定语从句在写作中的应用课件

AttributiveClauseinwriting

ByDingSongjieNo.3HighSchoolAttributiveClauseByDingSong1AbeautifulAnappleOneonthemountainwithacatsleepingunderitstandingbesideariverplantedbymymomwhichIplantedlastyearakindofplantAbeautifulAnappleOneonthe2定语从句

在写作中的简单应用定语从句

在写作中的简单应用3ateacheradayNo.3highschoolwhenthat/whichwherethat/whichWho/whoseateacheradayNo.3highsc4Thosepeoplearethehappiest.Thosepeoplemakeothershappy.Thosepeoplewhomakeothershappyarethehappiest.

─KarlMarxThosepeoplearethehappiest.5Heisthebestgeneral.Hemakesthefewestmistakes.Hewhomakesthefewestmistakesisthebestgeneral.-----HamiltonHeisthebestgeneral.Hewho6Godhelpthosepeople.Thosepeoplehelpthemselves.GodhelpthosewhohelpthemselvesGodhelpthosepeople.Godhelp7①

Johnismybestfriend.②Johngavemeagift.③HeboughtthisgiftfromtheUSA.Johnismybestfriendwhogavemeagift(that)heboughtfromtheUSAJohnwhoismybestfriendgavemeagiftthatheboughtfromtheUSAJohn,mybestfriend,gavemeagiftthatheboughtfromtheUSA①Johnismybestfriend.John8

①Kateisanewstudent.②Shecomesfromasmallcity.③Shespeaksadialect口音.④Herdialectishardtounderstand.Kateisanewstudentwhocomesfromasmallcity.Shespeaksadialectwhichishardtounderstand.

Kate,anewstudentfromasmallcity,speaksadialectwhichishardtounderstand.,①Kateisanewstudent.Ka9成龙，来自香港的著名影星，生于1954年,为中国电影做出了巨大贡献JackieChan,afamousmoviestarfromHongKong,whowasbornin1954,makesgreatcontributionstoChinesemovie.成龙，来自香港的著名影星，生于1954年,为中国电影做出了巨10

特朗普Trump，美国最有名的地产商（landagent），生于1946年纽约.现在成功当选为美国总统。他的最大特点feature是有钱。

Trump,themostfamouslandagent,whowasbornin1946inNewYork,becomespresidentoftheUSAsuccessfully,whosebiggestfeatureisrich.特朗普Trump，美国最有名的地产商（landagent11Jobs生于1955年,发明家，苹果公司Apple的CEO他发明了许多风靡全球的电子产品electricproducts，如：iMax,iPod,iPhone等。深刻改变了人们交流，娱乐及生活方式。Jobs,aninventorandCEOofApple,

whowasbornin1955,inventedmanyworldfamouselectricproducts,suchasiMax,iPodandiPhone,whichchangedpeople’swayofcommunication,entertainmentandlifeJobs生于1955年,发明家，苹果公司Apple的12类型：娱乐节目entertainmentprogram来自：湖南卫视TVstation播出（broadcast）内容：在节目中，星爸和萌娃一起旅行影响：深受全国人民欢迎类型：娱乐节目entertainmentprogram13“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”isanentertainmentprogram.TheprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,starfathersandchildrentravelaroundthecountry.Theprogramispopularwithallpeople.“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”is14“Dad,wherearewegoing?”whichisanentertainmentprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,whichispopularwithpeople，starfathersandtheirchildrentravelaroundthecountry。“Dad,wherearewegoing?”whi15“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”isanentertainmentprogram.TheprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,starfathersandchildrentravelaroundthecountry.Theprogramispopularwithallpeople.“Dad,wherearewegoing”anentertainmentprogram

broadcastinHunanTVstationispopularwithpeople,inwhichstarfathersandtheirchildrentravelaroundtheworld.“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”is16Name:ZootopiaCameout:2016Madeby:DreamWorksContents:Judy是一只聪明勇敢并从小立志当警察的兔子,她在克服了重重困难之后终于实现了梦想。在影片中Judy和好友Nickfox一起破获了重大案件（crackacriminalcase）并且揭露（uncover）了坏人的真面目，最终保卫了动物城的和平安宁。朱迪总是说“Anyonecanbeanything”，意思就是一切皆有可能。Animatedmovie喜欢的原因AnintroductiontoamovieName:ZootopiaAnimate17Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016.ItismadebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie.Inthismovieyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judywasacleverandbraverabbitandhadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage.Sheovercomemanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthestory,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson.TheiractionintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything.”Itmeans“Everythingispossible”.Zootopiaisthehottestanimat18

Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016.ItismadebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie.Inthismovieyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judywasacleverandbraverabbit

andhadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage.Sheovercomemanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthestory,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson.TheiractionintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything.”It

means“Everythingispossible”.Ilikeit,because...,inwhich,who

which,,

whichZootopiaisthehottesta19

Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016madebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie,inwhichyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judy,acleverandbraverabit,whohadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage,sufferedmanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthemovie,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson,whichintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything”,whichmeans“everythingispossible”.Ilikeit,becauseitinspiresmetofollowmydreamforever,nomatterwhathappens.Zootopiaisthehottest20AnintroductiontoafamousmovieName:TitanicCameout:1997Director:JamesContents:

这是一个感人的(moving)爱情故事，在故事中，一个名叫Jack的男人爱上了富家女Rose,并且为了救她而死。Classicscene:Jack从后面(frombehind)拥抱(hug)Rose,像鸟儿在海面上飞

简单说明你喜欢这部电影的原因Anintroductiontoafamousm21Homework模仿电影介绍写一篇作文不少于100字向大家介绍一本你最喜欢的书Homework模仿电影介绍写一篇作文不少于100字22ThanksThanks23Iamgladtointroducetoyouafamousmovie.Themovie’snameisTitanic.Itcameoutin1997.ItsdirectorisJames.It’samovinglovestory.InthestoryamancalledJackfellinlovewitharichgirlRose,andinordertosaveher,hediedinthesea.Iwillneverforgettheclassicscene.Inthescene,JackhuggedRosefrombehind,likebirdsflyingonthesea.Thereasonwhy…..isthat….Iamgladtointroducetoyou24

Iam______________to_______________toyouamovie___________nameisTitanic.Themoviecameoutin1997______wasdirectedbyJames.It’samovinglovestory,_________amancalledJackfellinlovewitharichgirlRose,andinordertosaveher,hediedinthesea.Iwillneverforgettheclassicscene_________JackhuggedRosefrombehind,likebirdsflyingonthesea.Thereason___________I________________thismovieisthatit______________usof__________.glad

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whichwhereIam______________to_25TeachingPlanPart1Whatisthislessonabout?Part2WhyIdesignthislesson?Part3Howtopresentthislesson?TeachingPlanPart1Whatisth26Aims:BrieflyreviewthebasicskillsofattributiveclauseGuidethestudentstouseattributiveclauseinwritingImportance:studentsformthesenseofusingclausesandothercomplexsentencepatternsDifficulty:HowtoorganizethecomplicatedinformationinanorderlymannerandformahigherlevelcompositionbyusingAttributiveclause.Part1Whatisthislessonabout?Aims:Brieflyreviewthebasi27StudentsalwaysneglecttheimportanceofwritingStudentslackofwritingskills.Theycanonlyuseready-madesentencespatterns.Theyarenotcreative.Studentshaveastrongwishtoreachahigherlevel,buttheydon’tknowhow.Part2whyIdesignthislesson?Studentsalwaysneglecttheim28LeadinginstartingGoingdeepConsolidationhomeworkPart3howtopresentthislessonLeadinginstartingGoingdeepCo29AttributiveClauseinwriting

ByDingSongjieNo.3HighSchoolAttributiveClauseByDingSong30AbeautifulAnappleOneonthemountainwithacatsleepingunderitstandingbesideariverplantedbymymomwhichIplantedlastyearakindofplantAbeautifulAnappleOneonthe31定语从句

在写作中的简单应用定语从句

在写作中的简单应用32ateacheradayNo.3highschoolwhenthat/whichwherethat/whichWho/whoseateacheradayNo.3highsc33Thosepeoplearethehappiest.Thosepeoplemakeothershappy.Thosepeoplewhomakeothershappyarethehappiest.

─KarlMarxThosepeoplearethehappiest.34Heisthebestgeneral.Hemakesthefewestmistakes.Hewhomakesthefewestmistakesisthebestgeneral.-----HamiltonHeisthebestgeneral.Hewho35Godhelpthosepeople.Thosepeoplehelpthemselves.GodhelpthosewhohelpthemselvesGodhelpthosepeople.Godhelp36①

Johnismybestfriend.②Johngavemeagift.③HeboughtthisgiftfromtheUSA.Johnismybestfriendwhogavemeagift(that)heboughtfromtheUSAJohnwhoismybestfriendgavemeagiftthatheboughtfromtheUSAJohn,mybestfriend,gavemeagiftthatheboughtfromtheUSA①Johnismybestfriend.John37

①Kateisanewstudent.②Shecomesfromasmallcity.③Shespeaksadialect口音.④Herdialectishardtounderstand.Kateisanewstudentwhocomesfromasmallcity.Shespeaksadialectwhichishardtounderstand.

