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1、强化写作板书各位同学，我几乎教过所有的大学的课程，课的同学是最认真的，因为我总是在的眼中看到光芒当然这光芒中也伴随着苦恼和焦虑。的艰辛，只有经历过的知道，或者经历过了也不一定能完全知道。我希望努力和课程的内容能够在最大程度上帮助大家，当为了自己的梦想努力时，Stefanie 也在和一路。_ 祝大家好运！-Stefanie一些因排版出现的格式问题，请大家自行调整！Dear,介绍/寒暄 + 表明目的。细节(-directions) 1-2 para结束语（A变 + B固定 套词）Yours truly, LiMing2008Dear Bob,道歉信sayt I feeeplysorry for b

2、ringing your CD, Michael Jackson The Ultimate Collection, back to China.You know, I was in quite a hurry before I came back to China, and my friends there helped me a lot with packing. One of them put all my CDs and books together, including yours, for he thought it was mine. And I found it when I w

3、as here at home.Actually next month I will go on a business tour to Canada again, and Iwill visit you att time. I would like to see you and give you the CD myself.Please accept my sincere apologies. Looking forward to hearing back from you.Best regards,LiMing1Work hard & Good luck！How are young rece

4、ntly?Im writing this letter to小作文书信框架2011Dear Stefanie,How are young recently? Last time you asked me tomend somek and Igood movies to you. I happened to watch the movie Inception lastwant to share it with you.The movie is a scienceplot/story. One thing I have tofiction withl you isdeliberayplicated

5、role is your favoritet its leadingactor, Leonald Dicaprio.it triesn reality and dreams, which confuses the characters ofto make an illuthe story.betI think you need to watch the movie yourself soon to discover all the secretsabout our dreams. And we can have more discusforward to your reply.after yo

6、u see it. LookingBest wishes,LiMing2006Dear Sir or Madam,I am a senior student of a university in Guangzhou and I am writing this letter to ask for you help, because I want to help a child from undeveloped area to finish his school.I want to assist a 8-10 years old boy who lives in GS province. I wi

7、ll provide300 yuan every monttil he finishes his high school. And I will alsohimsome referrence books every semester.Please help to find a candidate for me as soon assible. Id apprete ifyou could send me a replyYours sincerely,Liming2007Dear Sir or Madam,I am a student of our university and I am wri

8、ting this letter to give you some suggestions about the service of our library.ly, I thinkt the reading room doesnve enough seats for students.add some seats or expand the size of reading room.Besides, I noticet the air-conditioners2he library dont function well,Work hard & Good luck！I sincerely hop

9、et you canat your earst convenience.The most fantastic thing about the movie istwhile as we all know the summer in guangzhou is quite hot.purchase some new air-conditioners or get the old onesfixed.I hope you can take my suggestions seriously.(I will be grateful if you can consider my suggestions.)

10、Looking forward to your early reply.Yours cordially, Liming2009Dear Sir or Madam,I am a reader of our newspadvice about White Pollution.r. I am writing this letter to give you someAs we know, the restrictions on the use of plastic bags have been carriedout/ implemented for a long time, but I noticet

11、 many people continue usingthem and the environment pollution is still serious. Some measures need to betaken to stop it immediay., I hope you can publish more articles about the pollution ie, Ito remind every citizen of the importance of environmental protection.am wondering if it issible for you t

12、o present free environment-friendlyshopbags as gifts to readers who subscribe your newspr over half a year.I hope you can take my suggestions seriously and I beve the situation will beimproved if enough effort is paid. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, LiMing2005Dear Mr. Wang,I am writi

13、ng this letter to inform yout I couldnt continue to work forour company any longer and I am deeply sorry for my deci.You know, last month Ia house at the other end of the city, and itme moren 2 hours to go to work every day, which is too inconvenientfor me. So I am afraidt I have to quit.nk you for

14、the precious experiencet I have enjoyed here, and withthe company continue to grow. Please approve of my resignation. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, LiMing3Work hard & Good luck！takesboughtBesides of allissible for you toI am wondering if it信补充例题You recently had a dinner with your fr

15、iend in a restaurant, and the waitress whoserved yout day was very rude to you. Write a letter to complain.Dear Sir or Madam,I am a customer and I had dinner with my friends in your restaurant lastFriday. I am writing this letter tothe waitress, Xiao Liu, whoserved our tablet day.I remembered the re

16、staurant was not very busy when we were there. Butevery time we asked XiaoLiu to add some wateret some napkin, she alwayskept us waiting moren 10 minutes or even ignored us, for she was playing herall the time.I hopet the restaurant could apologize for this and improve yourservice. Id be grateful if

