高考英语作文话题-工作与职业-范文+详解(全)

1、高考英语作文话题 - 工作与职业 - 范文+ 详解(全)话题解读 “工作与职业”是高中英语新课程标准 24 话题之一，包括工作经 历与感受、工作类别、工作压力、招聘广告、寻找工作、职业规划、经济收入、 社会责任等方面。 通过本话题的学习与高考考查， 让学生树立正确的职业观、 责 任感，为将来的工作与职业打下心理基础。高考探究 “工作与职业”是高考英语常考话题，在听力、阅读理解、完形填 空以及书面表达中都会有所体现，例如 2016 年全国卷短文改错、 2016 年全 国卷书面表达、 2016 年全国卷语法填空等。请你结合下面要点提供的信息， 给某英语晚报写一篇新闻报道， 简单介绍研究油 菜花的父

2、子农民科学家。要点：1沈克泉、沈昌健是湖南一对普通的农民父子；240 年前，沈克泉立志培育出优质杂交油菜 (hybrid rape) ；3父子二人靠自学、肉眼观察、记录和总结规律，经 1 000 多次实验后培育出 优质品种；4“油菜花父子”用实际行动证明农民也能变成科学家。佳作欣赏Shen Kequan and his son Shen Changjianwho used to be two commonfarmers in Hunan Provincehave become famous because theydeveloped hybrid rape with good quality

3、.40 years ago Shen Kequan made up his mindto cultivate a kind of good hybrid rape.Toreach his goal ， the farmer together with his sontaughtthemselves agriculture knowledge ，observed the rape with their eyes，kept records and drew conclusions themselves. Although they hadn tgot professional education，

4、they used their way to find out how tosolve the problems they met .Finally ，they produced a kind of hybrid rape with excellent quality after more than 1,000 experiments.The father and his son s achievement tells us that farmers can also become scientists名师点睛文章结构如下： (1)指出文章要介绍的人物及事件农民父子 (沈克泉、沈昌健 ) 培育

5、出优质杂交油菜。 (2) 围绕要点进行细节报道： 40 年前立志要培育出优质 油菜；自学、观察、记录、总结； 1 000 多次实验后终于成功。 (3)总结性 评价农民也能成为科学家。文中出现了定语从句、原因状语从句、让步状 语从句、宾语从句等复杂句式和 used to be ，make up one s mind ，teach oneself ，draw conclusions 等高级词汇，增强了文章的说服力。话题单词1achieve v 完成；实现；达到 achievement n 完成；成就2appoint vt .任命；委派；指定；约定 （时间、地点 ） appointment n 约定

6、， 约会；任命，委派3conclusion n 结论；结束 conclude vt .结束；推断4earn vt .赢得；挣得；赚得5employ v雇用 employment n雇用 unemployment n 失业 employer n雇主 employee n 雇员6hire vt .雇用；租用7interview n& vt .采访，会见，面试 interviewer n 采访者；主持面试 者 interviewee n接受面试者；被采访者8manage vt .经营；管理；设法对付 management n 经营；管理 manager n 经理；管理人9quit vt .停止；离开

7、resign vt .& vi.辞职retire vt.& vi.退休undertake vt .承担；从事adjust v调整； （使）适应；调节allowance n 津贴；零用钱appearance n外貌 appear vi.出现applicant n申请人application n申请architect n建筑师assistant n 助手，助理 assist vt .帮助；协助 assistance n 帮助；协 助bonus n 津贴；奖金；红利candidate n 候选人；应试者certificate n 执照；证 （明）书chance n 机会；机遇consideratio

8、n n 考虑；要考虑的事；体贴 considerate adj .想得周到 的；体贴的 consider vt .思考，考虑；认为 considering prep .考虑到；鉴于dismiss vt .让离开；开除；解散；解雇educated adj .受过教育的；有教养的27282930313233343536373839404142expectation n 期待，期望fail v失败； （考试 ）不及格hold v 担任；拥有；保持；抓住occupation n 职业opportunity n 机会possibility n 可能性；可能physicist n 物理学家potentia

9、l adj .潜在的；可能的； n.潜力position n 职位profession n 职业，专业qualify vt.& vi.（使）具有资格； （使）具备合格条件qualified adj .有资格的reply vt .& n 回答；回复representative n 代表，典型 （人物）requirement n 要求secretary n 秘书；书记specialist n 专科医生；专家succeed v成功welfare n 幸福；福利语境活用用所给词的正确形式填空 1Then ，handle the most important tasks first so youll f

