2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读五

1、2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读五2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读五2021届高考英语二轮复习读后续写深度解读五2021届高考英语读后续写深度解读（五）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Daniel Hernandez always knew he wanted to help people. Before hed even graduated from high school， he trained to be a certified nursing assistant and volunteered at a nursing home。 A b

2、ig kid with a gentle， efficient manner， he learned to use needles to draw blood， to lift patients in his strong arms, and to respond swiftly and calmly to every emergency。He never quite got around to taking the exam to become fully certified, though, because by then hed decided he wanted to work in

3、public service. He felt inspired by the good that responsible lawmakers can do, so in his junior year at the university, he declared a major in political science and began volunteering in political campaigns. One hero of his was his local congresswoman (国会女议员)， Gabrielle Giffords, the kindest， warme

4、st human being he thought he had ever met in his entire life。He was overjoyed when he was picked for an internship (实习期) with her, and he gladly gave up a part-time sales job for the chance to work on her team。 So eager was he that he started work four days earlier than he was supposed to. On Saturd

5、ay morning, he arrived at his workplace, where about 30 people were gathering to meet Giffords。 It was Hernandezs job to sign people in and guide them into a queue in order to get each to have a photo taken with the congresswoman.At 10:10 a.m.， Hernandez heard loud sounds。 “Gun!” someone yelled. He

6、heard people screaming and saw them falling to the ground。 Hernandez was standing 30 feet away from Giffords when she fell down。 In seconds, figuring there was danger to the congresswoman, he was at her side。 Before the doctors came, Hernandez tried his best to remain calm at that fateful moment. Gi

7、ffords was lying on the sidewalk with blood streaming down her face from a bullet wound to her head. Gently， Hernandez lifted her into a sitting position against his shoulder so she wouldnt choke on her blood. Then， with his bare hand， he applied pressure to the wound on her forehead to stop the ble

8、eding。 续写要求：1. 所续写短文词数应为150左右;2。 至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Minutes later， ambulances and doctors arrived on the scene._Paragraph 2:Six out of nineteen victims died while Giffords， though seriously wounded， survived。 _【思路点拨】1。 文本细解读,确定续写结局本文是一

9、篇记叙文，讲述了一位有责任感和使命感的青年Daniel Hernandez高中毕业之前就参加了医护人员培训，还没有完全合格就投入了社会服务(组织）。令他开心的是，实习期的他加入了他的偶像国会女议员Gabrielle Giffords的团队。一次枪击事件中,他沉着冷静、应对敏捷从容，挽救了他心目中的英雄-国会女议员Gabrielle Giffords的故事。续写部分是救护车来之后他的做法（根据文章人物形象，他很有责任感、使命感，营救的又是他心目中的英雄,可以推知他必将尽力而为)，以及营救成功之后的社会反响(借此升华人物品格，乐于助人，不图虚名）。2. 段首句解读,确定续写方向续写第一段首句写道“

10、几分钟后，救护车和营救人员赶到现场”,第二段首句写道“十九个伤者中六人死亡，尽管Gabrielle Giffords伤势严重,却存活下来.由此可知,第一段应该描述救护车和救护人员到来之后，Daniel Hernandez没有推脱撒手，依旧尽自己之力帮助营救。第二段应该重点描述Gabrielle Giffords幸存之后,社会对英雄人物Daniel Hernandez的褒奖.3. 划线词解读，规划续写细节1）分类划线词人物Hernandez，Giffords，doctors事件emergency责任-was supposed to状态swiftly，calm事物-blood，life 称号her

11、o2）构思具体细节第一段情节:几分钟后,救护车和营救人员赶到现场把Giffords放入救护车Hernandez在援救过程中一直陪伴，尽力给Giffords安全感他所做的在危急（emergency）情况下很奏效。第二段情节：Gabrielle Giffords存活下来Hernandez受到褒奖Hernandez不视之为英雄(hero）事迹Hernandez认为医者 (doctors） 和公仆们在必要情况下理应舍身救人,升华文章主题。【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1:Minutes later， ambulances and doctors arrived on the scene. They

