外语托福写作教程新学习教案课件

会计学1外语托福写作教程新会计学1外语托福写作教程新托福写作介绍综合写作形式:读+听+写内容:阐明观点相互联系性分数权重:1/2时间要求:20分钟字数要求:150-225词独立写作形式:议论文内容:对议题发表看法分数权重:1/2时间要求:30分钟字数要求:至少300词第1页/共232页托福写作介绍综合写作独立写作第1页/共232页托福写作分数换算3028252220171410987654第2页/共232页托福写作分数换算3010第2页/共232页应试写作的三个层次写得出写得对写得炫第3页/共232页应试写作的三个层次写得出第3页/共232页应试写作难点写作本身难度大,是驾驭一门语言的最高境界,属于信息的输出,是逻辑、语法、词汇、文化等的综合统一第4页/共232页应试写作难点写作本身难度大,是驾驭一门语言的最高境界,属应试写作难点大脑一片空白基本无话可说绿叶对根的情意Doyouagreeordisagreethatprogressisalwaysgood?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.第5页/共232页应试写作难点大脑一片空白基本无话可说第5页/共232页应试写作难点表达漏洞百出可读性相当差InChina,becauseitstradition,theoldismostraisedbytheirchildren.InChina,becauseofitstradition,theoldaremostlysupportedbytheirchildren.第6页/共232页应试写作难点表达漏洞百出可读性相当差第6页/共232页应试写作难点中式英语泛滥考官哭笑不得Pollutionmakesuscannotbreathefreshair.Pollutionmakesusunabletobreathefreshair.第7页/共232页应试写作难点中式英语泛滥考官哭笑不得第7页/共232页应试写作难点口语痕迹明显好似娓娓道来Isayit’sagoodthing.NowI’lltellyouastoryaboutmyself.第8页/共232页应试写作难点口语痕迹明显好似娓娓道来第8页/共232页应试写作难点表达捉襟见肘词句鲜有亮点第9页/共232页应试写作难点表达捉襟见肘词句鲜有亮点第9页/共232页越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。Moreandmorecollegegraduateswhohavejustgraduatedfromuniversityfindthatfindingagoodjobismoreandmoredifficult.第10页/共232页越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。第10页越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难Agrowingnumberoffreshgraduatesfindthatobtainingadecentjobisincreasinglydifficult.第11页/共232页越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难第11页/越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。Agrowingnumberoffreshgraduatesfindthatbeingemployedbyadecentemployerisincreasinglydifficult.第12页/共232页越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。第12页越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。Thedifficultyofbeingemployedbyadecentemployerisontherise,asthenumberoffreshgraduatesgrows.第13页/共232页越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。第13页托福独立写作评分标准5分:文章切题,阐说充分,文章有说服力;段落组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有很强的逻辑性;段落内句与句连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活,成熟;用词确切,得体.文章中有个别语法拼写错误,但不影响内容表达.4分:文章切题,阐说基本充分,在某些细节上有缺陷.段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,逻辑性强;句间连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活;用词基本得体.文章中有少量用词不当和语法拼写错误.3分:文章切题,阐说尚可,展开不够.段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有逻辑性;句间连接基本顺畅;有部分句法错误;用词一般,有时不得体.词性区分和拼写等有若干错误.2分:文章切题,段落组织基本合理,有逻辑性,但只存在于语义层次上,语言表达上未能体现;句子框架结构基本成立,但有许多语法错误,句间联系不顺畅,往往是不善于使用逻辑连词,显得幼稚,生硬.词汇方面拼写错误多,常有用词不得体现象.1分:文章切题.阐说没有展开,只限于三言两语地回答问题;没有段落组织,很乱,长度很短,只有一段;句子排列有一定的逻辑关系,能看出各句基本框架,但结构或语法错误较多;用词不得题,拼写错误多.0分:文章各方面都有严重错误,句子不像句子.总体印象是根本没有写作能力,英语水平太低,够不上1分标准,只能打最低分.第14页/共232页托福独立写作评分标准5分:文章切题,阐说充分,文章有说服力;托福独立写作要求谋篇:观点突出结构合理谋段:论证充分言之有物谋句:正确多变关联谋词:准确多变

