语篇分析实例分析(version3)21课件

从语篇分析角度入手，

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广东番禺中学

黄丽从语篇分析角度入语篇分析试题评析模式（1）2017年高考阅读D篇篇章分析宏观分析篇章体裁：说明文微观分析语法衔接：指代词汇衔接：重现、同现说明对象：Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstillAsolarstill语篇分析试题评析模式（1）2017年高考阅读D篇篇章分析宏

Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstill（蒸馏器）isoneofthebestwaystoobtaindrinkingwaterinareaswheretheliquidisnotreadilyavailable.

DevelopedbytwodoctorsintheU.S.DepartmentofAgriculture,it’sanexcellentwatercollector.Unfortunately,youmustcarrythenecessaryequipmentwithyou,sinceit’sallbutimpossibletofindnaturalsubstitutes.

Theonlycomponentsrequired,though,area5＇5＇sheetofclearorslightlymilkyplastic,sixfeetofplastictube,andacontainer—perhapsjustadrinkingcup—tocatchthewater.Thesepiecescanbefoldedintoaneatlittlepackandfastenedonyourbelt.ItsfunctionthenecessaryequipmentTheonlycomponentsmilkyplasticplastictubeacontainerdrinkingcupThesepieces上义词下义词 Abuild-it-yourselfsolarst 2.Toconstructaworkingstill,useasharpstickorrocktodig

ahole

fourfeetacrossandthreefeetdeep.

Trytomaketheholeinadampareatoincreasethewatercatcher’sproductivity.

Placeyourcupinthedeepestpartofthehole.

Thenlaythetubeinplacesothatoneendrestsallthewayinthecupandtherestofthelinerunsup—andout—thesideofthehole.3.Next,covertheholewiththeplasticsheet,securingtheedgesoftheplasticwithdirtandweightingthesheet’scenterdownwitharock.

Theplasticshouldnowformacone(圆锥体)with45-degree-angledsides.Thelowpointofthesheetmustbecentereddirectlyover,andnomorethanthreeinchesabove,thecup.关注句式的使用 2.Toconstructaworkingst33.Whatdoestheunderlinedphrase“thewatercatcher”inparagraph2referto?A.Thetube.B.Thestill.C.Thehole.D.Thecup.34.What’sthelaststepofconstructingaworkingsolarstill?Digaholeofacertainsize. B.Putthecupinplace.C.Weightthesheet’scenterdown.

D.Covertheholewiththeplasticsheet.33.Whatdoestheunderlinedp 4.Thesolarstill

works

bycreatingagreenhouseundertheplastic.

Groundwaterevaporates(蒸发)andcollectsonthesheetuntilsmalldropsofwaterform, rundownthematerialandfalloffintothecup.

Whenthecontainerisfull,youcansucktherefreshmentoutthroughthetube,andwon’thavetobreakdownthestilleverytimeyouneedadrink.How：furtherexplanation 4.ThesolarstillworksHow35.Whenasolarstillworks,dropsofwatercomeintothecupfrom

.theplastictubeB.outsidetheholeC.theopenairD.beneaththesheet35.Whenasolarstillworks,Pa1:thebuildingmaterialofasolarstillPa2-3:thebuildingprocedureP4:theworkingprincipleofasolarstillPa1:thebuildingmaterialofPage

93.语篇分析模式24.回顾篇章总体框架， 画出篇章结构图3.理清4个关系 段落与篇章、段落与段落、 句子与段落、句子与句子

2.寻找段落主题句段落大意

1.典型篇章（具备文体的典型特征）一二三四Page

9Page93.语篇分析模式24.回顾篇章总体框架，3

1.典型篇章（议论文）1.(广州一模C篇)1.典型篇章（议论文）1.(广州一模C篇)PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredictedthatonlinelearningwillmakeplace-basedcollegeslesssignificant,andfiveyearsfromnow,studentswillbeabletofindthebestlecturesintheworldonline.IapplaudMr.Gates.Butwhat’stakingussolong?Pa2:Asearlyas1997,MIT(麻省理工）decidedtopostvideosofalluniversitylecturesonline,forfree,forallpeople.Buttoday,howmanystudentshaveyoumetwhomasteredadvancedmathematicsornuclearphysicsfromanMITonlinevideo?Unfortunately,theanswerisnotmany.WhydoestheauthorquotewhatBillGates’predictionaboutonlinelearninghere?Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredicPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqualityofonlineeducationwebsitesandtheexperiencetheyprovidetostudents.ThosewhogototheMITwebsiteandwatchcoursesonlinearesurelyverysmartpeople,butifsnotlikeplayingavideogamesuchasWorldofWarcraft.Onlythemostardentstudents,thosewhoarehighlymotivated,willdevotethemselvestostudyingtheseboringonlinevideos.Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.WhereistheAvatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.递进式问题原因分析，找到问题的根源AnalyzethereasonsPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqu Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.Whereisthe

Avatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.