12、gently put Giffords into one ambulance。 Still Hernandez stayed with her, holding her hand and talking to her constantly when she was conscious on the way to hospital。 He told her not to be afraid and he would be with her until her husband came. He repeated she wouldnt be alone and would surely survi

13、ve。 His words were really helpful to her situation in that emergency.Paragraph 2：Six out of nineteen victims died while Giffords, though seriously wounded, survived。 Everything is OK now。 Obviously, people give the credit to Hernandez who did quick and selfless actions。 They are grateful Daniel Hern

14、andez felt driven to be of service, but he himself refuses to mention those horrible minutes。 Actually， he doesnt see himself as a hero。 He always thinks it a duty for doctors and public servants to spend their lives helping others， even if sometimes they give their lives that way。 亮点积累：1。 词汇：obviou

15、sly adv。 显然、明显地;conscious adj。 神志清醒的；grateful adj。 感激的2. 短语：on the way to 在去的路上;feel driven to do sth. 义不容辞做某事；see sb./sth。 as 把看作；give the credit to. 归功于3. 提分句式: He always thinks it a duty for doctors and public servants to spend their lives helping others, even if sometimes they give their lives t

16、hat way。分析 本句是一个主从复合句。主句中，think it a duty for sb. to sth.意为“认为做某事是某人的职责所在”，spend ones life doing sth意为“倾注一生做某事”；even if 引导让步状语从句，表示“即便是”。译文 他认为医护人员和公仆们倾注一生帮助别人是职责所在，哪怕他们可能会因此牺牲。课后练习阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A wave of loneliness overcame her. Had it really been 12 months since her darling Donald

17、 had died？ This was the first time shed visited the beach and the holiday house they shared。 The memories were overwhelming. She ran outside and didnt stop until she reached the surfs edge. Her eyes were innocent and starring out to sea. She wished life could be prepackaged so that she could have it

18、 all。With Donald she thought she did. But that hadnt happened and now it never would. Donald was dead. They had known each other for 20 years. No blonde babies would be born。 Donald wouldnt age, or have grey hair. There would be no midlife crisis to overcome. No sunshine years or traveling。Irene had

19、 that all ahead of her， alone。 She was very depressed. But she was stronger than the pain she was feeling. She just needed a moment to remember all the good times they had shared。The shifting sands of time saw her as a lonely woman。 Her whitened blonde hair had the first layer of silver。 The wind wh

20、istled around her。 “Is there someone who can rescue me， bring color into my world and remind me theres more to life than pain? Show me a sign， please。” she implored， sinking to her knees as tears ran down her cheeks.The sea surged （涌动)， wetting her whole body。 It was cold and powerful. The surge suc

21、ked the sand away from her toes. She could taste the salt as she licked her dry lips。The cold sea suddenly became cool and calm。 Irene began breathing easier. She stopped and stepped water。 Beside her a dolphin surfaced. He threw back his head and began babbling to her. Donalds spirit seemed to be t

22、elling her that everything would be okay。 Just as he appeared the dolphin disappeared。Irene swam strongly back to shore. She grabbed a stick and began writing on the sand。 She wandered over to a rock and began sifting （过滤) the sand through her fingers. She scooped sand into her palm， then squeezed h

23、er fingers shut, trying to prevent it from dripping out. The sand to her left was like a blank page demanding to be remembered.续写要求： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2。 至少使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好； 4。 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:She began crossing the sand covering it in footprints

24、. Paragraph 2： The sun was hot on her face lifting her spirits as the breeze played with her hair. 【范文欣赏】Paragraph 1：She began crossing the sand covering it in footprints. Irene felt calm and in control. She felt the broken shells and rocks scratching her feet until she again reached smooth sand. She watched the sea-rolling wave after waves up onto the beach。 She could fe