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读后续写精读精炼（二）一：原文重现Devilookedthroughtheobservationwindowatthekidsbelow,allwaitinginlinetogetintothepool.Sheturnedtohermotherwithafuriousfrownonherface.“Mom,they’realllittlekids!I’m15already!Thisisridiculous!”“Iknow,Devi,”repliedhermother,“butyou’reabeginner,too,andyouhavetostartsomewhere!”Devihadneverbeentoaswimminglessoninherlife.Betweenschoolworkandhelpingonhergrandfather’sfarm,shehadn’thadtimeforlessons.TheclosestswimmingpoolDevihadbeentowasthealligatorpoolhermotherboughtherwhenshewasfive.NowthatDeviwasolder,hermotherhadfoundanewjobinthecity,andDevifacedanewchallenge—schoolfieldtripstothelocalpool.ThefirstdaythatDeviwentwithherclasstothepool,shehadnoideawhatshewasinfor.Whatcouldbesodifficultaboutswimming?Deviconfidentlyslippedintothewaterandheldontothesideofthepool,expectingtobeabletotouchthebottomwithherfeet.ButwhenDeviletgoofthesideofthepool,sheslippedunderthewater—thewholepoolwasonebigdeepend!Devithrewherarmtowardthesideofthepoolandgrabbedtheledge(池壁),outofbreath.“Ireallycan’tswim!Everyone’sgoingtolaughatme!”shethoughttoherselfinapanic.Onthenextfieldtriptothepool,Devisatonthesideonabench,paralyzedwithfear.Shehuddledwithatoweloverhershoulders,tooembarrassedtotryagain.Whenshecamehome,hermothernoticedrightawaythatDeviwasupset.“Honey,I’vesignedyouupforAngela’sswimminglessonsatthelocalpool.Soonyou’lllearnhowtoswimjustlikeeveryoneelse,”sheassuredDevi,showingphotosofAngelawithherprize-winningstudents.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二：文本解析【分析】本文讲述了黛维因为学业和在农场帮助祖父而一直没有时间去游泳，妈妈给黛维在当地找了游泳池学习游泳，黛维初次学习时候感觉很自信，但是真正进入到水里的时候发现游泳比想象中难，不小心呛水的黛维觉得自己很尴尬，恐惧去学游泳，这时黛维的母亲给她报了一个游泳班。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“接着，轮到黛维上她的第一节课了。”可知，第一段描写黛维去上游泳课的情况。②由第二段首句内容“不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐的地方，做了自我介绍”可知，第二段可描写安吉拉老师和黛维的相处。2.续写线索：怀疑课程——看别人跳水——感到尴尬——和老师交流——尝试游泳——喜欢上游泳3.词汇激活行为类①.和：togetherwith/aswellas②.路过：passby/gopast③.鼓励：cheeron/encourage情绪类①.感知：feelmoreatease/feelrelaxed；astonished/surprised/shocked；inamazement/insurprise②.积极：fearless/brave特色句型1.Shedraggedherfeettothesideofthepoolandsatdown,indoubtwhetherlessonswouldbehelpful.（由连接词whether引导同位语从句）2.Devispottedherinstructoracrossthepool,togetherwiththelittlekidswhojumpedintothewaterlikefishleapingintotheocean.（由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）三：续写单句训练然后是黛维上她的第一堂课的时候了。她拖着脚走到泳池边坐下来，怀疑上课是否有帮助。环顾四周，黛维发现她的教练穿过游泳池，还有那些孩子们跳进了水里，就像鱼一样跳进了海里。她惊奇地看着她。尽管黛维很敏感，但当一个小女孩走过，要求她不要害怕时，她的脸上很快就泛起了一丝尴尬的红晕。多么令人尴尬啊！她垂着头。不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐着的地方，介绍了自己。黛维惊讶地得知安吉拉直到20岁才学过游泳。深受鼓舞后，德维现在重新获得了希望。她在安吉拉的陪伴下第二次进入游泳池，几个快乐的孩子漂浮在附近为她加油。黛维开始感到更放松，她的动作不那么僵硬，呼吸更平静。黛维怀着感激的心意识到她可能不是一个无所畏惧的游泳运动员，但她肯定会很开心。四：佳作展现ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五：课后练笔阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。ItwasaSaturdayafternoon.Thecoloroftheskywaschanging,firstlightgray,thendarkgray,andfinallydarkanddense.Thewindwasblowingheavily,andthetreeswereswayinginthestrongwind.Itbegantoraincatsanddogs.Soon,theroadwasfilledwithpuddlesfromtherain.Onsuchastormyafternoon,mymothertookmyfive-year-oldbrother,Christopher,andmetoanewbigtoystoreshehadreadaboutinthenewspaper.“Somanytoys,”theadvertisementhadshoutedinfullandflashycolor,“thatwehadtogetahugewarehousetofitthemall!”ChristopherandIcouldn’thavebeenmoreexcited.Weranacrosstheparkinglot,throughthecoldandbitingrain,asfastasourlittlelegscouldcarryus.Weleftourmotheroutsidetobattlewiththefrustratingumbrella,whichneverworkedwhenshewanteditto.“Christine!Takecareofyouryoungbrother!”Mothershoutedatthetopofhervoice.

