新高考版英语高中总复习专题九《应用文写作（试题练）》教与学

1、高考英语总复习PAGE PAGE 42学好一门外语很重要。专题九应用文写作【考情探究】卷别形式体裁写作内容词数分值难度2019课标提纲书信写信申请当中国画展志愿者100词左右25中课标提纲邮件写邮件告知队友比赛信息中2018课标提纲邮件给Terry写邮件介绍到中国做客习俗中课标提纲通知为校宣传栏写一则观看英语短片的通知难2017课标提纲邮件给英国朋友写邮件告知上课计划中课标提纲邮件给外教写邮件邀请他参加中国剪纸艺术展中2016课标提纲书信请外教修改所附材料的文字和格式难课标提纲书信请英国朋友为摄影展提供作品中2015课标提纲书信介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活中课标提纲邮件邀请外教去敬老院陪老人们

2、过重阳节中2019.6浙江提纲书信临别之前向帮助过自己学英语的外国朋友表示感谢,并表达祝愿80词左右15难2018.11提纲邮件请航空公司帮助寻找丢失的钱包中2018.6提纲书信应聘英语协会志愿者中2017.11提纲书信邀请外教到家里一起过春节中2017.6提纲邮件邀请英国朋友Chris登山郊游中2016.10提纲书信告诉加拿大朋友Lynn自己的情况和到达时间并询问所应做的准备中分析解读1.主题语境近五年高考书面表达主要考查课程标准中人与自我和人与社会这两大主题语境,内容主要涉及生活与学习、社会服务与人际沟通。2.设题题点高考应用文写作要求考生按照所给的情景材料组织内容。文章既限定了词数,又要

3、包含所有要点。它不同于翻译,不能简单地将所有的要点逐一翻译成英语,而是一种指导性写作(guided writing)。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等。3.考查能力要求考生用学过的英语语言知识和所掌握的写作技能,准确使用语法和词汇知识以及恰当的句型来清楚、连贯地表达所给的要点,突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。4.命题趋势题目中给出的具体的信息逐年减少,只是给出写作的大致框架和要求,考生要在所给信息的基础上适当发挥,对考生的思维品质和写作能力提出了较高的要求。【真题探秘】真题再现假定你是李华,乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括:1.

4、行程信息;2.钱包特征;3.联系方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。写作点拨本文是一封求助邮件。写作时要注意求助的重点突出,问题的说明要简洁清楚。题目明确列出的要点有三条,但是一定要注意题目中所含有的航班信息。注意句子之间的顺畅连接和连接词的使用。写作用词上要注意表现出礼貌和感谢。参考范文范文鉴赏Dear Madam/Sir,I am writing to report the loss of my wallet.I flew business class on your FL753 from China to London on November 1st, 20

5、18. But it was really a pity that on my arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found my wallet gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one and in it are my ID card, 2 credit cards as well as some money.Besides the items mentioned above, there is al

6、so a family photo, which means a lot to me.If anybody happens to find it, would you be kind enough to tell me at xxx?Thank you very much.Yours sincerely,Li Hua1.写作重点突出。范文开门见山,先明确邮件的目的。2.结构安排合理。文章第一段指出邮件的目的。第二段简洁而清楚地讲述事情的原委。不仅在很短段落内交代清楚了航班信息,而且对钱包特征给予了明确的描述。第三段则提供了联系方式。邮件的信息完整。3.用语礼貌,符合求助信的特点。【五年高考】W

7、riting 1(2019浙江6月)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是应用文,题材是感谢信,主要内容是对曾经帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex表示感谢。因此文章内容要诚恳,表达真情实感。2.文章的时态比较复杂。表示感谢可以用一般现在时;回顾过去的事情可以用一般过去时;祝愿部分可以用一般将来时。3.文章可以分为三段:第一段表示感谢,第二段回顾帮助,第三段写祝愿。One possible version:Dea

8、r Alex,Its really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country. On the occasion of parting, I would like to express my deep gratitude to you. Thank you very much for your help with my English study over the months.For various reasons, my English was not very good.But your timely help ma

