2021中考英语预测作文-经历与感受话题

1、2021中考英语预测作文-经历与感受话题2021中考英语预测作文-经历与感受话题命题探索 分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“经历及感受”这一话题，2020年以看图写作的形式描述了“李硕的妈妈在疫情期间去武汉抗疫的事情”；2011年以“介绍他人的经历以及对自己的影响”这一角度考查了“介绍李宝元的故事以及从故事中学到了什么”。 分析全国近年真题可知，全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度有：自己的亲身经历及感受等。命题探索 分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针教材链接人教教材中涉及“经历与感受”这个话题的单元具体如下（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：写作角度年级、单元（Unit）话题（

2、Topic）经历七(下)Unit 6 Im watching TV.Everyday activities七(下)Unit 11 How was your school trip？School trips 七(下)Unit 12 What did you do last weekend？Weekend activities八(上)Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation？Holidays and vacations 教材链接人教教材中涉及“经历与感受”这个话题的单元具体如下写作角度年级、单元（Unit）话题（Topic） 经历八(下)Unit 5 What wer

3、e you doing when the rainstorm came？Unforgettable events 八(下)Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet？Literature and music八(下)Unit 9 Have you ever been to the museum？Fun places九(全)Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.Unexpected events写作角度年级、单元（Unit）话题（Topic） 经历八(下写作角度年级、单元（Unit）话题（Topic） 感受七(下)Uni

4、t 11 How was your school trip？Feelings of the school trip 八(上)Unit 10 If you go to the party, youll have a great time！Decision making九(全)Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.Feelings写作角度年级、单元（Unit）话题（Topic） 感受七(下佳句储备1角度介绍经历【好句范例】1. It was really a hard job, but I kept telling myself to stick to the end.2.

5、 The next day, Peter went to soccer practice with courage rather than fear in his heart. 人教 九(全)Unit 11 P86佳句储备1角度介绍经历【好句范例】3. Attracted by the beautiful scenery, I quickly climbed up the mountain to enjoy the natural view.4. Whenever I was in trouble, they would give me a hand as soon as possible.

6、2019北京书面表达5. Hearing the news that I was asked to give a speech on behalf of our class, I felt very nervous because I was afraid that I might not do it well.3. Attracted by the beautiful【句子仿写】1. 这确实是很艰难的时刻，但是我一直告诉自己世上无难事，只 怕有心人。_2. 第二天，我充满信心而不是充满抱怨地去面对困难。 _It was really a hard time, but I kept telli

7、ng myself that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it.The next day, I faced the difficulties with confidence rather than complaint.【句子仿写】It was really a hard tim3. 被她甜美的声音所吸引，我不由自主地跟着她唱起歌来。_4. 无论什么时候我需要她的帮助，她都会尽可能快地来到我的身 边。 _Attracted by her sweet voice, I couldnt help singing along with he

8、r.Whenever I need her help, she will come to me as soon as possible.3. 被她甜美的声音所吸引，我不由自主地跟着她唱起歌来。At2角度介绍感受【好句范例】6. How excited I was!7. That day we were tired but happy. 8. In a word, it was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us. 2018长沙书面表达2角度介绍感受【好句范例】9. Through this experience, I deepl

9、y understand the power of knowledge and technology. 2019淄博书面表达10. I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the animals get better and the look of joy on their owners faces. 人教 八 (下)Unit 2 P1111. After seeing all the things the girl did, I recalled this proverb “helping others is to hel

10、p ourselves”9. Through this experience, I 【句子仿写】5. 多么有趣的一天啊！_6. 学英语很难但是很有用。 _7.总之，对我们来说，这真的是既有趣又甜蜜的一天。_What an interesting day it was！/How interesting the day was!Learning English is difficult but useful.In a word, it was really a funny and sweet day for us. 【句子仿写】What an interesting day 8. 通过这次经历，我

11、深刻地理解了友谊的重要性。 _9. 当我看完这部介绍我家乡的电影后，我有一种强烈的自豪感。 _Through this experience, I deeply understand the importance of friendship.I got such a strong feeling of pride after I saw the film about the introduction of my hometown.8. 通过这次经历，我深刻地理解了友谊的重要性。 Throu3角度他人经历对自己的影响【句子升格范例】12. His story taught me a lot. I

12、 should never give up my dream and work hard to make it come true.(用teach sb. not to do sth. 升格) His story taught me not to give up my dream and work hard to make it come true.3角度他人经历对自己的影响【句子升格范例】13. Being an independent child is very important in our daily life. I have learned this point.(用I have

13、learned that升格) I have learned that being an independent child is very important in our daily life. 2018台州书面表达14. His experience of helping others was so moving. It benefited me a lot. (用so.that.句型升格) His experience of helping others was so moving that it benefited me a lot.13. Being an independent