10、eel a real senseof achievement(achieve) (2016 全国)2Could we make another appointment(appoint) to go to the bookstore together ？ (2016 全国)3Being able to read people helps kids from misreading a situation and jumping to false conclusions(conclude)(2014 新课标全国)4Men and women must be treated equally in ed

11、ucationand employment(employ)(2014 陕西)5His appearance(appear) created an atmosphere of tension.(2014湖北)6His presence meant that I had an unexpected teaching assistant(assist)in class whose creativity would infect other students.(2016全国)7An important quality in a neighbor is consideration(consider) f

12、or others.(2014 湖南)8Smartphones reduce the possibility(possible) for new and insightfulminds ， and steal away our dead time.(2016江苏)话题短语1apply for 申请2be fit for 适合3in charge of 主管4be in the charge of sb./be in ones charge 在某人的掌管之下5be occupied with 忙于做；专心于6be out of employment/be out of work/lose one

13、s job 失业7feel equal to 感觉能胜任8hand over 移交；交出9hunt for 搜寻；寻找meet with 符合；遇到；遭受look ahead 展望未来；为将来设想take charge of 负责；接管语境活用运用上述短语完成片段 After graduation ，Hu Jun was 1.applying for（ 申请） a position which 2.was fit for（ 适合） him.At last he got a post in a big company and 3.took charge of（负责） production wor

14、k.He 4.felt equal to（感觉能胜任 ）that position anddid very well.Every day he 5.was occupied with（忙于） his work.He said hehad to 6.look ahead（ 展望未来 ）and 7.hunt for（ 寻找）more chance to work well for his company in order not to 8.be out of employment/be out of work/lose his job（ 失去工作 ）经典句式1I/We would apprecia

15、te it if you would/could.I d appreciate it if you wouldgive me the opportunity.I m lookingforward to your early reply.如果你给我机会，我会感激不尽，盼望你早日答复。仿写如果你能给我一点宝贵建议，我将不胜感激。I would appreciate it if you could give me a bit of good advice.2anyone 后跟 who 引导的定语从句Anyone who wants to apply for the job must meet the

16、 following requirements.任何想申请这份工作的人必须满足以下要求。仿写这对任何一个想学习做喜剧的人来说都是一个绝佳机会。 (2016 全国)This is a good chance for anyone who wants to learn how to do comedy.3 do 表示强调I do hope the chance is coming quite soon. 我真心希望机会快快到来。仿写我总是及时到达的！I do always arrive in time ！achieve vt. 完成；实现；达到The journey was intended to

17、achieve more than what Captain RobertFalcon Scott had done.打算通过这次旅程取得比罗伯特福尔肯斯科特船长的成就更大的成就(2016 全国)If you want to make great achievements，you should devote almost allyour life.如果你想取得巨大的成功，你应该全力以赴。achieve one s aims/goals 达到目标achieve success 获得成功achievement n 成就；完成；达到a sense of achievement 成就感make gre

18、at achievements 取得巨大的成功用 achieve 的正确形式填空 Achieving a high degree of proficiency in English as a foreign language is not a mysterious process without scientific basis.International Women s Day ，which falls on the 8th of March，is aglobal day celebrating the economic， political andsocial achievements o

19、f women.Lucy has achieved all of the goals she set for herself in high school and is ready for new challenges at university.appoint vt. 任命；委派；指定；约定 (时间、地点 )We must appoint a person to act as secretary.我们得指定一个人当秘书。 (牛津词典 )The manager appointed him to receive the businessman.经理指定他去接待那个商人。appoint sb.(a

20、s/to be) .任命某人为appoint sb.to do sth. 委派某人做某事appointment n 约会；预约；任命，委任make an appointment with sb.与某人预约 / 约会表示委任某人担任某职务时，要分清两种情况：若指的是抽象的职位(如position ， office ， presidency ， chairmanship 等)，则用“ appoint sb.to 抽象职位”；若指的是具体的某职位 ( 如 headmaster ，manager ，chairman ， president 等 )，则用“appoint sb.(to be/as) 担任

21、的职务”。如： Who shall we appoint (to be/as) chairman of the club？Who shall we appoint tothe chairmanship of the club ？我们派谁担任俱乐部的主席呢？ 基础知识训练 单句语法填空 The Prime Minister has appointed a civilian as the Defence Minister.I have made an appointment with Doctor Smith.The time appointed(appoint) for the meeting

