信件：吸烟的危害课件

1、信件说明文假如你是李明，你的朋友王刚在来信中说他们班有几个同学为了显示自己成熟或耍“酷”而吸烟，他怀着好奇心，也偷偷尝试了吸烟。请你写一封100词左右的回信，告诉王刚吸烟的危害并给出你的建议。注意：1.信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数；2参考词汇：成熟的matureDear Wang Gang， Im sorry to learn that you and some of your classmates have begun to smoke._ Yours， Li Ming审题1该篇作文格式为应用文书信。书信的主体部分为议论文，讨论吸烟的危害。通常用一般现在时表达。2全文可按“总分总”

2、结构布局，分三段：第一段：提出论点，即smoking is not cool but very dangerous。第二段：论证论点，阐述危害。第三段：提出自己的建议，即：放弃吸烟。第一段：提出论点有些同学为了显示自己成熟或耍“酷”而吸烟，事实上，吸烟是有害的。参考短语:cool ,dangerous,makes sb. appear mature notbut参考句型：I think it is wrong to believe smoking isIn fact，smoking is not but .第二段：论证论点，阐述危害。危害二：浪费金钱，一旦上瘾很难戒掉，许多人甚至偷钱买烟，影响

3、正常生活。参考短语: a waste of money /costs a great deal of money. be addicted to even stealto buy. affect/have an effect on 过渡词汇 :whats more；whats worse ,in addition, furthermore参考句型:Whats more,it is a waste of money to . means a waste of money.Once you are addicted to it，it is difficult to give it up.危害三：引

4、起火灾，危机生命和周围环境参考短语: cause fire easily do great damage to surroundings. 过渡词汇 :at last/lastly/last but not least参考句型：At last, smoking can cause.，which第三段：提出自己的建议，我认为你应该放弃吸烟,这样身体才能健康参考短语: give up/stopkeep healthy/fit过渡词汇:in my opinion；in a word 参考句型:Youd better give up.Only in this way can you keep heal

5、thy. Dont touch. .shouldnt smoke.；suggest you should give up smoking for the sake of your health, for the sake of your family, and for the sake of the whole world.Dear Wang Gang， Im sorry to learn that you and some of yourclassmates have begun to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe smoking is cool

6、 and makes you appear mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous. First, smoking does great harm to health. Scientific research shows that smoking can lead to heart diseases,cancer and other problems. It isreported that about 5 million people all over the world die from diseases related to smoking each year. Second, it is a waste of money to buy Cigarettes. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up. Whats more, smoking can cause fire easily, which may do great damage to your life