BEC中级写作评分标准

BEC中级写作评分标准BEC中级写作评分标准BEC中级写作评分标准资料仅供参考文件编号：2022年4月BEC中级写作评分标准版本号：A修改号：1页次：1.0审核：批准:发布日期：BEC中级写作评分标准：(语言、语法、组织和文体)级别第一部分分数第二部分分数5全部完成答题要求所有内容点都已包括在内并在答题要求允许的情况下加以发挥语言规范、自然；错误最少，均属小错。多样化的语言结构和丰富的词汇量。组织效果好，注意前后呼应。语域和格式完全适当。给读者的印象极佳。9或10分18或20分4较好的完成答题要求所有内容点都处理得不错。大体准确；运用复杂语言时有错误。结构合理，用词准确。大体上组织较好，注意逻辑关系。语域和格式总体来说适当。给读者的印象良好。7或8分14或16分3尚能达到答题要求所有的主要内容点已包括进去，遗漏了一些次要的内容。出现一些错误，但不妨碍交流。结构和词汇掌握范围适度。组织和安排总的来说令人满意。语域和格式尚可，虽然并不完全成功。给读者的印象较好。5或6分10或12分2不能完全达到答题要求遗漏了一些主要的内容点或者处理得不充分，可能有些不切题。有时错误影响清楚交流，错误较多，使读者感到迷惑。结构、词汇掌握范围有限。内容条理不清、不连贯，造成理解困难。语域和格式不适当。给读者的印象不佳。3或4分6或8分1未能达到答题要求显著的内容遗漏/或大量内容不相关，可能由于对题目要求的误解。严重不规范，经常出现基本错误。题目要求的结构和词汇几乎没有提到。缺乏组织，造成交流失败。几乎没有使用适当的语域和格式。给读者的印象极差。1或2分2或4分0什么要求也没达到。字数少于所需字数的25%，或是完全不能辨认或是完全不切题。0分0分评分五个方面：1content2language3structure&vocabulary4organisation展开论述上面的5个方面1内容的完整性2语言6C原则1．准确(correctness)包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；使用精确措词，传达准确信息；正确地使用语法和标点符号；拼写正确。(1)恰当的语言风格请比较下面两组例词：FormalInformalapproximatelyinquireascertainobtainassistparticipateconstructpurchasecontributesufficientdifficultutilizeAboutAskfindoutreceivehelpsharebuildbuygiveenoughharduse(2)准确的措词和信息下面列出的是一系列极易混淆的单词及词组，请注意区分：alot/allotallright/alrightcannot/cannotdifferentfrom/differentthan.dueto/becauseofeffect/affectfewer/lesslie/layprincipal/principlethat/whichtheir/them/they'rewaitfor/waitonwho/whom(3)正确的语法和标点符号

(4)正确的拼写2．清楚(Clarity)(1)逻辑布局(LogicalOrganization)常用的逻辑布局方法包括：①因果关系(Cause&Effect)②时间顺序(ChronologicalDevelopment)③序列顺序(SequentialDevelopment)④比较(Comparison)⑤一般到特殊(FromGeneraltoSpecific)⑥特殊到一般(FromSpecifictoGeneral)(2)合理构架句群与段落(Well-WrittenSentences&Paragraphs)例句：修改前:MarshallCorporationwasfoundedfortyyearsago,anditnowhasbranchofficesinfourstates,anditemploysnearly400individuals.修改后:MarshallCorporationwasfoundedfortyyearsago.Withbranchofficesinfourstates,itnowemploysnearly400individuals.(3)统一性与一致性(UnityandCoherence)(4)强调(Emphasis)①位置②重复③数量④技巧(5)将句中关系紧密的词尽量靠近。比较下面三对句子：A.TheyboughtabicycleinBeijinginasmallshopwhichcosts$.Theyboughtabicyclefor$25.00inasmallshopinBeijing.B.Hewaswarnednottodrinkwatereveninarestaurantwhichhadnotbeenboiled.Hewaswarnednottodrinkwaterwhichhadnotbeenboiled.C.Thosewhoworkrapidlygetillintheseconditions.Thosewhoworkintheseconditionsrapidlygetill.(6)避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个字。Weshalltakeafirmlinewiththefirm．Weshalltakeastronglinewiththefilm．3．简洁(Conciseness)A.Wehavebeguntoexportourmachinetocountriesabroad.Wehavebeguntoexportourmachines.B.IntheeventthatyouspeaktoMr.Woodinregardtoproduction,askhimtogiveconsiderationtothedeliveryschedule.IfyouspeaktoMr.Woodaboutproduction,askhimtoconsiderthedeliveryschedule.C.Werequirefurniturewhichisofthenewtype.Werequirenew-typefurniture.