22、was 10：30.写作能力提升 同义句改写 He was appointed as captain of the basketball team and led theplayers to the next session of the Olympic Games.(用过去分词短语作状语改写)Appointed as captain of the basketball team，he led the players to thenext session of the Olympic Games.conclusion n 结论；结束(1)The authors of the study not

23、ed that there were limitations to their conclusions .这个研究的作者们指出他们的结论有局限性。(2)What conclusions do you draw from the evidence youve heard?从你听到的证据中你得出什么结论？(1)arrive at/reach/come to/draw a conclusion得出结论in conclusion 总之；最后(2)conclude sth.with. 就某事与某人达成协议；以结束conclude sth.from. 从推断出 基础知识训练 单句语法填空 He concl

24、uded his speech with a famous saying.What can we conclude from Staffords research?In conclusion ， I would like to say how much I have enjoyed myself today.写作能力提升 一句多译 从以上讨论可以得出两个结论。Two conclusions can be drawn from the above discussion.There are two conclusions to be drawn from the above discussion.

25、 employ v 雇用；利用 (时间、精力等 )(1)They employed him to look after the baby.他们聘请他照料婴儿。 (牛津词典 )(2)The number in employment has fallen.就业人数减少了employ.as. 雇用做employ oneself in (doing) sth.从事于，忙于be employed in doing sth. 从事于in employment 在业，有工作out of employment 失业 基础知识训练 单句语法填空 He has been employed in writing a

26、 new book these days.When I employ people as advisors， I will occasionally listen to theiradvice.It s standard practice for a company like this one to employ(employ) a security officer.写作能力提升 完成句子 He was employed in reading and he didnt notice Tom come in.Employed/Lost/Absorbed in reading，he didn t

27、notice Tom come in.manage vt. 经营；管理；设法对付Your house is always so neat how do you manage it with three children?你的房子总是这么整洁你是如何带着三个孩子做到这一点的？Having worked for two days，Steve managed to finish his report onschedule.工作了两天后，史蒂夫设法准时完成了报告。(1)manage to do sth. 设法做成某事(2)management n 经营；管理基础知识训练 单句语法填空 (1)How d

28、o you manage to stay(stay) so slim?(2)He left the management(manage) of the firm to his son.单句改错 I to persuade my father to give up smoking，but he wouldn t listen.写作能力提升 一句多译 他设法从监狱里逃了出来。He managed to escape from the prison.(manage)He succeeded in escaping from the prison.(succeed)He was successful

29、in escaping from the prison.(successful)manage to do sth. 设法做成某事，相当于 succeed in doing sth. 。 undertake vt. 着手做；从事；承担；许诺，答应She undertook full responsibility for the new changes. 她为新变化承担全部责任。 (朗文词典 )They undertook to finish the task by Monday. 她们保证在星期一以前完成任务。undertake n./pron .承担undertake to do. 着手做；答

30、应做undertake that. 答应基础知识训练 单句语法填空 (1)The project undertaken(undertake) by the young engineer turned outto be very successful.(2)We are supposed to undertake(undertake) the responsibility to lead a lowcarbon lifestyle ，which is of great significance.写作能力提升 一句多译 他答应从现在起努力学习。 He undertakes to study har

31、d from now on.(undertake to do.) He undertakes that he will study hard from now on.(undertake that.)He promises to study hard from now on.(promise to do.)earn vt. 挣得；赚得；获得；博得 完成句子 He used to earn his living by fishing(靠打鱼为生 ) His honesty earned him a good fame/reputation(为他赢得了好名声 ) earn one s living

32、 谋生； earn 后还可带双宾语。hire vt. 雇用；租用用 hire ， employ ，let ，rent 的正确形式填空 He was hired/employed 5 years ago.Who do you rent the land from?They decided to let/hire/rent out the smaller offices at low rents.hire ，employ ，let ，renthire 普通用语，指短期雇用，租用。 hire out 则表示“出租，受雇”，意思 正相反。employ 较正式用语，使用范围很广，指商店，公司等团体长期雇

