高考总复习英语教师用书写作技能培优9第九讲字顺意畅的衔接

第九讲字顺意畅的衔接衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。恰当的过渡语，能使文章条理清晰，逻辑性强，没有前言不搭后语之感；整篇文章语句自然，浑然一体，无缝衔接；优美的过渡词，能使文章亮点多多，能充分显示考生的实力，深得阅卷老师的厚爱。1．表示起始关系的过渡性词语aboveall,tobegin/startwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto,withthedevelopmentof...,asyouknow/asisknown,asisshown等。◆(2015·四川卷书面表达)Tostartwith,IhavebeenlearningandspeakingMandarinforabout17years.首先，我学说普通话已经17年了。◆(四川卷书面表达)Asweallknow,goodlearninghabitscontributetoefficientstudy.我们大家都知道，好的学习习惯可以提高学习效率。2．表示时间顺序的过渡性词语firstly,firstofall,tobegin/startwith,then,later,intheend,finally,atlast,afterthat,afterwards,sincethen,immediately,suddenly,meanwhile等。◆(2015·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Firstofall,youcantalkaboutAmericancustomsandfestivalsbecauseChinesestudentsareinterestedinthem.首先，你可以谈一下美国的习俗和节日，因为中国的学生对此感兴趣。◆(2015·重庆卷书面表达)Firstly,Ihavealwaysbeeninterestedinreadingbooks.Secondly,I’dliketosharemybookswithothersaswell.首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。3．表示并列关系的过渡性词语and,or,also,aswellas,neither...nor...，notonly...but(also)．..,either...or...,not...but...等。◆(2015·天津卷书面表达)IbelievethesedonatedbookswillnotonlymakeyoumorefamiliarwithChinabuthelpimproveyourChinese.我相信，这些捐赠的书籍不仅能让你更熟悉中国，而且还能帮助你提高中文。◆(2015·广东卷书面表达)Shefinallyearnedrespectofthem,whoeventuallybecameconfidentaswellaswell-behaved.她最后赢得了他们的尊重，他们最终变得自信，表现也不错。4．表示转折关系的过渡性词语but,yet,however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,though/although,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。◆(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I’vealreadywrittentheapplicationandresume.ButI’mafraidthattherearesomemistakesaboutthewordsandformat.我已经写好了申请书和简历。但是我恐怕在用词和格式上有什么错误。5．表示因果关系的过渡性词语because,as,since,for,thanksto,dueto,asaresultof,so,therefore,asaresult/consequence等。◆(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)Iknowyouareveryinterestedinping-pong,whichisregardedastheNationalBallSportofChina,soyou’dbettertakethisopportunitytojoinourschoolteam.我知道你对中国的国球——乒乓球很感兴趣，所以你最好趁这个机会参加我们学校的团队。6．表示递进关系的过渡性词语what’smore,furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition,what’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...，foronething...foranotherthing...等。◆(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)Inaddition,therearefamousartistswhowillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.此外，还有一些着名的艺术家会在现场表演剪纸。◆(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Moreover,bydoingthepart-timejobIcangetsomepreciousexperiencesothatIcanbetteradapttothedevelopmentandchangesofsociety.另外，通过做兼职工作，我能学到很多宝贵的经验以便我能更好地适应社会的发展和变化。◆Foronething,Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents,andforanotherthing,Icangainsomeexperiencefromit,whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.一方面，我能通过做这样的事赚些钱来帮助父母，另一方面，我能从中获得一些经验，这会对我将来的生活有益。7．表示列举事实的过渡性词语suchas,forexample/instance,take...forexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords等。◆(2017·天津卷书面表达)Forexample,Ihavesuccessfullygotadmittedasavolunteerforthe13thNationalGames,whichisscheduledtobeheldattheendofthisAugust.例如，我已经成功地被接纳为将在今年八月底举行的第十三届全国运动会的志愿者。◆Inmyfreetime,I’llcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvariousballgames.在我的业余时间，我将继续做常规训练，诸如游泳、跑步和各种各样的球类活动。8．表示观点的过渡性词语inmyopinion,inmyview,frommypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforme,personally等。◆(2017·北京卷书面表达)Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtzeRiver,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.就个人而言，我更喜欢沿着最长的河流和中国文明的母亲河之一的长江旅游。◆(2016·天津卷书面表达)AsfarasI’mconcerned,allourclassmateshavelearnedalotfromourcommunicationandthevariousactivities.就我个人而言，所有同学从我们的交流和各种各样的活动中学到了很多东西。9．表示总结的过渡性词语inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。◆(2016·江苏卷书面表达)Inshort,Internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.总之，网络投票，如果操作不道德的话，在一定程度上是不公平的而且不能被信任。◆Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新的挑战的最好的选择。eq\a\vs4\al(Ⅰ)用过渡词汇补全句子1．总的来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。____________________，themoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.答案：Generallyspeaking2．游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。Swimming____________benefitsourhealth,________________helpsushaveastrongwill.答案：notonly;butalso3．(重庆卷书面表达)相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。________________，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime,butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.答案：Onthecontrary4．由于他的粗心大意，整个工程被迫推迟至少一个月。________________________hiscarelessness,thewholeprojecthadtobeputoffatleastonemonth.答案：Asaresultof5．一方面，周末他们需要好好休息；另一方面，他们需要尽一切努力复习功课。_________________，theyshouldhaveagoodrestonweekends.__________________，theyshouldmakeeveryefforttoreviewwhattheyhavelearned.答案：On(the)onehand;Ontheother(hand)6．(重庆卷书面表达)更糟的是，如果我们在手机上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来需要的交际技能。________________，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones,wewilllosethecommunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.答案：Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse7．按照我的观点，我们能够互相共享信息，以便更好地相互理解。________________，wecanshareinformationwitheachothertomakeabetterunderstanding.答案：Inmyopinion8．总之，一个好市民应该遵守交通规则。________________，agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.答案：Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief/Tosumup9．总的来说，我发现自行车比摩托车更令人喜欢。__________________，Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.答案：Onthewhole/Ingeneral10．(湖南卷书面表达)然而，直到比赛结束我们才意识到我们输了。____________，notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.答案：Howevereq\a\vs4\al(Ⅱ)阅读下面短文，选择适当的过渡性词语填空近来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识，这一问题备受关注，请你用英语写一篇短文：1．概括中学生自我保护的重要性；2．就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。aboveall,besides,meanwhile,foronething,foranotherthing,personally,inawordRecently,ithasbeenagreatpublicconcernthatthestudentslackself-protectionawareness.Thereisalackofsocialexperienceamongstudentsandthereforelearninghowtoprotectourselvesisofgreatsignificancetousall.①____________，securitycomesfirst.Withoutsecurity,wecanachievenothingandcannotliveuptoparents’e