人教版新目标英语九年级上册unit1-unit10 单元写作指导

1、写作任务U1假设你是Tom，请根据下面的提示信息，给你的中国朋友张星回一封信，给他提一些英语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。提示：1. 听英文歌曲或其他英文节目；2. 读英文经典；3. 参加英语角。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：应用文(书信)；信的主体部分为说明文时态：以一般现在时为主人称：回信主体内容是给别人提出建议，所以应该以第二人称you为主。2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接写作的评分标准之一是文章是否连贯，因此想让文章连贯的方法之一就是学会正确恰当地使用一些衔接词。本文中，在衔接几条建议时可以使用first, second, third来列举，这样使文章条理清晰。4.成篇章Dear Zhang

2、Xing,Im glad to give you some advice about how to learn English well.5.化“平凡”为“非凡”I believe you can make it as long as you never give up.I believe where there is a will, there is a way.答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) correct your pronunciation and improve your listening(2) read more English classics(3) not only incre

3、ase your knowledge but also learn a very beautiful language(4) provide you with many chances to communicate with others in English(5) my advice is helpful to your English learning4.成篇章Dear Zhang Xing,Im glad to give you some advice about how to learn English well.First, you can listen to English son

4、gs or other English programs on the radio at least three times a week. This will help you correct your pronunciation and improve your listening.Second,it is a good idea to read more English classics. If you do this, you will not only increase your knowledge but also learn a very beautiful language.T

5、hird, you could go to the English corner. It will provide you with many chances to communicate with others in English. This way is good for your spoken English.I hope my advice is helpful to your English learning! I believe you can make it as long as you never give up.Best wishes!Yours,Tom【写作任务】u2假如

6、你是王丽，你的英国笔友Eliza发来电子邮件询问你最喜欢的中国传统节日。请你给她回复邮件介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日端午节的情况。参考词汇：阴历的lunar【思路点拨】定基调体裁：应用文(电子邮件)；电子邮件的主体部分为说明文时态：介绍节日用一般现在时人称：第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接在本文中，第一次提到“端午节”时用全称the Dragon Boat Festival，再次提到时可以用it代替；再如第一次提到“人们”时用people，再次提到时可用they来代替。这种用代词指称前面的人或事物的方法，也是使文章保持连贯的一种衔接手段。4.成篇章Dear Eliza,I was so gl

7、ad to get your e-mail. My favorite traditional Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.Yours truly,Wang Li5.化“平凡”为“非凡”Everybody tries their best to win the race.All the teammates pull together to achieve success.答案2.谋布局、写句子(1) It is / falls / is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar mo

8、nth every year(2) On this day people usually eatzongziand hold dragon boat races(3) have such great team spirit4.成篇章Dear Eliza,I was so glad to get your e-mail. My favorite traditional Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.Itis one of the most important traditional festivals in China.Itfalls

9、on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. Its a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet.On this day people usually eatzongziand hold dragon boat races.Theyalso drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the doors and wear a spice bag with them.What makes the festival special for me is

10、 the dragon boat race. The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit everybody tries their best to win the race.Yours truly,Wang Li【写作任务】u3假如你叫张婷，今年暑假准备去英国的某所语言学校进行为期两周的游学，去之前你想了解一些相关信息。请你给这所学校的负责人写一封信，礼貌地询问你想知道的一些信息。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：应用文(书信)时态：叙述自己的情况时用一般现在时，叙述将来发生的情况时用一般将来时人称：第一人称2.谋

11、布局、写句子3.巧衔接在本文中，要想使询问的四条信息连贯，可以使用表示列举的连接手段如first, then, next, last / finally。这种运用连接性状语连句成篇的方法，也是使文章保持连贯的一种衔接手段。4.成篇章Dear Sir / Madam,My name is Zhang Ting and Im from Beijing, China.Yours,Zhang Ting5.化“平凡”为“非凡”Id like to know where to eat and live.Id like to know where I will eat and whether I will