33、用别人，也 可指私人雇用，一般工作相对稳定，有固定的报酬，宾语一般是人。let 意为“出租”，特指出租房屋，土地，车辆等。rent 一般指长时间出租，租用，通常用于房地产，一般不用于人。quit v 停止；离开；辞职；退出单句语法填空 (1)Doctors are doing research to find out what happens physically when people quit smoking(smoke) (2)But for your encouragement，I should have quit(quit) the position.He has decided t

34、o quit as manager of the team.(1)quit as. 辞掉职务(2)quit 后接名词或动名词作宾语，不能接不定式作宾语。resign vt.& vi. 辞职；辞去 (工作、职位等 )；听任；顺从单句语法填空 (1)Mr.Smith resigned from the union last year.(2)You must resign yourselves to waiting a bit longer.， Mary decided to resign her（3）In order to look after her sick mother ， Mary dec

35、ided to resign herresign from. 辞去职务resign as. 辞去当的职务resign oneself to 听任摆布in charge of 主管同义句改写 Mr.Li is in charge of the class.（1）The class is in the charge of Mr.Li.（用 the class 作主语改写 ）（2）Mr.Li takes charge of the class.（用 take charge of 改写 ）in charge of 主管（表状态 ）in the charge of 被主管；由负责take charge

36、of 主管（表动作 ）be out of work 失业 完成句子 我们每周至多工作四十小时。We have 40 hours at work at the most each week.他已经失业三年了。He has been out of work for three years.单句改错 He was out of a 或 and had to stay at home.at work 在工作；忙于，从事I do hope the chance is coming quite soon.我真心希望机会快快到来。(1)My memory isn t very good ， but I do

37、 remember what she was wearing. 我的记忆力不太好，但我确实记得她当时的穿着。 (麦克米伦词典 )(2)He does enjoy listening to classical music.他的确喜欢听古典音乐。“ do/does/did 动词原形”构成强调句，意为“确实，的确”，用来加强谓语 动词的语气，但须符合以下条件：句子是肯定句；句子的时态为一般现在时或一般过去时；只能用来强调谓语动词，若强调主语、宾语、表语、状语等，则应用 It is/was.that. 进行强调。基础知识训练 单句改错 (1)He did to you last week.(2)Do

38、be quiet.写作能力提升 对划线部分进行强调 I locked the door.I m absolutely sure.I did lock the door.I m absolutely sure.I don t attend school until 7 o clock.It is not until 7 o clock that I attend school.(2016 全国)If you feel stressed by responsibilities at work，you should take a stepback and identify( 识别 ) those o

39、f 61.greater(great) and lessimportance.Then ，handle the most important tasks first so youll feel areal sense of 62.achievement(achieve)Leaving the less important thingsuntil tomorrow 63.is(be) often acceptable.Most of us are more focused 64.on our tasks in the morning than we are later in the day.So

40、 ，get an early start and try to be as productive 65.as possible before lunch.This will give you the confidence you need to get you through the afternoon and go home feeling accomplished.Recent 66.studies(study) show that we are far more productive at work if we take short breaks 67.regularly(regular

41、) Give your body and brain arest by stepping outside for 68.a while， exercising ，or doing somethingyou enjoy.If you find something you love doing outside of the office，you ll be lesslikely 69.to bring(bring) your work HYPERLINK http:/home.It home.It could be anythinggardening ，cooking ，music ，sports

42、 but whatever it is,70.make(make) sure it s a relief from daily stress rather than another thing to worry about.答案 greater解析 考查形容词的比较级。根据后面的 and less 可知，此处也要用比较级形 式。答案 achievement解析 考查名词的用法。介词 of 后要用名词作宾语。固定表达 a sense of achievement 一种成就感。答案 is解析 考查主谓一致和时态。本句的主语为动名词短语 leaving the less. ，动 名词作主语谓语要用单

43、数第三人称形式， 且这里说的是一个客观事实， 故要用 is 。答案 on解析 考查介词的用法。 很多人早晨的注意力要比晚些时候的注意力更集中。 固 定短语 be focused on 专心于，集中于。答案 as解析 考查固定表达。正是因为人们早晨的注意力更为集中，所以我们要早起， 要和午饭之前一样高效率。固定表达 as.as possible 尽可能。答案 studies解析 考查名词的复数。根据后面的谓语动词 show 可知，主语应该是复数形式。答案 regularly解析 考查副词的用法。 如果我们定期休息的话。 此处修饰动词短语 take short breaks ，故要用副词形式。答案

