新高考英语读后续写好心人 修车课件（2021八省联考）

2021八省联考读后续写What’sthefunctionofthefirsttwosentences?Who?Where?What?howthefamilyhelpedmeoutofferedajack→cutasectionoutofabiglog→brokethetireiron→boughtanewtireiron→finishedthejobWhydidthewritermentionthe$20bill?主题：事件脉络——主要体现这一家人对我的帮助（help），

情感上——从sickof转变到happy所以整个故事的主题应是这一家人对我的帮助（help）

我改变对陌生人的看法和认识确定第一段段落大意及情节推断根据两段已给首句的关键词（标红色）和主题（help）确定第一段的主要内容：WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,

thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________首句衔接句：写对女孩问题的回答，回答之前的心里所想——想起来自己还没吃午饭；段尾句衔接：呼应所给的第二段的首句，写我收到了墨西哥家庭给我的一个纸袋。首句衔接句：写我打开纸袋，发现了我给的钱；段尾句衔接：我想把这种互助的行为传递下去，呈现正能量。人物所见、所闻、所思、所说、所做thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunchAftertheyleft

thepaperbagParagraph1WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.细节所思：意识没吃午饭所说：没吃午饭所做：女孩邀请作者加入午饭，作者接过三明治以及纸袋所感：这是吃过最美味的三明治Paragraph2Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.细节所见：纸袋中有三明治，水果和我的钱所感：无限感激所做：放千斤顶和一些常用的工具所想：要像墨西哥一家一样地帮助更多的人Paragraph1WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.1.听到他说的话，我意识到我没有吃午饭。（非谓语+what宾从，主+谓+that宾从）2.老实说工作了几个小时后，我非常饿了。（after+doing,主+系+表）3.感觉到一点尴尬，我回复道，不。（feeling+adj,主+谓...）4.女孩子带着微笑说，过来加入我们吧，墨西哥三明治很美味。（主+谓+with+n,"..."）5.带着感动的泪水在眼睛里打转，我拿过了三明治。（with+n+doing,主+谓+...）6.像一只狼一样的吃了之后，我觉得这是我吃过最美味的三明治。（after+doing...,主+feltthat表从...）7.然后女孩的妈妈放了另一块三明治在一个纸袋中递给我，温柔地说，“拿着，等会再吃，现在我们得走了。”（主+谓1...+and+谓2...,非谓语+...）Paragraph2Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.1.

让我很惊讶的是，袋子里有一块三明治,水果和我给的钱。（what主从+wasthattherewas+主1+主2+given...）2.紧紧地握着纸袋，我定的站在那里，一股暖流涌上我的心头。（非谓语...,主+谓+...,+独立主格：n+doing...）3.我是多么的感激这个帮助我的家庭。（how+adj+主+系+...）4.虽然我在路上遇到的大多数人是冷漠的，但是然而有一些像这个家庭成员一样的人们，他们是多么的乐于助人和体贴。(although+主+定从+系+表，there+be+主+...+定从)5.从那时起，我放一个千斤顶和一些常用的工具在我的小车里。（主+谓+宾+介词短语）6.当在路上遇到需要的人们，我会像这个家人一样竭尽所能地帮助他们。（when+doing...,主+谓+宾+...）7.

只有这样越来越多的人才会有互相帮助。(onlyinthisway,情态动词+主+动原+...)参考范文：

WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.

Hearingwhatshesaid,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavelunch.

Tobehonest,afterworkinghardforseveralhours,Iwassohungry.Feelingabitembarrassed,Ireplied:“no!”Thegirlsaidwithasmile,“Comeon!Joinus.

TheMexiconsandwichisdelicious!”Withmovedtearsrollingaroundmyeyes,Itookthesandwich.

Aftereatingitlikewolf,IfeltthatitwasthetastysandwichthatIhadeverhad.

Whiledining,Italkedaboutmytroubleandfeelingsandtheysharedtheirinterestingstoriesinthelife.

Then,thegirl’smotherhadanothersandwichandsomefruitplaced

inapaperbagandhandedittome,

sayinggently:“Keepitandhaveitlater!Wehadtogonow.”Ishowedmyheartfeltgratitudetothemandsawthemdisappearinmysight.

Aftertheyleft,Igotintomyjeepandopenedthepaperbag.

Whatsurprisedmealotwasthattherewasasandwich,

fruitandthebillgivenbyme.

Holdingthepaperbagtightly,Istoodstill,awarmcurrentrisinginmyheart.

HowgratefulwasItothefamilyhelpingme！AlthoughmostofpeopleImetontheroadwereindifferent,therewerestillsomepeoplelikethisfamilywhowassohelpfulandthoughtful.

Fromthenon,Iplacedajackandsomecommontoolsinmycar.

Whenmeetingpeopleinneedontheroad,

Iwouldtrymybesttohelpthemlikethefamily.

Onlyinthiswaycouldmoreandmorepeoplehelpeachotherinthefuture.

WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.

Hearingwhatshesaid,Isuddenlyrealizedmystomachwasrumblingwithhunger.Feelingabitembarrassed,Ireplied:“no!”

Unexpectedly,Iwasinvitedtohavedinnerwiththem,whichbroughtmetotears.Whenwolfingdown

thesandwich,IfeltthatitwasthemosttastysandwichIhadeverhad.Themothercameupandhandedmeapaperbag

beforeleaving.Ishowedmyheartfeltgratitudetothefamilyandsawthemdisappearinmysight.

Aftertheyleft,Igotintomyjeepandopenedthepaperbag.

Asandwich,fruitandthe

$20bill

appearedinfrontofme.Holdingthepaperbagtightly,Istoodstill,awarmcurrentrisinginmyheart.Regardlessofsomuchindifferenceinthisworld,therewer