31.WhydoestheauthormentionHollywood? A.ToshowthatHollywoodproducesmanysuccessfulmovies.

B.Toprovethateducationismoreprofitablethanentertainment. C.Toarguethatmoviedirectorsshouldproduceeducationalcontent.

D.TourgethatmoremoneybespentdevelopingeducationalwebsitesTopicsentence举例是为了证明观点服务。本题实际问这个段落的主题是什么？ Pa4:TherealquestioniswhyPa5:BillGates’predictionisgoingtohappen.Thereisnodoubtaboutit. Butitwillonlyhappenwhenwecreatehighleveleducationalcontentandexperiencesthatengageandexcitemorethanhaseverbeenpossibleintherealworld.What’sthewriter’sattitudetowardsonlinelearning?positiveHowcanweturntheminreality?OffersolutionsTheauthor’sattitudestowardonlinelearningandhissolutionstoit.首尾段呼应Pa5:BillGates’predictionisPa1:Pa2:Pa3-4:Pa5:Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.AnalyzethereasonsTheauthor’sattitudestowardonlinelearningandhissolutionstoit.12345Pa1:Leadstothetopic.Raiset熟悉英语作者的思维特点英语篇章建构的特点建立某些题材、类型、模式、连续体的图式典型文体谋篇布局的特点，语言特色5.总结提升（1）--纯语言学习角度熟悉英语作者的思维特点英语篇章建构的特点建立某些题材、5.总结提升（2）--备考解题角度好处：1.抛弃只见树木，不见森林的做法，提升学生对典型文体篇章结构的理解；2.不仅理解字面意思，更关注段落与篇章，段落之间，句子与段落，句子与句子的关系3.逻辑分析能力的提升直接带动七选五和完形填空解题能力的提升5.总结提升（2）--备考解题角度好处：1.抛弃只见树木，Page

18提升对语言的感受力核心素养Page

181.人物的情感态度2.由浅及潜3.语言逻辑思维4.提升思维品质Page18提升对语言的感受力核心素养Page体会：1.好的教学方法一定吻合人的认知心理学。人获取信息的通道：视觉：大于70%听觉：15%其他：…2.讲评课一定要做课件。课件是老师教学思维/解题思路的外化,帮助学生最大限度地获取老师的信息，实现高效教学。体会：1.好的教学方法一定吻合人的认知心理学。有高果效有高果效Thankyou!Thankyou!从语篇分析角度入手，

提升试题评析课的

思维品质训练

广东番禺中学

黄丽从语篇分析角度入语篇分析试题评析模式（1）2017年高考阅读D篇篇章分析宏观分析篇章体裁：说明文微观分析语法衔接：指代词汇衔接：重现、同现说明对象：Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstillAsolarstill语篇分析试题评析模式（1）2017年高考阅读D篇篇章分析宏

Abuild-it-yourselfsolarstill（蒸馏器）isoneofthebestwaystoobtaindrinkingwaterinareaswheretheliquidisnotreadilyavailable.

DevelopedbytwodoctorsintheU.S.DepartmentofAgriculture,it’sanexcellentwatercollector.Unfortunately,youmustcarrythenecessaryequipmentwithyou,sinceit’sallbutimpossibletofindnaturalsubstitutes.

Theonlycomponentsrequired,though,area5＇5＇sheetofclearorslightlymilkyplastic,sixfeetofplastictube,andacontainer—perhapsjustadrinkingcup—tocatchthewater.Thesepiecescanbefoldedintoaneatlittlepackandfastenedonyourbelt.ItsfunctionthenecessaryequipmentTheonlycomponentsmilkyplasticplastictubeacontainerdrinkingcupThesepieces上义词下义词 Abuild-it-yourselfsolarst 2.Toconstructaworkingstill,useasharpstickorrocktodig

ahole

fourfeetacrossandthreefeetdeep.

