概要写作-Willpower课件高考英语作文新题型

概要写作文本内容与结构解读写作思路解读写作思路微技能之策略表达微技能之同义/近义词（组）替换篇牛刀小试参考范文欣赏概要写作1体裁：主题：结构：1.文本内容与结构解读体裁：主题：结构：1.文本内容与结构解读2体裁：说明文主题：Therelationbetweenwillpowerandbreak结构：Para1Para3&4&5Para2Para61.文本内容与结构解读体裁：说明文主题：Therelationbetwee3阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Accordingtomostpeople,afteralongperiodofstudyingorworking,weneedtohavearesttorefreshourselves.However,thatmaynotbethecase.Accordingtoarecentreport,youdon’tneedthebreakasmuchasyoumaythinkthatmakesyoufeellesstired.Scientists

have

long

assumed

that

willpoweris

a

limited

resource,

which

is

why

you

feeltheneedtohavearest,haveasnackandthengetbacktoataskwhenyou’refeelingbetter.Theyarguedthattheonlywaytorestorewillpowerwasbyrest,foodorentertainment.Butpsychologistshavechallengedthistheory,sayingtheyfoundthatpeople’sbeliefsinwillpowerdetermineshowlongandhowwellthey’llbeabletoworkonatoughmentalexercise.“Ifyouthinkofweakwillpowerisallinyourhead.Willpowerissomethingthatisnotreallyusedup,youcangoonandon.”saidProf.Veronica

Job.Theresearchersdesignedfourexperimentstoteststudents’beliefsinwillpower.Afteratiringtask,those,whobelieved,orwereledtobelievethatwillpowerisalimitedresources,performedworseonstandardconcentrationteststhanthosewhothoughtofwillpowerassomethingtheyhadmorecontrolover.Theyalsofoundthatleadinguptofinalexamweek,studentswhobelievedthelimitedresourcetheoryatejunkfood24percentagemoreoftenthanthosewhobelievedtheyhadmorecontrolinresistingtemptation(诱惑).Mr.

Job

said.

“The

theory

that

willpower

is

a

limited

resource

is

interesting.Beliefinwillpowerasanon-limitedresourcemakespeoplestrongerintheirabilitytoworkthroughchallenges.”The

findings

could

help

people

who

are

battling

temptation.

Willpowerisn’tdrivenbyabiologicallybasedprocessasmuchasweusedtothink.Thebeliefinitiswhatinfluencesyourbehavior.

②④③①⑤旧理论新的理论实验论证科学家言论对比引出话题⑥指导意义阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。A4写作思路解读

Para.1

Accordingtomostpeople,afteralongperiodofstudyingorworking,weneedtohavearesttorefreshourselves.However,thatmaynotbethecase.Accordingtoarecentreport,youdon’tneedthebreakasmuchasyoumaythinkthatmakesyoufeellesstired.

主题句写作思路解读Para.1Accordingto5写作思路解读

Para.2:

Scientists

have

long

assumed

that

willpoweris

a

limited

resource,

which

is

why

you

feeltheneedtohavearest,haveasnackandthengetbacktoataskwhenyou’refeelingbetter.Theyarguedthattheonlywaytorestorewillpowerwasbyrest,foodorentertainment.

关键词Willpowerisconsideredlimitedandcanonlyberestoredbyrest,food,andentertainment.写作思路解读Para.2:Scientists

6Para.3:

Butpsychologistshavechallengedthistheory,sayingweakwillpowerisallinyourhead.Theyfoundthatpeople’sbeliefsinwillpowerdetermineshowlongandhowwellthey’llbeabletoworkonatoughmentalexercise.“Ifyouthinkofwillpowerissomethingthatisnotreallyusedup,youcangoonandon.”saidProf.Veronica

Job.

2.写作思路解读

主题句Willpowerisdeterminedbypeople’sbeliefinit.Para.3:Butpsychologistshav7写作思路解读

Para4:Theresearchersdesignedfourexperimentstoteststudents’beliefsinwillpower.Afteratiringtask,those,whobelieved,orwereledtobelievethatwillpowerisalimitedresources,performedworseonstandardconcentrationteststhanthosewhothoughtofwillpowerassomethingtheyhadmorecontrolover.Theyalsofoundthatleadinguptofinalexamweek,studentswhobelievedthelimitedresourcetheoryatejunkfood24percentagemoreoftenthanthosewhobelievedtheyhadmorecontrolinresistingtemptation(诱惑).

