公开课-高中英语写作课件

英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWrit1Whatmakesagoodessay?TheessayWhatmakesTheessay2Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.TopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph3ConcludingparagraphAgoodessayisusuallymadeu3Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.generalstatementtopicstatementTopicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)GeneralstatementTopicstatementTomanystudents,schoollife4

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition,…Furthermore,...

SupportingParagraphsTSFirstl5ConclusionPersonally,…inconclusion,inbrief,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat...

Insummary,itiswiser...

Conclusion6TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?TheparagraphWhatmakesa7Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall…topicsentenceAgoodparagraphisonethatc8Whereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:________________justlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

OurschoolisWhereveryougoinourschool,9Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.

Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…AgoodparagraphisoneIbeli10正确使用有关连接词

时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat让步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat递进关系：what’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,条件关系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…表列举：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollows表总结：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated正确使用有关连接词时间先后：first,then,la11Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.Agoodparagraphisone12丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What

akindboyheis!

How

disappointedhewas!

感叹句强调句e.g.It

wasthisyoungboythat

helpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）感叹句强调句e.g.It13e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyou

solvethisproblem.There

comesthepolicecar.

Hardly

hadtheygottothestation

when

theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet

withahandbaginherhand.倒装句省略句with短语e.g.Onlyin14e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecan

findmuchusefulinformation.

Let’scometothemainteaching

building,atthebackofwhichstands

theschoollibrary.定语从句e.g.That’swhat

Ishoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoever

needshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句e.g.Inmyopini15

e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.

Solongas

weworkharderatourlessons,

we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句

e.g.各种状语从句161.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

Whatsurpriseshimisthatthe175.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（祈使句+and…）Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.5.Shewalkedoutofthelaba189．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Nosoonerhadhecome

backfromBeijing

than

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.9．Hehadnosoonercomebackf19Summary:Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.Agoodparagraph

isonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraph

isonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraph

isonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.Summary:Agoodessayisusuall20ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTIstheessaydivided21Goodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.

Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…_______._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnot

leastD.what’smore

E.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEFGoodafternoon,everyone!ther22苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由反对方的理由你的看法及理由1．可以促进对体育的重视；2．可以增强学生的体魄；3．更有利于提高学习效率。

1．学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2．过高的要求学生难以达到；3．长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥2—3点)注意：1．词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2．对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试最近，国家教育部要求23

1.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.2.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs.3.You’dbetterusesomelinkingwords.4.Handwritingisofgreatimportance.Suggestions:1.Agoodbeginningmakesa24第一段：1.SomepeopleagreetoNO.One,becausetheyusuallythinkthat...Inthemeantime,...Inaddition...2.

SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause...3.

Somepeoplesuggest/saythat...Atthesametimetheypointoutthefactthat...What’smore...4.

SomepeoplepreferNO.One.IntheiropinionA...Inaddition...第一段：25第二段：1.

Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdthatBisright.Theythink...2.Butmanymorepeopledon’tagreewiththem.TheypreferB.Theysaythat...Thereasonisthat...3.Onthecontrary,somepeopleholdthat...4.SomepeoplethinkthatBisbetter.Itisclearthat...What’smore,...Also...

在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。第二段：26第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.InmyopinionBisbetterthanA.Thereisnodoubtthat...2.IsupportA.Thereasongoesasfollows...3.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetothelatter.First...Second...Finally...4.Itislikelythatpeoplewillgoonarguingoverthesequestions.Ithinkthateverythinghasbothitspositiveandnegativesides.Weshouldkeepanopenmind.第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证275.Peoplewillcontinuetoargueoverthequestions,Ithinkwe’dbetterkeepanopenmindbecauseeverythinghastwosides.Itallrelieson...

6.Ofthesetwowaysof...Iprefer...Firstofall,...Second,...5.Peoplewillcontinuetoar28Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?

TheMinistryofEducationofChinahasurgedallthestudentstoparticipateinthewinterlong-distancerunningactivity.Itissuggestedthatprimaryschoolstudentsshouldrun1,000metersaday,juniorschoolstudents,1,500andseniorschoolstudents,2,000.Differentpeoplealwaysoffervariousviews.

Somepeoplesay"yes"tothisactivity.Theythink,foronething,itcanmakepeoplepaymoreattentiontophysicaleducation;

foranother,runningcanimprovestudents’healthandhelpthemstudyefficientlysotheycanhavegoodgrades.

However,othersholdoppositeopinionsabouttheactivity.Theybelievethatlearningisthemostimportanttaskforstudentsandtheirfuturedepends

ontheirgradesintheirsubjects.

