高考英语写作之概要写作习作三篇

读后续写两篇一Barbara,70,andme,at71,haveswumtogetherforatleast50years.Weswiminaquietcove(小海湾).It’shometoseagulls,aduckortwo,and

kayaks(独木舟)onoccasion.Thedifficultsummerdroughtof2021broughtaburningsunthatwarmedthewater.AsthedroughteasedandthewatercooledinlateAugust,wedecidedtokeepswimming.WehavebothreadBonnieTsui’sWhyWeSwim,afinebookaboutcold-waterswimming.WechallengedourselvestoswimforaslongaspossiblethroughSeptemberandintoOctober.Ihavelonglovedswimming,thoughthefearofbeingseenasfathasdoggedme.Iamoneofthosefemalebodiespoorlydisplayedinbathingsuits.Cold-waterswimmingdeepenedmysenseofwell-beingandletmeusemybody.ItbecamearitualBarbaraandIembracedasswimmingsisters.WhenshereturnedtotheUnitedStatesimmediatelyafterourCanadianThanksgiving,IdidnotknowhowIcouldcontinueourcold-watertradition.Iwasn’tpreparedtofreezealone.But,Ihadtoswim;therewerelargercommitmentsIcouldnotdismiss(摒弃).Inthesummer,weplannedtocrossfromthecovetoanislandacrossthelake.Ihadtostayfit.Wealsoplannedtohostacold-waterswimmingraceforlocalsinthefall.Wewouldmakeitanannualevent,enhancingourstrengthandendurance(耐力)sothat,inour80s,wemightswimthroughOctoberandintoNovember.Withtheseplansinmind,Ijoinedmylocalcitypool.Ihadnotbeeninapublicpoolforabout30years.Butmybodysaidswim,mybrainsaidswimandmyheart,couldnotletgo.SoIwentanyway.Iamswimming.Iamalivetomyloveofthewater,alivetomypromiseforthespringandthesummerthatwillcome.IintendtostepbackintothelakeinMay,andthroughSeptemberandOctoberwithBarbara.Weareperfectlymatchedinourdevotion,andincreasinglyawareofthemiracleofbeingable-bodiedenoughtosharethecold-waterwondersidebyside.Summarywriting概要写作

Pleasewriteasummaryofthearticleinabout60words.

参考答案：BarbaraandIareswimmingsisterswhohaveswumtogetherforover50years.Wedevotedourselvestocold-waterswimming,whichrelievedmyanxietyovermyfigureandimprovedmysenseofwell-being.WhenBarbarareturnedtotheUS,Ijoinedthelocalpooltostayfitinpreparationfortheplanswehadmade.Nothingcanstopmefromswimming,andIlongtoswimwithBarbarawhensheisback.二Forher85thbirthday,IgavemymotheraniPad.She’dneverusedacomputer.ShehadatryingrelationshipwithherTVremotecontrol(遥控)andamiserabletrackrecord(以往的记录)withhercell.Shewaskeen(热切的)onatabletbecausesheknewpeoplewhohadthem,andshebelievedthatifshedidn’tkeepupwithtechnology,she’donedayfindherselfinacomputerized(计算机化的)kitchen,“unabletoopenacanofsoup”.Ourfirsttaskwasemail.Shequicklylearnedthefundamentalsbutcouldn’tseethepointofemailingwhenshecouldphoneorvisitinperson.Next,wetackledNetflix.Mom’samovieloverwithanappetiteformurdermysteries(凶杀奇案).ShewasastonishedbytheamountofcrimethrillersthatNetflixhasonoffer.OneSaturdayshecalledbecauseshewashavingtroubleloggingonto(登录)Netflix.Isuggesteditmightrequireanupdate.“Theyprobablyhavefewerpeopleworkingasit’salongweekend,”shetoldme.ShelearnedtoZoomandFaceTime.Sheexperimentedwithpodcasts.Shestartedemailinghergrandchildren.Momisareader,sowedownloadedthelibraryappandsignedherupforanecard.Nowsheregularlydownloadse-booksherself.Whentheyarenotimmediatelyavailable,sheputsthemonholdandforgetsaboutthem.Shebecamecuriousaboutalltheicons(图标),sowesetupaweeklytutorial(辅导课),whichtakesplaceoverthephone,eachofuswithouriPads.Oneday,Istruggledfor45minutestohelpherfindthesearchbar.“Itlookslikeamagnifyingglass(放大镜),”Ikeptsaying.Finally,sheasked:“Youmeanthefryingpan?”Wespeakonthephoneeveryday.WealsoFaceTime,Zoomandemail.Shepowersthroughe-books,marvelingthatshecancheckthemoutinthemiddleofthenight.ShewatchesTVseriesandknowswhat’strending.ButshehasnotyetsuccessfullysurfedtheNet.Shewouldliketoreadthenewspaper,butpop-upads(自动弹出式广告)andsidebarsareproblematic.She“accidentally”touchesthem,andthenendsuponsomestrangepages.

Ican’twaitforthedaywhenwecansitdowninpersonandsurftheNettogether.Inthemeantime,it’sgreattoseehowmuchherconfidencehasgrown.Yesterday,sheFaceTimedme.“I’vemadearesolution,”sheannounced.“I’mgoingtolearnhowtooperateeverypieceoftechnologyintheapartment–includingtheTVremote.”

Summarywriting概要写作

Pleasewriteasummaryofthearticleinabout60words.

参考答案：Afraidoflaggingbehindthetechnology,mymotherwasenthusiasticaboutlearningtouseatablet.Shehaslearnedtouseemail,Netflix,Zoom,FaceTime,etc,withmyhelp.Ievensetupaweeklytutorialtohelpherrecognizealltheicons.Nowshereadsandwatchesalotonthetablet,awareofthelatesttrends.I’mlookingforwardtosurfingtheNetwithherandhappythatshedecidedtolearnhowtooperateotherdevices. 三Inoticedadadandhissonatthepark.Hissonwasn’tabletocommunicate,butheseemedcontentsittinginthesand.Thedadexplainedtomethathissoncouldonlymakesomesounds.Theboyhadbeeninspeechtherapy(言语治疗)foryears.Aftersomuchtimeintherapy,theboywasabletomaintaineyecontactforafewsecondsandthefatherwasdelightedbytheachievement!Hetoldmehowexpensivethetherapiesforhisson’sspecificneedswereandwhatapleasureitwastoseealloftheyearsofhardworkpayoff.Thefatherandsonconnected,andthosefewsecondsofeyecontactmeanttheworldtothatdad!

Aswetalkedabouttherapy,thedadsharedwithmethathisgoalforhisboywastosomedaybeabletogoforicecreamtogether.Hesaidhisfatherusedtotakehimoutforicecreamandhehopedhecoulddothesamewithhischild.Suddenly,thesonstoppedputtinghisfingersinthesand,lookedathisfatherandsaid,“hi.”Secondslatertheboywentbackintohisownworld.Thedadwantedtosaysomething,buthecouldn’t.Hisloveforthisboywassogreatthatthewordswouldnotcome.Butwhatdidcomeweretears.Thosetearsconveyedhowproudhewasofhisson.Afatherloveshischildmorethanwordswilleverbeabletoconvey.

Althoughtheywerestrangerstome,Iamhonoredtohavesharedinthispreciouscelebrationofaccomplishmentinthatboy’syounglife.Ihopesomedaytheywillbeabletogoforicecreamandhaveabeautifulfatherandsonouting(外出游玩).Thiseventtouchedmedeeplyandmade