人教新目标八年级上册Unit-1Where-did-you-go-on-vacation？话题作文课件

教学目标：亲爱的同学们，通过这节课的学习，你们将能：

掌握以旅行为话题的日记的写作技巧。

1.学会根据该文体进行审题，谋篇及润色；2.学会使用常用的连接词和过渡句,增强文章的连贯性；3.知道如何在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲。教学目标：亲爱的同学们，通过这节课的学习，你们将能：1GoforitGrade8AUnit1Wheredidyougoonvacation?话题作文ATravelDiaryGoforitGrade8A话题作文2Step1SharemytriptoBeijingStep13Task1Watchavideoandanswerquestions.1.Whatplacesofinterestcanyousee?2.HowdoyoulikeBeijing?(名胜古迹)Task1Watchavideoandansw4Task2SharemytriptoBeijing.IarrivedinBeijingbyplaneonAugust20thwithmyfriend.August,20thTask2SharemytriptoBeiji5thePalaceMuseumIlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedalotaboutChinesehistory.

Itwassunnyandhot.Itookquiteafewphotos.IwenttothePalaceMuseum.thePalaceMuseumIlikedthis6Fordinner,IateBeijingduck.Itwasdelicious.BeijingduckI

boughtsomethingspecial,butthethingswerekindofexpensive.Fordinner,IateBeijingduck7hotelIntheevening,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifeltreallytiredbuthappy.hotelIntheevening,wewentb8Step2Writeaboutmy

tripStep29hotandsunnytiredBeijingduckdelicioustakesomephotosbeautifulbuysomethingspecialinterestinglearnsomethingimportantAugust

Wednesday,_________20thTodaytheweatherwas_________________.Iwentto______________________.Itwas___________________________.We_____________________.Ilikedthisplacebecause________________________________.Fordinnerwehad______________.Itwas__________.Intheevening,Ifeltreally_______.AugusthotandsunnythePalaceMuseumbeautifulandinteresting

tooksomephotosIlearnedsomethingimportantBeijingduckdelicioustiredTask1Usethewordsandphrasesintheboxtocompletethediaryentry.hotandsunny10Whendidyougothere?Task2Knowmoreaboutthediary.Wednesday,August20thdateweatherplacetransportation(交通)partner(同伴)activitiessaw…,ate…,learned…,liked/disliked………feelingsHowdidyoufeelaboutit?Whatdid

youdo?Howwastheweather?Wheredidyougo?

Todaytheweatherwashotandsunny.IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful.Wetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.FordinnerwehadBeijing.Itwasdelicious.Intheevening,Ifeltreallytired.Whendidyougothere?Task211

Wednesday,August20thTodaytheweatherwashotandsunny.1.________,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful,2.____wetooksomephotos.Ilikedthisplace3.________Ilearnedsomethingimportant.4.______,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.Intheevening.Ifeltreallytired5._____happy.AtfirstsoThenbutTip1

正确地运用连词使文章更具条理性Task3Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.becauseatfirstbutbecausethensoand

12______________________________________________________________Inaword,itwasagreattrip!IhopetogotoBeijingagain.______________________________________________________________

Todaytheweatherwashotandsunny.Atfirst,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful,sowetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.Then,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.Atlast,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifelttiredbuthappy.IarrivedinBeijingbyplanewithmyfriend.Ireallyhadfunthere.beginning开头body正文end结尾hopefeelings+7分+8分Headplacepeople…Task4Completethearticle(补全文章).Wednesday,August20th

Tip3文章需分三段开头直奔主题正文描述见闻结尾抒发情感______________________________13Task4:Choosetheluckynumbers.

234luckynumbers1Task5:Playagameandbetterthepassage.选择数字完成相应的任务,使文章更完美。.Task4:Choosetheluckynumbe14Wednesday,August20th

Manwhotravelsfarknowsmore.Iliketravelling.SoIarrivedinBeijingbyplanewithmyfriend.Ireallyhadfunthere.

Whatahotandsunnydaytoday!Atfirst,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Thebuildingsweresowonderfulthatwedidn’twanttoleave.Itwasbeautiful,sowetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.Then,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.WhenIsawthedeliciousfood,Icouldn’twaittoeatit.Atlast,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifelttiredbuthappy.Inaword,itwasagreattrip!IlookforwardtogoingtoBeijingagain.

Task6Enjoythetraveldiary.+10分

15Step3KeepyourtraveldiaryStep316________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task1Keepadiaryaboutyourtrip.你假期去了有趣的地方吗？你玩得开心吗？你在那里的所见所闻所做所感是什么？

请写一篇你自己的旅行日记，80词左右。评分依据：1.字迹工整，书写美观2.结构完整，信息齐全3.语言规范，格式正确4.词汇优美，句式多样______________________________17________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task2Showyourdiary.______________________________18Homework课后将旅行日记发送到微信（WeChat）上和朋友分享。Homework课后将旅行日记发送到微信（WeChat）上和19Lovetraveling!Lovelife!Lovesharing!爱旅游！爱分享！爱生活！Lovetraveling!Lovelife!Love201.Whatasunnydayitwas!2.Howsunnyitwas!Itwasasunnyday.改变语气(+2)(+3)1.Whatasunnydayitwas!2.21Thebuildingswerebeautiful.Ididn’twanttoleave.1.Thebuildingswerebeautiful,soIdidn’twanttoleave.2.ThebuildingsweresobeautifulthatIdidn’twanttoleave.合并句子:(+2)(+3)Thebuildingswerebeautiful.222.Manwhotravelsfarknowsmore.1.读万卷书不如行万里路。大声朗读美句:(+3)2.我期盼下一次再去。Ilookforwardtogoingthereagain.2.Manwhotravelsfarknowsm23(+2)给下面的句子选择最佳评论：WehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.A.Iforgotitstaste.B.WhenIsawthedeliciousfood,Icouldn’twaittoeatit.迫不及待地(+2)给下面的句子选择最佳评论：WehadBeiji24

A.ItooktheplanetoBeijingwithmyfamily.Ireallyhadfunthere.