对于实验的处理，只要求看实验结果或者结论①Peoplewhobelievewillpowerisnotlimitedperformbetter.

②Theyhavemorepowertoresisttemptation.写作思路解读Para4:Theresearchers8写作思路解读Para5：Mr.

Job

said.

“The

theory

that

willpower

is

a

limited

resource

is

interesting.Beliefinwillpowerasanon-limitedresourcemakespeoplestrongerintheirabilitytoworkthroughchallenges.”引用的言论，属于补充性的信息，可以忽略写作思路解读Para5：引用的言论，属于补充性的信息，可以9写作思路解读Para6.The

findings

could

help

people

who

are

battling

temptation.Willpowerisn’tdrivenbyabiologicallybasedprocessasmuchasweusedtothink.Thebeliefinitiswhatinfluencesyourbehavior.我们不难发现这就是上个实验中提到的resisttemptation和peoplewhobelieveinwillpower，所以把内在逻辑稍稍理一下，可以发现4、5、6三段的关系应该是：科学家提出观点并实验验证了。因此认为毅力是无限的想法有助于提高人们解决困难和抵制诱惑的能力。写作思路解读Para6.The

findings

co10科学家一直认为意志力是有限的资源，需要通过食物、休息、和休闲来恢复。Para.2:(要点2)心理学家认为意志力是由信念决定的，并做了几组实验证明了。Para.3&4&5:(要点3)认为意志力是无限的想法将有助于提高人们解决困难和抵制诱惑的能力。Para.6:(要点4)根据最新的一份报告，休息也许并不想我们想的那么必要。Para.1:(要点1)要点科学家一直认为意志力是有限的资源，需要通过食物、休息、和休闲11

根据以上文字，我们就可以写出这么一段概要:

Accordingtoarecentreport,havingarestafterheavyworkmaynotbesonecessaryaswebelieve.Scientists

have

long

assumed

that

willpoweris

a

limited

resource,whichcanonlyberestoredbyfood,restandentertainment.Psychologistsfindthatwillpowerisuptopeople’sownbeliefinitandproveitbysomeexperiments.Theideathatwillpowerisendlesshelpspeopletobettersolvetoughproblemsandresisttemptation.根据以上文字，我们就可以写出这么一段概要:Accord123.写作思路微技能之要点衔接技巧1234常见衔接词（连词和非谓语动词）附加inaddition;aswellas;besides;furthermore;also;moreover;notonly…but顺序first(ly);second(ly);third(ly);initially;afterwards;earlier;later转折however;ontheotherhand;despite/inspiteof;though/although;but;onthecontrary;otherwise;yet;insteadof;ratherthan;whereas;nevertheless;eventhough;comparedwith;incontrast/insharpcontrast;unlikely;while;conversely;differentfrom肯定obviously;certainly;plainly;ofcourse;undoubtedly;apparently3.写作思路微技能之要点衔接技巧1234133.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧Tomwascriticizedbyhisteacher.Tomdecidedtoworkhard.(将两个句子合并成一个句子)→Criticizedbyhisteacher,Tomdecidedtoworkhard.当相邻的两个句子主语一致时可以考虑，用非谓语动词的结构，在意思不变的基础上表达更加简洁。

非谓语动词3.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧Tomwascri143.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧常见的有非谓语动词做状语和非谓语动词做定语。我们可以来看几个课本上的例子：“Alongthewaychildrendressedinlongwoolcoats

stoppedtolookatus.”

Module1Unit3TravelJournal“Itwasalsoatreasuredecoratedwithgoldandjewels.”

Module2Unit1InSearchofAmberRoom“FollowingJane’swayofstudyingchimps,ourgroupareallgoingtovisitthemintheforest.”

Module4Unit1WomenofAchievement“Bornin1930,YuanLongpinggraduatedfromSoutheastAgriculturalCollegein1953.”“Usinghishybridrice,farmersareproducingharveststwiceaslargeasbefore.”Module4Unit2WorkingtheLand

非谓语动词3.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧常见的有非谓语动词做状语153.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧Accordingtoarecentreport,havingarestafterheavyworkmaynotbesonecessaryaswebelieve.Scientists

have

long

assumed

that

willpoweris

a

limited

resource,whichcanonlyberestoredbyfood,restandentertainment.Psychologistsfindthatwillpowerisuptopeople’sownbeliefinitandproveitbysomeexperiments.Theideathatwillpowerisendlesshelpspeopletobettersolvetoughproblemsandresisttemptation.

