2022年秋新教材高中英语Unit2LookingintotheFutureSectionⅣWriting课件新人教版选择性必修第一册

1、Section Writing读 后 续 写典题示例阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。In August,McLean and Richard travelled to Grand Teton National Park,where Ybarra joined them.Both McLean and Richard were eager to learn experience from Ybarra who had led technically complex climbs everywhere from the Himala

2、yas to the Andes.They spent three days climbing up happily.On the fourth day,they tackled a new difficult route called The Snaz.They started out at dawn,hiking through a valley to reach the base of the cliff.Ybarra climbed first,passing his rope through metal cams(凸轮) that he jammed into the narrow

3、space in the rock;such devices are meant to prevent climbers from falling too far if they slipped.When he finished a height,Richard and McLean followed,using the safety tool he had left behind.The day was fine,and at first the going was smooth.But as the hours wore on,the groups mood shifted from en

4、thusiastic to nervous.The dark clouds gathered and the storm was coming.“Wed better hurry,” Ybarra said.“Lets get this done before it starts pouring on us.”There were two possible routes for the last climb.As was his practice,Ybarra chose the harder one.As Ybarra went up,McLean and Richard could hea

5、r him breathing with effort for the first time all day.“If this is tough for him,were in trouble,” Richard said,exchanging a worried look with McLean.After Ybarra disappeared over the cliff,Richard tried to follow.He made it part of the way,then lost his hold and swung from his rope,about 270 metres

6、 above the valley floor.He and McLean shouted to Ybarra for help,but the wind carried away their voices.McLean pushed himself off the wall and swung next to Richard.“Why dont you try using my rope?” he said to Richard.“When you get to the top,tell Ybarra to help me.”Grabbing his friends lifeline,Ric

7、hard managed to get to the top of the cliff.Ybarra seemed surprised when Richard turned up alone,and he realised all when he informed him of McLeans position.“We need to get him out of there before dark,” he said.When Richard called an emergency rescue,Ybarra set out to find McLean. Soon,a rescue he

8、licopter appeared above their head. 写作指导仔细阅读所给材料可知,故事中的主要人物为Ybarra,McLean和Richard。(1)理解全文,把握主线通读短文,可知本文大意是:Ybarra,McLean和Richard一同去攀岩,McLean和Richard都渴望向经验丰富的Ybarra学习攀岩经验。攀岩过程中,Richard失手没有握住绳索,挂在上面来回晃动。McLean和Richard向Ybarra呼救,却没有被听到。紧要关头,McLean让Richard使用她的绳索爬到山顶。(2)分析所给段落首句,展开想象合理续写。续写第一段首句是:Richard发

9、出紧急情况求救信号,Ybarra赶快去找McLean。根据本句及语境可预测本段可以描写Ybarra如何找到McLean以及McLean的情况。续写第二段首句是:很快,一架直升机出现在他们头顶的上空。由此可知,本段主要写救援直升机开展营救工作的过程,他们最终安全脱险。高分范文When Richard called an emergency rescue,Ybarra set out to find McLean.He moved to the cliff edge and shouted downward,“Are you OK,McLean?” But there was no answer.

10、Ybarra retied his own rope and began dropping down the cliff.A moment later he heard a weak voice,“Help!Im here.” Following the voice,he found McLean was lying on a shelf of rock in a lower place.He was hurt in both legs while jumpingonto the rock for support and couldnt move.“We need to get you out

11、 of here.The emergency services have been called,” Ybarra comforted him.Soon,a rescue helicopter appeared above their head.Ybarra waved his hands and the rescuers discovered them.Because of no site for the helicopter to land,a rescuer shouldered a backpack full of supplies and rappelled down the cli

12、ff.After reaching McLean and Ybarra,he checked McLeans wounds and gave him emergency treatment.Then the rescuer fastened McLean and himself onto the end of the rope.Together,they rose from the rock.After a short stay in the temporary spot,he was sent to the nearest hospital.Finally,they all left the

13、 valley safely before the storm.名师点评习作围绕文章的内容进行了合理的续写,紧扣语境,与原文内容浑然一体。第一段承接前文,通过moved to the cliff edge,shouted downward,retied his own rope,began dropping down the cliff等动作描写生动形象地记述了寻找McLean的过程。此外,“Are you OK,McLean?”“Help!Im here.”“We need to get you out of here.The emergency services have been cal

14、led.”等直接引语的恰当使用,体现了对McLean的担忧,细致地刻画了他们之间的深厚情谊。第二段通过一系列动词的使用,如:waved,discovered,shouldered,checked,fastened,rose等,准确地描述了营救的过程。情节曲折,扣人心弦。此外,习作中运用了不少高级词语与句式,如:heard a weak voice,lying on a shelf of rock in a lower place;非谓语动词:following the voice,for the helicopter to land,after reaching McLean and Ybar

15、ra等,增强了语言的表现力,使续写的情节更动人。高分典句1.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。When the host announced that she won the prize,she felt thrilled.2.一听到那个坏消息,她悲伤不已。Upon hearing the bad news,she felt extremely sad.3.当看到那只凶恶的狼时,我感到很害怕。At the sight of the fierce wolf,I felt very scared.4.他中等身材,灰褐色头发,长着一张过目即忘的脸。He was average build,with

16、mousy hair and a forgettable face.5.自从父母去世后,他有了强烈的责任感。Since the death of his parents,he has a strong sense of responsibility.6.他太激动了,紧紧地抱着它,冲进了屋子。So excited was he that he held it tightly,rushing into the house.7.当这位女士感到越来越沮丧和绝望时,我无助地看着。I watched helplessly,as the woman felt more and more frustrated

17、 and hopeless.8.她溜下床,踮起脚尖走向窗户。She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.9.这个可怜的人既失望又沮丧,回到了家里。Disappointed and frustrated,the poor man made his way back to his family.10.带着惊讶和困惑,他勉强笑了笑。With a mixture of surprise and confusion,he managed a forced smile.即学即练阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续

18、写词数应为150左右。Deep in the forest,my husband and I had fun climbing over and crawling under the downed trees that blocked the dirt path before us.It was May,yet we walked up a snow-covered hill.When we noticed our jeans were wet up to our knees,it did not dampen our spirits.Not once did we say,“Lets tur

19、n around.” This was our vacation,and we were on an adventure.Little did we know this was the beginning of many more surprises.The trail was marked as an easy one-kilometre hike,yet we were already walking a long distance.Our lightheartedness stopped when we came out into a clearing and saw a parking

20、 lot without our rental car in it.As my eyes scanned the surroundings,nothing looked familiar.My heart raced.I realised we were lost in a national park that did not officially open for another week.Usually,I am the calm one in the relationship,but my husband surprised me with his calmness.This did n

21、ot comfort me;in fact,it heightened my fear.As we walked,I asked my husband to call for help,but there was no cell phone signal in this isolated area.It was awfully quiet except for our footsteps hitting the road,and my heavy breathing.My husband suggested we conserve energy and walk slower.With eac

22、h step on the road,my feet and thighs hurt while my mind raced with thoughts about people who got lost in the Canadian woods for days.My vision sharpened.I noticed everything around me:the trees,rocks and snow.I thought we could eat the snow on the ground in case we needed water.For the first time i

23、n my life,I was ready and willing to get a ride,but we did not meet with a single car on the road.We focused on each other,made joint decisions and connected through gratitude.We managed to stay on the main road and walked straight on.My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance.In no time did we find ourselves heading for it.We were filled with hope and excitement to find such a building in the middle