Kate,anewstudentfromasmallcity,speaksadialectwhichishardtounderstand.,①Kateisanewstudent.Ka38成龙，来自香港的著名影星，生于1954年,为中国电影做出了巨大贡献JackieChan,afamousmoviestarfromHongKong,whowasbornin1954,makesgreatcontributionstoChinesemovie.成龙，来自香港的著名影星，生于1954年,为中国电影做出了巨39

特朗普Trump，美国最有名的地产商（landagent），生于1946年纽约.现在成功当选为美国总统。他的最大特点feature是有钱。

Trump,themostfamouslandagent,whowasbornin1946inNewYork,becomespresidentoftheUSAsuccessfully,whosebiggestfeatureisrich.特朗普Trump，美国最有名的地产商（landagent40Jobs生于1955年,发明家，苹果公司Apple的CEO他发明了许多风靡全球的电子产品electricproducts，如：iMax,iPod,iPhone等。深刻改变了人们交流，娱乐及生活方式。Jobs,aninventorandCEOofApple,

whowasbornin1955,inventedmanyworldfamouselectricproducts,suchasiMax,iPodandiPhone,whichchangedpeople’swayofcommunication,entertainmentandlifeJobs生于1955年,发明家，苹果公司Apple的41类型：娱乐节目entertainmentprogram来自：湖南卫视TVstation播出（broadcast）内容：在节目中，星爸和萌娃一起旅行影响：深受全国人民欢迎类型：娱乐节目entertainmentprogram42“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”isanentertainmentprogram.TheprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,starfathersandchildrentravelaroundthecountry.Theprogramispopularwithallpeople.“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”is43“Dad,wherearewegoing?”whichisanentertainmentprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,whichispopularwithpeople，starfathersandtheirchildrentravelaroundthecountry。“Dad,wherearewegoing?”whi44“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”isanentertainmentprogram.TheprogramisbroadcastinHunanTVstation.Intheprogram,starfathersandchildrentravelaroundthecountry.Theprogramispopularwithallpeople.“Dad,wherearewegoing”anentertainmentprogram

broadcastinHunanTVstationispopularwithpeople,inwhichstarfathersandtheirchildrentravelaroundtheworld.“Wherearewegoing,Dad?”is45Name:ZootopiaCameout:2016Madeby:DreamWorksContents:Judy是一只聪明勇敢并从小立志当警察的兔子,她在克服了重重困难之后终于实现了梦想。在影片中Judy和好友Nickfox一起破获了重大案件（crackacriminalcase）并且揭露（uncover）了坏人的真面目，最终保卫了动物城的和平安宁。朱迪总是说“Anyonecanbeanything”，意思就是一切皆有可能。Animatedmovie喜欢的原因AnintroductiontoamovieName:ZootopiaAnimate46Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016.ItismadebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie.Inthismovieyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judywasacleverandbraverabbitandhadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage.Sheovercomemanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthestory,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson.TheiractionintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything.”Itmeans“Everythingispossible”.Zootopiaisthehottestanimat47

Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016.ItismadebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie.Inthismovieyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judywasacleverandbraverabbit

andhadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage.Sheovercomemanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthestory,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson.TheiractionintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything.”It

means“Everythingispossible”.Ilikeit,because...,inwhich,who

which,,

whichZootopiaisthehottesta48

Zootopiaisthehottestanimatedmoviein2016madebyDreamWorks.Now,Iwillmakeabriefintroductiontothismovie,inwhichyouwillenjoyalotoffun.Judy,acleverandbraverabit,whohadadreamtobeapoliceofficerataveryyoungage,sufferedmanydifficultiesandfinallyrealizedherdream.Inthemovie,JudyandherfriendNickfoxcrackedacriminalcaseanduncoveredthetruecolorofthebadperson,whichintheendsavedthepeaceofZootopia.Judyalwayssaid“Anyonecanbeanything”,whichmeans“everythingispossible”.Ilikeit,becauseitinspiresmetofollowmydreamforever,nomatterwhathappens.Zootopiaisthehottest49AnintroductiontoafamousmovieName:TitanicCameout:1997Director:JamesContents:

这是一个感人的(moving)爱情故事，在故事中，一个名叫Jack的男人爱上了富家女Rose,并且为了救她而死。Classicscene:Jack从后面(frombehind)拥抱(hug)Rose,像鸟儿在海面上飞

简单说明你喜欢这部电影的原因Anintroductiontoafamousm50Homework模仿电影介绍写一篇作文不少于100字向大家介绍一本你最喜欢的书Homework模仿电影介绍写一篇作文不少于100字51ThanksThanks52Iamgladtointroducetoyouafamousmovie.Themovie’snameisTitanic.Itcameoutin1997.ItsdirectorisJames.It’samovinglovestory.InthestoryamancalledJackfellinlovewitharichgirlRose,andinordertosaveher,hediedinthesea.Iwillneverforgettheclassicscene.Inthescene,JackhuggedRosefrombehind,likebirdsflyingonthesea.Thereasonwhy…..isthat….Iamgladtointroducetoyou5