基于上面的概括，写好要点之后，我们会发现这段文字只是句子的简单的堆砌，行文僵硬。《考试说明》提供的“各档次的给分范围和要求”中，从最高档的“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑”，到最低档的“缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯”，每一个分数档的第三条都对衔接提出了具体的要求。因此写概要的时候除了找主题句，关键词，还要关注要点之间的逻辑关系，以便我们在语言重组的时候适当的加入连词，使行文更加的流畅。3.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧Accordingto16一、运用以上要点概括策略，概括一下段落的要点。1.Areyousickofgoingtobedlateandwakinguptired?Thengrabyourhikingbootsandatent.Anewstudysuggeststhatacoupleofdaysofcampinginthegreatoutdoorscanresetyourcircadianclock(生物钟)andhelpyougetmoresleep._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.牛刀小试Accordingtoanewstudy,outdoorcampingcanresetyourcircadianclockandimprovingsleeping.2.Thecircadianclock,morecommonlyknownasthebodyclock,isaninternalsystemthattellsourbodieswhenit’stimetogotosleepandwhenit’stimetowakeup.Scientiststrackthisclockbymeasuringtheamountofmelatonin(褪黑激素)circulatinginaperson’sbloodatanygiventime.Inahealthysleeper,melatoninlevelsriseafewhoursbeforebedtime,stayhighthroughthenight,andthensettlebackdownwhenit’stimetowakeup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regulatedbymelatonin,thecircadianclock,aninternalsystem,informsusofthesleepingtime.一、运用以上要点概括策略，概括一下段落的要点。5.牛刀小试A173.

ProfessorKennethWrightoftheUniversityofColoradointheUSwantedtoseeifourbodyclockscanberesetbyashortstayinnature.Histeamrecruited（招募）14physicallyactivevolunteersintheir20sand30s.Ninewentonaweekendcampingtrip,whiletheotherfivestayedhome.Attheendoftheweekend,theresearchersreportedthatinjusttwodays,thecampers'bodyclockshadshiftedsothattheirmelatoninlevelsbegantorisemorethananhourearlierthantheydidbeforetheyleftonthetrip.Bycontrast,thebodyclocksofthegroupthatstayedhomeshiftedevenlateroverthecourseoftheweekend.“Thistellsuswecanresetourclocksfast.”Wrightsaid．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.AfewmonthsagonobodyknewforsurewhatwouldhappeninsideWindsorPlace,anursinghome,whenitbecamehometoaclassofkindergartners.NeverbeforehadaKansasschoolornursinghometriedthis—mixingtheoldandyounginawayforeachtolearnfromtheother._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.牛刀小试Wright’sexperimentprovedthatourclockscanbereset.Thekidsnotonlylearnedknowledgebutalsosympathy,kindnessandpatience.3.ProfessorKennethWrightof185.Thekidshavelearnedsympathy,kindnessandhowtobepatientastheywaitbehindsomeoneinawheelchairorusingawalker.AthometheytalkabouthowtheveryyoungandoldarealikeandhowGrandmaorGrandpalivedwhentheywereyoung.They’vealsobecomestrongreaders,progressingfromtheeverydaypraiseandguidanceoftheseniors._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.ThosewholiveatWindsorPlacesaytheyaretheoneswhohavebeengiventhegift.MarianNelsonhasnograndchildrenofherown.“Thesekidshavefilledavoid(空虚感)inme,”the87-year-oldsaid._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.牛刀小试Thekidsnotonlylearnedknowledgebutalsosympathy,kindnessandpatience.Theoldrecoveredfromvoid./Theoldliveafulfillinglife.5.Thekidshavelearnedsympa19参考范文欣赏1Basedonarecentreport,havingaresttorefreshyourselfisnotsoessentialassomepeoplethink.(要点1)Will-power,assumedtobealimitedresourcebysomescientists,werethoughttobeonlyregainedbyrest,foodaswellasentertainment.(要点2)However,thistheoryhasbeenchallenged.Researchers,includingJobs,conductedexperimentsandmadesomenewdiscoveries.(要点3)Ifyoubelievethatwillpowerislimitless,youwillbemorepowerful,whichisapotentialhelptoresisttemptation.(要点4)参考范文欣赏1Basedonarecentrepor20