9、de a difference. With your patient and effective help, my English has improved a lot.Whats more, thanks to your help, I now have confidence in my English study and have effective learning strategies.Parting is inevitable, but I believe our friendship will last forever. Wish you all the best and a go

10、od journey back home.Yours, Li HuaWriting 2(2018浙江6月)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1.口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是一封求职信,以第一人称为主,时态主要用一般现在时。2.内容要点:(1)口语能力; (2)相关经验;(3)此次应聘的目的。One possible version:Dear Sir/Madam,On seeing your notice on the bulletin board, I

11、feel excited to write this letter for the position.As a graduate majoring in the English language, I can talk in English fluently. To be honest, I have just won first prize in the Spoken English Competition, so there is no doubt that there is not any problem for me to communicate with foreigners. Wh

12、ats more, I have ever served as a receptionist in our schools 70th anniversary celebration, making myself more confident.In order to practise my speaking skills and get more experience, Im eager to be taken on for this job.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua Writing 3(2017浙江11

13、月)假定你是李华,得知外教Mr. Hall寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:1.时间;2.一同过节的家人;3.活动。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.题目要求有三个要点,但是,要注意其在叙述部分“暗含”的要点:外教寒假不回国;邀请他到家过春节。2.本文属于邀请信,因此时态要用现在时或将来时。3.要注意语言的礼貌、客气,并且尊重对方的文化习俗。One possible version:Dear Mr. Hall,Knowing that you will not go home in the winter holiday, Id

14、 like to invite you to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival, which falls on January 19. Its traditionally a time for family reunion, so all my family will be there. We will have a big Chinese-style dinner first, followed by chatting and some interesting games. At 8 in the evening we can watch th

15、e Spring Festival Gala on TV together. All my family will be happy if you can come.Yours,Li HuaWriting 4(2017浙江6月)假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.参加者;2.时间、地点;3.活动:登山、野餐等。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是一封邀请英国朋友参加郊游的邮件,因此,时态要用一般现在时和一般将来时。2.注意本文的要点:时间、地点、参加者和活动,不可以遗漏要点。在表述的时候不可逐

16、字翻译,可以将一些信息包含在从句、分词结构中。3.注意句子之间的顺畅连接以及高级句式的使用。One possible version:Dear Chris,How is everything going these days? I am writing to invite you to join my class in an outing organized by me this Saturday, June 10th. We will start at 6 oclock early in the morning from the school gate, and then take a bu

17、s to Yinling Mountain, where we will climb the mountain in the morning and then have a picnic at noon. If you could come, there is no need for you to take food but youd better wear sports shoes and suitable clothes. We will be really glad if you can come. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua

18、Writing 5(2016浙江10月)假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括:1.介绍自己;2.告知到达时间;3.询问应做何准备。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示这是一篇非常符合考试说明要求的应用文写作题目。文章是以邮件为载体交流信息。解题时注意以下几点:(1)因为本文涉及的都是现在和将来的信息,因此时态要用现在时和将来时。(2)文章必须包括三个要点:自我介绍、到达时间和咨询如何准备。(3)要注意三个信息之间的顺畅连接,同时要注意使用较好的句子结构,

19、如从句、非谓语动词等。(4)注意句子一定要高级且精炼,字数不要太少或太多,一般以70至90字为宜。(5)浙江新高考的应用文和以往的题目以及目前其他省份的应用文有一定的不同之处,要特别留意。除了字数不同,在格式上也稍有不同。其他省份的应用文会在原题中提供了应用文的格式,但是浙江新题型中没有提供格式,因此要特别注意这一点。在写作时要使用正确的应用文格式。One possible version:Dear Lynn,Im Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Im happy to know that Ill be staying with your fam

20、ily in the next few months while Im studying at the local high school. Thank you for having me! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.Looking forward

21、to seeing you!Best wishes,Li Hua Writing 6(2019课标全国)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是应用文。主要内容是告知队友比赛信息。2.文章的主体时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主。3.文章可以分为三段。第一段是比赛信息;第二段是赛前准备;第三段表达期待。One possible version:Dear Chris,I am very pleased to i

22、nform you that we will have a friendly match with the volleyball team of Guangming Middle School next Monday. It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch. In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we need to have enough tra