14、child15. We all act like the young woman and think more of others. I think our world will be a much more beautiful place. (用if引导的条件状语从句升格) If we all act like the young woman and think more of others, I think our world will be a much more beautiful place.2019天津书面表达15. We all act like the young 【句子升格】

15、10. His story taught me a lot. I should never lose heart in dealing with difficulties. (用teach sb. not to do sth.升格)_11. I have learned something. Healthy lifestyles can help us get good grades and live happily. (用I have learned that升格) _His story taught me not to lose heart in dealing with difficul

16、ties.I have learned that healthy lifestyles can help us get good grades and live happily.【句子升格】His story taught me not 12. My friend was brave to accept the challenge. He had a great influence on me. (用so.that.句型升格)_13. The drivers want to be safe on the road. They have to follow the traffic rules s

17、trictly. (用if引导的条件状语从句升格) _My friend was so brave to accept the challenge that he had a great influence on me.If the drivers want to be safe on the road, they have to follow the traffic rules strictly.12. My friend was brave to acc三阶攻关一阶 审好题 定方向五定审题：分析河北近10年中考真题书面表达可知，河北书面表达可从以下几方面审题：定主题：根据题干或者标题来确定

18、该作文的主题；定文体：根据题干中“写一篇短文/演讲稿/发言稿/邮件/一封信”再结合主题来确定该作文的文体；定要点：根据所给提示或表格内容定该作文的要点；定人称：根据所给的每个提示以及标题定该作文相应要点所使用的人称；三阶攻关一阶 审好题 定方向五定审题：分析河北近10年中考(2020河北)李硕今年五岁，他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武汉。请根据下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。定人称：第三人称 定时态：一般过去时定主题：描述疫情期间妈妈支援武汉的相关事情定文体：看图叙事应为记叙文定时态：根据所给的每个提示定该作文相应要点所使用的时态。(2020河北)李硕今年五岁，他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武定人定要点1：

19、在机场送别妈妈的描述定要点2：在电视上看见妈妈的描述定要点1：在机场送别妈妈的描述定要点2：在电视上看见妈妈的描定要点3：当妈妈完成任务回到家乡时的描述定要点4：妈妈回到家的描述定要点3：当妈妈完成任务回到家乡时的描述定要点4：妈妈回到家注意： (1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥， 提示词语供参考； (2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3)词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。注意： (1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥， Li Shuo is a fiveyearold boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was go

20、ing to Wuhan to help the patients there._ Li Shuo is a fiveyear开篇：引出话题(已给出)正文：介绍事情的经过(结合已给出的图片)介绍事情的起因 ( help the patients)One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going to Wuhan to help the patients there.1. 机场送妈妈(say goodbye）Li Shuo and his father said goodbye to his mother at the airport.Li Shuo, tog

21、ether with his father, said goodbye to his mother at the airport.我来写：_ _二阶 谋布局 写好句列框架列要点要点扩句(注意时态)句子提升开篇：引出话题(已给出)正文：介绍事情的经过(结合已给出的图列框架列要点要点扩句(注意时态)句子提升正文：介绍事情的经过(结合已给出的图片)2. 亲吻电视上的妈妈 (kiss)Li Shuo saw his mother on TV. He ran over and kissed her.When Li Shuo saw his mother on TV, he ran over at onc

22、e and kissed her deeply.我来写：_ _3.妈妈受到了热烈欢迎（warm welcome）His mother came back and received a warm welcome.His mother came back and received a warm welcome as a hero. 我来写：_ 列框架列要点要点扩句(注意时态)句子提升正文：介绍事情的经过正文：介绍事情的经过(结合已给出的图片)4. 给了妈妈一个大大的拥抱(hug)Li Shuo and his father gave her a big hug.Both Li Shuo and h

23、is father gave her a big hug.我来写：_ 表达感受（happy）They were happy to be together again.How happy they were to be together again!我来写：_ 结尾：一家人团聚后的感受列框架列要点要点扩句(注意时态)句子提升正文：介绍事情的经过(结合已给出的图片)4. 给了妈妈一个大三阶 巧衔接 成篇章【高分范文】 三阶 巧衔接 成篇章【高分范文】 写作练兵(2020泰州改编)假如你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了，你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语给Mike写一篇留言。提

24、示： (1)Tell an unforgettable experience between Mike and you. (2)Talk about your feelings. (3)Your advice on Mikes future study or life.写作练兵(2020泰州改编)假如你是李华，三年的初中生活就要求： (1)留言须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥。 (2)留言中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 (3)词数80个左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)要求： (1)留言须包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥。Dear Mike，How time flies! Its time to say go