2021届高考英语题型解题技巧(江苏专用)专题9.读后续写解题技法(全解全析)

1、读后续写解技法一题解及力求读后续写的命题形式为：提供一段 词左右的与语言材料，据该材料内容、所给两段段落开头语进行续 写（150 词右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节合理、完整短文。二评标先根据整体情况对文章进行定档，然后依据该档的相应要求来确定或调节档次，最后打分。打主要从续 写内容、词汇语法、篇章结构三方面考虑。创造情的质量、续写的完整性及与原文情境的融洽度。词汇、法的准确性、恰当性及多样性。上下文衔接和全文的连贯性。三25 分（秀 创了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高； 使了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解；

2、 自有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。四读续基流读原文阅+息梳理，读情节读语+读线索后续 潜心构+情节预设+确方向关注两”-情节线&感线关注四”-四处衔接写初稿勾+色提升正规誊写五续得技：）内容上鼓励大胆想象，有创新意识（不离奇，重逻辑），情节丰富，尽可能合理开，并注意前后文呼 应，与原文融洽度高。）写作尽可能传递正能要提炼有思想性、体现价值观和传递正能量的元素（例如珍爱生命，学会合作， 学会感恩等）记叙文语言表达流畅，避免低级语法错误，注意连接词的正确使用，使上下文连；注意句子结构的多 样性和语言的丰富性。）检查，誊写检查文章的连贯性、逻辑性，规范性。最后

3、誊写要做字迹工整，清晰美观。六写微能一微能（示到怕 frightened例：看那凶的时我到害。、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。）【答案】1.At the sight of ferocious wolf, I ）At the ferocious wolf, I that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. ( 嗓发 紧，膝盖发软）At ferocious wolf, I froze too scared an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动) sight feroci

4、ous wolf, I was by sense and my were sweating. 被深深 地恐惧感所控制，手心出)二微能（示到奋 例：主人布获时她奋了、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。）【答案】1.When the host that the prize, she thrilled. When the host that the prize, her eyes twinkled with 激动得两眼放光） When the host she won the prize, heart thumping e

5、xcitement. 激动得心砰砰跳 When the host she won the prize, wide her. 奋不能自)三微能（示到伤 sad）例：听那坏息她伤已、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。）【答案】 hearing bad news, she felt sad. ）Upon the her tears her 心，眼泪直流)）Upon the she, with had speaking. 悲到失去知觉，不能开口说Upon bad news, seized by a of couldnt 感控

6、制，忍不住哭泣四微能（示到心 happy）例：妈亲他， 开心了、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。 、你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。）【答案】1.When mother kissed on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.2.1) When his kissed on the it as if the baby top of 非常开心) When the kissed the baby cheek, and his lit up ( 眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房) When the ki

7、ssed the baby cheek, eyes danced with joy and 欢雀跃)五微能（示到愧 例：感非羞。、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。）【答案】Key felt Key felt so that could 脸滚) that could blood rush her 血涌上脸) did that was to tears. 快了)六微能（示到气 angry）例： 感非生。、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。）【

8、答案】Key felt very angry.Key Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the him. 冲房间 摔门) Boiling with Sheldon his 怒火中烧；挥舞拳头 Filled with fury, Sheldon unable to a single 充愤怒；说不出话)七微能（示到望 hopeless）例：Tony 感到绝。、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。）【答案】Key Tony Key As result Tony into

9、 a of darkness and sank into hopelessness. ( 被 投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望) felt left and was desperate with loneliness. 感被遗忘、忽) Tonys looking forward and seeing positive everything deserted him.八微能（示走 walk）、踉踉跄跄、悄悄地走、猛冲【答案】 player lost his balance, staggered back toppled 这运动员失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了。 She of bed and tiptoed w

10、indow. 她下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户。 minion for door and escaped from the scene. 小人向门冲去，逃离了现场。九微能（话式 talk）、说长道短；八卦、小声咕哝、嚎叫【答案】 whole company for his 整公都在谈论他被免职的原因。 murmured against strict rules of show. 他下低声抱怨真人秀的严苛规则。 so unfairly, she howled in and 被此不公正地对待，她苦而又愤怒的嚎叫。十微能之考 think 得问题所在之后，他的大脑开始急速运转，想要想出一个好的解决方案。 独一