1.沈从文的创作风格趋向浪漫主义，他要求小说的诗意效果，融写实、纪梦、象征于一体，语言格调古朴，句式简峭、主干突出，单纯而又厚实，朴讷而又传神，具有浓郁的地方色彩，凸现出乡村人性特有的风韵与神采。2.沈从文创作的小说主要有两类，一种是以湘西生活为题材，一种是以都市生活为题材，前者通过描写湘西人原始、自然的生命形式，赞美人性美；后者通过都市生活的腐化堕落，揭示都市自然人性的丧失。3.从作者的描述看，作者的观察敏锐，记忆超强，对现象世界十分倾心，对大自然的声音、气味，社会上的人与事怀有浓厚的兴趣。他把大自然与社会生活称为一本“大书”，他从这本“大书”中学到了许多书本上没有的东西，他在自然和社会中倾心体验，尊重生命本真的做法，并非不爱学习，而是为了更好的学习。

4.不少评论家觉得沈从文擅长写景，且晴朗明澈，但是缺少深度。也有评论家认为好就好在没有深度，因为没有深度的“看”风景，其实就不为一般的社会价值所局限，这样也就抛弃了自以为是的优越感和置身事外的位置，而是在宇宙万汇的动静之中“看”。5.一次眼光看风景万物，多了一份包涵和宽容，看到的历史也就不是战争、王朝更迭之类的东西，而是千百年来凡夫俗子们的哀乐、努力和命运。它们代表了更为现实逼真的生存和价值。6.抒发的感情真诚感人，不写自己的品学兼优、勤奋用功，而是如实地展现自己的天生的野性，充满了阅读和学习“生活”这本大书所得到的欢欣鼓舞的生命体验，表现了对自然和生命无比好奇和热爱以及泰然面对一切残忍和苦难的生活观。7.学习了这篇传记让我们了解到了沈从文从小如何“读社会这本大书”，感受到他青春期的悲欢得失。由于传主生活经历的太多苦难，加上作者在回忆中不时融入淳厚的情感，让我们读来有某种沉重与辛酸，也让我们学生受到启发：对于强者，生活中的风霜雨雪也和阳光雨露一样，都从不同侧面或者以不同的方式滋润着我们的生命，现实中的曲折、坎坷、苦难可能拓展人的精神空间，让人能更加以阔大的心胸与坚强的意志，去感受生命，理解生活的意义。1.沈从文的创作风格趋向浪漫主义，他要求小说的诗意效果，融21

概要写作文本内容与结构解读写作思路解读写作思路微技能之策略表达微技能之同义/近义词（组）替换篇牛刀小试参考范文欣赏概要写作22体裁：主题：结构：1.文本内容与结构解读体裁：主题：结构：1.文本内容与结构解读23体裁：说明文主题：Therelationbetweenwillpowerandbreak结构：Para1Para3&4&5Para2Para61.文本内容与结构解读体裁：说明文主题：Therelationbetwee24阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Accordingtomostpeople,afteralongperiodofstudyingorworking,weneedtohavearesttorefreshourselves.However,thatmaynotbethecase.Accordingtoarecentreport,youdon’tneedthebreakasmuchasyoumaythinkthatmakesyoufeellesstired.Scientists

have

long

assumed

that

willpoweris

a

limited

resource,

which

is

why

you

feeltheneedtohavearest,haveasnackandthengetbacktoataskwhenyou’refeelingbetter.Theyarguedthattheonlywaytorestorewillpowerwasbyrest,foodorentertainment.Butpsychologistshavechallengedthistheory,sayingtheyfoundthatpeople’sbeliefsinwillpowerdetermineshowlongandhowwellthey’llbeabletoworkonatoughmentalexercise.“Ifyouthinkofweakwillpowerisallinyourhead.Willpowerissomethingthatisnotreallyusedup,youcangoonandon.”saidProf.Veronica

Job.Theresearchersdesignedfourexperimentstoteststudents’beliefsinwillpower.Afteratiringtask,those,whobelieved,orwereledtobelievethatwillpowerisalimitedresources,performedworseonstandardconcentrationteststhanthosewhothoughtofwillpowerassomethingtheyhadmorecontrolover.Theyalsofoundthatleadinguptofinalexamweek,studentswhobelievedthelimitedresourcetheoryatejunkfood24percentagemoreoftenthanthosewhobelievedtheyhadmorecontrolinresistingtemptation(诱惑).Mr.

Job

said.

“The

theory

that

willpower

is

a

limited

resource

is

interesting.Beliefinwillpowerasanon-limitedresourcemakespeoplestrongerintheirabilitytoworkthroughchallenges.”The

findings

could

help

people

who

are

battling

temptation.

