高中英语基础写作公开课-学会用复合句和非谓语动词课件

1、Welcome To Our Classwelcome to our English class基础写作训练-学会运用复合句和非谓语动词2008 广东高考试题基础写作 你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断 1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed

2、into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the spor

3、t becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.广东08高考基础写作范文：句子表达有何亮点？写作中非谓语动词常见的错误:1. Most of them think take a nap at noon is beneficial.2. Most of people have the habit of take a nap after lunch.3. While having our dinner,

4、the doorbell rang4.Todowellincollege,goodgradesisessential.5. There are 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols. 6. Having been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it.写作中非谓语动词常见的错误1.动词短语作主语/宾语Most of them think take a nap at noon is beneficial.Most of them hold the opin

5、ion/firmly believe that taking a nap at noon is of great benefit.Most of people have the habit of take a nap after lunch. Most of people have the habit of taking a nap after lunch. 2. 逻辑主语不一致1 While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.While having our dinner, we heard the doorbell ringing. Todowell

6、incollege,goodgradesisessential.Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades. 3. 出现两个谓语。这种情况在“there be”句型中尤为明显。如：There are 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols. 50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols.或There are 50% of the girls choosing film and TV stars as their i

7、dols.4. 状语和状语从句混淆【误】Having been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it.【正】 Although he had been told many times, he still couldnt understand it.【正】He had been told many times, but he still couldnt understand it. 【正】Having been told many times, he still couldnt understand it.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁

8、高档Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词)听到这个消息,他们变的很激动. _the news, they got excited.2. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错. _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.Hearing Having been toldinvitedTranslate the following sente

9、nces by using non-predicate (非谓语动词)1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3，做完作业后，他回家了。Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home.Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings

10、 and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.4.上网聊天可跟同龄人交流,利于外语学习.5. 潍坊位于山东半岛中部,总面积1.59万平方公里, 人口863万。5. Located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula, Weifang covers an area of 15.9 thousand square kilometers with a population of 8.63 million.写作中复合句常见的错误1.只有从句，没有主句 1. The keepe

11、r who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.2. In some parts of the forest where you can find large groups of monkeys, which are jumping up and down.3.Because they are students, most of whom take a nap in the dormitory.3.Because they are students, most of t

12、hem take a nap in the dormitory for the reason of convenience.2. 主句和从句用句号分开Some students support the military training. Because it can make them learn how to fight for difficulties.3.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子 The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face. The hall is different from all ot

13、her buildings , it is made of glass.4.刻意使用从句，表达不自然 There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.你来试试定语从句的运用1.导游对游地讲解清晰、生动，增长了我们的见闻。The local tour guide

14、explained everything about the places which we visited in a clear and lively way, which helped us broaden our horizons.2.潍坊气候宜人，春季风多雨少。2.The climate of Weifang is pleasant and enjoyable, especially in spring when it is windy and has little rain. 训练重点：名词性从句的运用1. Tom今天上午没来上课的消息很快就传开了；2. 最使我们感到惊讶的是他说他没

15、来的原因是他没做完家庭作业；The news that Tom didnt attend class this morning spread soon.What surprised us most was that the reason that he gave for his absence from school was that he didnt finish his homework.学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find

16、 it hard to understand her dialect. Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.用一句话表达学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 用一句话表达a. It was 18 June, 2006.b. Stephen Hawking was a top world-class scientist from English.c. He gave a speech in the lecture auditorium of the p

17、eoples Great Hall.d. The lecture was titled “the origin of the universe”.On 18 June, 2006, Stephen Hawking, a top world-class scientist from England, gave a speech titled the origin of the Universe in the lecture auditorium of the Peoples Great Hall.不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学会运用复合句和非谓语动词第一步：拆

18、分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English

19、 and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from

20、 primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study方法2： because not everyone is good at learning English.学会使用复合句和非谓

21、语动词你来试试现象学生作文中出现很多错别字原因1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：错别字: wrongly-written characters网络语言：web language要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容 2. 两句话要有连贯性第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。 There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions. The reason why there are many wrongly-written

22、 characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.合并句子： They often use web languages when chatting on line. 1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters第二句:1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。 They have much homework to do

23、 every day.2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.合并句子： They fail to memorize the new characters. 连接两句话： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students compos

24、ition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters. 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况： 时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sighredness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50 (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很

25、复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关实战演练：2009广东高考试题基础写作 Exchange and discuss your partners composition, then give each other a score according to the following criteria. Criteria（标准） Mark Content（内容） （是否用5句话表达了全文要点） 0 5 分 Language（语言） （句子结构及用词是否得当） 0 8 分 Coherence（连贯）（是否用了恰当

26、的词语来衔接句子） 0 2 分Pair workHomework Rewrite the composition and hand it in.The growing rate of short-sightedness among students inspired me to take an interview with an eye-doctor Dr.Wang about short-sightedness among primary and middle school students. From the interview I have learned that the shorte

27、d-sightedness rate is a little higher than 50%, ranking the first place in the world. Experts explained the causes of shorted-sightedness were very complicated and no medicine could cure short-sightedness. It is advised that students should not use their eyes excessively and it could be of great help to take part in outdoo