17、 you can pay attention to this matter as soon as Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,LiMingsible.通知 notice1. 格式Notice(Topic)December 12, 2012XX落款2. 套词开头: In order to do where when. 结尾: Those who are 1.2.3.enrich students extracurricular activities, Sb(who )erested (in), pleasesign upwhere

18、? before when?send your resume to. before get the free ticket20104Work hard & Good luck！complain about/ofVoteers WantedJanuary 9, 2010In order to enrich the students extracurricular activities, thetgraduateAssotion is now recruiting voteers for the sixthernational GlobalizationConference, which will

19、 be held during March 7th to 12th, 2010 in Guangzhou.Applicants should be under 30 years old and be able to speak fluentEnglishandChi.Besides,cheerfulalityandoutstandingcommunication ability are also required. Students with relevant experience arepreferred. And all the chosen applicants will be read

20、y for a training course starting from February 20th to 27th.Those who areJanuary 20th.erested, please sign up in your department beforetgraduates Assotion通知补充练习notice to it.The English club is going to hold a speech contest next month. Write aroduce the contest to the students ande them to take part

21、 inYou should include the arrangement of the contest and any informationyou think relative.You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at theend of the letter. Use “English club instead.范文English Speech ContestMarch 4, 2010In order to enrich extracurricular activities and provide stu

22、dents with a tage to show their English ability, the English Club is going to hold anchanEnglish speech contesthe New Music Hall on April 10th, 2010 in cooperationwith Guangdong English Channel.The contest will include 2 rounds. The contestants should prepare for an English speech within 5 minutes o

23、n the topic of wild animals protection. Every contestant who enters the second round will be awarded with an Oxford Dictionary and the final winner will have the chance to enjoy a five days tour to Britain.5Work hard & Good luck！All the non-English majors aree to take parthe contest. Thosewho areere

24、sted, please sign up at the English Club office on the fifth floor ofschool library before March 15, 2010.English Club备忘录Memo1. 格式Date: December 12, 2012 Subject: Key WordsTo: Title, NameFrom: Title, Name正文。参考例题和范文见文档 2=大作文=大作文分段讲解Para1. 描述图画2002Before:A geous American girlis dressed in Chitradition

25、al costume,wears allkinds of decorations, and sto us.After:As is vividly shownhcture, in front of us stands a geous American girl,dressed in Chitraditional costume, wearing all kinds of decorations andsmiling to us.6Work hard & Good luck！1+ 2 选定主语做倒装 +3 定语从句 and/or 分词，描述主语的其他动作1.As is * shownhcture/

26、photo/cartoon/drawing, 非限shown:illustrated,demonstrated,dcted画 ,indicatedrevealed,presented *: vividly, apparently, obviously, ironically, ridiculously, thrillingly, 2. 选定主语做倒装A:主语=主角B: 主角所在的位置B/stand/sit/float/run/swimA躺着 有在山顶上屹立着一棵树。On the top of the mountain stands a tree.On the road stand/run tw

27、o disabled men. 2008he chair of a hair salon sits a young man. 06he greenhouses a flower.03he middle of the football fields a poor old man. 05On the track runs a young man. 043. 用分词表示主语做的动作(适当加入定语从句)7Work hard & Good luck！多个As is vividly illustratedhe photo,he sunshine stands a beautiful Americangir

28、l, dressed traditional Chicostume, wearing all kinds of decorations, andsmiling to us.A: 现在分词ing-主动 VS过去分词 edng做着。having done做了。As is ridiculously dctedhe cartoon,he middle of a football fields apoor old man, crouching/rolling like a ball, tremblinghe wind and kicked byhis own children who stand in

29、front of the gates. 2005B: 配角动作用定语从句表达As is ridiculously illustratedhcture, on the grounds a hen, having laidsome eggs and holding a piece of pr which sayst all the eggs are roundandplete.2011As is ironically illustratedhcture,he river floats a boat, surroundedby countless plastic bottles、bags and o

30、ther trash which are thrown by 2 touristssittinghe boat and people like them.8Work hard & Good luck！20051998As is ridiculously dctedhe drawing, on the grounds a hen, having laidsome eggs and holding a piece of pr which sayst all the eggs are roundand normal. A poemhcture sayst the behaviorhcture is

