范文评析television as a better source of news分析和总结

范文评析：TelevisionasaBetterSourceofNewsAmongthethreemassmediatelevision,newspaperandradio（短语作引言句）1regardtelevisionasabettersourceofnews（自己的观点，即全文的中心思想）。Mystatementthattelevisionisabettersourceofnews（段首句用同位语从句与首段中心思想衔接）isbasedonthefollowingtworeasons（对全段内容加以限定）.Thefirstreasonisthattelevisioncanreportnewsmorequickly（层次1）.Wecangetthenewsatthesametimewhensomethingishappeningorimmediatelyaftersomethinghappened（拓展句）.While（转折，弓I出其它媒体的缺点不足）newspaperscanonlyofferthenewsthathappenedadayortwodaysago.Thesecondreasonisthattelevisioncanreportnewsmorevividlyandimpressively（层次2）.WithsoundsandpicturesonTV,wecanbedeeplyimpressedbythenewsasifwewerepersonallyonthespot（拓展句举例说明）,But（转折，指出不足）whenwetrytogetnewsfromthenewspaper,wehavetoconcentrateourmindonthelinesanduseourimaginationstoformaconcreteimage,whichisalwaystiresomeandtime-consuming.Accordingtotheabovementionedreasons,wecaneasilydrawaconclusionthattelevisionisreallyabettersourceofnews（总结，重申首段观点）.范文评析：TheMainDifferencebetweenExam-orientedEducationandQuality-orientedEducationEducationinChinausedtobeexam-orientedone.Butwiththedevelopmentofeducationreform,quality-orientededucationisstressedagainandagain.Sothererisesaquestion:Whatisthemaindifference（题目要点）betweenthesetwo?（提问法开头）Accordingtomyunderstanding,exam-orientededucationfocusesonstudentsabilityofpassingexaminationsofdifferentlevels.Thiseducationistotestthestudentscommandofknowledgetheyhaveobtainedfromthetextbooks.Soexaminationresultsaretheonlycriterionwhichisusedtoevaluatethestudentswhethertheyare“excellent”onesor“bad”ones（应试教育的主要特点）.However（转折引出素质教育的特点）,quality-orientededucationfocusesonstudentsvariousqualities,includingacademicquality,moralquality,culturalquality,mostimportant,theirindividualpersonalityandpotentialities.Themainpurposeoftheeducationistobringstudentspracticalpotentialitiesintofullplay.Quality-orientededucationcanteachstudentsnowtofacedifficultiesandsolveproblemsindependently.Fromtheabovecomparisonbetweenexam-orientededucationandquality-orientededucation,wefindthatthelatteroneissuperior（表明作者的倾向性）.Soitistimeforouruniversitiesandcollegestobringquality-orientededucationintostudentsdailylife（提出建议）.范文评析：FalengCultShouldBeBannedinOurCountryFalengCult,asuperstitiousorganization,wasabolishedbyourgovernmentlastyear（用事实陈述作引言）.ItsabolitionwasapplaudedbymostoftheChinesepeopleandtheoverseasChinese（隐含式中心思想，表达作者支持取缔法轮功的态度）.FalengCultshouldbebannedbecauseitworkedagainstscience,societyandhumanbeing（段落主题紧扣全文主题思想，并对段落内容加以限定）.FalengCultworkedagainstsciencebyimplantingpseudo-scientificideasinitsbelievers（层次名1-“反本|•学“）.Itsmaindoctrinewasthatwhenpeoplewereilltheyshouldntgotoseethedoctorsandtakeanymedicine,butstayathomeandpracticetheFalengGongforrecovery.Suchadoctrineresultedinthedeathofmanypeople（举例说明其危害性）.Falengcultworkedagainstsociety（层次句2-“反社会”）.Iturgeditspractitionertodemonstrateprotestsagainstthenon-believerswhocriticizeditsabnormalbehaviorsandsomenewsagenciesthatexposeditsillegalactivities.Itspurposewastomakechaosinoursocietyandunderminethestabilityofournormalsocialandfamilylife（举例说明其危害性）.FalengCultalsoworkedagainsthumanbeings（层次句3-“反人类”）.ManyfollowersturnedouttobesoindifferenttonormaldailylifeafterpracticingFalengGongthatmanyfamilieswerebroughttotheedgeofbread-up.ManytragediesprovedthatFalengCultwasreallyanevilorganization（举例说明其危害性）.FalengCultsmotivesareveryvicious（指出其邪恶本质）,therefore,itshouldberootedoutinourcountry（点题，得出结论）。范文评析：IsMoneyAllPowerful?Inmodernsociety,maypeoplearemoney-oriented,theybelieve“moneytalks”andtheytrytheirbesttorunaftermoney（事实陈述法作引言句）.While（转折，表达自己的看法）inmyopinion,moneyisnotallpowerfulinsomeaspects.Ihavesufficientreasonstoexplainmystatementthatmoneyisnotallpowerful（段落主题句用同谓结构重申自己观点，同时又承上启卜）.Withmoney,wecanonlybuysomematerialthings,butnotthespiritualones（层次句1）.Forexample（举例说明金钱的局限性）,wecanbuyabighouse,butwemayfailtohaveafamily;Wemaybuyanymedicinewithmoney,butwemaynothaveagoodhealth.Runningaftermoneysoeagerlyayleadtoviolationsofthelawandbreaksofdiscipline（层次句2,说明追逐金钱的危害性）.Manycriminalsadmitthattheycommittedcrimesjustforthepurposeofmakingmoremoney.Wheninprison,itistoolateforthemtoblamethemselves.Fromtheaboveanalyses,wecanseethatmoneyisnotsopowerful.Therefore,weshouldpossessacorrectattitudetowardsmoneyandtrynottobetheslaveofmoney（得出结论，提出建议）。范文评析：WhyCollegeStudentsHaveDifficultyFindingJobsArecentsurveyshowsthatabout30%collegestudentscantfindasuitablejobaftertheirgraduationfromcollege.Andthenumberseemstobeincreasing（用数据法开头，通过具休数据提出问题）.Thecausationofthisphenomenonliesinthreeaspects（段落主题句，分析其原因，并用三个方面加以限定）.First（原因之一），oursocietycantprovidesufficientlaborforcedivision.Second（原因之二）,theacademicsubjectsofthecollegestudentsfailtomeettheneedsofacertainjob.Whattheyhavelearnedincollegefallsfarbehindthepracticalworkingrequirements.Third（原因之三）,collegestudentsaretooparticularabouttheirfuturejob.Manygraduatesonlywanttohaveajobwithhighsalary.Theyrefusetoworkintheareaofharshlivinganworkingconditions（具体说明）.Theabove-mentionedanalysestellusthatthecausesarevarious.Butifcollegestudentsdonttakepersonalinterestsintoconsiderationtoom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