北师大版八年级英语上册课件：Unit 5 Helping Communication Workshop 第2课时

1、北师大版 初中英语初二上册Unit5 HelpingCommunication Workshop（第二课时）教学目标：本课学习结束时，学生能够：1.结合自己和老师的写作评分标准，就写作的结构、内容、语言等方面进行自评和互评。2.根据评价的反馈，修改写作内容。3.结合自己的写作和同伴谈论自己特殊的一天。Why was it a special day for Emma? Try to retell her special day to your partner and talk about your own special day. Which day was your special day?

2、Why was it special for you ?What did you do on that day ?Who were you with ?Where were you ?My special day结构开头主体总体介绍特别的日子及其原因It was a very special day because.Event 1 and feelingEvent 2 and feelingEvent 3 and feelingEvent 3 and feeling注意按事件发展的逻辑或时间顺序去写那天你做的或遇到的事情 查要点是否齐全查语言是否通顺，连贯查语法，拼写，大小写，标点是否正确每项

3、检查两遍Work in groups and exchange your ideas of the writing.结构是否完整（要点）句式是否多样（句式）语言是否准确（拼写）表达是否连贯（连词）时态是否运用恰当（一般过去时，过去进行时）同伴评价 Name：_全文涉及到的内容（如有该项，请在下面打勾）正文结构完整：开头句，主题句，结尾句。（4）运用because.,since.,as.等表述 原因.（3）按时间顺序表述事件并有进一步的解释说明并对此表述感想及看法（3）.语言（用词、语法、拼写、大小写、标点）（每错一句扣一分）What I like about his/her compositi

4、on?语言方面：词、 句等给同伴评分:满分十分。Rewrite the passage according to your parters suggestions and try your best to be the best one.Groupwork1. Find the best sentences in everyones compersition and underline the sentences.2. Find the best one in your group.Share in the class. My special day A Special Day with My

5、 Classmates It was a very special day because I went to the zoo with my classmates. That was an interesting activity in my class. I was so excited that I got up very early. I quickly took my bag, brought hat and sunglasses and then ran to my school. All my classmates were talking happily. We got on

6、the bus at the school gate together. Several minutes later, we drove to the zoo. Finally, we arrived there. Our teacher showed us around and we followed him everywhere. 范文赏析 一 We saw lions, pandas and many other animals for the first time. They were very cute and funny. Everyone was very excited. While we were feeding animals, our teacher told us some knowledge about animals. Before we left, we took a picture in front of a huge panda statue. We were having a great time! Ill never forget that wonderful day.sum up a good writing内容齐全结构完整语言准确语言丰富词汇丰富句式多样原因事件情感大小写，标点，拼写，语序运用连词开头