第15页/共232页托福独立写作要求谋篇:观点突出结构合理第15页/共23托福独立写作题目分类对比选择型支持反对型自选论述型问题分析型

第16页/共232页托福独立写作题目分类对比选择型第16页/共232页托福独立写作的步骤审题内容？形式？构思头脑风暴Outline行文检查

ThefirstdraftofanythingisSHIT.----ByHemmingway第17页/共232页托福独立写作的步骤审题内容？形式？第17页/共232对比选择型Somepeoplethinkthattheautomobilehasimprovedmodernlife.Othersthinkthattheautomobilehascausedseriousproblems.Whatisyouropinion?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.第18页/共232页对比选择型SomepeoplethinkthatthOutlineFor方便高效convenient&efficient丰富生活enrichlifestyle推动相关产业boostrelatedindustriesAgainst耗尽石油资源depletefuelresourcesworldwide空气污染airpollution交通阻塞和事故

trafficjamandaccidents第19页/共232页OutlineForAgainst第19页/共232页Structure结构Introduction总起段Body主体段Conclusion总结段第20页/共232页Structure结构Introduction总起段第2Introduction总起段Background背景Controversy(2different/oppositeideas)争议Statement观点Transition过渡第21页/共232页Introduction总起段Background背景Background背景Beingacontroversialissue,thegreatpopularityofautomobilehasarousedagreatdealofattentioninsocietyduringthepastdecades.Nowadays,theissueonthegreatpopularityofautomobileishighlydebatable,andideasvaryfrompersontoperson.第22页/共232页Background背景BeingacontroveControversy争议Somepeoplethinkthatitisgood,otherpeoplethinkthatitisbad.Somepeoplethinkthattheautomobilehasimprovedmodernlife.Othersthinkthattheautomobilehascausedseriousproblems.第23页/共232页Controversy争议SomepeoplethiControversy争议Somewouldclaimdailylifehasbeenupgradedduetoautomobile,whilesomeothersmaysuggestthatsevereproblemsaretheresults(whichare)broughtbyautomobile.Somewouldclaimdailylifehasbeenupgradedduetoautomobile,whiletheideathatsevereproblemsaretheresultsbroughtbyautomobileisstillheldbysomeothers.第24页/共232页Controversy争议SomewouldclaiControversy争议Think→claim/suggest/believe/advocate/maintain/argue/supposeGood→beneficial/profitable/helpful/sound/decentBad→harmful/detrimental/hazardousAdvantage→merit/virtue/benefit/profit/proDisadvantage→demerit/drawback/flaw/shortcoming/con/cost第25页/共232页Controversy争议Think→claim/Statement观点简洁明了concrete&conciseAsforme,Isidewiththeformer/latter.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelieveautomobileisindispensableineverydaylife.Inmyview,itismuchbettertohaveeverydaylifewithoutautomobile.第26页/共232页Statement观点简洁明了concrete&Transition过渡Inthefollowingparagraphs,Iwouldpresentsomereasons.Afewexplanations/exampleswouldbepresentedasfollows.Thusessentialandpersuasiveevidenceswouldbeprovidedinthesubsequentparagraphstoverifymyperspective.第27页/共232页Transition过渡InthefollowingConclusion总结段Statement观点rewrite,notcopyAllinall/Toconclude/Inconclusion/Ingeneral/TosumupWhenalltheabove-mentionedfactorsaretakenintoconsideration,aconclusioncouldbedrawnthat…第28页/共232页Conclusion总结段Statement观点rConclusion总结段Frommypointofview,itisadvisabletotakeadvantageofautomobilewhileeliminateitsdrawbacks.FromwhereIstand,automobilecannotbeanessentialfactorinpursuingaperfectlife.第29页/共232页Conclusion总结段FrommypointofBody主体段Tobeginwith/Firstly/FirstandforemostSecondly/Inaddition/MoreoverInthethirdplace/Furthermore/Lastbutnotleast第30页/共232页Body主体段Tobeginwith/FirstlOutlineFor方便高效convenient&efficient丰富生活enrichlifestyle推动相关产业boostrelatedindustriesAgainst耗尽石油资源depletefuelresourcesworldwide空气污染airpollution交通阻塞和事故

