2022年六级考试点评（1）2022年六级考试答案

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四六级考试网权威发布2022年六级考试作文范文点评（1），更多2022年六级考试作文范文点评（1）相关信息请访问大学英语四六级考试网。在大学英语六级考试中，写作片面是不是会另好多同学头疼。不知如何下笔，写出来之后也不知道自己写的怎么样。为了让同学有更加明显地写作思路，下面为为大家距离点评作文，梦想能扶助到同学们。MyopiniononcertificatecrazeThegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoacraze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.So,why’sthecraze?Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwithaharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlaytheirqualifications.Anotherfactoristhatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingone’sability.Forthesakeofincreasingtheiroddsoflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamtoanother.ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbemoreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.文章点评：这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。本文先对学生的考证热举行简介，引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后的理由;整体看思路明显，规律严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。本篇亮点表达：Thegrowingtendency…hasnowevolvedinto…bebusilyengagedindoingThereasonbehind…harshjobmarkethavenochoicebutto…parlaytheirqualificationssth.weighsheavilyintermsof…increasingone’soddsof…beinvolvedindoing…becompelledtodo…haveanopenmindtoward…capabilityboosting本文有待提高之处：1.文章布局上，能看得出该同学试图采用探讨文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。规律严谨，论证严密;句式表达生动，用语较为地道。2.微观语言点方面，有个主谓一致的方面的错误(diplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavily);有些语句稍显啰嗦，比quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthat…大可简化成you’dmostlikelybetoldthat…更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而巩固大量;另外某些用语多重复，譬如job屡屡展现;为了制止此类现象，文中的theenormouspre