使用简洁的语言(Usesimplelanguage)尽量使用避免使用please willyoubegoodenoughtoprefer expressapreferenceforbecause forthereasonthat(2)少用陈词滥调(Omittriteexpressions)asthecasemaybeithascometomyattentionatanearlyageavailyourselfofthisopportunityprevioustocrackofdawnpursuanttoyourrequesttakethelibertytoduetothefactthatthankingyouinadvanceenclosedhereinthisistoinformyouunderseparatecoverwithkindestregardsIwishtostate避免冗长的表达方式和不必要的重复(avoidwordyexpressions&unnecessaryrepetition)。Wordy Concise1.Wewouldliketo please2.ForthemonthofAugust forAugust3.Pursuanttotheendofthisweek now4.Alongperiodoftime alongtime5.Atthistime now6.Isatthistime is7.Theweightwashigherthan theweightwasgreaterthan8.Iexpectedittobe expected9.Duringtheyearof1995 during199510.Forthedevelopmentof fordeveloping11.InthecityofDallas inDallas12.Theproblemwasthatthecarwouldnot thecarwouldnotstartstart13.Squareinshape square14.inaccordancewithyourrequest yourequested15.Signonthefrontofthisform signthisform16.Duringthetimethat while17.Consensusofopinion weagree18.Rememberthefactthat remember19,Heldameeting met20.thisisthesituationatthistime now(4)删改无关紧要的成份(Removeunneededfacts)A.Itshouldbenotedthatthisisthebestwecando,B.Foryourinformationweencloseacatalogue.C.Pleasebeadvisedthatwehavereceivedyourinvoice.1.assoonaspossible byJuly102.asyouindicatedinyourletter asyouindicated3.atalltimes always4.atthistime now5.continuetoutilizetheoldformuntil startusingthenewformonFebruarysuchtimeasthenewformisavailable 6.despitethefactthat despite7.forthemonthofApril forApril8.forobviousreasonthat because9.Iwouldaskthatyou pleaseI0.inconjunctionwith hemererecentpast heunlikelyeventthat heunlikelyeventthatIamunabletoifIamlate,pleasedelaythemeetingbeontime,pleasedelaythemeeting14.inviewofthefactthat because15.itwillbegreatlyappreciatedifyou please16.ourproductionofthenewproductwill productionwillbeginonJuly1commenceonJuly117.pleasebeadvisedthatweexpectyouto pleasereviewthecontractreviewtheenclosedcontract(5)多使用主动语态的句子结构以明确表达意思。PaymentoftheiraccountswillbemadebyJohnsonsnextweek．Johnsonswillpaytheiraccountsnextweek．4．具体(Concreteness)尽可能地提供明确、具体的信息。A.Thesebrakescanstopacarwithinashortdistance.TheseGoodsonpowerbrakescanstopa2-toncarwithin24feet.B.Wehopetheequipmentwillbedeliveredtoourcompanyassoonaspossible.PleasedelivertheequipmenttoourcompanybeforenextFriday.C.Sheisafasttypist.Shetypesatthefastrateof85wordsperminute.(2)使用具体词汇A.Wehavenohesitationinadvisingyou…Weadviseyou…B.Thepreparationofnewpricescaleisinhand.Newpricescalesarebeingpreparedthisweek.C.Duetotheunusualnatureoftherequest,…Astherequestisunusual,…agreatdealoftime,bad,large,good,small,around,old,convenient,young,little,majority,minority,most,less5．完整(Completeness)自查：谁(Who)什么(What)什么时候(When)在哪里(Where)为什么(Why)怎么样(How)6．礼貌(Courtesy)例如：DearMrs.Walters,Becauseyoudelayedsolonginyourresponse,ModelGSFisoffstock.Ifyouareinterested,wehavesomesimilarmodelsonhandYourstruly,修改：DearMrs.WaltersIfIhadknownyourneedsbeforeMay20,IcouldhaveshippedModelGSPimmediately.However,thespringsaledrainedourstock.TheModelGSK,asimilarinstrument,isinstock,andyoucouldhaveitatthesamepriceastheGSF.Itnormallysellsfor$10,000more.wewillshipitassoonasyougiveustheword.Yourssincerely使用礼貌友好的词汇A.