11、人时，他总是会想到那可怕的经历。 在洗澡时，突然想到了一个好主意。【答案】 After he knew the was, his began to race, trying of a solution. 脑飞速运) left always haunted by horrible 不的回忆萦心头挥之不) was a shower, a idea his 突然闪过某人的脑十：技之静和场（ scene） 享受阳光 山间有小屋和田地 入时分，芦苇随风飘扬【答案】 I bathed in it felt like amber-like kissing inch of ( 沐 在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着

12、全身的肌) Mist-covered were with small and villages. 点缀着) sound of my footsteps accompanied only by the (优地随风飘扬的芦) 十：技之雨加天（ ） 乌云密布 劲风恶浪肆虐 暴雨疾风【答案】 sky darkened with 乌密布；黑云压) dark stormy night, were crashing and the winds howling. ( 海肆意拍打；劲风咆 哮) rain came pouring down, the streams rose, blew beat against

13、 风骤雨随练一读后续写 阅下面短文，根据给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 two in the They always played went home One day， and Henry were going from school, when, turning a corner, Robert cried out, fight! Le see!“No, said Henry. “Let us go quietly home and with(插手) quarre1. have nothing to dowith and may into trouble. Also our par

14、ents are expecting have dinner with together dont worry out me.“You are a coward, and afraid to go, said Robert，and off ha Henry straight home, as Robert told all boys that Henry was coward, and laughed at him a great they looked down upon Henry didn to play with together.Henry sad but he wasn angry

15、 Robert for his behavior, because learned that true courage most bearing it deserved, and he ought be afraid of butdoing wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys laughter and continued to go to school and study as well.However, Robert didn invite Henry to go with him anymore. Instead, he some oth

16、er boys also a Every after school， didn go home directly but went to the river somewhere to play games had a lot of A few Robert bathing with his new friends in a river, out of his depth. He struggled, screamed for but all in vain. The had called Henry coward out of water fast as they could, but did

17、 even try him.注意：所续写短文的词数为 左右； 续部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 1：Robert was fast sinking 2：， life was saved 二读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I am Sadie. I love oceans, especially the my grandmas with Why? Thats I am to It all started my divorced weeks I had remained silent then. my to send me to Florida live

18、 with my grandma.On the way to my grandmas house, mother we are not the family you I truly I just know to be But Sadie, whatever I do you. These me sadder. arrived, me to things she WhenI saw a green room with huge window and comfortable I Moving Florida not be I comforted my-self I walked the I ope

19、ned the curtains and waves slowly away the on the beach in clear sky. only few hundred meters here.After mother left, softly touched shoulder, “I want take to place I called the Big Blue I think you might like it. (I guess you could know where it is.) I stepped on I could smell the enjoyed the with

20、a whole lot yellow and orange. she the shell I had seen in my life. It almost shining in the sunlight. couldnt move my eyes off it.注意: 所写短文的同数应为 150 左右; 续部分分为两,每段的开头语已为你; 1: know I parents divorce? 2:Th beautiful shells here gave me the courage to on,” said.三阅读下面材料, 根其内容和所给段落开头语续写两 使构成一篇完整的短文。The Me

21、redith family lived in community. in people the town jobs. of families were struggling to ends People were trying each challenges. most kind She great deal of knew and they all of had time, bring them.One she told her children about family she visited before. a sick in bed,his wife, took him could n

22、ot to work, boy. The little boy was Bernard-had very “I you could him,” she said to her children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He such a help to his mother. He wants very to earn some money, but I dont see what do.”After their mother left the room, the children thinking about Bernard. we could him to ea

23、rn money, said Clara. “His family suffering so much.”“So do I, said Harry. really should do something to assist ”For moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I a great idea! solution can all help 完成.The other children also jumped up attention. When John had an ide

24、a, it was a good “I you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn John sent us? Well, we makepopcorn(爆米花 and it in paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to houses and sell it.注意: 续词数应为 左右: 请如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。【分析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。【详解认真读懂所给提供的材:善良的 Meredith 家住在一个小社区里他们想帮助一个贫

25、困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男 做不了什么事情，生 活十分困难。后来， 的孩子想出了一个主-制作爆米花，让 去爆米花。根据所材料确定文章主: 何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助 Bernard 家摆脱困境的。续写部和前面的文章衔接得上且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致事节的向后延续发展要合 乎情理。根据第段首句 When Meredith of John thought it was 听到 John 的意时她认为这是个好主)可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这提议展开构思据第二段首句 With everything out on 一切准备就绪后Bernard 始了他的新