12、stay in the dorm (学生宿舍) or with a host family.(1) Now Im writing to ask for some information(2) I wonder about the whole plan for this study vacation(3) Could you please tell me what courses Ill take(4) I wonder what activities I can do(5) Im looking forward to your reply4. 成篇章Dear Sir / Madam,My na

13、me is Zhang Ting and Im from Beijing, China. Ill be coming to your school for a two-week study vacation this summer. Now Im writing to ask for some information about this study vacation.First, I wonder about the whole plan for this study vacation. Then, could you please tell me what courses Ill take

14、 and how long each course will last? Next, Id like to know where to eat and live. Last, I wonder what activities I can do to learn more about your culture.I would like to thank you for your help. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Zhang Ting【写作任务】u4某英文杂志社正在征稿，题目是“How Ive Changed!”。请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇

15、英语短文介绍你的变化，给该杂志社投稿。要点提示：1. 从外貌、性格、爱好三个方面描述你的变化； 2. 介绍你的一个重要变化、变化过程及原因。【思路点拨】1. 定基调体裁：说明文时态：说明过去的情况用一般过去时(可用本单元的used to结构表示“过去常常”)；说明现在的情况用一般现在时人称：以第一人称为主2. 谋布局、写句子3. 巧衔接在说明今昔变化时，可以使用表示对比的词but，也可以通过动词时态的前后对照(如一般过去时和一般现在时)，还可以使用表示时间的词语now和When I was .进行衔接。4. 成篇章How Ive Changed!My life has changed a lo

16、t in the last few years.5. 化“平凡”为“非凡”. I started to practice it more. I started to practice it as long as I was free.2. 谋布局、写句子(1) I used to have short hair(2) I used to be very shy and have no friends(3) I have made several good friends(4) I used to be afraid of speaking English in class(5) my pron

17、unciation was very good(6) She encouraged me to speak a lot4. 成篇章How Ive Changed!My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to have short hair, but now I have very long hair. I used to be very shy and have no friends, but now I have made several good friends and Im more lively and open-

18、minded. I used to be afraid of speaking English in class, but now I like to speak English in public and can speak it very well. The most important change in my life was that I became interested in speaking English. When I was in Grade 8, my English teacher told me that my pronunciation was very good

19、 and I just needed more practice. She encouraged me to speak a lot and then I started to practice it more. Little by little my spoken English became better and better and I became more and more confident.【写作任务】5假如你叫李华，来自山东省潍坊市。你的加拿大笔友Marcus得知你市是风筝之乡，他对风筝很感兴趣，于是他给你发来一封电子邮件，想让你给他介绍一些风筝的相关情况。请你根据下面的要点提

20、示给他回复邮件。要点提示：1. 风筝的象征意义； 2. 原材料：竹子、纸或布或塑料(plastic)、细绳(string)；3. 用途：过去用于送信，现在用来娱乐和锻炼。【思路点拨】1. 定基调体裁：应用文(邮件)；邮件的主体部分为说明文 时态：介绍事物时用一般现在时 人称：第三人称2. 谋布局、写句子3. 巧衔接第一次提到“风筝”时用kites，再次提到时可以用they代替；为了避免重复， in my city在成篇章时可以用here来代替，这都是使用照应手段来使文章衔接的方法。在陈述风筝的意义时可以使用表示原因的连词because，这是使用逻辑纽带的方式使文章衔接的方法。4. 成篇章Dea

21、r Marcus,How are you doing these days? Im excited to hear from you. Id like to tell you something about kites in my city. Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua5. 化“平凡”为“非凡”People used kites to send a message in the old days. Kites were used for sending a message in the old days.2. 谋布局、写句子(1) is famous / known /

22、 well-known for its kites(2) An international kite festival is held in my city in April every year(3) Kites are loved / liked / enjoyed by lots of / many / a lot of people(4) they are often painted with colorful drawings(5) kites are used for fun and exercise4. 成篇章Dear Marcus, How are you doing thes

23、e days? Im excited to hear from you. Id like to tell you something about kites in my city. My city, Weifang in Shandong Province, is famous for its kites. An international kite festival is held here in April every year. Kites are loved by lots of people because they rise into the air with peoples wi

