读后续写练习写作讲义-高三英语二轮复习

读后续写练习写作讲义阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（一）JimmyGilleeceownsabarinWrightsvilleBeach,NorthCarolina.Heisapersonwhoknewhowtolendahand,butwhatpeoplearoundhimdidnotknowwasthatthismanwasalsocapableofgoingtheextramilejusttohelpsomeoneinneed.Itwasaregulardayathisbar,whichturnedouttobeadaythatwouldchangehislifeforever.Hefoundoutthatoneofhiscustomershadlostherwalletatthebar,andinsideitwasapreciousthing:thelady'sweddingring.

Jimmyinstantlyrecognizedthewoman’spanic.Shewantedtogetherweddingringback.Shewascrazy,reallyupsetaboutit.Andso,thebarownermadesuretoprovidewhateverhelphecouldtofindthewoman'sring.Heevenmadeithismissiontofindthewoman'sweddingring.ThenJimmy'smissionbegan.Inordertofindoutwhatexactlyhappened,Jimmystartedathoroughscanofthesecuritycamerasinhisestablishment.Hewatchedthreehours’worthofsecurityfootagefromsixcameras,scanningeverydetailandcloselyanalyzingwhathappenedthatledtothelossofthewoman'swallet.Inoneoftherecordedclips(片段),Jimmyfinallysawthatthewomanlostherwalletonabenchoutsidethebar,withasuspiciousmanwalkingnearby.Afewmomentslater,themanapproachedthebenchandtookthewoman'swallet.SosearchingforthethiefwasJimmy’snextmoveItwasnotenoughforJimmytofindoutwhathappenedtothelostwallet.Nowthathehadanimageofthethief,thebarownermadeithisnextmissiontosearchfortheguyandgetthewalletbackfromhim.Jimmyfiguredoutwhotheguywasandmadehimadmitwhathedidtothewallet.Thethiefadmittedthathetookthecashanddroppedthewalletintoanoceanchannel.Atthispoint,mostpeoplewouldprobablystopandregretfullytelltheladythatthewalletcouldn'tbefoundanymore.

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ButJimmywasnotlikemostpeople.Andindeed,Jimmyalsoextendedhelpnotonlytothewomanbutalsotothethiefwhotookthewallet.

参考范文ButJimmywasnotlikemostpeople.Unbelievableasitmayseem,Jimmywenttogreaterlengthsandhireddiverstosearchthewatersthoroughlyuntiltheyfoundthelostwallet.Hewasindeedseriousaboutfindingthewoman'swalletandmakinggoodonhismissiontofindthering.Insideitwastheweddingringthatshebadlywantedtorecover.ThewomanthankedJimmygreatly.But,themansomehowfeltthathestillhadmoretodo.

Andindeed,Jimmyalsoextendedhelpnotonlytothewomanbutalsotothethiefwhotookthewallet.Thepersonwhotookthewalletwasa17-year-oldteenager.Theyoungmanwasseparatedfromhismotherandwaslivinginthewoods.HewasdesperatetosurviveasahomelesspersonwhenhefoundthewalletthateventuallyledhimtoJimmy,Jimmydidn’thandhimovertothepolice.Instead,heinvitedtheteentomoveinwithhisfamilyandmadehimpartofhisfamily.Theteenhadnothingbutgratitudeforthekindman,whichinspiredhimtodobetterinlife.

（二）ColddrewmanytoSouthAfricaanditwasgoldhuthasjustrestoredmyfaithinthischaoticnation.AsaBritishlivinginCapeTown,Irecentlyreceivedthecallthatmyfatherhadpassedaway.AfterthefuneralinEngland,mymothergavemeagoldring,wornfordecadesbyDadandbeforehim,byhisownfather.I’veneverreallybeenintojewelry,yetwhenIsippedtheringonmyfingeritfeltsomehowright.Consoled(抚慰)inmygriefbyDad’sbelovedring,IflewhometoSouthAfrica.AllwentwelluntilawindySaturdaywhenIwalkedonourlocalbeach.AssooftenintheCape,itwasfiercelywindy.WhenIgothomeandlitthefire,Ilookedatmylefthand.Theringwasn’tthere.Awfulemotionswashedoverme—shock,horror,remorse,anger,powerlessness,guilt—apotentiallifesentenceofguilt.Hopingthatithadnotbeendroppedonthebeach,Ilookedeverywhereelse.Maybethecar?Isearchedeverycornerofitbutfruitless.Maybethehouse?Nothing.Itmusthavebeenthebeach,anareastretching200metresfromthecarpark—thering,averysmallneedleinanocean.Iwasoutatfirstlightthenextdaybutwithnoluck,discouraged.Myonlyhopewasthis—thewindhadbeensostrongthattheringcouldhavebeenburied.Itmightjustbethere,somewhere.IsworetorecoveritnomatterhowmuchIwouldpay,soIcontactedlocalmetaldetectorusers.Twocametohelp,oneevenlendingmehisgear(设备).“Takeaslongasyouneed,”hesaid.Daysofsearchingpassedquickly,wefoundanoldmobilephone,a50centcoinandalotofbottletops.Withmyhopesfiling,athirdrejectionist(探测者),Allan,calledtohelpme.