Willpowerisn’tdrivenbyabiologicallybasedprocessasmuchasweusedtothink.Thebeliefinitiswhatinfluencesyourbehavior.

②④③①⑤旧理论新的理论实验论证科学家言论对比引出话题⑥指导意义阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。A25写作思路解读

Para.1

Accordingtomostpeople,afteralongperiodofstudyingorworking,weneedtohavearesttorefreshourselves.However,thatmaynotbethecase.Accordingtoarecentreport,youdon’tneedthebreakasmuchasyoumaythinkthatmakesyoufeellesstired.

主题句写作思路解读Para.1Accordingto26写作思路解读

Para.2:

Scientists

have

long

assumed

that

willpoweris

a

limited

resource,

which

is

why

you

feeltheneedtohavearest,haveasnackandthengetbacktoataskwhenyou’refeelingbetter.Theyarguedthattheonlywaytorestorewillpowerwasbyrest,foodorentertainment.

关键词Willpowerisconsideredlimitedandcanonlyberestoredbyrest,food,andentertainment.写作思路解读Para.2:Scientists

27Para.3:

Butpsychologistshavechallengedthistheory,sayingweakwillpowerisallinyourhead.Theyfoundthatpeople’sbeliefsinwillpowerdetermineshowlongandhowwellthey’llbeabletoworkonatoughmentalexercise.“Ifyouthinkofwillpowerissomethingthatisnotreallyusedup,youcangoonandon.”saidProf.Veronica

Job.

2.写作思路解读

主题句Willpowerisdeterminedbypeople’sbeliefinit.Para.3:Butpsychologistshav28写作思路解读

Para4:Theresearchersdesignedfourexperimentstoteststudents’beliefsinwillpower.Afteratiringtask,those,whobelieved,orwereledtobelievethatwillpowerisalimitedresources,performedworseonstandardconcentrationteststhanthosewhothoughtofwillpowerassomethingtheyhadmorecontrolover.Theyalsofoundthatleadinguptofinalexamweek,studentswhobelievedthelimitedresourcetheoryatejunkfood24percentagemoreoftenthanthosewhobelievedtheyhadmorecontrolinresistingtemptation(诱惑).

对于实验的处理，只要求看实验结果或者结论①Peoplewhobelievewillpowerisnotlimitedperformbetter.

②Theyhavemorepowertoresisttemptation.写作思路解读Para4:Theresearchers29写作思路解读Para5：Mr.

Job

said.

“The

theory

that

willpower

is

a

limited

resource

is

interesting.Beliefinwillpowerasanon-limitedresourcemakespeoplestrongerintheirabilitytoworkthroughchallenges.”引用的言论，属于补充性的信息，可以忽略写作思路解读Para5：引用的言论，属于补充性的信息，可以30写作思路解读Para6.The

findings

could

help

people

who

are

battling

temptation.Willpowerisn’tdrivenbyabiologicallybasedprocessasmuchasweusedtothink.Thebeliefinitiswhatinfluencesyourbehavior.我们不难发现这就是上个实验中提到的resisttemptation和peoplewhobelieveinwillpower，所以把内在逻辑稍稍理一下，可以发现4、5、6三段的关系应该是：科学家提出观点并实验验证了。因此认为毅力是无限的想法有助于提高人们解决困难和抵制诱惑的能力。写作思路解读Para6.The

findings

co31科学家一直认为意志力是有限的资源，需要通过食物、休息、和休闲来恢复。Para.2:(要点2)心理学家认为意志力是由信念决定的，并做了几组实验证明了。Para.3&4&5:(要点3)认为意志力是无限的想法将有助于提高人们解决困难和抵制诱惑的能力。Para.6:(要点4)根据最新的一份报告，休息也许并不想我们想的那么必要。Para.1:(要点1)要点科学家一直认为意志力是有限的资源，需要通过食物、休息、和休闲32

根据以上文字，我们就可以写出这么一段概要:

