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高考应用文复习--变化和感受假设你是红星中学学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你的邮件中提到他想了解北京近几年发生了怎样的变化。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.变化2.原因3.感受注意:1.词数不少于50,

2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。出现问题原因和变化混到一块说,导致毫无逻辑变化写了太多过多注重今夕对比,大篇幅描述过去的不好近几年的变化,鸟巢有点太老了建议一个变化,三个原因变化和原因要有思维高度(人口多了,因为进城打工的多了;空气好了,因为人少了)

Change:skybecomesclearerReason:environmentawarenessofthecitizenspublictransportation(sharingbikes)factoriesmovedoutoftheurbanareas变化Asforthechanges,people'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionisanessentialone.Thegreatestchangeisthatwehaveenteredaneweraofonlinepayment.Beingabletobidfarewelltothehazeisoneofthemostdelightfulchanges.原因Thankstotheboomofscienceandtechnology,weareabletoshopwithouttakingthewallet.Iowethecrystalclearskytotheeffortofthegovernment,whichputforwardthepolicyofsustainabledevelopment.becreditedtosb/sthThefreshaircanbecreditedtopeople'sgrowingawarenessofenvironmentproduction.dueto...感受Whileenjoyingtheconveniencethegreatchangesintechnologybringstous,Ialsofeltasenseofpridesurgingallthewaytomyheart.Ifirmlybelievemoreandmorechangeswilltakeplaceinthenearfuture,whichwillmakethecitymodernandlivable.Words&Sentencestouse词汇owingtoOwingtotherain,thematchwascancelled.

owesthtosb/sth将某事物归因于某人\物Heoweshissuccessmoretoluckthantoability.1.知道你渴望了解北京近几年的变化,我现在写信告诉你。LearningyoureagernesstoknowaboutthechangesofBeijinginrecentyears,Iamdroppingafewlinestointroducethemtoyou.2.主要是由于政府的巨大努力。包括制定温室气体排放的严格规章,把重污染企业搬到郊区,在环保方面投更多钱。

Itismostlyduetothegreateffortofthegovernment,includinglayingdownstrictrulesofthegreengasemission,movingenterpriseswithheavypollutiontosuburbanareas,andspendingmoremoneyinenvironmentalprotection.3.另外,变化同样归功于市民日益增长的环境意识,他们的出行方式从用私家车辆转移到了公共交通。Moreover,thechangeshouldalsobecreditedtothecitizens’increasingenvironmentalawareness,whosewayoftransportationshiftedfromprivatevehiclestopublicones.4.由于社会各界的努力,我们能够见证北京的巨大变化。我坚信不就得将来会发生越来越多的变化,这将使城市更加现代化,更宜居。

Thankstoalltheeffortsmadebydifferentpartsofsociety,weareabletowitnessthegreatchangeinBeijing.Ifirmlybelievemoreandmorechangeswilltakeplaceinthenearfuture,whichwillmakethecitymodernandlivable.范文赏析

I'mverygladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinthechangesinBeijing.Letmetellyousomeofthedevelopmentsduringthepastfewyears.Ihavewitnessedmanygreatchangesinmycity.Themostimpressiveoneistherapiddevelopmentoftransportation.Inthepast,peopletravelledmainlybybus.Nowadays,withmoreandmoresubwaylinesbuilt,itismuchfasterandmoreconvenientforpeopletogoalmosteverywhere.Additionally,thespreadofpublicbikeshelpspeopletravelanydistancemoreeasily.Allthesecouldn'thavehappenedwithoutthemeasurestakenbythegovernmentandapplicationsofnewtechnology.Ienjoytheseconvenienceseverydayandfeelproudofmycity.IamconfidentthatBeijingwillbecomemoreliveableinthefuture.Justcomeandhavealookyourself.

How'sitgoing?LearningyoureagernesstoknowaboutthechangesofBeijinginrecentyears,Iamdroppingafewlinestointroducethemtoyou.Amongplentyofchanges,themostdelightfuloneinBeijingisanincreaseinthenumberof“bluesky”days.Itismostlyduetothegreateffortofthegovernment,includinglayingdownstrictregulations/rulesofthegreengasemission,movingenterprieses/factorieswithheavypollutiontosuburbanareas,andspendingmoremoneyinenvironmentalprotection.Moreover,thechangeshouldalsobecreditedtothecitizens’increasingenvironmentalawareness,whosewayoftransportationshiftedfromprivatevehiclestopublicones.Besides,abiggersupplyofgreenproductsfromcompaniesplaysaroleinimprovingtheaircondition.Greatdifferencecanbemadebycollectivepower.Thankstoalltheeffortsmadebydifferentpartsofsociety,weareabletowitnessthegreatchangeinBeijing.Ifirmlybelievemoreandmorecha

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