新教材高中英语Unit1CulturalheritageSectionⅤWriting教学案新人教版必修第二册

/04/4/SectionⅤWriting概要写作——新闻报道本单元的写作项目是概要写作，主题为新闻报道(文化遗产)。新闻报道具有其他文体不具备的特点：真实、迅速、直接。作为本单元的写作主题，需要注意以下几点：1．数据取舍要得当作为传播主流消息的新闻报道，其中一定列举了很多事实的数据，在理清文章主题后，有取舍地在写作中加入关键数据，不要全写，也不要不写；因为典型数据可以为文章带来好的效果。2．标点符号要分清新闻报道中会用到诸如：“”、/、【】、·等一些文字符号，它们都有自己的代表意义，所以在写作中要注意，不要滥用或者随便套用原文中的符号，要理解其意思再用到自己的文章中。3．事实有变不乱改我们都知道，新闻报道是根据当时的事件形态，以文字的方式向大众传播事实。当然，既然是事件就有其变化的可能。当我们在写作中遇见已经发生变化的新闻事实时，要尊重原文当时的写作事实，完成自己的写作，切忌将与原文有出入的内容写进文章中。1．开头常用句式...Itwasoriginallyissued...已经正式发布……...Anewweekofnewscoverageon...新一周的关于……的新闻报道。...Wehaveareporton...我们有一份关于……的报告。(4)Thereportisbasedonhardfacts.这个报告是以铁的事实为依据的。2．主体段落常用句式...Thatcouldhaveledtomajorchangesin...这可能会导致……发生重大变化。...Becausethathasbeenthekeystickingpointeversince...因为这是自……以来的关键点。...Talkshavebrokendownbecauseofthefactthat...谈判已经破裂，因为……...Andonebiggoaloftheforumistopromoteanddevelop...此次论坛的一个重要目标就是促进和发展……3．结尾常用句式...Thereportconcludedthat...报告的结论是……...Onesolutionmaybeto...一个解决方案可能是……...Somaybeitishightimethat...因此，或许是时候……(4)Accordingto...eportby...根据……的报道。阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。ThenewexhibitionattheNationalGalleryofVictoria,theNGV,isonamuchlargerscalethanthepreviousshowingofthesewell-knownChineserelics.“TerracottaWarriors:GuardiansofImmortality”features8life-sizewarriors,2life-sizehorses,andtwohalf-sizereplicabronzechariots,eachdrawnbyfourhorses.Gold,jade,andbronzeartifactsdatingbackthousandsofyearsarealsoshowcasedintheexhibition.SashaGrishin,anarthistorianfromtheAustralianNationalUniversity,traveledfromCanberratoMelbourneforthechancetoseethesesculpturesagainupclose.HewasherewhentheTerracottaWarriorscametoMelbournebackin1982.“In1982,whentheTerracottaWarriorscame,thatwasalreadyaverylongtimeage.AndwehadadifferentperspectiveinChina.Itwasexoticthen.Herewe'relookingnotattheexotic,butwe'relookingatimportantart.Andwe'reseeingChinanotassomethingoutthere,butChinaasbeingpartoftheglobalartcommunity.AndseeingitinthecontextofveryimportantcontemporaryChineseart,that'saveryimportantdevelopment.”ZhouKuiyingisthedeputydirectoroftheCulturalHeritageAdministrationofShaanxiProvince,thehomeoftheTerracottaWarriors.HesaidtheexhibitioncanplayaroleinbuildingculturaltiesbetweenChinaandAustralia.“Overmorethan30years,wehavediscoveredmanyartifactsinChina,includingmoreTerracottaWarriors.Manyofthesculpturesandartifactsheretodayarepartofthenewdiscoveries.WehopeexhibitslikethiswillhelpAustralians,especiallyyoungpeople,tounderstandancientChineseculture,andtheChinaoftoday,asthiscanstrengthenmutualtrustandfriendshipbetweenChineseandAustralianpeople.”AlongsidetheTerracottaWarriorsexhibition,theNGVisalsoshowcasingworksbythecontemporaryChineseartistCaiGuoqiang.TheexhibitionopenstothepubliconFridayandwillrununtilOctober.[精彩范文]AlargeexhibitionofTerracottaWarriorsisgoingoninNGV.(要点1)Thisexhibitiondisplaysmanypreciousculturalrelics,whichattractspeoplelikeSashaGrishinwholoveart.(要点2)TheexhibitionisalinkbetweenChineseandAustralianculture.(要点3)BesidestheTerracottaWarriorstherearealsoworksbyCaiGuoqiang.(要点4)TheexhibitionrunsfromFridaytoOctober.(要点5)总评本篇范文基于新闻事实，进行了高度概括，没有遗漏任何关键点，对于同义词和同义句的表达也不失准确。[亮点呈现](1)Thisexhibitiondisplaysmanypreciousculturalrelics,whichattractspeoplelikeSashaGrishinwholoveart.使用which引导的定语从句，丰富了句式，为文章增添了亮点。(2)TheexhibitionisalinkbetweenChineseandAustralianculture.使用alinkbetween这一短语，使人直观感受到通过兵马俑这项文化遗产连接了中澳的友谊。阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。“Thisdragonlooksbeautifulanddangerous.Ibetyouwon'tseeanythinglikeitoutsideofHongKong！”Myerson,10,fromAustralia,wasexcitedtochasethedancingdragonbutranawayinfearasitapproached.“I'veneverseenadragon,butit'slikearealdragon，”Myersontoldreporters.OntheeveoftheMid-Autumnfestival,thestreetsofTaiHangRoad,causewaybay,werealreadycrowdedwithonlookersforthemostimportanteventoftheyear,thefiredragondance.Mostoftheonlookerswereforeignfaces,curiousandlookingforwardtoHongKong'suniquefestivalcustomsthathavelastedforahundredyears.Everyoneattheroadsideisholdingacameraormobilephoneinordertorecordthisclassicandsacredmoment.Theso-called“firedragon”isactuallymadeofthickhempropekeel,andmadeofpearlgrasstiedintothedragonbody.Thedragonis67meterslongandhas31sections.Itisestimatedthatitwillweigh70kilogramswhenfilledwithincense.Thedragon'sheadisbentbythevinebranchfortheskeleton,thepearlgrassbandaged.Thetwoshiningeyesaretwoflashlights,andtheteethandtonguearemadeofsteel.Thewhole“firedragon”lookslikeaflyingdragoninthesky.Thefierydragon,whichhasbeendancingfor139years,carriesthehistoricalmemoryofHongKongandgrewupwithit.Fromthe19thcenturyastheeliminationofplaguefolkactivities,totodayasacelebrationoftheMid-Autumnfestival.FiredragondancehasbecomeatraditionalculturalactivityinHongKongandis