Accordingtoarecentreport,havingarestafterheavyworkmaynotbesonecessaryaswebelieve.Scientists

have

long

assumed

that

willpoweris

a

limited

resource,whichcanonlyberestoredbyfood,restandentertainment.Psychologistsfindthatwillpowerisuptopeople’sownbeliefinitandproveitbysomeexperiments.Theideathatwillpowerisendlesshelpspeopletobettersolvetoughproblemsandresisttemptation.根据以上文字，我们就可以写出这么一段概要:Accord333.写作思路微技能之要点衔接技巧1234常见衔接词（连词和非谓语动词）附加inaddition;aswellas;besides;furthermore;also;moreover;notonly…but顺序first(ly);second(ly);third(ly);initially;afterwards;earlier;later转折however;ontheotherhand;despite/inspiteof;though/although;but;onthecontrary;otherwise;yet;insteadof;ratherthan;whereas;nevertheless;eventhough;comparedwith;incontrast/insharpcontrast;unlikely;while;conversely;differentfrom肯定obviously;certainly;plainly;ofcourse;undoubtedly;apparently3.写作思路微技能之要点衔接技巧1234343.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧Tomwascriticizedbyhisteacher.Tomdecidedtoworkhard.(将两个句子合并成一个句子)→Criticizedbyhisteacher,Tomdecidedtoworkhard.当相邻的两个句子主语一致时可以考虑，用非谓语动词的结构，在意思不变的基础上表达更加简洁。

非谓语动词3.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧Tomwascri353.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧常见的有非谓语动词做状语和非谓语动词做定语。我们可以来看几个课本上的例子：“Alongthewaychildrendressedinlongwoolcoats

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Module1Unit3TravelJournal“Itwasalsoatreasuredecoratedwithgoldandjewels.”

Module2Unit1InSearchofAmberRoom“FollowingJane’swayofstudyingchimps,ourgroupareallgoingtovisitthemintheforest.”

Module4Unit1WomenofAchievement“Bornin1930,YuanLongpinggraduatedfromSoutheastAgriculturalCollegein1953.”“Usinghishybridrice,farmersareproducingharveststwiceaslargeasbefore.”Module4Unit2WorkingtheLand

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基于上面的概括，写好要点之后，我们会发现这段文字只是句子的简单的堆砌，行文僵硬。《考试说明》提供的“各档次的给分范围和要求”中，从最高档的“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑”，到最低档的“缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯”，每一个分数档的第三条都对衔接提出了具体的要求。因此写概要的时候除了找主题句，关键词，还要关注要点之间的逻辑关系，以便我们在语言重组的时候适当的加入连词，使行文更加的流畅。3.写作思路微技能之要点衔接整合技巧Accordingto37一、运用以上要点概括策略，概括一下段落的要点。1.Areyousickofgoingtobedlateandwakinguptired?Thengrabyourhikingbootsandatent.Anewstudysuggeststhatacoupleofdaysofcampinginthegreatoutdoorscanresetyourcircadianclock(生物钟)andhelpyougetmoresleep._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.牛刀小试Accordingtoanewstudy,outdoorcampingcanresetyourcircadianclockandimprovingsleeping.2.Thecircadianclock,morecommonlyknownasthebodyclock,isaninternalsystemthattellsourbodieswhenit’stimetogotosleepandwhenit’stimetowakeup.Scientiststrackthisclockbymeasuringtheamountofmelatonin(褪黑激素)circulatinginaperson’sbloodatanygiventime.Inahealthysleeper,melatoninlevelsriseafewhoursbeforebedtime,stayhighthroughthenight,andthensettlebackdownwhenit’stimetowakeup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regulatedbymelatonin,thecircadianclock,aninternalsystem,informsusofthesleepingtime.一、运用以上要点概括策略，概括一下段落的要点。5.牛刀小试A383.

ProfessorKennethWrightoftheUniversityofColoradointheUSwantedtoseeifourbodyclockscanberesetbyashortstayinnature.Histeamrecruited（招募）14physicallyactivevolunteersintheir20sand30s.Ninewentonaweekendcampingtrip,whiletheotherfivestayedhome.Attheendoftheweekend,theresearchersreportedthatinjusttwodays,thecampers'bodyclockshadshiftedsothattheirmelatoninlevelsbegantorisemorethananhourearlierthantheydidbeforetheyleftonthetrip.Bycontrast,thebodyclocksofthegroupthatstayedhomeshiftedevenlateroverthecourseoftheweekend.“Thistellsuswecanresetourclocksfast.”Wrightsaid．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.AfewmonthsagonobodyknewforsurewhatwouldhappeninsideWindsorPlace,anursinghome,whenitbecamehometoaclassofkindergartners.NeverbeforehadaKansasschoolornursinghometriedthis—mixingtheoldandyounginawayforeachtolearnfromtheother._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.牛刀小试W