2022年九年级英语下册Unit7WorkforPeace写作能力提升练习题课件新版冀教版

写作能力提升练冀教版九年级下UNIT7WorkforPeace本单元的话题是“WorkforPeace”。主要让学生学会在人与人之间的交往中如何处理人与人之间的矛盾，如何化解人与人之间的争吵及介绍解决矛盾的建议及体会等。短语：dealwith,beoutofservice,textmessage,breakdown,jumpin,intheend,provide...for,reachanagreement,take...as,sincethen,afterall,meanto,haveafightwith素材典藏句型：1.Istillrememberwhathappenedbetween...and...2.Beingfriends,youmustunderstandeachother.3.Igetangrybecause...4.Then...realized...andsaidsorryto...5.Thanksto...everythingiswellnow.6.Ihopewecanbefriendsforever.7.Ihopewecangetalongwellwitheachother.衔接词：and,or,but,so等假如两位好朋友John和Lucy因为琐事吵架了，对此你想说些什么呢？请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文。Isentamessagetotellyouthetimewaschanged!ButIdidn’tseethemessage!Imissedthewonderfulgame.经典例题要求：1.简单描述图片信息﹔2.提出对朋友间友好相处的建议（至少2条);3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名﹔4.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。JohnandLucyhadafightwitheachother.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题指导】1.体裁：记叙文2.人称：第一人称和第三人称3.时态：主要使用一般过去时【思路构建】开篇点题JohnandLucyhadafightwitheathother.具体描写JohnsentamessagetotellLucythatthegametimewaschanged,butLucydidn’tcheckhermessageintimeandmissedthegame.表达看法Iwanttosay,friendsaremoreimportantthanagame.【范文赏析】JohnandLucyhadafightwitheachother.JohnsentamessagetotellLucythatthegametimewaschanged,butLucydidn’tcheckhermessageintimeandmissedthegame.ForLucy,IwanttotellherthatJohnreallytriedtogetintouchwithher,buthefailed.Shedidn’tcheckhermessagecarefully,sothat’sherfault,notJohn’s.ForJohn,wheneveryoneagreesonatime,itshouldn’tbechanged.Ifithasto,hemusttelleveryonefacetoface.Sonexttimehemaygotoherdirectly.Then,Iwanttosay,friendsaremoreimportantthanagame.点评：1.开篇点题，说明故事发生的背景。2.正文按照起因—经过—结果的顺序叙述。3.文章运用trytodo，getintouchwith，agreeon，facetoface，moreimportant等短语，使文章内容更丰富，充分体现了小作者扎实的语言功底。假如你是李华，昨天你看到好友Angela的微信朋友圈，发现她因为使用手机与父母发生了争执，现在与父母沟通存在一些问题。请你针对此事给Angela写一封电子邮件，给她一些建议。提示：1.What’syouropinion?2.Whatshouldshedo?写作实践要求：1.邮件中须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2.邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3.词数80左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）DearAngela,Icanfullyunderstandyoursituation.Inmyopinion,__________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearAngela,Icanfullyunderstandyoursituation.Inmyopinion,neitheryounoryourparentsarewrong.Youneedtounderstandeachother.First,youshouldcommunicatewithyourparentsandtellthemyouwillcontrolyourselfandtryyourbesttouseyourmobilephoneless.Second,youshouldtalktothem________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________moreoftenandtrytounderstandthem.Besides,youshouldbepatientwithyourparents