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读后续写样题PAGE3/3AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.AshewalkedalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank,heheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainandagainbutcouldn'tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedandlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedworried.Arthurstoppedandasked."Itlookslikeyou'vegotaproblem,"Arthursaid.“I’mafraidso.I'minabighurryandIcan'tstartmycar.”“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp?"Arthurasked.Theyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatandthensaid,"Thanks.Ifyou'resureitwouldn'tbetoomuchtrouble,youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.""Notroubleatall.I'dbegladtohelp."Theyoungmangotoutandtookoneofthesuitcasesfromthebackseat.Afterplacingitontheground,heturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcaseandstartedwalking,heheardthelongloudnoiseofanalarm.Itwasfromthebank.Therehadbeenarobbery(抢劫)!ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefore.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Arthur,stillcarryingthesuitcaseturnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim.Shelookedatthesuitcaseandthenathim.Arthurwassurprised."Whyisshelookingatmelikethat?"Hethought.“Thesuitcase!ShethinksI'mthebankthief!”Arthurlookedaroundatthecrowdofpeople.Hebecamefrightened,andwithoutanotherthought,hestartedtorun.注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur..._________________________________________________________________阅读分析：六要素eq\b\lc\{\rc\(\a\vs2\al\co1(when,where,who,what,how,why))whenwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.wherealongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBankwhatAfunnythinghappenedtoArthur.whoArthur,theyoungmanhowArthurhelpedtheyoungmancarryasuitcaseandwasmistakenasabankthief.why列出划线词ParkAvenueTheyoungmanSuitcasesinthebackseatloudnoiseofanalarmthebankRobberytheshoutsPeoplethebankthief文章细节charactersactionsfeelings(一) 设计情节的曲折(twist)和过渡情节1：冲向人群(dashtocrowd)；追逐(chase)；被阻拦(blocked)人物心情：害怕（afraid)；着急(anxious)；生气(angry)情节2：警察局的解释；取钱(withdrawmoney)人物心情：尴尬的(embarrassed)；轻松的(relieved)情节设计技巧：观察两个段首，遵守情节的逻辑性由“Stop，stop!”到ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStation，我们可以判断两个事实：两人达成了协议，去警察局解决。这也说明了两种可能：年轻人不是小偷，要不然不会去警察局；年轻人是小偷，被大家逮住。分析人物的特点，注意情节简洁性选择年轻人不是小偷，那么情节就会涉及到两人都是无辜的，那么情节就比较容易展开和结束。选择年轻人是小偷，那么就要涉及到年轻人如何为自己辩护，从而有更多的曲折，在150词的空间里，我们尽可能把情节的转折限制在两个以内。(二) 句式的选择关于和心情和动作的描写，适合用非谓语动词和定语从句，人物心理活动必然要在动作后，可以用总结性话语。例如：表达“他跑向人群，心情紧张”，我们有多种方式，但最佳的是用独立主格结构，请记住这样的结构：Sbdidsth（主句为主要的动作)，sb.doing/done从属动作)、即:Hedarednotstopanddashedtothecrowd.hisheartbeatingpainfullyfast.故事的收尾要注意自然，一般用表情和心理的表达结构。有三种情况：sbfeltrelievedtoseethat...sbfeltembarrassedtoknowthat...sbgotalessonthatheshouldnot...这里在警察局的结局，必然是警察把事情搞清楚了，真相大白。主人公应该是感到轻松或者惭愧。即：Arthurfeltembarrassedbutrelieved.Heshouldn'thavebeensosensitive.范文一：Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,"Stop,stop!”Hedarednotstopanddashedtothecrowd,hisheartbeatingpainfullyfast.However,hearingtheshouts,severalstrongyoungmeninfrontofthebankblockedhim."Iamnotthebankthief.Heis!”Hepointedtotheyoungmanbehindhimwholookedveryanxious.ButthemandeniedbutinsisteditwasArthurwhowastoblame.Eventually,theydecidedtogotopolicestation.ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurgraspedthesuitcasesinthebackseatandaccompaniedtheyoungmantothestation.Heaccusedthemanoftherobbery.However,theyoungmancomplainedthathehadjustwithdrawnmoneytopayforhisworkers.Hewasluckynottomeetthethiefandunexpectedlyhegotintotrouble.ThePolicemenlaughedandtoldthemtherealthiefhadbeenarrested.Arthurfeltembarrassedbutrelieved.Heshouldn’thavebeensosensitive.范文二：Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,"Stop,stop!”Hearingthis,Arthurrealizedthatitwastheyoungmanwhohadjustrobbedthebank.Soherandirectlytoataxipassingby.Asthedriverofthetaxiopenedthedoorofthecar,Arthurthrewthesuitcaseintothebackseat."Hurryup,thepolicestation!"Arthursaidtothedriver.Thetaxiwasrunningatfullspeed,leavingthebankthieffarbehind.ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurmetthepolicemenwhohadreceivedthereportfromthebankabouttherobbery.Hetoldthemwhathehadexperiencedandthatthesuitcasewasjustoneofthetwosuitcasestheyoungmanstolefromthebank.Arthuralsotoldthepolicewhattheyoungmanlookedlikeandwithinfewhoursthebankrobberwascaught.范文三Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,"Stop,stop!”ButitstruckArthurthattheyoungmanmustbethebankthief.SoArthurignoredhimandkeptrunninguntilhefoundataxi.Hestoppedit,gotintoitwiththesuitcaseinhishandandsaidbreathlesslytothedriver,“Hurryup,thenearestpolicestationassoonaspossible.Theyoungmanshoutingbehindisthebankthief”.Thetaxiwasrunningatfullspeed,leavingthebankthieffarbehind.ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurgraspedthesuitcasesandrushedintothestation.Muchtohissurprise,theyoungmanstormedintoo.Seeingthis,Arthuraccusedthemanoftherobbery.However,theyoungmaninsistedthathehadjustwithdrawnmoneytopayforhisworkers.ThePolicemenlaughedandtoldthemth