2020年1月浙江卷A puppy for poppy小狗的陪伴读后续写 课件 高三英语写作专项复习

读后续写小狗的陪伴试题再现01Para.1“I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,”saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye和某人拥抱告别(.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions(情绪)getthebetterof占上风

him.unwilling/reluctanttoseparatePara.2Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyes泪眼模糊的双眼andthenlaughed.Para.3Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile灿然一笑.“Iguessthisisit就是现在了.”hesaid.“I’llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Para.4~5Thehouseseemedquietasatomb非常安静withouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit,Poppydidn’t.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried,“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”askedDad.“We’vetriedeverything.”inlowspiritsPoppy:misstheboy/dependontheboyParents:gotworriedaboutPoppyPara.6~7“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”smiledMom.“Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.”Itdidn’ttakelongbefore没过多久theywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigbox.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusual,butwhenshesawthebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging(摆动)eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.ThemePuppyPoppyParentslove试题分析Reading02根据短文内容，回答下列问题。Theboy,hisparents,theirdogPoppyandthenewlittledog.Hewasunwillingtopartwithhisfamilyandtriedtocontrolhistears.Becausetheboywasnotathome,andPoppymissedhimalot.Theygotalittledogforher.1.Whoarethecharactersinthestory?2.Howdidtheboyfeelwhenseparatingfromhisfamily?3.WhydidPoppyseemuninterestedinanythingbackhome?4.Whatdidtheboy’sparentsdotocheerPoppyup?EmotionalchangesTheboylefthomeforuniversity.sadlonelyParentsgotanewfriendforPoppy.excitedEveryonefeltsadwithouttheboy.阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！Theboy’sparentsdrovehimtotheuniversitywiththedogPoppyandtheyhadtosaygoodbye.Withouttheboyathome,Poppywasunhappy,althoughtheparentstriedmanywaystocheerherup.MomcameupwithanideathattheywouldgetalittledogforPoppy.Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.WhatwasPoppy’sreactiontothelittledog?Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.WhatdidtheboydoafterseeingPoppyandthenewlittledog?3.Climax2.Build-up1.Opening4.Resolution5.Ending写作思路Predicting&Writing03Para.1:Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Q1:Howdidthelittledogbehaveaftertheboxwasopened?Q2:WhatwasPoppy’sreactiontothelittledog?Howdidshefeel?Q3:Didthetwodogsgetalongwitheachother?Ifyes,how?Ifnot,why?Q4:Howdidtheparentsfeelabouttheoutcome?Wasitwhattheyhadexpected?Whatchangedidthelittledogbringtothefamily?研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Para.2:Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Q5:HowdidtheboyfeelaboutPoppywhenhewasawayfromhome?Whatcaughthiseyesfirst?Anythingunexpected?Q6:Whatdidtheboydoassoonashearrivedhome?Q7:Didtheboyhaveanydoubtsaboutthelittledog?Howdidhecarryonaconversationwithhisparents?研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？Paragraph1：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.

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Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.

_______________________________________________________________________原文分析Poppy看到一只小狗之后会是什么反应呢？应该是开心的。所以这段续写两只狗狗玩的愉快。本段应该是男孩回家看到家里多了一只狗狗之后的反应，他和狗狗一起玩。1.内容上————情节合理，表达的多样性（动作，语言，环境，心理描写）plotdevelopment：creative&reasonable2.语言上————词汇和句式的使用丰富且准确。3.结尾：升华积极向上，正能量，真、善、美

Writing范文赏析04Para.1Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Poppy

staredatthepuppy,surprisedandexcited.Sheapproached

cautiously,barked

andthenstartedtolickhisface.Thelittledog

jumpedoutofthebox,waggedhistail

andbarked

inafriendlyway.Hesniffedeverycornerofthenewhome,andthenranaroundPoppy,whichbroughtgreatjoytotheoldgirl.Watchingthehappyscene,DadandMomlookedateachother,beamingproudly.

Para.2Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Asheenteredthedoorstep,Poppytrottedtohimandgotuponhisbacklegs,tryingtolickheroldfriend.Theboy

crouched,puthisarmsroundPoppy’sneckandscratchedherbehindtheears.Suddenly,henoticedalittleheadpoke

outofthekennel.Hefeltsopuzzledthatheturnedtohisparents.“We’vegotthepuppyforPoppy.Nowsheisascheerfulasbefore.”Momchuckled

withdelight.“Whatagoodidea!”Theboyhuggedbothdogs,smiling.,阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！Itlowereditsheadwithcaution,itseyesshiningwithcuriosity.

ItwassosweetthatPoppycouldn’thelpapproachingitandkissingit.

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