2016年出国外语培训

1、Initial feedback following assessment taskLesson 821 April 2016Initial feedbackAssessment task instructions must be followed exactly.Use instructions as a checklist before you submit your assessment item.WRITING CLASS ASSESSMENT TASK DETAILS*DEADLINE 2PM THURSDAY 21 APRIL 2016*This task is the first

2、 of two assessment items that will be set for the writing class. By assessment, I mean my assessment of your performance in class. This task comprises 30% of the total mark. The second assessment item, which will be an essay that is set later, will comprise the remaining 70% of the total mark.For th

3、is task, please write a paragraph introducing the findings of key research in your field that has been published in a peer-reviewed academic journal within the last three years.You will be assessed on (a) correct paragraph structure, covering all aspects of paragraphs as taught in class, and (b) cor

4、rect referencing using either Harvard or APA.Write your paragraph as a Microsoft Word document. Put your name in Pinyin and student number at the top of the page.You must email your Microsoft Word document to me by 2pm Thursday 21 April 2016. Title your email Writing class assessment item 1, and kee

5、p a copy of your email as proof of sending. My email address is Late submissions will be penalised at the rate of 2% per day until the task is submitted. Extensions can only be considered in serious extenuating circumstances, for example hospitalisation or bereavement.Initial feedbackSome people sub

6、mitted an essay rather than a paragraph.Some people have not used the required APA or Harvard referencing.Some people missed other details, for example they did not include their name and student number at the top of the paragraph.ReferencingReferencingBecause you will be going to a western country,

7、 Im giving you western-style education and instructions.For example, Ive given you referencing guides rather than specific instructions in regard to referencing.ReferencingIt is the responsibility of the student to read and understand information in student guides.Guides such as the APA and Harvard referencing guides I have provided have been carefully prepared so that they can be easily understood and used.Because of this, if a stud