26、生 意)可以针对 Bernard 如何通过卖爆花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。续写的言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致章时态以一般过时为主使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句结构准确， 适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。 Mrs. Meredith heard thought it a one, too.With everything out on business.模精一 扬州阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It Jan

27、uary I had completed my last radiation treatment. It had been a long eightmonths in total diagnosis of I had looking forward to for a time. My husband who was wearing pink ribbon on his jacket, was waiting for in lobby Sunnybrook hospital in Toronto. a symbol to raise peoples awareness of breast can

28、cer, the pink ribbon had a part our the back on the past what lay for family.We arrived in with our three Tyler, Brady, nine, kids with hugs that I think were a little bit tighter bit than usual.We were rink (溜冰场 that night. My Brady had hockey game if his Tiger won, onto the round. a typical Canadi

29、an hockey mom, I had always loved going tothe rink to watch my kids But since my rink had to mean even more me: it my time in painful months. rink, with warm hellos. You could tell it a big game there a Tiger gathering in lobby outside dressing minutes time, s coach out to the and invited the parent

30、s to come into the dressing 注意： 续词数应为 左右； 请如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I stepped inside, I was by how quiet and how it was. 2:I sensed determination. 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者患有乳腺癌，在八个月 治疗过程中，她与病魔顽强抗争，最终康复。从医院回到家后，三个孩子热情的迎接她并拥抱她，儿子 邀她去看他的冰球比赛，她答应。在 比赛当天，更衣室外面聚集着很多父母，比赛开始前，教练邀请作者及其他父母进入更衣室。【详解】段续写：由第一段首句内容当我走进去的时候我被房间里的

31、安静和粉红色所震撼可第一段可描写接下来 房间里发生的事情，粉红色代表着什么以及儿子对我说的话。由第二段首句内容我感觉到他们的决心可二段可描写孩子们在赛场上的表现以及作看完比赛 后的感悟。续写线：粉红子的孩子们的决心赛场表现赢比赛我的感悟词汇激行为类.坚持做 / insist doing为做准备：be ready for / get for prepare for情绪类.勇敢的 / 感激的 / 二 苏州In a small Italian hundreds business owner owed large money to （放高利贷人. The was very looking guy th

32、at happened fancythe business owners daughter, pretty, lively and intelligent as well. He racked brains and decided tooffer businessman a that completely wipe out debt he owed However, catch that would only out the debt if he could the businessmans daughter.Needless to say, this was with look of dis

33、gust. the businessman his easily fall for it. In order to make them fall into the trap, the said that two （卵石） into a bag, white black. daughter reach bag pick out If it black, the debt would wiped out, but loan-shark would marry her. If it white, the debtwould also be out, the daughter wouldn to ma

34、rry the -shark. a （满鹅卵石） path in the businessmans garden, bent and up While was picking the daughter noticed that picked up two black pebbles into bag. the into bag and pick which would determine her fate. ：The three what she done. ： slowly drew out a pebble from bag. 【分析】本文以事件发展为线索展开。讲述的是一个放高利贷者企图利

35、用在袋子里放黑色石头的骗局来取一个女 孩嫁给他。但这个女孩非常聪明，识破了放高利贷者的骗局，成功为自己和父亲夺回了自由。【详解】段续写：由第一段内容“女儿本来有三选择可知第一段描写她的三个选择分别是什么拒绝挑石头，挑选一颗石头，为了父亲的自由牺牲自己；三，拿出两颗石头揭穿骗局。最后她胆战心惊地决要揭穿这 个骗局。由第二段内容“她慢慢地从袋里取出一块鹅卵石”合上一段最后一慢慢地向袋子靠近，她能听到自己的心跳可本段应该描聪明的女孩想办法揭穿放高利贷者的骗局孩把两块鹅卵石都出来了，放高利贷者没想到女孩识破了他的诡计，他当时就像一个被戳破的气球一样倒下了，结果出了相。续写线女的三种选心识破骗局取一颗鹅

36、卵石掉到地上取出第二后放高 利贷者的骗局被识破。词汇激行为类挑选：pick 暴露：expose/ up/reveal看出： perceive/ 情绪类害怕： scared/ afraid羞耻： face三 连云市阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One morning ago, I had been searching for Coho Creek southeasternAlaskas Kuprean of Island, and as I from forest of spruce( 云杉 and I froze in my tracks. than 20 pac