31、totallyirresponsible/ wrong/2001As is vividlydcted in the drawing,in the darknesss a l,vigorously,the surroundings,andout warmth. A line in thepicture sayst love is like a l, which is brighter in darkla.poem图中的文字解释1.第一段图画描述的后面+ A linehcture sayst +翻译（不要直译，概括性的表达意思）is also a new start.The cultural ho

32、t-pot is delicious and nutritious.2.第二段内涵解释句+ , just as the linehcture says.explains两幅图情况两幅图，三步法描述其中一幅，另一幅直白描述。两幅图描述的连词，并列: while转折: however9Work hard & Good luck！givinglighteningburning2003As is vividly shownhepicture,he greenhouses a flower, growingvigorously and protected by the greenhouse from t

33、he storm outside. However, inthe second picture, when the greenhouse is removed, the flower dies/fades. A linehcture sayst the flowerhe greenhouse cant survivethe storm.2006As is obviously illustratedhe right picture,he chair of a hair saloon sits ayoung man, holding a magazine with Beckhams picture

34、s in it, and having thehair-dresser cut his hair the same as Beckham, a British football superstar. A linehcture sayst it costs him 300 Yuan. Whilehe left picture, a youngman writes Beckhams name on his face.2007As is illustratedhe left part of thcture, in front of the gate stands a goalkeeper, thin

35、kingt the gate is too large for him to defend. Whilehe rightpart of the picture, another foot player is imaginingt the goal keeper is sostrongt he cant goal.2009As is simply shownhcture, in each of the room sits a man, fixing eyes onthe computer monitor andsurfing on line. And all the rooms make up

36、a hugenetwork.As is obviously dctedhe drawing, a large number of small rooms make upa cobweb, and in each of the rooms sits a man who i10Work hard & Good luck！rfing theernet.2004As is vividly shownhcture, on the track runs a young man, who is tiredbut still keeps running, and rushing to the final de

37、stination, which is, at the sametime, a brand new start.2011As is clearly dctedhe drawing,he river floats a boat, surrounded by asurprisingly large number of plastic bottles and cans, which are thrown by twoyoung men sittinghe boat and other visitors like them.=para2. 三句表达模式阐释含义（内涵ended meaning, 比喻

38、symbolic meaning）1 套话+2 内涵揭示+3 给出简单的评价参考句型1.简单如这幅图，但是内涵很深刻。 升级Simple as thcture is, theended meaning is really deep.2. 这幅图揭示了这样的一个问题/的现象(-)或事实/正面的现象(+)Itreveals/describes/posouttheproblem/thefact/thephenomenont3. 给出简单的评价例:+ I bevetbenefitX in various ways.- I bevedttrigger a series of drawbacks/.11W

39、ork hard & Good luck！2002Simple as thcture is, theended meaning is really deep. It reveals thefactttheculturesofdifferentnationsarehavingmoreandmorecommunicationwith each other and begin to blend. I bevet this kind ofculture blending benefits/promotes the development of culture worldwide.2005Simple

40、as thcture is, theended meaning is really deep. It reveals theproblemt some adult children dont fulfill their responsibility and obligationof waiting on their aged parents. I beve this kind of phenomenon causes aseries drawbacks.它向揭示了这样一个问题，有些没有履行赡养父母的责任和义务。It reveals the problemtsome adult children

41、 dont take care of their parents.some adult children dont fulfill their responsibility and obligation of waiting ontheir aged parents.many old people dont get the care which they deserve.*Symbolic meaning :半句解释(represent,is a symbol of, is just as/like, is assoted with,is revealed as)+基本句型200312Work

42、 hard & Good luck！The flower is revealed as some teenagers/young people, while the greenhouse isjust like parents and famis. + *It pos out the problemt1. some teenagers are asas the flowers, nothaving the ability towithstand the hardship in lifebecause of ovrotection from theirparents.many young peo

43、ple lack of the ability to handle thehardship in their lifebecause of ovrotection from parents and famis.3. nowadays many children are ovrotected by their parents, resultingheirdisability of ing the obstacles and frustrationhe sol competition.4. many parents ovrotect their childen, whiakes them unab

44、le to conquerthe difficulties in life.2002It reveals the factt nowadays Chitraditional culture is getting more andmoreernational and foreign people have moreerest in our culturenbefore.2000It reveals the problemt people overfish, which causes the eco-balance of theocean destructed. / which causes th

45、e number of sea species to decrease sharply.It reveals the problemt people exsively develop fishing industry,.13Work hard & Good luck！taking the damage to the environmento considerationwithout2.on their ownvulnerableIt reveals the problemt the eco-balance of the ocean is destructed byminds behavior,