trafficjamandaccidents第31页/共232页OutlineForAgainst第31页/共232页ForIntroductionTobeginwith,automobilemakessomeworkconvenientandefficient…Inaddition,automobileenricheslifestyle…Furthermore,automobileboostsrelatedindustries…让步段Conclusion第32页/共232页ForIntroduction第32页/共232页ForIntroductionTobeginwith,itisconvenientandefficienttotravelbyautomobile…Inaddition,lifestylecanbeenrichedviaautomobile…Furthermore,automobileboostsrelatedindustries…让步段Conclusion第33页/共232页ForIntroduction第33页/共232页方便高效convenient&efficientTobeginwith,itisconvenientandefficienttotravelbyautomobile.Forexample,fromdowntowntosuburb,bycar,itcostsafewhours.Otherwise,bybicycleoronfoot,nearlyonedayisneeded.Anywherearoundthecitycouldbereachedwithinoneday.Itistheautomobilethatbringsabouturbanization.第34页/共232页方便高效convenient&efficient丰富生活enrichlifestyleInaddition,lifestylecanbeenrichedviaautomobile.Withautomobile,lifestylecouldbemorecolorfulandentertainingandliferadiusmaybeenlarged.Travelingwidenshorizonandvisualizeswhatislearntinbooks.Besides,shoppingenablesonetorelievethepressureofworkandstudy.Onlybyhisowncarcanonegoanywhereatanytime.第35页/共232页丰富生活enrichlifestyleInaddi推动相关产业boostrelatedindustriesFurthermore,automobileboostsrelatedindustries.Nowitispossibletodeveloptourismandlogistics.Fastspeedsavestime,andlongdistanceisnolongerabarriertothetouristattractionsfaraway.Besides,freshfruitandvegetablecouldbedeliveredacrossthenationwithinafewdays,andtheexpressindustrymaybebooming.第36页/共232页推动相关产业让步段Althoughautomobilemaysometimesseemtohavesomedemerits,suchasleadingtodepletionoffuelresourcesworldwide,airpollutionandtrafficjamandaccidents,itsoverallprofitsfaroutweighitsdrawbacks.

第37页/共232页让步段Althoughautomobilemaysom让步段Despitethefactthattherearestillsomeflawsexisting,suchasleadingtodepletionoffuelresourcesworldwide,airpollutionandtrafficjamandaccidents,automobileisprofitableonthewhole.第38页/共232页让步段Despitethefactthatthere一边倒AgainstIntroductionTobeginwith,automobiledepletesfuelresourcesworldwide…Inaddition,automobileleadstoairpollution…Furthermore,automobileleadstotrafficjamandaccidents…让步段Conclusion第39页/共232页一边倒AgainstIntroduction第39页/共2一边倒AgainstIntroductionTobeginwith,fuelresourcesworldwidearedepletedduetoautomobile…Inaddition,airpollutionresultsfromautomobile…Furthermore,trafficjamandaccidentsareproblemsbroughtbyautomobile…让步段Conclusion第40页/共232页一边倒AgainstIntroduction第40页/共2耗尽石油资源depletefuelresourcesworldwideTobeginwith,fuelresourcesworldwidearedepletedduetoautomobile.Itisestimatedthatthegreatamountofcarsconsumemostfuel,andtheproportionkeepsexpanding.Humanbeingsareinthecrisisofoilshortage,whichmayposeapotentialthreattotheworldpeace,andtriggerconflictorevenwar.第41页/共232页耗尽石油资源空气污染airpollution

Inaddition,airpollutionresultsfromautomobile.Globalwarmingisaninternationalissue,andthelargenumberofcarbondioxide(whichis)emittedfromcarsacceleratesglobalwarming.Besides,sulfurdioxidecontributestoworseningofairquality,andthereforefreshairisnolongeravailable.Andacidrainstemmingfromsulfurdioxidedestroysplantsinthefield.第42页/共232页空气污染airpollution

Inadditi交通阻塞和事故

trafficjamandaccidents

Furthermore,trafficjamandaccidentsareproblemsbroughtbyautomobiles.Withtheever-increasingnumberofcars,citizenssuffertrafficjamgreatly.Inrushhour,bycar,itusuallycosts30minutestocoverthedistanceoffiveminutes’walk.Moreover,trafficaccidentsarefrequentlytheheadlinesofnewspaper.Itisnotuncommonthattrafficaccidentsdisablesomedriversandpedestrians,andevendeprivethemoftheirlives.第43页/共232页交通阻塞和事故

trafficjamandac让步段Althoughautomobilemaysometimesseemtohavesomemerits,suchasconvenienceandefficiency,enrichinglifestyle,andboostingrelatedindustries,itsoveralldrawbacksfaroutweighitsprofits.