24、shes for a better life. They are usually made of bamboo, paper or cloth or plastic and string. There are all kinds of kites and they are often painted with colorful drawings. And kites here often have special designs. People used kites to send a message in the old days. Today, they are used for fun

25、and exercise.Welcome to my city! I hope you will fly a kite here!Best wishes! Yours,Li Hua【写作任务】6假如你就读于一所国际学校，酷爱发明。在你校的科技周活动中你想向同学们“推销”你的一项新发明。请根据提示准备一篇英语发言稿。提示：1. Whats it and when was it invented?2. Whats it used for?3. What does it look like?4. How does it work?5. How much is it?【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：说明文

26、时态：介绍发明要用一般现在时人称：第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接在介绍该发明的工作原理时，可以使用表示顺序的词first和then来连接，这是使用逻辑纽带的方式进行衔接的一种方法。4.成篇章May I have your attention, please? 5.化“平凡”为“非凡”If you hate it, please buy one.If so, please buy one.2.谋布局、写句子(1) It was invented last year(2) It is used for dealing with rubbish(3) The cleaning dog mach

27、ine looks like a real dog(4) how much my new invention is4.成篇章May I have your attention, please?Id like to introduce my new invention to you. It is a machine called “cleaning dog”. It was invented last year. It is used for dealing with rubbish at home. The cleaning dog machine looks like a real dog.

28、 Do you know how it works?Firstit uses its nose to look for its food the rubbish.Thenthe rubbish will turn into energy after being eaten. Once it eats its “food”, it doesnt need to be charged. You must want to know how much my new invention is. Its 500 yuan. Its not very expensive, is it? You hate i

29、t when there is much rubbish in your house, dont you? If you hate it, please buy one. I believe your parents will also be happy with it.【写作任务】7每个家庭都有自己的家规，好的家规有利于孩子的成长、家庭的和睦。你不同意你家家规中的哪一条？为什么不同意？你认为这条家规应该如何改？请你就这三个问题在你的日记本中倾吐自己的心声。【思路点拨】定基调体裁：应用文(日记)；日记的主体部分为议论文时态：一般现在时人称：以第一人称为主2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接在由“为什么

30、不同意这条家规”过渡到“应该如何改这条家规”时，可以使用表示推论的词for these reasons等来起承上启下的作用，这是使用逻辑纽带的方式进行衔接的一种方法。4.成篇章 5.化“平凡”为“非凡”Its not good to spend all the time studying.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.2.谋布局、写句子(1) using it will get in the way of my study(2) First, the mobile phone provides me with an easy and fa

31、st way of communication(3) Second, the mobile phone can help me study / help with my study(4) I think I should be allowed to have a mobile phone(5) I can do even better in my study if Im allowed to have a mobile phone4.成篇章Dear Diary, One of the rules in my family is that Im not allowed to have a mob

32、ile phone. My parents think that using it will get in the way of my study, but I dont agree with them.First, the mobile phone provides me with an easy and fast way of communication. If I have a mobile phone, I can make a call when in an emergency. Second, the mobile phone can help me study. Now ther

33、e are lots of educational apps on it that I can use. Third, I can use the mobile phone to listen to music, play games or watch movies. Its not good to spend all the time studying. I need to relax sometimes.For these reasons, I think I should be allowed to have a mobile phone. My parents can make rul

34、es about using it, for example, when and how long I can use it. I can do even better in my study if Im allowed to have a mobile phone. I hope my parents will understand me.【写作任务】8上周你市某小区发生了一件神秘离奇的事情，引起了人们的猜测，但最终这个谜团被解开了。假如你是你校英文报的一名记者，请根据下面的提示内容，以“No More Mystery in the Neighborhood”为题写一则新闻报道。提示内容：1