Paragraph1:Threedayslater,Alan,withhisacutegear,arrived.Paragraph2:Andtherewasagreatermiracle.

参考范文Threedayslater,Alan,withhisacutegear,arrived.Alanhadblueeyesandbrownhairandwasveryhandsome.Iwasgladtoseehimcoming.ItoldhimthedetailsofthematterandsaidIreallycouldn'tlivewithoutthering.Hepromisedthathewoulddohisbesttohelpmefindthering.Thenextday,webegantoact.Hisgearwassosensitivethatevensmallmetalobjectscouldbedetected.WeexploredtheareawhereImighthavelosttheringinchbyinch,havingthefaiththatwecouldfindit.Fourdayslater,wefoundmyringunderaplasticbottlecap.ThemomentIsawthering,Iwasveryexcited.Andtherewasagreatermiracle.Beforewefoundmyring,wefoundadiamondringengravedwith"Debbie".Itwasaveryexpensivering.IknewitwasimportantforDebbie.ItookpicturesofitandpostedapostonFacebook.Soonafter,IreceivedanemailfromDebbie,whichsaidthattheringwashersandwasgiventoherbyherhusbandwhentheygotmarriedtenyearsago.Debbiethankedmeforhelpingherfindthering.Sheneverexpectedtofindherownringaftertenyears.Whatluck!Whenshegotitback,shecriedexcitedly.

（三）ItwasJuly2014.Weweregettingreadytomoveinanewhousewhenmyhusbandbecameveryill.Hehadtospendnineweeksinhospital,leavingmetodoeverythinginournewhome.Bynightfall,Iwasworn-out.OnesucheveningasIreachedforsomecreamformyhands,Inoticedmybluebirddiamond

weddingring-whichIhadwornforalmosthalfacentury-wasmissing!Myfingerwasnaked!Iwasextremelyshockedandsad.Ilookedineverydrawerandinthecar.Noluck.Myfamilytoldmetogobackalongthesameroute.Thatwouldbeatask,forthatdayIhadgoneshopping,gotmycarfixed,andgoneforaneyeexam.Isat,mindwanderingbackintimewhenIhadfirstmetmyhusband.Iwasfiveandoneday,mydadtookmetothetown.Ontheway,wecameuponalargeherdofcattle.Iwavedtotheyoungestrider,whoseemedtobenine,buthejustturnedaway.Nextmymemorytravelledtomyhighschool.Themostexcitingthingthenwastodressupandwalkthestreetsofourtownwithmyclassmates.Itwasonsuchadaythatablackcarwentbyandapassengeryelled,“Girl,wantaridewithus”Icouldhardlybelieveit:amongthepeopleinthecarwastheboywhohadn'trespondedtomywave13yearsbefore!Buthewasn'tignoringmenow.Ourloveaffairbegan.Heofferedtheringafewmonthslater.Thediamondwassmall,butmyfuturehusbandchoseitforitsperfectionandshine.Mydaydreampassed.MydaughtercameandsuggestedIshopforanewring.“Wheredoyou

wanttogo?”Sheasked.“Pawnshop(当铺),”Isaid.Itoldhertherewasonecloseby.

Paragraph1Attheshop,wefoundfivejewelrycounterstolookthrough.Paragraph2Theshopassistantgotamagnifyingglass(放大镜)outandsaid,“It’saBluebird.”

参考范文1Attheshop,wefoundfivejewelrycounterstolookthough.Thiswouldbeanexerciseinpatience.Wepickedoutthreeringsfromthefirstcounter.Onewastoobig,anothertoosmall,andthethirdtooexpensive.Sowecontinuedtothenextcounters,andthistimeIchosetwomorerings.Ipickedupthefirst.AsIslippeditonmyfinger,Ishouted,“Here’smylostring!Mybluebirddiamond!Seehowitjustfits.”Everyoneintheshopturnedtotheyoungmanhelpingus.Theshopassistantgotamagnifyingglassoutandsaid,“It’sabluebird.”I’mstillinshockthatIfoundmyring!Iwantedtoknowhowmyringhadendedupthere.HowdidIknowtogotothatpawnshop?Wasitintuition?Theworkofangels?Justcoincidence?I’mnotsureI’lleverknow.ButIdidlearnthatsometimesthingsaregoneforawhilebeforetheyreappeartobeclaimed.Justlikemyhusband.Andjustlikemyring.

参考范文2Paragraph1：Attheshop，wefoundfivejewelrycounterstolookthrough.Thereareva