44、 a解析 考查不定冠词的用法。让你的身体和思想休息一会儿。固定表达 for a while “一会儿”69答案 to bring解析 考查不定式的用法。固定表达 be likely to do. 很可能做某事。答案 make解析 考查祈使句中的动词。 根据句子结构可知， 此处为祈使句， 故谓语要用动 词原形。名师指津1依据话题主线，抓住主旨大意，调整逻辑思维，准确解答题目快速阅读文章， 根据文中“at work ，task ，achieve ，productive ，confidence ， accomplished ，stress ”等话题词汇可知，本篇文章的话题背景是工作与职业， 文章主要

45、介绍的是当我们在工作中感到巨大压力时，应该如何合理释放这些压 力。内容涉及处理最重要的事情；上午多做工作；工作期间定期休息等。在解题 时紧紧围绕这条主线，速读全文，掌握大意，调整逻辑，然后细读做题。2总结解题规律，提高解题能力有根可寻攻克提示类语法填空括号内提供的是动词首先，判断要填的动词是谓语动词还是非谓语动词。 然后根据以下两点进行思考。若句中没有别的谓语动词， 或者虽然已有谓语动词， 但需填的动词与之是并列 关系时，所给动词就是谓语动词；若是谓语动词，就要考虑时态和语态。若句中已有谓语动词， 但不是并列谓语动词时， 所给动词就是非谓语动词； 若 是非谓语动词就要确定是 v.ing 形式，

46、 v.ed 形式，还是不定式。确定的方法主 要有： a.作主语或宾语时，通常用 v.ing 形式表示习惯或一般情况，用不定式表 示具体情况； b. 作伴随状语时，通常用分词，若与逻辑主语之间是主动关系，用 现在分词 (v .ing) ；若是被动关系，用过去分词 (v.ed)；c.作目的状语、形容词后 的状语时，一般用不定式。括号内提供的是形容词或副词如果括号内提供的是形容词， 一般是考查副词， 即要变成副词形式； 如果括号 内提供的是副词，一般是考查形容词，即要变成形容词形式。有时也要根据语境判断是否要变成名词形式或否定含义。比较等级通常有表示范围的 in/of 介词短语或形容词前有 the

47、时，一般要用最高级； than 的前面一定要用比较级。括号内提供的是名词如果空格是在冠词、物主代词、指示代词、不定代词、名词所有格或形容词之 后，则应考虑填名词。但不要忘记考虑名词是否变复数。当括号内提供的是名词时，还可能考查形容词、副词、动词等。词性转换题词性的判断主要是通过分析句子的成分来确定。一般情况下可以作如下分析： 表语、 定语和补语一般由形容词充当， 有时也可以是动名词、 现在分词和过去 分词等。修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子，作状语，用副词形式。作主语，或在及物动词或介词后作宾语，用名词形式。在形容词性物主代词后，或者在“冠词 （形容词 ）”后，用名词形式。话题词汇重现1tas

48、k n 任务2achievement n 成就3productive adj .多产的；有成效的4confidence n 自信5accomplished adj .有成就的；熟练的；才华高的6stress n 压力7at work 在工作（2016 全国）My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big ， but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal time

49、s.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead ，he hopes that our business will

50、 grow steady.答案that where 考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词 to 之后 为宾语从句，而宾语从句中缺少地点状语。故用 where 引导。 去掉 but 考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词 though 不可与并列连词 but 连用。 had have 考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般 现在时。 honest honesty 考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可 知应当用名词形式。 or and 考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。 using used 考查被动语态。 fresh vegetables

51、and high quality oil与 use 之间为被动关系。 be used for “被用于”。 dreams 后加 of 考查固定搭配。固定短语 dream of (doing) sth. 意为“梦 想做某事”。 short 前的 the a 考查冠词的用法。 in a short period of time为固定短语，意为“在短时间内”。 our his 考查代词的用法。短文介绍了 my uncle 诚信经营餐馆的事情， 故将 our 改为 his 。 steady steadily 考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。 名师指津1依据话题主线，调整逻辑思维，准确解答题目快速阅

52、读文章，根据文中“ owner ， customers ， success ，become rich ， business ”等话题词汇可知， 本篇文章的话题背景是工作与职业， 文章大意是介 绍“我”叔叔的小餐馆以及叔叔告诉“我”他成功的秘诀。在解题时紧紧围绕这 条主线，速读全文，掌握大意，调整逻辑，然后细读做题。2短文改错常见错误及高分策略常见错误 1 】非谓语动词的误用此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用。非谓语动词之间的混用。在并列结构中非谓语动词的误用。如：本题中 Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables a