Trytomaketheholeinadampareatoincreasethewatercatcher’sproductivity.

Placeyourcupinthedeepestpartofthehole.

Thenlaythetubeinplacesothatoneendrestsallthewayinthecupandtherestofthelinerunsup—andout—thesideofthehole.3.Next,covertheholewiththeplasticsheet,securingtheedgesoftheplasticwithdirtandweightingthesheet’scenterdownwitharock.

Theplasticshouldnowformacone(圆锥体)with45-degree-angledsides.Thelowpointofthesheetmustbecentereddirectlyover,andnomorethanthreeinchesabove,thecup.关注句式的使用 2.Toconstructaworkingst33.Whatdoestheunderlinedphrase“thewatercatcher”inparagraph2referto?A.Thetube.B.Thestill.C.Thehole.D.Thecup.34.What’sthelaststepofconstructingaworkingsolarstill?Digaholeofacertainsize. B.Putthecupinplace.C.Weightthesheet’scenterdown.

D.Covertheholewiththeplasticsheet.33.Whatdoestheunderlinedp 4.Thesolarstill

works

bycreatingagreenhouseundertheplastic.

Groundwaterevaporates(蒸发)andcollectsonthesheetuntilsmalldropsofwaterform, rundownthematerialandfalloffintothecup.

Whenthecontainerisfull,youcansucktherefreshmentoutthroughthetube,andwon’thavetobreakdownthestilleverytimeyouneedadrink.How：furtherexplanation 4.ThesolarstillworksHow35.Whenasolarstillworks,dropsofwatercomeintothecupfrom

.theplastictubeB.outsidetheholeC.theopenairD.beneaththesheet35.Whenasolarstillworks,Pa1:thebuildingmaterialofasolarstillPa2-3:thebuildingprocedureP4:theworkingprincipleofasolarstillPa1:thebuildingmaterialofPage

303.语篇分析模式24.回顾篇章总体框架， 画出篇章结构图3.理清4个关系 段落与篇章、段落与段落、 句子与段落、句子与句子

2.寻找段落主题句段落大意

1.典型篇章（具备文体的典型特征）一二三四Page

30Page93.语篇分析模式24.回顾篇章总体框架，3

1.典型篇章（议论文）1.(广州一模C篇)1.典型篇章（议论文）1.(广州一模C篇)PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredictedthatonlinelearningwillmakeplace-basedcollegeslesssignificant,andfiveyearsfromnow,studentswillbeabletofindthebestlecturesintheworldonline.IapplaudMr.Gates.Butwhat’stakingussolong?Pa2:Asearlyas1997,MIT(麻省理工）decidedtopostvideosofalluniversitylecturesonline,forfree,forallpeople.Buttoday,howmanystudentshaveyoumetwhomasteredadvancedmathematicsornuclearphysicsfromanMITonlinevideo?Unfortunately,theanswerisnotmany.WhydoestheauthorquotewhatBillGates’predictionaboutonlinelearninghere?Leadstothetopic.Raisetheproblem/question.PA1:BillGatesrecentlypredicPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqualityofonlineeducationwebsitesandtheexperiencetheyprovidetostudents.ThosewhogototheMITwebsiteandwatchcoursesonlinearesurelyverysmartpeople,butifsnotlikeplayingavideogamesuchasWorldofWarcraft.Onlythemostardentstudents,thosewhoarehighlymotivated,willdevotethemselvestostudyingtheseboringonlinevideos.Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.WhereistheAvatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.递进式问题原因分析，找到问题的根源AnalyzethereasonsPa3:Theproblemisthepoorqu Pa4:Therealquestioniswhywearen’tspendingmoretodevelopbetteronlineeducationplatforms.Whereisthe

Avatarofeducation?Thinkaboutthis.ThemarketforHollywoodfilmsperyeariswortharound30billionUSD.Educationintheworldisatrillion-dollar-a-yearmarket,hundredsoftimesbiggerthanHollywoodmovies.Yetthemostexpensivedigitallearningsystemeverbuiltcostwellunder100milliondollars.

31.WhydoestheauthormentionHollywood? A.ToshowthatHollywoodproducesmanysuccessfulmovies.

B.Toprovethateducationismoreprofitablethanentertainment. C.Toarguethatmoviedirectorsshouldproduceeducationalcontent.

D.Tourgethatmoremoneyb