高三英语一轮复习-How to do proof reading 教学课件

高考“短文改错”复习课

Inourdailylife,ifwemakesomemistakes,weshouldcorrectthem,andthenwearestillgoodfellows.高考考纲解读

考纲要求考生具备判断、发现、纠正语境中语言使用错误的能力，以及在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力。Briefintroduction这份答卷得多少分？

MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.

∨ofWherehavehonestyusedah1sandsteadilytime∧where√√√√√5分his题号得分失分原因修改增加删除10大小写分不清20符号不对30原本未错4151617180符号不对91100i字母缺一点110只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Someskillsoferrorcorrecting名词爱考“数”与“格”，

冠词在前“错、多、少”。

动词时态和语态，非谓搭配莫错了。

连、代、形、副错一样，多是故意来混淆。

介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到，

句法涉及到一致，从句多考关联词。

拼写词序均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。Someskillsoferrorcorrecting名词爱考“数”与“格”，

冠词在前“错、多、少”。

动词时态和语态，非谓搭配莫错了。

连、代、形、副错一样，多是故意来混淆。

介词多半考搭配，多漏误用想周到，

句法涉及到一致，从句多考关联词。

拼写词序均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。一.修改1.Differentpeoplespeakdifferentlanguage. 2.LastSunday,thepolicecarshurrytothetallestbuilding.3.Thestudentseachhasadictionary. 4.Therearefallingleavesontheground. 5.I’mlookingforwardtohearfromyousoon. 6.Oneshouldlovetheircountry. 7.ThepopulationinChinaismuchlargerthanthoseinCanada.8.ThisisthecountrysidewhereIvisited3yearsago.9.Trytowriteascarefulasyoucan. languageshurriedhavefallenhearingher/histhatthat/whichcarefully二．增加1.Sheissuchgoodteacherthatwealllikeher. 2.Sheaskedmetowatchforthetrafficontheroads.3.Ilikeswimming,butIwon’tbeabletomorrow. 4.Atageof12,hestartedwritinghisownbook. 5.Heinterestedinplayingthecomputergames. 6.HisfathernothereandhehadbeentoShanghai.7.Iagainsttheplanthatheputforwardjustnow. 8.Thebabyistakengoodcarebyhisgrandma.∧a∧out∧to∧the∧is∧wasam∧∧of1.Whatafineweatheritis! 2.Idon’tknowwhentheplanewillarriveat. 3.Hepreferstoseefilmsratherthantogotothepark. 4.Thepathwhichhethoughtofitwouldleadtohisvillage. 5.Sheisevenmoreclevererthanhersister. 6.I’lltellhimassoonasIwillseehim. 7.Youhadbettertellmeassoonasshecomestohome.8.Ifyoudon’thurryup,andyouwillbelate. 9.TheSmithsdidtheirbesttomakemetofeelathome. 三.删除短文改错实例训练WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.

andwithseriousthethought∧airfindour/theMany解题技巧小结1.通读全文，掌握大意,初步改错。2.

以句为单位，细读每个完整句子，查漏补缺.

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复读全文，验证答案.4.正确使用批改符号“∧，\，___”。注意：书写格式要正确，第十一处起不给分。四不改

①标点符号不改,②大小写不改,③词序错误不改,④单词拼写不改。Wouldyoupleasetellmewhatyouhavelearnedfromthisclass?Homework.注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall，withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice，whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown，hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact，heevenscaredmy