Meanwhile,manycan’tmeetthehighrequirements.

What’sworse,somewillsuffercoldandinjuries.

Inmyopinion,it’sallrightforschoolstocareaboutstudents’healthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep.Rememberagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.Shouldwegivemoreattention29Whatdoyouthinkabouttheconcludingparagraph?Isitagoodone?Ifnot,howcanyouimproveit?

Inmyopinion,it’sallrightforschoolstopaymoreattentiontostudents’healthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep.Rememberagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.Whatdoyouthinkabouttheco30

Inmyopinion,it’s

better

forschoolstopaymoreattentiontostudents’healthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep,becauseagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.

What’smore,itnotnolyhelpsstudentsgetrelaxed,butalsowillbenefitthemintheirfuturelife.Inmyopinion,it’sb31英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWrit32Whatmakesagoodessay?TheessayWhatmakesTheessay33Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.TopicparagraphSupportingParagraph1SupportingParagraph2SupportingParagraph3ConcludingparagraphAgoodessayisusuallymadeu34Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolourful.generalstatementtopicstatementTopicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)GeneralstatementTopicstatementTomanystudents,schoollife35

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition,…Furthermore,...

SupportingParagraphsTSFirstl36ConclusionPersonally,…inconclusion,inbrief,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat...

Insummary,itiswiser...

Conclusion37TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?TheparagraphWhatmakesa38Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatall…topicsentenceAgoodparagraphisonethatc39Whereveryougoinourschool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:________________justlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.

OurschoolisWhereveryougoinourschool,40Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.

Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…AgoodparagraphisoneIbeli41正确使用有关连接词

时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat让步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat递进关系：what’smore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand,条件关系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat…表列举：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords,asfollows表总结：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated正确使用有关连接词时间先后：first,then,la42Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.Agoodparagraphisone43丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What

akindboyheis!

How

disappointedhewas!

感叹句强调句e.g.It

wasthisyoungboythat

helpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）感叹句强调句e.g.It44e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyou

solvethisproblem.There

comesthepolicecar.

Hardly

hadtheygottothestation

when

theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet

withahandbaginherhand.倒装句省略句with短语e.g.Onlyin45e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecan

findmuchusefulinformation.

Let’scometothemainteaching

building,atthebackofwhichstands

theschoollibrary.定语从句e.g.That’swhat

Ishoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoever

needshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句e.g.Inmyopini46

e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.

Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.

Solongas

weworkharderatourlessons,

we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句

e.g.各种状语从句471.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

Whatsurpriseshimisthatthe485.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（祈使句+and…）Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.5.Shewalkedoutofthelaba499．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Nosoonerhadhecome

backfromBeijing

than

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.9．Hehadnosoonercomebackf50Summary:Agoodessayisusuallymadeupofatopicparagraph,somesupportingparagraphsandaconcludingparagraph.Agoodparagraph

isonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraph

isonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraph

isonewithadvancedvocabularyandvariedsentencepatterns.Summary:Agoodessayisusuall51ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTIstheessaydivided52Goodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.

Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife…_______._______,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._______,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._______,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpracticethriftinourdailylife._____,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschool.______,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.Thankyouforlistening!thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollowsB.firstlyC.lastbutnot

leastD.what’smore

E.asfarasIamconcernedF.SecondlyABCDEFGoodafternoon,everyone!ther53苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由反对方的理由你的看法及理由1．可以促进对体育的重视；2．可以增强学生的体魄；3．更有利于提高学习效率。

1．学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2．过高的要求学生难以达到；3．长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥2—3点)注意：1．词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2．对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试最近，国家教育部要求54

1.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.2.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs.3.You’dbetterusesomelinkingwords.4.Handwritingisofgreatimportance.Suggestions:1.Agoodbeginningmakesa55第一段：1.SomepeopleagreetoNO.One,becausetheyusuallythinkthat...Inthemeantime,...Inaddition...2.

SomepeoplethinkthatAisrightbecause...3.

Somepeoplesuggest/saythat...Atthesametimetheypointoutthefactthat...What’smore...4.

SomepeoplepreferNO.One.IntheiropinionA...Inaddition...第一段：56第二段：1.

Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdthatBisright.Theythink...2.Butmanymorepeopledon’tagreewiththem.TheypreferB.Theysaythat...Thereasonisthat...3.Onthecontrary,somepeopleholdthat...4.SomepeoplethinkthatBisbetter.Itisclearthat...What’smore,...Also...

在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。第二段：57第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.InmyopinionBisbetterthanA.Thereis