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1、高考漫画作文写作指导1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writingTasks:1. 读图2. 解意3. 谋篇Difficulties?读图1. 漫画的题目 眼睛2. 漫画的画面 细节3. 漫画的文字 观点4. 漫画的夸张 寓意读图题目 画面 文字 夸张 读图The underwear ( shorts for men and pan

2、ties for ladies) is a funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet!夸张解意1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？ 解意. 联系生活，明晰主旨 Imaginat

3、ion! 解意注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！谋篇3 parts:1) describe the picture2) interpret its meaning3) give your opinions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/showsThe picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.In the pict

4、ure, there are/is (are) doingThe picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first.Part 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection ofThe picture indicate that weNowadays, it is a c

5、ommon phenomenon thatThis is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongPart 3 Give your opinionsI think/believe thatAs far as Im concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,musthave toDo/DontshouldIt is better/advisable toI consider it necessaryOnly in this

6、 way can.One possible version: For most of the parents, its no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Lets look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is

7、 telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children-hardware, software and underwear. It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someones underwear, but it describes vividly parents distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Conc

8、erned about their childrens security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line “the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children s

9、pend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”! From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is

10、better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children. 叮嘱几句：1.保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称.避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误你不是父母！人称混乱！

11、1)误解图意 大忌！2) 企图幽默 可笑！3)不明寓意 白写！ 再叮嘱几句：.控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）.精辟的结尾！Too short!Too long!不要动不动就study hard! 一篇好的英语漫画作文仔细审题准确立义规范行文整洁书写Not good!Worse!Neat!下面是漫画写作的一些基本方法。1. 描述基本步骤：描述漫画、图表引出暗含主题简短解释过渡参考模板：From the cartoon we can see that_. What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society, and it conv

12、eys the symbolic meaning of_. 2. 阐明原因基本步骤：引出原因列举原因过渡参考模板：What caused the effect? There are at least two possible reasons. To begin with, _. In the second place, _. There may be some other reasons responsible for_, but I think what has been mentioned above is generally acceptable.3. 提出对策基本步骤：引出对策列举对策

13、过渡参考模板：We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up. First of all, the government should propagandize to arouse public awareness of_. In the second place, the government should take effective measures to_. Finally, _ should be bann

14、ed by law. This is my point of view and I am sure my idea is both reasonable and workable.Lets practise!two ladies living in the opposite flat happen to meet each other. dont know each otherThe exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in the modern world We are busy with our work all day long

15、. Some dont want to get in touch with othersPeople often stay at home watching TV or playing computer games.They dont communicate with others. make people feel more lonelyAs a member of the society ,we should create a harmonious relationship with others.If so,well be much happier.its good for our he

16、alth.Describe the picture The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The

17、 other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?”Enjoy this excellent ending! In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. Its time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We sh

18、ould call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the sea of love.” As can be seen from the cartoon, two ladies living in the opposite flat say “hello” when they happen to meet each other. The two women d

19、ont know each other even if they are neighbors. It is the exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in the modern world. As we all know, most people live in apartments. They dont like to go out after work, and they will stay at home waching TV or playing computer games. They dont have any conn

20、ections even with their closest neighbors, who seem no different from people they meet every day in the street. So it is no good to us, nor to our society, it will make people feel more lonely. As far as Im concerned, its high time that we took some measures to improve it. Peoplewho live in the same

21、 zone can often be organized to have some activities together. We should ask people to be friendly to each other. They should smile and greet each other. Then our society will become more harmonious in this way. Lets practise!Describe the picture We can see in the picture that a child is burdened wi

22、th heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.Enjoy this excellent ending!From my point of view, reducing the childrens heavy

23、burden requires efforts from the schools, the society as well as the parents. Education that breaks the rules of childrens development in body and mind is bound to fail. Thus, parents together with teachers should become active supporters of all-around character education and work closely with each

24、other in guiding the students towards a balanced development. 下图描述的是全球环境问题。请仔细观察这幅漫画，用英语写一篇短文，阐明漫画中所反映的问题，并提出解决此问题的方法(至少三点)。注意： 1.仔细品味图中文字的韵味，可以适当发挥想象，不要做简单描述;2.词数150个左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数;3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。Lets practise! From the picture, we can see that pollution is posing a threat to our earth, wh

25、ich comes in many ways. Millions of chimneys of the factories are pouring heavy smoke into air, which causes serious air pollution. A large amount of waste water from the factories pollutes water, making our rivers fishless and our water unfit to drink and swim in. Furthermore, a lot of trees have b

26、een cut down without proper plans, which contributes to the soil being washed away. It seems that we really have no clean place to live. The pollution is so serious that we have to find effective solutions to it. As far as I am concerned, the government should pass laws to reduce polluted air. Some

27、measures should be taken to purify the water before it is poured into the rivers or the seas. We should plant more trees to keep the soil in place. Whats more, people should be further educated to realize the importance of environmental protection. Thus, we will have a clean and tidy environment.学生的

28、任务不仅仅是在学习上取得满分，请根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。要求：词数150左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：心理素质 psychological quality 品德 moralityLets practise! As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a student is trying his best to reach the full score of important subjects including English, maths, physics, and Chinese while

29、 neglecting the more important aspects such as psychological quality and moral standards. This drawing mirrors a common social phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact thought-provoking. To begin with, academic achievements are not all that a student needs. In order to survive

30、 in our society, students must be first of all trained to possess fine psychological quality. Otherwise, we can not bravely face ups and downs in our life, work, and study. Whats more, high moral standardsare also a must for every student. Without high moral standards, students will lose the orienta

31、tion of learning. Most often, even though a student possesses profound academic knowledge, he can not find himself a right place in our society and make contribution to his motherland due to his low moral standards. Counter-measures must be taken immediately so as to rectify the trend of overemphasi

32、zing main academic subjects and neglecting psychologicalquality and moral standards. First of all, we must take a right attitude toward students development.Whats more, our government must intervene in students education to ensure a right and healthy environment of development.先请观察下列一幅漫画，然后用英语描述其内容并

33、抒发自己的感受。参考词汇：鸡毛掸 feather duster Lets practise! From the picture, we can see an angry father is scolding his little son. Holding a drawing of feather duster, he said, “Only this is your motto.” There are endless papers for him to finish. How poor he is! Parents do play a very important role in teachi

34、ng children. However, many parents expect too much of their children nowadays. They hope their children study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal or a key university. Its for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they dont realize what they do has become a heavy burd

35、en or a great pressure for their children. So I hope parents provide a proper environment, respect and understand their children .Children should plan their own life. Only in this way will they try their best and succeed at last!Lets practise!目前，有些家长为了能让孩子早日成才，不顾孩子的喜好，往往把自己的兴趣强加给孩子，强迫孩子去学这个、学那个，结果事与

36、愿违。观察下面图片，结合你身边的事例，以“Dream and reality”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你对培养孩子成才的看法。 Dream and reality Nowadays, there is an increasing tendency for parents to design the future for their children. Regardless of the childrens interest, some parents want them to attend all kinds of other classes, laying a heavy burden on t

37、heir shoulders. As a result, the children almost have no time to play. A typical case is my neighbor Mr. and Mrs.Wang. They want their child to be an artist. They choose a music class on Saturday and a painting on Sunday for the child. In fact, the child has no interest at all. The child is kept busy all day. After a few years their efforts are in vain. I think parents shoul