35、. what the mystery was2. how the mystery was solved3. how the people in the neighborhood now feel思路点拨1.定基调体裁：应用文(新闻稿)时态：以一般过去时为主人称：以第三人称为主2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接在叙述谜团是如何解开时，首句使用过去进行时(was happening)作为背景，而后再用一般过去时叙述具体的事情。通过动词时态的前后配合，上下文很自然地建立起一种逻辑顺序关系。此外，本文中还体现了其他的衔接手段，如词义搭配，它包括篇章中所有语义相关联的词项。本文围绕mystery一词展开，与之

36、相关联的词有strange, uneasy, solved, relaxed等，这些词都与描述神秘事件有关联。4.成篇章 No More Mystery in the NeighborhoodLast week, in a quiet neighborhood, something strange happened.5.化“平凡”为“非凡”They live there as usual.Their life is going on as usual.2.谋布局、写句子(1) some people tried to find out who was planting these trees(

37、2) Everyone / Everybody felt uneasy(3) Three mothers wanted people here to live more comfortably(4) so they had to work at night(5) and they showed their thanks to the three mothers4.成篇章No More Mystery in the NeighborhoodLast week, in a quiet neighborhood, somethingstrangehappened.People found there

38、 were more and more trees in the neighborhood. In the daytime some people tried to find out who was planting these trees, but they couldnt. Everyone feltuneasy.We now know whatwas happeningin the neighborhood. One night an old man found out the truth. Three motherswantedpeople here to live more comf

39、ortably, so theydecidedto plant some trees. Theydidnt havefree time in the daytime, so theyhad to workat night.Now the mystery issolved. People in the neighborhood now feelrelaxedand they showed their thanks to the three mothers. They live there as usual.【写作任务】9最近某中学生英文报的Movies专栏正在征稿，主题为“你最喜欢的一部电影”，

40、请你写一篇短文给该专栏投稿。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：说明文时态：一般现在时人称：以第三人称为主2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接(1)在本文中，第一次提到“我最喜欢的电影”时用名词短语my favorite movie，再次提到时用it代替。这种用代词指称前面事物的方法，也是使文章保持连贯的一种衔接手段。(2)通过词汇的重复(excited, exciting)，能达到突出主题的目的，也可以起到篇章纽带的作用。(3)本文中的was directed by ., is set in ., tells the story of .等表达都与描述电影有关，这是通过语义搭配使文章连贯的一种衔接手段。4.

41、成篇章 5.化“平凡”为“非凡”The movie was directed by Jon Watts. He is a famous American director.The movie was directed by Jon Watts who is a famous American director.2.谋布局、写句子(1) The movie is set in Europe(2) The movie tells the story of how Spider-Man Peter Parker saves the earth(3) Peter puts on his Spider-

42、Man suit(4) Every time I watch the movie, I feel very excited(5) it is the most exciting movie that I have ever watched4.成篇章Spider-Man: Far From Homeismy favorite movie. It was directed byJon Watts. He is a famous American director.It is set inEurope andtells the story ofhow Spider-Man Peter Parker

43、saves the earth. When Peter enjoys his life as a teenager on a European vacation with his friends, threats to the earth appear. Peter puts on his Spider-Man suit and uncovers the mystery of several elemental creature attacks. Every time I watch the movie, I feel veryexcited. Itshows us Peters courag

44、e to fight against threats to the earth. I think you should watch it too becauseitis the mostexcitingmovie that I have ever watched.【写作任务】10假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mark要来中国学习一年，要寄宿在一个当地家庭。为了能很好地融入到寄宿家庭的生活中，他写信向你询问中国的礼仪习俗。请你根据要点提示给他写一封回信，从三个方面给他提一些建议。要点提示：1.吃饭时；2.在家时；3.约他人外出时。1.定基调体裁：应用文(书信)；信的主体部分为说明文时态：一般现在时人

45、称：回信主体内容是给别人提建议，所以应该以第二人称you为主。2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接(1)使用平行结构(Its . to .和Dont .)能使文章节奏匀称，这是使文章衔接的一种方法。(2)词汇的重复(be supposed to)和同义词的使用(be supposed to, should)也是使文章衔接的一种方法。4.成篇章Dear Mark,You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs. When youre eating at th