四川省第四届新高考改革英语学科论坛-基于问题解决的高三作文专题课

Improveyourwriting基于问题解决的高三作文专题课四川省双流棠湖中学汤芸Learningobjectives

Attheendofthisclass,youwillbeableto:

1.identifyproblemsrelatedtosupportingdetails,cohesion&coherence（衔接与连贯）,wordsandsentencevarietyinapassage;2.knowhowtoimproveapassagebyaddingdetails,makingitmorecohesiveandcoherentandvaryingthelanguage;

3.improveapassagewithsomeproblems.Whataretheproblems？

Structure

ThreepartsTopicsentencesContentKeypointsSupportingdetailsLanguage

Correct,cohesiveandcoherent(衔接连贯),variedWhatcanbedoneifyourwriting…？doesnothaveenoughsupportingdetailsforeachkeypoint;isnotcohesiveorcoherent(衔接连贯)doesnothavevariedlanguage

(dullandrepetitive重复的)SupportingdetailsHowtoaddsupportingdetails？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystoaddsupportingdetails.Tomakethesentenceslongerandmorespecific,wecan:1.usespecificwords2.giveexamples3.explainreasons4.givefactsasevidence…Summary(1)Ihatethebadweathertoday.(2)Myfatherisawarm-heartedman.(3)SquaredancingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinChina.Haveatry!Cohesionandcoherence（衔接与连贯）

Howtomakeyourpassagecohesiveandcoherent？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystomakethepassagemorecohesiveandcoherent.Tomakethelanguagemorecohesiveandcoherent,we:1.canusetransitions（衔接词、短语）2.mustpayattentiontothelogicalrelationship···3.shouldmakesurethetopicisconsistent…SummaryOnlinecourseshavesomeadvantages.Theyareconvenient,becauseyoucanlearnsomethingthatcannotbegainedinclassroom.Theyhavedisadvantages,too.Manythingshavedisadvantages,soweshouldtakethemseriously.Haveatry!VariedlanguageHowtovarythelanguage？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystovarythelanguageinapassage.Toavoiddullandrepetitivelanguage,wecanuse:1.pronouns2.synonyms3.differentsentencepatterns…SummaryHaveatry！

Doingsportsisausefulwaytoreducestress.Doingsportshelpsyouforgetthetroubleandmakesyourefreshed.Talkingwithyourfriendsisalsoausefulwaytoreducestress.SummaryImprovethewritingReadthepassage,findoutthepossibleproblemsanddecidewhatkindofproblemstheyare.①lackssupportingdetails②isnotcohesiveorcoherent③thelanguageisrepetitiveanddull2.Improvethepassage3.Discussingroupsandcollectyourideas.PresentationSharewhatyouhaveimproved.2.Explainthereasonswhyyourimproveitinthisway.Homework

假定你是李华，你校学生会刚刚举办了“跳蚤市场（fleamarket）”活动。你的外国笔友Jenny对此很感兴趣，于是写邮件向你了解基本情况。请你给她写一封回信，简要介绍这次活动。要点如下：1.活动的目的和内容；