“Christine!I’mgoingtofindtheLegosection(乐高积木区)!There’sanewpirateshipIwant,andIhavefourdollars!MaybeIcanbuyit!”Christopherexclaimedandranoffexcitedly.Ionlyhalfheardhim.Itookarightturnand,tomywide-eyeddelight,foundmyselfinthemidstoftheBarbie(芭比)World.

IwasstudyingaBarbieanddoingsomesimplemathinmyheadwhensuddenlyanearthshakingclapofthunderroaredfromthestormoutside.Ijumpedatthenoise,droppingthedolltothefloor.Thelightsflickered(闪烁)onceanddied,coveringeverythinginablanketofblackness.Thundercontinuedtoshaketheskyandlightningilluminatedthestoreforseconds,castingfrighteningshadowsonmymind.Paragraph1:“Ohno,”Ithought,“Where’sChristopher?”

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Christine,I’mhere.”

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六：单句训练哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪儿？”我害怕，吓得呆住了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱他，确保他很好。我的胃难受了，正在翻转进去。我在黑暗的走廊上跑来跑去，恐慌充满了我的内心，使我呼吸困难。我一边看到糖果，一边被玩具绊倒，一边疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。“克里斯汀，我在这里。“兴奋让我喘住了呼吸——在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了克里斯托弗。他独自站着，一动不动，紧紧地抓着海盗船。我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。他拥抱我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你就能找到我。”然后，我把我的手抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里寻找我们。参考答案三：单句训练ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.Shedraggedherfeettothesideofthepoolandsatdown,indoubtwhetherlessonswouldbehelpful.Scanningaround,Devispottedherinstructoracrossthepool,togetherwiththelittlekidswhojumpedintothewaterlikefishleapingintotheocean.Shewatchedinamazement.EnviousasDeviwas,aflushofembarrassmentsooncrepttohercheekswhenalittlegirlpassedby,askinghernottobescared.Howembarrassing!Shehungherhead.SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.DeviwasastonishedtobemadeawarethatAngelahadneverlearnedswimminguntilshewas20.Greatlyinspired,Devinowregainedhope.SheenteredthepoolasecondtimeinthecompanyofAngela,severalcheerfulkidsfloatingneartocheerheron.Devibegantofeelmoreatease,hermovementlessstiffandherbreathmoreeven.Withagratefulheart,Devirealizedthatshemightnotbeafearlessswimmer,butshewouldsurehavefuntrying.六：单句训练“Ohno,”Ithought,“Where’sChristopher?”Scared,Iwasfrozentothespot,overcomewiththeneedtoseemybrother,tohugandmakecertainhewasallright.Mystomachtwistedandturnedinside.Iranupanddowntheaislesthroughtheblackness,panicfillingmysmallchestandmakingitdifficulttobreathe.Iknockedintodisplaysofcandyandtrippedovertoys,allthewhilefranticallycallingmybrother’sname.AnxiousasIwas,Icouldbarelyseehisfigure.Tearsoffrustrationandfeartrickleddownmyface,butIcontinuedtorun.“Christine,I’mhere.”Excitementtookmybreathaway—thereinthedarkLegoaisleIfoundChristopher.Hewasstandingalone,perfectlystill,clutchingtightlytothepirateshipset.Ibegantocryoutfromrelief,throwingmyarmsaroundhimandhuggedhimtightly.Hehuggedmeback,saying,“IknewifIwaitedhere,Christine,youwouldbeabletofindme.”Then,Itookhishandinmineandwewenttofindourmother,whomustbedesperatelysearchingthestoreforus.

四：佳作展现（一）ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.Shedraggedherfeettothesideofthepoolandsatdown,indoubtwhetherlessonswouldbehelpful.Scanningaround,Devispottedherinstructoracrossthepool,togetherwiththelittlekidswhojumpedintothewaterlikefishleapingintotheocean.Shewatchedinamazement.EnviousasDeviwas,aflushofembarrassmentsooncrepttohercheekswhenalittlegirlpassedby,askinghernottobescared.Howembarrassing!Shehungherhead.SoonAngelacameovertowhereDevisatandintroducedherself.DeviwasastonishedtobemadeawarethatAngelahadneverlearnedswimminguntilshewas20.Greatlyinspired,Devinowregained