美国大学英语写作 答案PART.3

美国大学英语写作答案PART.3

ANSWERKEY

PartOne:EssayWriting

1AnIntroductiontoWriting

Activity(PointandSupportinaParagraph),pages5–6

Point:Therearedrawbackstomoviegoing.

Support:1.Inconvenience

d.Stickyfloor

3.Othermoviegoers

a.Runningkids

b.Laughing,shoutingteenagers

Activity(IntroductoryParagraph),8

1.c

2.b

3.a

4.a.Inconvenienceofgoingout

b.Temptationsofthetheater

c.Behaviorofsomepatrons

Activity(Body:SupportingParagraphs),9–10

1.Tobeginwith,Ijustdon’tenjoythegeneralhassleoftheevening.

2.b.Parkinglotisalwaysjammed

d.Ticketsmaysellout,andtheateriscrowded

e.Ticketscostupto$8each

3.Second,thetheaterofferstemptingsnacksthatIreallydon’tneed.

4.b.2)chocolatebars

3)MilkDuds

5.Manyoftheotherpatronsareevenmoreofaproblemthantheconcessionstand.

6.a.Littlekidsraceupanddowntheaisles

b.Teenagerstalkbacktothescreen,whistle,makefunnynoises

Activity(ConcludingParagraph),10

1.a

2.c

ReviewActivities,18–20

Answerswillvary.

2TheWritingProcess

Activities(Freewriting,Questioning,MakingaList,Clustering,ScratchOutline),25–31Answerswillvary.

Activity(WritingaFirstDraft),33

1.thesis5.

specific

2.first6.

bs

3.equiped(otheranswersarepossible)7.conclusion

4.secondandthird

Activity(RevisingwithaSecondDraft),36–37

1.Second5.watchingwhatIkeepinthehouse

3.unity...MyfriendsareasbadasIam.7.As

4.support...snackslikeceleryandcarrot8.jumpintomyhands

sticks...noicecreaminthefreezer...9.disgusted

drippingwithbutter...riskpullingout

myfillingsasIchew

Activity(TakingaWritingInventory),39–40

Answerswillvary.

Activity(Prewriting),41–43

L,Q,SO,C,F

Activity1(Outlining),43–45

1.Thesis:Myhighschoolhadthreeproblemareas.

a.Students

(1)Involvedwithdrugs

(2)Formedcliques

b.Teachers

(1)Unwillingtohelpafterclass

(2)Muchtoostrict

c.Buildings

(1)Leakyceilings

(2)Ill-equippedgym

2.Thesis:Workingasadishwasherinarestaurantwasmyworstjob.

a.Workingconditions

(1)Heatinkitchen

(2)Noisyworkarea

b.Hours

(1)Ten-hourshifts

(2)Hourschangedeveryweek

c.Pay

(1)Minimumwage

3.Thesis:Joininganaerobicsclasshasmanybenefits.

a.Socialbenefits

(1)Makenewfriends

(2)Meetinterestinginstructors

b.Mentalbenefits

(1)Reducesmentalstress

(2)Improvesself-image

c.Physicalbenefits

(1)Strengthensheart

(2)Tonesmuscles

a.Lighterworkload

(1)Lessworkinclass

(2)