第44页/共232页让步段Althoughautomobilemaysom让步段Despitethefactthattherearestillsomemeritsexisting,suchasbeing

convenientandefficient,enrichinglifestyle,andboostingrelatedindustries,automobileisdetrimentalonthewhole.第45页/共232页让步段Despitethefactthatthere议论文的论点论据论证第46页/共232页议论文的论点论据论证第46页/共232页常见的论证方法举例：形象化，生动化，易于理解比较：中国人强调绝对，好就是好，很好就是很好；西方人强调相对，任何东西要放在整体的环境中看引用：itisreportedthat…,itissaidthat…,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…,itisrevealedbyofficialfigurethat…反证：从with这个角度不好想到，那么就从without入手第47页/共232页常见的论证方法举例：形象化，生动化，易于理解第47页/共2对比选择型Somepeoplesaythatcomputershavemadelifeeasierandmoreconvenient.Otherpeoplesaythatcomputershavemadelifemorecomplexandstressful.Whatisyouropinion?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.第48页/共232页对比选择型Somepeoplesaythatcomp支持反对型Doyouagreeordisagreethatprogressisalwaysgood?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.第49页/共232页支持反对型DoyouagreeordisagreeBackground背景Beingacontroversialissue,theevaluationofprogresshasarousedagreatdealofattentioninsocietyduringthepastdecades.Nowadays,theissueontheevaluationofprogressishighlydebatable,andideasvaryfrompersontoperson.第50页/共232页Background背景BeingacontroveControversy争议Somewouldclaimprogresscontributesgreatlytoeverydaylife;whiletheideathatprogresshasitsownflawsisstillheldbysomeothers.第51页/共232页Controversy争议SomewouldclaiOutlineAgainstInternetTransportationSearchinginformationFastfood第52页/共232页OutlineAgainst第52页/共232页Thedramaticleapintele-communicationandtransportationtotallytransformstheworld.WithInternet,onecanhaveinstantcommunicationwithhisfriendsorworkmatesondifferentcontinents,andwatchliveNBAgamesathomeviasatellite.第53页/共232页Thedramaticleapintele-commNevertheless,humanbeingssuffergreatlyfromtechnologicalinnovation.Thepaceoflifehasbeenaccelerated,anditseemseverycitizen,regardlessofastudent,anemployeeoraboss,isundergreatpressure.第54页/共232页Nevertheless,humanbeingssufSomeadvanceintechnologyisphysicallydetrimental,suchascomputerandInternet.Longtimeexposurebeforescreenwillleadtonearsightedness.Inaddition,radiationcausesskinproblem,andonemayeasilyleadasedentarylifeduetoInternet.第55页/共232页SomeadvanceintechnologyisAdvancedtransportationshortensthedistanceandresultsinglobalization.However,theenvironmentisseriouslypollutedbecauseofautomobilesandairplanes,andfreshairandcleanwaterarenolongeravailable.Humanbeingscannotreturntotheerawhencarriages,whichdidnotgeneratecarbondioxideandsulfurdioxide,werethemainvehicle.第56页/共232页AdvancedtransportationshorteSotheenvironmentalpollutionandthedepletionofnaturalresourcesareinevitable.Gradually,theecosystemwillbeimbalancedandevenbreakdown.Finally,mankindcannotsurviveonthisplanet.第57页/共232页SotheenvironmentalpollutionSomeprivacyislostintheprocessofadvanceofsearchinginformation.ThesearchcapabilityissopowerfulonInternetthatitcostsmerelyafewsecondstoidentifytheneededinformation.Bycontrast,atleastafewhoursarespentbyhandwork.第58页/共232页SomeprivacyislostintheprMeanwhile,someprivateinformationcannolongerbekeptconfidential.Andtheeffortless“copyandpaste”operationacceleratesthespreadofinformation.Names,ages,IDcardnumbers,addresses,andphonenumberscouldbeeasilyobtainedfromInternet.第59页/共232页Meanwhile,someprivateinformItisnotuncommonthatonewillreceivemuchspamafterregisteringinawebsiteandleavingE-mailaddress,andthesamesituationhappenswhenmobilephonenumbersaregivenawayaccidentally,allofwhichwillcausesometroubleduetosomeevilpurposes.第60页/共232页ItisnotuncommonthatonewiItisconvenientandefficienttohavefastfood.Incontrast,traditionalfoodistime-consumingandusuallycostsseveralhourstohaveonemeal.Inthecurrentfast-pacesociety,fastfoodsolvestheproblemwell.Onecanfinishamealwithin10-20minutes,savingmuchtimeandenergy.第61页/共232页ItisconvenientandefficientHowever,fastfoodisphysicallydetrimental.Lackingvitaminandminerals,fastfoodalwayscontainsmuchfatandcalories.Consequently,mostoverweightproblemisduetoexcessiveintakeoffastfood,andlittlenutritionandunbalanceddietendangerhealth.第62页/共232页However,fastfoodisphysical支持反对型Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatalargeshoppingcentermaybebuiltinyourneighborhood.Doyousupportoropposethisplan?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer.第63页/共232页支持反对型IthasrecentlybeenannoOutlineFor就业机会jobopportunities休闲娱乐recreation丰厚收入largeincomeandrevenueAgainst噪音污染noisepollution不稳定因素socialunstability交通阻塞

