Unit10 SectionB writing 课件 人教版新目标英语九年级全一册

Unit10You'resupposedtoshakehands.SectionB3a-3bWritingChinesecustomsBeginning:Body:Ending:Writinghamburger3aYourpenpaliscomingtoChinaonanexchangprogram.He/SheisaskingyouaboutChinesecustomsandwhathe/sheissupposedtodoornot.Makenotesinthechart.Let’sanalyze!What’sthetopicofthearticle?

Whatshouldwewriteinourarticle?Whataspects(方面)canwewrite?tablemannersHouserulesGoingoutwithpeopleChinesecustomsBody:Ending:Beginning:Dear________,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmetellgiveyousomesuggestionsandadviceaboutChinesecustoms.Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes.Whatkindofthearticleshouldwewrite？LetterWhattense(时态)shouldweuse?Whatpersonnarration(人称)shouldweuse?pointatsomeonewiththechopsticksuseyourchopstickstohitanemptybowlmakenoisewhenyouareeating

stickthechopsticksintothefoodLet’sreview!Tablemannerslettheoldeatfirst

tablemannershouserulesuseyourchopstickstohitanemptybowlstickthechopcticksintothefoodpointatsomeonewiththechopsticksChinesecustomsFinishamindmapGoingoutwithpeopleLet’sdiscuss!lettheoldeatfirst

makenoisewhenyouareeating

____________________________________________________________stickthechopcticksintothefoodpointatsomeonewiththechopstickslettheoldeatfirstuseyourchopstickstohitanemptybowlmakenoisewhenyouareeating

beontimekeeproomtidygreetthehostfamilyshakehandswithpeoplesay“nihao”topeoplenotbow,kissorhugwithpeople......makeagoing-outplanwithfriendsLet’slist!Listthesentencepatternswelearnedtogiveadvice.eg:Youshould1.__________________2.__________________3.__________________4.__________________5.__________________6.__________________7.__________________Thewaystogivesuggestions:

Dear________,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmetellgiveyousomesuggestionsandadviceaboutChinesecustoms.Body:Ending:Beginning:Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes.TablemannersHouserulesGoingoutwithpeople_____,whenyouareeatingatthetable,____

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_____________________________________.______,inourhouse,________________________________________________________

_____________________________________._______,whenyougooutwithpeople,______________________________________________________________________________.FormanoutlineHowtopolishourarticle?Let’slearn!我总是早点出门，避开交通，我认为让其他人等不礼貌。(P75)Skill1:PolishasentenceTranslation1:

IalwaysleavehouseearlytoavoidheavytrafficbecauseIthinkkeepingotherswaitingisimpolite.IalwaysleavehouseearlytoavoidheavytrafficbecauseIthinkit'simpolitetokeepotherswaiting.

(good)(better)(best)Ialwaysleavehouseearly,Iwanttoavoidheavytraffic,Ithinkkeepingotherswaitingisimpolite.Translation2:Translation3：1.AndassoonasIheldoutmyhand,hebowed.(P74)2.SoImakeanefforttobeontimewhenImeetmyfriends.(P75)3.Ifyoutellafriendyou'regoingtotheirhousefordinner,it'sokifyouarriveabitlate.(P75)4.Also,wenevervisitafriend'shousewithoutcallingfirst.(P75)

5.Yes,I'mhavingagreattimeonmystudentexchangeprograminFrance.(P78)

6.Theygooutoftheirwaytomakemefeelathome.(P78)

Enjoysomesentencesinthisunit.

312Topolishasentence,

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to:UsedifferentwordsandphrasesAddmorerelatedinformationUsedifferentsentencepatternsMybiggestchallengeislearninghowtobehaveatthedinnertable.Asyoucanimagine,thingsareverydifferentfromthewaytheyareathome.Forexample,you'renotsupposedtoputyourbreadonyourplate.You'resupposedtoputitonthetable!Ithoughtthatwasprettystrangeatfirst,butnowI'musedtoit.Anotherexampleisthatyou'renotsupposedtoeatanythingwithyourhandsexceptbread,notevenfruit.Youhavetocutitupandeatwithafork.Anotherthingisthatitisimpolitetosayyou'refull.Ifyoudon'twantanymorefood,youshouldjustsay,“Thatwasdelicious.”Also,you'renotsupposedtoputyourelbowsonthetable.IhavetosaythatIfinditdifficulttoremembereverything,butI'mgraduallygettingusedtoit.Idon'tfindFrenchcustomssostrangeanymore.(P78)Skill2:Polishaparagraph转折连词并列连词选择连词推理连词because,so,so…that,asaresult

therefore,for

oreitherAorB,neitherAnorBand,aswellas,bothAandB,notonlyAbutalsoBbut,however,

while

Topolishaparagraph,

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to:First，Second，tablemannershouserulesmakingfriendswithfriendsThird/What'smore,Allinall/Inaword,......Skill3:PolishapassageTopolishapassage,

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to:Firstly,Firstofall,Inthefirstplace,Tobeginwith,Tostartwith...Secondly,Inthesecondplace,Besides,Furthermore,What'smore,Moreover(而且),Inaddition(此外)Apartfromthat(除此之外)...Lastly,Finally,Mostimportantly,Lastbutnotleast...312UsedifferentwordsandphrasesAddmorerelatedinformationUsedifferentsentencepatterns

sentenceparagraphpassageUselinkingwordsShowaclearstructure

SkillSummary

Dear________,YoumustbeexcitedaboutcomingtoChinasoon.LetmetellgiveyousomesuggestionsandadviceaboutChinesecustoms.Body:Ending:Beginning:Haveasafetrip,andIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Bestwishes.TablemannersHouserulesGoingoutwithpeople_____,whenyouareeatingatthetable,____

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_____________________________________.______,inourhouse,________________________________________________________

_____________________________________._______,whenyougooutwithpeople,______________________________________________________________________________.LetterLet’swrite!1234Frameandcontent(结构和内容)clearframe（结构清晰）completecontent（内容完整）Richlanguage（语言）goodadjectives(好的形容词)goodphrases（好的词组）useclauses（使用从句）uselinkingwords（使用连接词）Correctgrammar（语法）correcttense(时态)spellingwords（单词拼写）punctuations（标点符号）Goodhandwriting（书写）cleanandneat(干净整洁)Let’scheck!ShowtimeLet’sshow!评分档次和要求：第一档：21-25分内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。

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第二档：16-20分内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。

有模有样第三档：11-15分内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚,但有一