46、 such as overfishing.It。t the fishing industry is so developedt the number of the fishdecrease sharply, which is a threat to the environment.2002It reveals the factt various cultures/ cultures of different nations can beblended harmoniously.It reveals the factt various cultures, western and eastern,

47、 can co-exist togetherharmoniously.2004It reveals a factt we should never be satisfied with every tiny achievement weget, but always keep fighting and pursuing greater goals.It reveals a factt persistence is theer which leads us to the ultimatesucs of life.1998The hen represents some advertisers, an

48、d the eggs are just like the products,while thece of pr is a symbol of the promises. It reveals the problemtsome advertisers make misleading promise to customers, while it is actuallywhat theyjust as the poemhcture says.2005It pos out the problemt nowadays some young men esc=their obligation and res

49、ponsibility of caring for their aged parents.14Work hard & Good luck！dont fulfillare suped to do,2006It reveals a phenomenont some people, espelly teenagers, worshipsuperstars blindly, and they will easily do someor even crazy thingsfor their idols.2007It reveals the problemt some people over-exagge

50、rate the difficulties andchallenges which they come across and lack of confidence to conquer thesechallenges.2009It reveals the problemt those modern people who are over-addicted toernetthe outside world.2011It reveals the problemt many tourists areruining the beauty of ourenvironment when they go t

51、ravelling.2008It reveals a factt cooperation is theer whiakes the individual abilityunlimited and leads us to sucs.15Work hard & Good luck！are anated fromsuperfil=大作文叙述模式思路小结=作文思路A: para 1 描述图画-三步描述法，在。有（跑着，站着，躺着，）(However/While 在另一图中，XX 做了XX。)*可能有文字描述:(解释内涵)，做着。orXX 着。t+ 翻译1. And a linehcture says2

52、. para2 内涵解释句 +, which iswell explained by the poemhepicture., just as the linehcture says.解释内涵-三句模式B: para 21. 简单如这幅图，内涵却很深刻。（optional）Simple as th2. 它向cture is, theended meaning is really deep.揭示了这样的一个问题/现象tIt reveals the problem/negative phenomenont3. 对的现象、问题给出简单评价。C: para3 给出评论作文危害+解决方案1.这个问题不仅导

53、致了 A。而且造成了 B。Not only do/does 。， but also。2.情况已经如此严重，须立刻采取措施来解决。Situation being so serious, it is high timetaken to stop it/solve it/ improve it.t certain actions/measures were3.首先，。 其次，。(提出，外因+内因)It is nesary/important/urgent for sb to doSb should be awaret sth should be done.Sb should do sth4.只要上述

54、措施被有效实施，问题就能得到很好的解决。(固定句型)As long as/if the solutions mentioned above are well/sucthe problem will be effectively solved/tackled.sfully implemented,the situation will be grey improved.16Work hard & Good luck！方案危害2005As is ironically illustrated in the picture, in the middle of the footballfields a p

55、oor old man, crouching like a ball, shiveringhe wind, and kickedby his own children.Simple as thcture is, theended meaning is really deep. It reveals theproblemt many adult children dontfulfilltheir responsibility andobligation of taking care of their aged parents. We all have the experience ofreadi

56、ng these kinds of reportsedia.Not only does this kind of behavior hurt parents emotion, but also sets abad exle for the next generation. Situation being so serious, it is high timet certain measure were taken to stop it. On one hand, it is urgent for theernment to set up relative laws to bettrotect

57、the right of eldeople. Onthe other hand, the entire Chicitizen should be awaret it is theirresponsibility to take care of their own parents. If the solutions mentioned aboveare well implemented, the situation will be grey improved.2011As is clearly shownhcture,he river floats a boat, surroundedby a

58、surprisingly large number of plastic bottles and cans which are thrown bytwo young men sittingSimple as thhe boat and visitors like them.cture is, itsended meaning is really profound. It revealsthe phenomenont tourism attractions are ruined by minds litteringand destruction. Nowadays, it is common t

59、o see food leftovers, plastic bags,fruit peels and other trashhe natural beauty such as lakes and mountains, inthe historical buildings, and in almost every site of attraction.Not only does this kind of behavior destroy the beauty of the world, butalso shows a lack of civilization in our nation. The

60、 situation being so serious, it ishigh timet certaeasures were taken to stop it. On one hand, it is urgentfor the tourishernment to enforce strict laws and regulations to better protect thetractions and our environment. And those who commit the behavior as cture should be subject to certain punishme