37、es in the 沼) huge Alaskan timber wolf - caught in one of Trapper George traps.Old George a so lucky. and atmy approach, away. I noticed something else: It was a female, and her teats full there was den of pups 小 waiting for mother. her appearance, I that had only a few meant her pups But I if I trie

38、d to release and try pieces. I to search for instead began to look for tracks that lead me to Fortunately, there a remaining of snow. After several moments, I spotted a The tracks led a through the up with rocks. I spotted denat the an normous spruce, There wasn a sound inside. Wolf are cautious, an

39、d didnt have hope of them outside, I try. I imitating the 声音很尖锐) soundof a mother calling young. No response. A I tried another call, tiny pups appeared. couldnt have been more than old.注意: 所写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 续部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 1:I hands. 2:With her young to protect, becoming aggressive.四 泰州阅读下面材料，

40、根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The first eyes on the s Red.”father, mother and I were walking slowly through the fallen snow Hardware store on Main Street.The colorfully window held the best and other And hey all ntly beneath the breathtaking dress of Big eyes were glued to the massive flame of red 绸

41、缎）dotted with twinkling stars.My say in dreamlike you just look at dress!Then,totallyout of character, unexpectedly danced on Beneath heavy,grey every winter for I could remember,mother lost clumsily. Her than usual, mother dad for laughing.Oh,stop that! ordered, my sweptthe snow dress to in the win

42、dow of Eatons! her in on such It too continued to walkdown the mother back for more look.My theyd display that a person could use!” was the dress was soon not one wish for, spend money on,things were are we always say, things we more than the other hand, liked to things budget allowed. Of get a scol

43、ding for his occasional like this,but it was all with the On trip to Christmas,we were driving Main Street mother suddenly insurprise, “Would you just look at that!She excitedly Dad Eatons.That big dress gone,” she in disbelief. “Its actually gone.注意：续写词应为 左右；请在答卡的相应位置作答。Dad looked quickly and smile

44、d,Yes,it not there!Ill forget that morning when mother box.读后续写解技法答全全随练一【参考范文】 fast sinking. It if be Henry happened be Hearing the to riverside, threw clothes and jumped water without He reached Robert was time. By great effort, with to himself, he brought Robert Thus, Robert life was saved. Robert

45、 and his new friends were ashamed having called a coward. realized had true courage. They said sorry Henry for their rude and for forgiveness. Henry forgave and Robert were again and they went together usual. Robert learned what courage was: be afraid do good, do evil.二【参考范文】 1: to get through paren

46、ts divorce? asked. smiled me and continued, In I felt very sorrowful because neither of parents cared about me, which made want finally, I didnt like In to time, I always went the beach called the Big ). Much to my surprise, I found that there were beautiful shells on the beach 2: beautiful me the c

47、ourage to live Honey, you happy. Althoughyour parents divorced, both rang me morning, that love I you here. Also I hope can inspiration and this I up blue sky and vast I felt a little relaxed and natural, and held firm I must like shell, full 三【参考范文】When Mrs. Meredith heard of John idea, she thought

48、 was good one, too. So, they to the local together. bag of and some bags for home, made lot of popcorn and it in the special bags. With popcorn, they to Bernards home. They told sell and parents were grateful. And the family felt very to help this family.With everything Bernard out on his houses and

49、sold all his lot of Then, self-dependent. Mrs.Meredith teach make After that, only did sell also cream and to popcorn make it taste grew up to remarkable man. He did not help Merediths family, also did what could to help those need.模精一 扬州【参考范文】 I I how quiet it There in of me seventeen players in pi

50、nk, breast symbols were painted looked like brave faithful, who for a serious battle. Then son Brady me, saying, are so grateful that you shown us through your fight it Tiger. Tonight, we going to win the game for you. Inspired Brady said, the players cheered, “It time Tigers!” (92 words) I sensed d

51、etermination. They field confidently. the whole game, each and boy performed wonderfully, skating swiftly skillfully. They been behind by several po ints, they didnt lose heart. Instead, they fighting together. I supposethey knew I was for them all the And I should also them how grateful I was were for me. Of course, Tiger the game And I mine, (91 二 苏州【参考范文】The three what she done. She every right to refuse picka pebble from the bag, quite understandable. Meanwhile, fully black, she alsopick sacrifice for her fathers freedom. Still there was another risky but possible choice taki