJohnfromBritain,SinbafromIndiaandKeithfromtheUSA,wenttoLeeFarmtohelpthefarmers.Westartedoffat8oclockinthemorning,an

34、dafteranhoursrideonthebus,wewalkedforanother15minutes.LeeFarmisabout60kilometresnorthwesttoourschool.Afewdaysagoitwashitbyastrongtornado,andmanyappleswereblownontotheground,sowehelpedtopickuptheapplesandputthegoodonesinthebaskets.Wefeltverytiredafterthework,butallofusthoughtitwasagreathelptothefarme

35、rs.LastWednesdayIgavealectureaboutChinascultureandhistorytothe7thstudentsfrom9-11:30inthemorning.ThisisthefirsttimeIgavealesson,soIfeltverynervousandgreatpressure.Ipresentedforoneandahalfhours,introducingfromthedynastiesinancienttimestotherevolutionaryinrecenttimes,butIspentalotmoretimeonpresentChin

36、a,therenovation,theopenpolicyandtheeconomicdevelopment.Inthefollowinghourweexchangedideasandhadagooddiscussion,butIwassorrytofindthattheyknewlittleaboutChinaandraisedalotofstrangequestions.Ithinkweneedmoreculturalexchangeofthiskind,becausewecangetmorepracticeandtheforeignstudentscanunderstandmoreabo

37、utChina.广东高考英语卷基础写作指导（系列3）第三讲如何写图表类说明文一、写作指导图表类作文一直是高考的热点，其体裁可以是记叙文、议论文或说明文。本篇介绍如何备考图表类说明文。图表类说明文要求根据图示、表格等所给的信息，通过定义、描述、数字对比和分类比较等方式，介绍图表所显示对象的特征，如形状、构造、性质、变化、功能、因果和方位等。图表类说明文常见的话题有：产品介绍、地点描述、方位描写、观点对比、变化分析、购物指南和操作说明等。写作这类文章需注意以下几点：1正确解读表格，不能添加或遗漏信息。写作内容要条理清楚，层次分明。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法和因果法等；说明自然

38、环境方面的内容常用时空次序法与分类法等。说明文的语言要简练，用词要准确，避免夸张华丽的辞藻。时态常用一般现在时，语态常用被动语态，有时用虚拟语气。二、常用句型1.介绍产品Thecompanyhasmodernequipmentandlotsofseniorexperts.Thiskindofproductcontainsmuchtopandnewtechnique.Itsconvenienttocarryandeasytooperate.Itsaboutsixfeetlongandninefeethigh.Itcostme100yuantobuythisdictionary.2.介绍学校The

39、reweremanysubjectsinourschool,suchasChinese,history,drawingandsoforth.Ourschoolislocatedatthefootofagreenhill.Inthemiddleoftheflowerbedthereisafountainwithmanycoloredflowersaroundit.Infrontoftheschoolisabeautifulgardenwithalibraryonitsleftandalaboratoryonitsright.Atthebackoftheschoolarethestudentsdo

40、rmitoryandthedinning-hall,infrontofwhichliesthelargesportsfield.Theteachersdormitorystandsbetweentheteachingbuildingandthestudentsdormitory.3行路指引ItisnotverydifficulttofindyourwayfromtheDongfangHoteltotherailwaystation.Whenyougetoutofthestation,turnleftandwalkdownthestreetuntilyouseethetrafficlights.

41、Turnrightatthethirdturning,andyouwillseeapostofficeatthecorner.Goeastwardandyouwillseethemuseumoppositetothelibrary.BusNo.2willtakeyourightthere.Itwilltakeyouabout10minutestogettherebysubway.4介绍地方TiananmenSquare,thelargestsquareintheworld,coversanareaofonemillionsquaremetres.Guangzhou,thecapitalofGu

42、angdongProvince,liesinthesouthofChina.Ithasanareaof10,000squarekilometerswithapopulationofover2million.Itisrichinnaturalsources,suchascoal,oilandgold.Theweatherisneithertoocoldinwinternortoohotinsummer.Builtinthe18thcentury,thetowerhaswitnessedtoomuchcomingandgoinginhistory.5新旧对比Ourhometownusedtobea

43、beautifulplace,withthicktreesandgreengrasseverywhere.Nowadayssomestudentscannotgotocollegebecauseofhightuitionfees.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfewyears.ItisknowntousallthatthelivingstandardoftheChinesepeoplehasgreatlyimproved.Inthelastdecades,advancesinmedicaltechnologyhavemadeitpossibleforpe

44、opletolivelongerthaninthepast.Thesedays,peopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtocomplainthatworkismorestressfulandlessleisurelythaninthepast.6数量表达Outputisup30%lastyear.Unemploymentmorethandoubledin1996.Thepopulationhereisincreasingyearbyyear.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdisea

45、seslinkedtosmoking.Fromthetablewecanseethattheworldpopulationisincreasingrapidly.Thelatestsurveyshowsthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.Aninvestigationshowsthatmanyemigrantsthinkthatworkingatcityprovidesthemwithnotonlyahighersalarybutalsotheopportunityoflearningnewskills.Sta

46、tisticsshowa20%rise(reduction)intrafficaccidentscomparedwithlastyear.Bicyclecantbecomparedwithothermeansoftransportationlikecarandtrainforspeedandcomfort.三、实例分析【例文1】父母为子女选择小学的情况调查最近学校研究性学习小组对3000多名年轻的父母做了一个调查，调查主题、结果等内容如下表所示，请用英文给校英文广播站写一篇简介，介绍调查的情况。写作要求：1简介必须包括图表所给的全部内容；2只能使用5个句子。参考范文：Recentlyasurv

47、eywasdonetoinvestigatewhatparentscaremostinchoosingprimaryschools.Thesurveyshowsthatlocationisthekeyfactorinchoosingschoolsfortheirchildrenhalfofthoseinterviewedsaidthatbeingclosetotheirhomeswasthemostimportantfactorintheirchoice.Teachingqualitycamesecond,withnearly40%oftheparentsworryingabouttheirchildrensfuturecareer.Thesurveyalsoshowsthatone-tenthofthemexpectthatschoolshaveadvancedfacilities.Morethan3,000parentsweresurveyedintheresearch.【例文2】楼盘介绍假设暑假你到某楼盘打工，正好有几名外国客人想买一套公寓楼，公寓楼及其周边的一些基本信息如下。请书面用英文向这几位客人介绍一下这套公寓楼。写作要求：1简介必须包括图表所给的全部内容；2只