53、nd high quality oil are using for cooking. 一句， using 要改成 used 。fresh vegetables and high quality oil 与 use 之间为被动关系。 be used for 被用于。【高分策略】纵观全文或全句，明确句中动词所作的句子成分。系统掌握非谓语动词的句法功能。前后联系，整体把握。【常见错误 2 】形容词和副词的混用及其比较等级的误用此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：形容词和副词的混用，是短文改错中常见的考点之一。比较级和最高级的混用或误用。比较级和最高级修饰语的误用如：本题中 Instead ，he

54、hopes that his business will grow steady.一句，要 把 steady 改成 steadily 。修饰谓语动词用副词。【高分策略】熟知形容词和副词的句法功能。理清短文中形容词和副词比较等级的关系。结合短文内容，准确使用形容词和副词。【常见错误 3 】关联词和平行结构的误用 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：并列连词 but ，and ，or ，so 等词的混用，常常出现在短文改错题中并列连词和从属连词的混用。平行结构方面的错误。【高分策略】依据短文中的逻辑关系，准确把握词与词，句与句或段与段之间的关系分析句子结构，确定句子的类型 (简单句，并列句，复合

55、句 )。排除汉语影响，识别 although.but 或 because.so 等错误 如：本题中 Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are used for cooking. 一句，or 要改成 and 。根据句意可知二者之间为并列 关系而非选择关系。【常见错误 4 】固定搭配、习惯用法与介词的误用 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：在一些固定短语中介词的误用。介词与连词或副词的混用。及物动词之后介词的多用或不及物动词之后介词的漏用。如：本题中 My uncle says that he n

56、ever dreams becoming rich in a short period of time. 一句，dreams 后要加介词 of 。固定短语 dream of (doing) sth. 意为“梦想 (做 )某事”。【高分策略】(1)在平时的学习中注意积累语言知识，特别是一些固定搭配的记忆。(2)强化语法训练，分清连词、副词和介词之间的区别和句法功能。把语法知识的记忆和语感的培养结合起来。【常见错误 5 】冗词的多用 此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：(1)英语和汉语在某些方面的表达差异是常考点之一。(2)某些从句引导词的误用。某些固定表达结构的误用。如：本题中 Though

57、not very big ，but the restaurant is popular in our area. 一句， but 要去掉。从属连词 though 不可与并列连词 but 连用。【高分策略】(1)培养用英语思维的良好习惯，避免汉语影响。(2)分析句子成分，把握句子结构。结合上下文，完整领会短文内容。(2016 全国) 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历 (resume) 。给外教 Ms.Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 (format) 。注意： 1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步 明确要求本篇是一篇

58、书信类的应用文，要求是以李华的身份给外教 Ms.Jenkins 写一封 信，让她帮助修改自己的申请书和个人简历。 文章没有给出开头和结尾， 所以要 注意书信的格式，包括称呼语、正文以及结束语等。写作时，将来时、现在时以 及现在完成时要交替使用，人称以第一人称为主。第二步 确定段落写这篇文章时，可分三段来写：第一段：向 Ms.Jenkins 告知自己的计划并寻求她的帮助；第二段：详细描述自己的计划， 并请 Ms.Jenkins 修改自己的申请书和个人简历； 第三段：再次请求帮助。第三步 提炼要点1即将到来的暑假 the coming summer vacation2减轻某人的负担 reduce

59、one s burden3一份兼职工作 a parttime job4 申请表 / 信 application form/letter5个人简历 personal resume6吸引某人的眼球 catch one s eye 7参考 / 查阅 refer to8改正错误 correct mistake 9如果你能帮我，我将不胜感激 Id appreciate it if you could help me.盼望look forward to.第四步 句式升级1我想到外企公司找一份兼职工作以便挣点额外的钱来减轻家庭负担。（一般表达 ）I want to go to a foreign compa

60、ny to find a parttime job to earn some extra money and reduce my familys burden.（句式升级 ）In order to/To earn some extra money and reduce my familys burden ，I d like to go to a foreign capital company to find a parttime job.2如果你能帮助我修改它们我将不胜感激。（一般表达 ）I d be grateful to you if you could help me.（句式升级 ）I