山东高考英语模拟试题-读后续写

山东省高考英语模拟试题---读后续写读后续写下水范文（详解版）一、续写原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事短文。续写的词数为150左右。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray（流^）dog,untilhecametome.Iwassevenyearsold.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.Therewasasmallpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadputoutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseethelittleone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsickorinjured?Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.Iwentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Itookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealthyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.Thenextmorning,everyoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguest.aShallwekeephimwithus?”Iquestionedmymom.Likeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttotallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.二、下水续写总体思路（一）：第一段第一句：Spotty回家，断了一条腿。作者当时的反应是什么？看到了什么？Spotty状态描写。为什么会断了一条腿？（最难处理）作者一定是误解了，对Spotty有过激的反应。Spotty逃跑。到处寻找，但找不到。一段时间以后得知真相。第二段第一句：一年以后，我们听到Spotty在气喘吁吁地叫。看到了什么（骨瘦如柴）？为什么Spotty叫起来气喘吁吁？看到Spotty的情感反应？做了什么？为什么Spotty回来？（最难处理）心理的感受是什么？为此做了什么？但几天以后，Spotty还是死了。作者的心情及感悟是什么（呼应开头…especiallyhiseyes）？剧情一：Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.“Oh,no!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottylimpinginwithpainedexpressiononhisface.ButSpottyseemedtotakenonoticeofmeandhidunderthebed,hiswholebodytremblingandhiseyesfullofterroranddistrust.Itwassounlikehimtoreactlikethis,thatforonemomentIwasatalosshowtocoaxhimtome.Feelingalittleupsetandfurious,Isomehowcameholdingalongstick,tryingtodrivehimout.However,beforethestickreachedhim,Spottysuddenlyhowledandescapedthroughthedoor.Inthenextfewdays,wesearchedeverywhereforSpotty,butinvain.Later,wewereshockedtolearnthatamanbeathimwithastickwhenSpottywasapproachingalittlegirl.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.WerushedoutofthehouseonlytoseemySpottylyingonthedoormat,dying.Uponseeingus,Spottyroseawkwardlytohisfeet,wagginghistailandhiseyessparklingwithexcitement.Immediately,Ikneltdowntohughimandtearsbegantowellupinmyeyesuncontrollably.Spottylookedatme,lickingmycheeksasiftotellmesomething.AnditwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedwhySpottyreturnedtome—hehadforgivenmeforwhatIhaddone.Unfortunately,Spottydidn,tstaylongandheclosedhiseyesforeverthenextday.ManyyearshaspassedsinceSpottyleftus,butthevaluablelessonhetaughtmewillremaininmymemory.思路二：本人原创。剧情二：（加长版）本故事中有狗，有血，因此剧情可能很狗血！Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg."Oh,myGod!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottywalkingbackwithalamedhindleg,whichisstillbleeding.Itmustbeverypainful,becauseIcanclearlyseethepainedexpressiononhisface.ImmediatelyIcalledoutmymotherandwebegantocleanhiswound,rubbedsomemedicineandthenwoundthebandagearoundhisbrokenleg.AlthoughSpottyseemedtogetsomerelief,hiswholebodywasstilltremblingandshaking,withhiseyesfullofterroranddistrust.Whatonearthhadhappenedtohim?Later,wegottoknowthatrecentlySpottymadeanewfriendcalledLaura,whichwasanobleTeddyandforsomereasonhewasveryobsessedwithher.However,theTeddy,sownerdidrftlikeSpottyatall,maybebecausehethoughtSpottywasveryuglyandnotanobledog.Thus,heoncethreatenedtobeatandbreakSpotty,slegwithalongwoodstickifSpottydaredtocometoplaywithLauraagain.Tobeornottobe,that,saquestion!ForSpotty,obviouslyhechosetocontinuetoplaywithhisfrienddespitetherisksandthreat.Wecan,tlivewithoutfriends,nordodogs.IttookseveralmonthsforSpottytorecoverandhecouldwalkasusual.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Theremustbesomethingwrongoutside,becauseitwassounusualforsuchanobedientandfriendlydoglikeSpottytoactinthisway.Soonwedressedourselvesquicklyandrushedoutofthehousetoseewhatwashappening.Butbeforewedashedout,wesmelledthesomethingburningorsmoke,somethinglikethat.Uponseeingus,Spottybarkedharderandledustothegarage.OhmyLord!Ourgaragewasonfirethen,anditseemedtogetbiggerandbigger.Withouthesitation,fatherquicklygrabbedthewaterpipeandwateredthegarage,motherdialedthe119toreportthefireemergency,mysisterandIalsohelpedtofindthefireextinguisher.Fortunately,thefirewassoonbroughtundercontrolandweallrelieved.Ifthefirehadnotbeenputouttimely,ourwholehousewouldbeburneddowntotheearth!WhatabigheroSpottywastonight!Animalsareourfriendsandwecanhelpeachotherandlivewiththeminharmony.ManyyearshaspassedsinceSpottyleftus,butthevaluablelessonhetaughtmewillremaininmymemory.剧情三（剧情二的精缩版）：Paragraph1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg."Oh,myGod!”IletoutaloudscreamasIsawSpottywalkingbackwithalamedhindleg,bleeding.Itmustbeverypainful,becauseIcanclearlyseethepainedexpressiononhisface.ImmediatelyIcalledoutmymotherandwebegantocleanhiswound,rubbedsomemedicineandthenwoundthebandagearoundhisbrokenleg.AlthoughSpottyseemedtogetsomerelief,hiswholebodywasstilltremblingandshaking,withhiseyesfullofdisappointmentanddistrust.Later,welearnedthatrecentlySpottymadeanewfriendcalledLaura,whichwasanobleTeddy.However,theTeddy,sownerdidn,tlikeSpottyatall,andheoncethreatenedtobeatandbreakSpotty,slegwithalongwoodstickifSpottydaredtocometoplaywithLauraagain.Tobeornottobe,that,saquestion!ForSpotty,obviouslyhechosetocontinuetoplaywithhisfrienddespitetherisksandthreat.Wecan,tlivewithoutfriends,nordodogs.IttookseveralmonthsforSpottytorecoverandhecouldwalkasusual.Paragraph2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Soonwedressedourselvesquicklyandrushedoutofthehousetoseewhatwashappening.Butbeforewedashedout,wesmelledthesomethingburningorsmoke,somethinglikethat.Uponseeingus,Spottybarkedharderandledustothegarage.OhmyLord!Ourgaragewasonfirethen,anditseemedtogetbiggerandbigger.Withouthesitation,wequicklyfoundthefireextinguishersandgrabbedthewaterpipe,anddialedthe119toreportthefireemergency.Ifthefirehadnotbeenputouttimely,ourwholehousewouldbeburneddowntotheearth!WhatabigheroSpottywastonight!Animalsareourfriendsandwecanhelpeachotherandli