trafficjam

第64页/共232页OutlineForAgainst第64页/共232页支持反对型Insomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Doyouthinkthisisagoodidea?Supportyouropinionbyusingspecificreasonsanddetails.第65页/共232页支持反对型Insomecountries,teenagOutlineFor积累经验accumulateexperience学会技能learnskills培养责任感developresponsibilityAgainst浪费时间timeconsuming分散注意力distractattention误入歧途maygoastray

第66页/共232页OutlineForAgainst第66页/共232页自选论述型Agift(suchasacamera,asoccerball,orananimal)cancontributetoachild’sdevelopment.Whatgiftwouldyougivetohelpachilddevelop?Why?Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyourchoice.第67页/共232页自选论述型Agift(suchasacamera,Outline学习知识acquireknowledge培养责任感developresponsibility解除寂寞relieveloneliness

第68页/共232页Outline学习知识acquireIntroduction总起段Itisbelievedthatintheformativeyearsofchildren,agiftisverybeneficial.However,preferencesvaryfrompersontoperson.Frommyview,Iwouldpickapet.Andafewreasonswouldbepresentedasfollows.第69页/共232页Introduction总起段Itisbelieved学习知识acquireknowledgeChildrencanacquireknowledgeviapetraising.Usually,whatisleantintextbooksissuperficialandchildrencannothaveavividimpressionontheinformation.Playingwithpetsenableschildrentoknowmoreaboutanimalsandthenature,andmaystimulatetheirinterestinbiology.Itislikelythattheywilldecidetohavefurthereducationorresearchintherelateddomain.第70页/共232页学习知识培养责任感developresponsibility

Petraisingdevelopsresponsibility.Mostchildrenfromsingle-childfamiliesarealittlespoiledbecausetheirparentslovetheminacrazyandblindway.Childrenover-protectedbyparentsmayhaveacarefreelife,andcanobtainwhatevertheydemandwithouteffort,suchaspocketmoney,toysanddigitalproducts.However,theyhavenoideaonwhatresponsibilityis.Therefore,childrenareencouragedtoraisepettofulfilltheirduty,whichisofvitalimportancewhentheybecomeparentsinthefuture.第71页/共232页培养责任感解除寂寞relievelonelinessLonelinesscanberelievedbykeepingpet.ItisnotuncommonthatinChina,duetoitsone-childpolicy,achildalwaysfeelslonelyathome,especiallyduringvacations,ashedoesnothaveanysiblings.Notsurprisingly,hewouldresorttoInternet,playingon-linegamesandleadingasedentarylifealldaytokillthetime.Withapet,thesituationdiffersdramatically.Hecanplaywiththepet,takeawalk,andissupposedtofeedthepet.Timespentontheseactivitiesismuchmoreworthwhileandmeaningfulthanonidling.第72页/共232页解除寂寞Conclusion总结段Inconclusion,Iwouldregardpetasthebestgifttoachildforhisgrowth.Fewchildrencanresistlovingapet.第73页/共232页Conclusion总结段Inconclusion,I自选论述型Ifyoucouldmakeoneimportantchangeinaschoolthatyouattended,whatchangewouldyoumake?Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.第74页/共232页自选论述型Ifyoucouldmakeoneimp问题分析型Ingeneral,peoplearelivinglongernow.Discussthecausesofthisphenomenon.Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.第75页/共232页问题分析型Ingeneral,peopleareliOutline丰富营养richnutrition先进医疗advancedmedicine体育锻炼physicaltraining