23、ining. So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6 pm. I would appreciate it much if you could participate in it on time.This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of friendship first. Of course, we are looking forward to winni

24、ng the game. I am sure we can realize it with our effort together. Yours,Li HuaWriting 7(2019课标全国)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是应用文中的邀请信,邀请你的英国朋友Allen来参加学校举办的音乐节。主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.写作要点:(1)活动时间;(2)活动安排;(3)欢迎 Allen参加音乐节并表演节目。

25、3.分段内容:第一段介绍写作背景,发出邀请。第二段介绍学校音乐节的时间、安排和相关细节,并适当拓展。第三段欢迎Allen参加音乐节并表演节目。One possible version:Dear Allen, Long time no see! I am glad to invite you to a music festival, which will take place in our schoolyard. It is well-known that more attention has been paid to the inquiry of traditional culture in

26、high schools lately. Accordingly, a music festival will be scheduled, which will motivate more adolescents to gain all-around development. Furthermore, it is suggested that the participants be seated in the playground at 8 a.m. next Saturday, when the opening ceremony will be conducted. What a thril

27、ling opportunity! Is it a good idea for you to register to show your talent? Waiting for your early reply.Yours,Li HuaWriting 8(2018课标全国)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为一般现在时。2.文章要点:到达时间;合适的礼

28、物;餐桌礼仪。One possible version:Dear Terry,I am delighted when receiving your letter, asking what customs you should pay attention to when visiting a friend. Here are my tips for you. First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is

29、of great significance to show your politeness. Additionally, to be respectful, you might as well bring an appropriate gift, like some fruits. Most importantly, its vital that you should mind your table manners. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to your own

30、custom.In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China. I do hope you will have great fun at your friends home.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting 9(2018课标全国)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书面通知。可

31、采用三段三步写作法写作。第一步审题立意,布局谋篇“启”:审题确定主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题:在学校宣传栏“英语天地”发布邀请大家观看短片的书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态:以第一、二人称为主要人称,以一般现在时或一般将来时为主体时态。第二步确定、提炼和理顺要点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡巧“承”妙“转”,即注意段落之间、句子之间的衔接与过渡。结合要点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容学校的发展;第二段:说明放映的时间和地点;第三段:表达愿望希望大家对短片提意见。第三步紧扣主题,遣词造句“合”:照应开头和主题的完美的结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧扣主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误

32、,避免重复;遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句式的使用。One possible version:NoticeDear schoolmates,It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that well invite you to see an English short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school.We have arranged that the short film will be o

33、n show from 16:00 to 17:00 at our school theater tomorrow. Dont miss the chance of taking part in this collective activity.I do hope you can give us some valuable suggestions about the short film. Please give your feedback in time and contact us at your convenience.Students UnionWriting 10(2018课标全国)

34、假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为书信形式的说明文;以第一人称的口吻介绍学校的体育场馆和主要的运动项目;时态以一般现在时为主。2.可采用三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目的;第二段:具体介绍试题给出的三个要点,其中第二个要点可采取列举的方式,第三个要点除了写自己喜欢的体育运动,还要阐述喜欢这项体育运动的原因;第三段:总结并发出邀请。One possible version:Dear Peter,

35、I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the

36、stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong and football, as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely inv

37、ite you to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours,Li HuaWriting 11(2017课标全国)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容:学习唐诗;3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为电子邮件,属于书信类。人称为第一人称,写作时态以一般将来时为主体时态。2.内容要点:上课的时间和地点; 上课的内容:学习唐诗;课前要求:简要了解唐朝的历史。One possible v

38、ersion:Dear Leslie,I am writing to inform you of our course schedule of our next class, which is about poetry of the Tang Dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building 6. In order to learn it better, you need to do the following things before the next class.At first, please read s

39、ome materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely significant role in our literature. You can find some original poems of famous poets, such as Li Bai and Du Fu. Besides, knowing the history of the Tang Dynasty will be of great benefit for you to understand the background of t

40、he poems.You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our next class and your reply.Yours,Li HuaWriting 12(2017课标全国)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将