说“Thankyou",例如:Thankyouforyourletterofyesterday.Thankyouforyourpromptreply.Thankyouforhelpingusinthisrespect.Thankyouforyourinformation.(2)体谅对方的写作态度(You-Attitude)Writeremphasis: WeareshippingyourorderonFriday.Readeremphasis: YouwillreceiveyourorderbyMonday,October10.Writeremphasis: Toreduceourcosts,wearechangingthebillingsystem.Readeremphasis: Toprovideyouwithclearrecords,wearechangingourbillingsystem.Writeremphasis: Iwaspleasedtohearthattheprojectwascompleted.Readeremphasis: CongratulationsonsuccessfullycompletingtheprojectWriteremphasis: Weregretthatyouclosedyouraccountwithusaweekago.Webelievethatpeoplemaycomebacktoourbankagainsoonerorlatersincewehaveagoodcreditamongourcustomers.Readeremphasis: Aweekagoyouclosedyouraccountwithus.Whateverthereason,wearepleasedtohaveplayedsomesmallpartinyourprogram.Youarecordiallyinvitedtouseour'otherservicesasoccasionmayrequire.(3)措辞得体(AppropriateWording)a．避免采用消极性的词汇或句式NegativeWording: TheofficeisclosedafterfourO'clock,PositiveWording: TheofficeisopenuntilfourO'clock.NegativeWording: WhenIreceivedyourcomplaint,Icheckedourrecords.PositiveWording: WhenIreceivedyourletter,Icheckedourrecords.NegativeWording: Becauseyoufailedtoconnectthecable,thepicturewasblurred.PositiveWording: ThepicturewasblurredbecausetheV-2cablewasnotconnectedtotheterminal.NegativeWording: Youdidnotreadmyrecentletter.PositiveWording: PleaserefertomyJune10thletter.NegativeWording: TheExecutiveBoarddidnotreceivenotification.PositiveWording: SeveralmembersoftheExecutiveBoardinquiredaboutthetimeofourDecembermeeting.Willyoupleasesendthemafollow-upNegativeWording: Yourletterwasnotclear.PositiveWording: IwouldappreciateanoutlineofourmarketingdifferencesthatyoumentionedinyourOctober14thletter.b.有失礼貌的言词Wedenyyourclaim complaintWedonotbelieve confusionWearenotsure contraryWefinditdifficulttounderstand contrivanceWeexpect delinquentWeinsist denyWeareforced disagreeableWetakeissue exasperateYouforgot failureYouneglected ignoranceYoufailedto impatienceYoumisunderstood incompetentYoumust incredibleYoushouldknow inexcusableYoudonothave inferenceYouaredelinquent insincereYouinsistthat insinuateYoudidnotsay insultingYourignoring intolerableYourcreditrefusal irresponsibleYourrecentcomplaint irritatedYourfailureto lackYourmisunderstanding neglectYourneglectfulattitude objectionYourdisregardfor obnoxiousYourinsinuation offensiveYourlackofcommunication unbelievableYourdelinquentaccount uncooperative(4)避免使用有性别歧视之嫌的词语A．用“person”代替第三人称单数。例如:Insteadof: Pleasesharethisreportwithyoursupervisor.Hewillfinditinteresting.Say: Pleasesharethisreportwithyoursupervisor,whowillfinditinteresting.B．有一些常用的商务英语词汇有性别歧视之嫌，应该稍加改变。InsteadofSayBusinessmanworkmenChairmanForemenSalesmanSpokesmanStockboyWorkmanbusinesspersonemployees/workerchairpersonsupervisorssalesrepresentative/salespersonspokespersonstockclerkemployee/worker(5)及时答复(TimelyResponse)例：Wewillexamineyourcameratodeterminetheshutter-responseproblemandhaveitbacktoyouwithinthreeweeks,ifrepairsaxeneeded,Iwillcallyouforapprovaltomaketherepairs.