第76页/共232页Outline丰富营养richnutrIntroduction总起段Background背景Statement观点第77页/共232页Introduction总起段Background背景Background背景Accordingtoarecentsurvey,theaveragelifespanextendsrapidly,andthisissuehasarousedgreatpublicattention.Itisreportedthatlongevityprevailsamongtheelderly,whichattractsgreatpublicconcern.第78页/共232页Background背景AccordingtoarStatement观点Itisthegoalofthisessaytoexploresomepossiblecausestotheproblem/phenomenon.第79页/共232页Statement观点ItisthegoalofConclusion总结段Statement观点rewrite,notcopyAllinall/Toconclude/Inconclusion/Ingeneral/Tosumup,manyfactorscontributetothedramaticexpansionoflifespan.Itisestimatedthatlongerlifeisnotadreamaslongasmedicinekeepsdeveloping,andtheimportanceofhealthishighlyemphasized.第80页/共232页Conclusion总结段Statement观点r丰富营养richnutritionLongevitypartlycomesfromrichnutrition.Itiswidelyacceptedthatnutritionplaysanessentialroleinmaintaininghealthy.Inthepast,starvationwasthemainthreattolife,andadequatefoodwasthecommonwish,sonutritionwasalwaysignored.Currently,itisknownvitamin,minerals,proteinandfiberallhavetheircontributiontohealthydietandlongevity.Theseingredientsstrengthenthefigure,andhelpthelong-termoperationofsomeorgans.第81页/共232页丰富营养先进医疗advancedmedicineTheadvanceofmedicineresultsinlongerlifespan.Manybreakthroughsoverthedecadesarenowsimplytakenforgranted,andhavepreventedmanydiseaseswhich,inbygonedays,ledtoearlydeaths,suchassmallpox.Eventhoughnocertaincurehasyetbeendiscoveredforheartattackandcancer,thelatesttechnologiesusedinvarioustreatmentsandoperationsaswellastheuseofnewmedicationshavegreatlyincreasedthechancesofsurvivalforpatients.Doctorsareabletocontrolthespreadofvirusesorcells,preventingtheworseningofdisease.第82页/共232页先进医疗体育锻炼physicaltraining