41、来时为主体时态。2.文章要点:1)展览时间、地点;2)展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。One possible version:Dear Henry,Im Li Hua, one of your students. Im writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and Im sure you will like it.The exhibition will be held in the local museum next

42、 Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists will perform on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. Im sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.Im

43、 looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li HuaWriting 13(2017课标全国)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主。2.写作要点:导入话题:鉴于Eric对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队员的消息;介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;告知Eric报名方式,提

44、醒他务必在截止日期前完成报名。One possible version:Dear Eric,Im writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. I have been told that our school team is recruiting new members. Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis, I wonder if youd like to join.Team members need to receive training after s

45、chool every day and are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions, which benefit me most. What do you think of it? If you are interested in it, you can visit the school website to sign up. The closing date is 15th June.I hope to meet you in the school team.Yours,Li HuaWriting 14

46、(2016课标全国)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为半开放式作文,体裁为书信。人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时。2.文章要点包括告诉对方你的情况(想去一家外资公司兼职)和要求(帮助修改申请书和个人简历)。One possible version:Dear Ms Jenkins,Im one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two. Im w

47、riting to ask for your help.This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends. My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them. First

48、ly, Im wondering if you can help add some contents. Besides, if there are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help correct them. Lastly, I attach some materials whose format had better be changed and hope you can help.I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.Looking

49、 forward to your early reply.Yours truly,Li HuaWriting 15(2016课标全国)假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:1.主题:环境保护;2.展览时间;3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文属于应用文,按照要求写一封书信,应使用第一人称。基本时态用一般现在时。2.本文要点:1)主题:环境保护;2)展览时间;3)投稿邮箱。One possible

50、version:Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take go

51、od pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow.Hope to

52、hear from you soon.Yours,Li HuaWriting 16(2016课标全国)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时。2.文章要点为告诉对方你不能赴约的原因并表示歉意和另约时间,虽然题干中已经给出要点,但重在适当地发挥。One possible version:Dear Bob,Im sorry to say that I

53、cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books

54、. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua【三年模拟】A组20182020年模拟基础题组Writing 1(2020届山东夏季高考模拟)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友John来信询问中国人过春节的风俗习惯。请你结合自己家乡的实际情况给他回信,内容包括:1.春节的简介;2.过节的

55、风俗习惯;3.邀请他来中国过春节。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行为连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式应用文,要求考生写一封回信。时态以一般现在时为主。2.写作要点:简要介绍春节;介绍过节的风俗习惯;邀请John来中国共度春节。One possible version:Dear John,Im glad to tell you something about Chinese peoples customs for the Spring Festival. It is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chine

56、se nation, which is a happy and peaceful time for the family and friends to get together. To celebrate it, not only will we stick couplets and set off firecrackers, but enjoy a big dinner, watching the Spring Festival Gala together. To the delight of children, they will get luck money in red packets

57、. Everyone will be immersed in a happy atmosphere. Id like to invite you to China for the Spring Festival with us.Yours,Li HuaWriting 2(2020届山东聊城期中)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校英语社团排练的话剧The Million Pound Note在市话剧比赛中获得一等奖。请给已回国的外教Susan写封邮件,内容包括:1.表达感谢;2.回顾Susan的指导;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:rehearse

58、v.排练答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式应用文,要求考生写一封邮件。时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。2.写作要点:表达对Susan的感谢;回顾Susan的指导;表达对Susan的美好祝愿。One possible version:Dear Susan, I am Li Hua, chairman of the student union. I am writing to express our heartfelt thanks to you. The English play The Million Pound Note we rehearsed won first prize in the d

59、rama competition in our city, which is a great honor for our school. Without your generous support and patient guidance, we wouldnt have achieved such great success. I still remember the days when you spent countless hours perfecting our pronunciation and analyzing the characters in the play. Its re

60、ally because of you that we finally achieved success. Thanks again and wish you all the best. Yours,Li Hua Writing 3(2020届山东临沂兰陵东苑高级中学月考一)假定你是李华,Wilson High School学生代表团将于5月8号来你校进行文化交流访问活动,请你代表学校用英语给负责人Christina写一封邮件。主要内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.活动内容;3.征求意见。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案写作提示1.本文为提纲式应用文,要求考生写一封邮件