例：Mr.Smithisoutoftheofficeuntiltheendofthemonth.Iamsurehewillbeabletoprovideyouwithalloftheinformationyourequestedwhenhereturns.连贯和衔接（一）连贯(coherence)常见连接词有：1表示罗列增加First,second,third,First,then/next,afterthat/next,finallyForonething…foranother…,On(the)onehand…ontheotherhand,Besides/what’smore/inaddition/furthermore/moreover/another/also,Especially/Inparticular,2表示时间顺序now,atpresent,recently,after,afterwards,afterthat,afterawhile,inafewdays,atfirst,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,later,next,finally,immediately,soon,suddenly,allofasudden,atthatmoment,assoonas,themomentformnowon,fromthenon,atthesametime,meanwhile,till,not…until,before,after,when,while,asduring,3表示解释说明now,inaddition,forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,moreoverfurthermore,infact,actually4表示转折关系but,however,while,though,or,otherwise,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,incontrast,despite,inspiteof,eventhough,except(for),instead,ofcourse,afterall,5表示并列关系or,and,also,too,notonly…butalso,aswellas,both…and,either…or,neither…nor6表示因果关系because,becauseof,since,nowthat,as,thanksto…,dueto…,therefore,asaresult(of),otherwise,so…that,such…that7表示条件关系as(so)longas,onconditionthat,if,unless8表示让步关系though,although,as,evenif,eventhough,whether…or…,however,whoever,whatever,whichever,wherever,whenever,nomatterhow(who,what,which,where,when,whom)9表示举例forexample,forinstance,suchas…,take…forexample10表示比较besimilarto,similarly,thesameas,incontrast,comparedwith(to)…justlike,justas,11表示目的forthisreason,,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto,12表示强调indeed,infact,surely,certainly,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,aboveall,13表示概括归纳inaword,inshort,inbrief,onthewhole,generallyspeaking,inmyopinion,asfarasIknow,Asweallknow,ashasbeenstated,asIhaveshown,finally,atlast,insummary,inconclusion,（二）衔接(cohesion)1返指（referringback）例：Davisopenedadoor.“Hereisyourroom.Iamafraiditisabituntidy.”Hepickedadirtyhandkerchiefoffthefloorandstuffeditinadrawer.Thekeepercamelopingsoftlyupthelanewiththedogpaddingathisheelsandwewatchedthemthroughthehedgeastheywentby.Iheldherveryclose.Mycheekwasagainsthers.例：Thewomenwereaskedtoleave.Someofthemrefused.Theearthquakekilled24,000peopleandinsured77,000.例：Amanandawomanwerestrugglingupthedune.Themanworeshorts.Thewomanworeaprintdress.2预指（referringforward）有多种方法可用来指代将要提及的事务。例如：Thischapterwillfollowthesamepatternasthepreviousone.Inthenextchapter,wewillexaminethistheoryindetail.Theoverlapcanbeseeninthetablebelow.3省略（Ellipsis）例如：Theycandistinguishfinerdetailthanwecan.例如：Theywouldstopiftheycould.IneverdidgotoStratford,althoughIprobablyshouldhave.例如：Ithinkwewantitmorethantheydo.例如：AtlastheagreedtodowhatIaskedhimto.文体：非正式文体Thanksforyourletter.Igotit14Sept.I