Physicaltrainingcannotbeignoredaswell.Inearlydays,whenthelivingstandardwaslow,everyonewasbusyworkingtomakealiving,andnorecreationwasavailableatthattime.Nowadays,technologydevelopssodramaticallythatworkissimplifiedandburdenisrelived.Thus,onehashisfreetimetodophysicaltraining.Itissaidthereisapositivelinkbetweenamountofexerciseandlifespan.Thereisnodoubtthoseelderlywhodoexerciseseverydayinearlymorningusuallyhavelongerlifespan.第83页/共232页体育锻炼问题分析型Manystudentshavetolivewithroommateswhilegoingtoschooloruniversity.Whataresomeoftheimportantqualitiesofagoodroommate?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestoexplainwhythesequalitiesareimportant.第84页/共232页问题分析型Manystudentshavetoliv托福写作遣词用句常见错误中式英语主谓不一致句子不完整句子成分多余时态语态使用错误词性理解错误单词使用错误倒装和平行结构从句使用错误错误大杂烩第85页/共232页托福写作遣词用句常见错误中式英语词性理解错误第85页/共23中式英语Environmentalpollutionhurtspeople’shealth.Environmentalpollutionisphysicallyharmful/detrimental.第86页/共232页中式英语Environmentalpollutionhu中式英语Ifhavenoelectricity,wecan’tdoanything.Wecandonothingwithoutpower.第87页/共232页中式英语Ifhavenoelectricity,we中式英语Ihaveawish,Iwishworldpeace,nowars,thisalsoisthewishofpeopleinthewholeworld.Iwishworldpeace,withoutwars,whichisthewishofpeopleworldwideaswell.Iwishworldpeace,withoutwars,andthisisthewishofpeopleworldwideaswell.第88页/共232页中式英语Ihaveawish,Iwishworl中式英语Non-stopstudyingknowledgeisveryimportant.Itisveryimportanttokeepacquiringknowledge.Itisofvitalimportancetokeepacquiringknowledge.第89页/共232页中式英语Non-stopstudyingknowledg中式英语Wemusttakeactivesolutionstocontrolenvironmentalpollution.Activesolutionsshouldbetakentocontrolenvironmentalpollution.第90页/共232页中式英语Wemusttakeactivesoluti中式英语Ifyoudonotpayattentiontoenvironmentalproblems,youmustsufferhugelosssoonerorlater.Ifwedonotpayattentiontoenvironmentalproblems,wemustsufferhugelosssoonerorlater.Ifenvironmentalproblemsarenotgivenenoughattention,hugelossisinevitable.第91页/共232页中式英语Ifyoudonotpayattentio中式英语Gamestakeuptoomuchtimeofstudents,andignorelearning,sportsandevenfamily.Studentsspendtoomuchtimeongames,andignorelearning,sportsandevenfamily.第92页/共232页中式英语Gamestakeuptoomuchtim中式英语Pollutionmakesuscannotbreathefreshair.Pollutionmakesusunabletobreathefreshair.Pollutiondisablesustobreathefreshair.Pollutionpreventsusfrombreathingfreshair.第93页/共232页中式英语Pollutionmakesuscannot中式英语Pleasegivemeareplyifyouareconvenient.Pleasegivemeareplyifitisconvenientforyou.Pleasegivemeareplyifyouarefree.第94页/共232页中式英语Pleasegivemeareplyif中式英语E-mailmakespeopleeasierandquickertoknoweachother.E-mailmakesiteasierandquickerforpeopletoknoweachother.第95页/共232页中式英语E-mailmakespeopleeasier中式英语Internetiseasiertosearchinformationthanlibrary.ItiseasiertosearchinformationonInternetthanlibrary.ItiseasiertosearchinformationonInternetthanitisinlibrary.ItiseasiertosearchinformationonInternetthaninlibrary.第96页/共232页中式英语Internetiseasiertosear中式英语Thepresentsituationbecomesseriousandserious.Thepresentsituationbecomesmoreandmoreserious.第97页/共232页中式英语Thepresentsituationbeco中式英语Onewillbedangerousifoneriskshelpingtheadventureroutwhenthesituationisunclear.Itwillbedangerousifoneriskshelpingtheadventureroutwhenthesituationisunclear.Onewillbeendangered/indangerifoneriskshelpingtheadventureroutwhenthesituationisunclear.第98页/共232页中式英语Onewillbedangerousifo中式英语Theoldareinevitabletohavegenerationgapwiththeirchildren.Itisinevitablefortheoldtohavegenerationgapwiththeirchildren.第99页/共232页中式英语Theoldareinevitableto中式英语Overseasstudymakesstudents’eyeswider.Overseasstudywidens/broadensstudents’vision/horizon.第100页/共232页中式英语Overseasstudymakesstude中式英语MyMP3cannotlisteneventhoughithasmuchelectricity.MyMP3cannotworkeventhoughitisfullycharged.第101页/共232页中式英语MyMP3cannotlisteneven中式英语Peoplenowhaveconditiontoeatgoodthings.Itisaffordabletohaveanutritionaldietnow.第102页/共232页中式英语Peoplenowhavecondition中式英语Thereasonsforthechangehave5points.5reasonsleadto/bringabout/resultinthechange.第103页/共232页中式英语Thereasonsforthechange主谓不一致MemorizingasmanynewwordsaspossiblearethewishofeveryEnglishlearner.Memorizingasmanynew