B.ItooktheplanetoBeijingwithmyfamily.Ihadreallyfunthere.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.

C.Hello,everyone!IamhappytotalkaboutmytriptoBeijing.Tip2根据不同的文体选择合适的开头。A.ItooktheplanetoBeijin25教学目标：亲爱的同学们，通过这节课的学习，你们将能：

掌握以旅行为话题的日记的写作技巧。

1.学会根据该文体进行审题，谋篇及润色；2.学会使用常用的连接词和过渡句,增强文章的连贯性；3.知道如何在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲。教学目标：亲爱的同学们，通过这节课的学习，你们将能：26GoforitGrade8AUnit1Wheredidyougoonvacation?话题作文ATravelDiaryGoforitGrade8A话题作文27Step1SharemytriptoBeijingStep128Task1Watchavideoandanswerquestions.1.Whatplacesofinterestcanyousee?2.HowdoyoulikeBeijing?(名胜古迹)Task1Watchavideoandansw29Task2SharemytriptoBeijing.IarrivedinBeijingbyplaneonAugust20thwithmyfriend.August,20thTask2SharemytriptoBeiji30thePalaceMuseumIlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedalotaboutChinesehistory.

Itwassunnyandhot.Itookquiteafewphotos.IwenttothePalaceMuseum.thePalaceMuseumIlikedthis31Fordinner,IateBeijingduck.Itwasdelicious.BeijingduckI

boughtsomethingspecial,butthethingswerekindofexpensive.Fordinner,IateBeijingduck32hotelIntheevening,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifeltreallytiredbuthappy.hotelIntheevening,wewentb33Step2Writeaboutmy

tripStep234hotandsunnytiredBeijingduckdelicioustakesomephotosbeautifulbuysomethingspecialinterestinglearnsomethingimportantAugust

Wednesday,_________20thTodaytheweatherwas_________________.Iwentto______________________.Itwas___________________________.We_____________________.Ilikedthisplacebecause________________________________.Fordinnerwehad______________.Itwas__________.Intheevening,Ifeltreally_______.AugusthotandsunnythePalaceMuseumbeautifulandinteresting

tooksomephotosIlearnedsomethingimportantBeijingduckdelicioustiredTask1Usethewordsandphrasesintheboxtocompletethediaryentry.hotandsunny35Whendidyougothere?Task2Knowmoreaboutthediary.Wednesday,August20thdateweatherplacetransportation(交通)partner(同伴)activitiessaw…,ate…,learned…,liked/disliked………feelingsHowdidyoufeelaboutit?Whatdid

youdo?Howwastheweather?Wheredidyougo?

Todaytheweatherwashotandsunny.IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful.Wetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.FordinnerwehadBeijing.Itwasdelicious.Intheevening,Ifeltreallytired.Whendidyougothere?Task236

Wednesday,August20thTodaytheweatherwashotandsunny.1.________,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful,2.____wetooksomephotos.Ilikedthisplace3.________Ilearnedsomethingimportant.4.______,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.Intheevening.Ifeltreallytired5._____happy.AtfirstsoThenbutTip1

正确地运用连词使文章更具条理性Task3Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.becauseatfirstbutbecausethensoand

37______________________________________________________________Inaword,itwasagreattrip!IhopetogotoBeijingagain.______________________________________________________________

Todaytheweatherwashotandsunny.Atfirst,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwasbeautiful,sowetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.Then,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.Itwasdelicious.Atlast,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifelttiredbuthappy.IarrivedinBeijingbyplanewithmyfriend.Ireallyhadfunthere.beginning开头body正文end结尾hopefeelings+7分+8分Headplacepeople…Task4Completethearticle(补全文章).Wednesday,August20th

Tip3文章需分三段开头直奔主题正文描述见闻结尾抒发情感______________________________38Task4:Choosetheluckynumbers.

234luckynumbers1Task5:Playagameandbetterthepassage.选择数字完成相应的任务,使文章更完美。.Task4:Choosetheluckynumbe39Wednesday,August20th

Manwhotravelsfarknowsmore.Iliketravelling.SoIarrivedinBeijingbyplanewithmyfriend.Ireallyhadfunthere.

Whatahotandsunnydaytoday!Atfirst,IwenttothePalaceMuseum.Thebuildingsweresowonderfulthatwedidn’twanttoleave.Itwasbeautiful,sowetooksomephotos.IlikedthisplacebecauseIlearnedsomethingimportant.Then,wehadBeijingduckfordinner.WhenIsawthedeliciousfood,Icouldn’twaittoeatit.Atlast,wewentbacktothehotel.Ifelttiredbuthappy.Inaword,itwasagreattrip!IlookforwardtogoingtoBeijingagain.

Task6Enjoythetraveldiary.+10分

40Step3KeepyourtraveldiaryStep341________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Task1Keepadiaryaboutyourtrip.你假期去了有趣的地方吗？你玩得开心吗？你在那里的所见所闻所做所感是什么？

请写一篇你自己的旅行日记，80词左右。评分依据：1.字迹工整，书写美观2.结构完整，信息齐全3.语言规范，格式正确4.词汇优美，句式多样______________________________42_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________