暖心时刻 2023年名校真题读后续写话题分类写作指导与训练

读后续写话题写作暖心时刻（2023·山东济南·统考一模）Itwascoolandbrightandjustrightforrunning.Iwasinthefirstfewmilesofa10-mileracethroughsomehills.Birdsweresingingonthetrees.Thesoftwindwasbrushingmycheeks.Ifeltrestedandspringy.Despitethehills,Ithoughtitwasgoingtobeafinerun.AheadwasBlake,astudentfromBurkeHighSchool.Hewasrunningeasily,too,movingalongefficiently.Thepacefeltcomfortable,soIdecidedtostaywherehewas;whybotherconcentratingonpacewhenBlakewassuchanicepacesetterforme?IwouldovertakeBlakelateronwhenheusedupenergy.SoIrancloselybehindhim.Thecourseheadednorthforfivemiles,wanderedwestforamile,andthenturnedsouthagain.Theracewasgettingtougher.Withthreemilestogo,itwasbeginningtoberealhardwork.Mylungswereonfire,andlegsfeltlikestone.Blakeovertooktheboyinfrontofhim.Apparentlyheknewtheboy,fortheyexchangedafewwords.Theirbriefcommunicationworriedme.Runnersdon’tchatduringaraceunlesstheyfeelreallygood,andBlakeplainlywas.Therewasstillanoticeablebounceinhissteps,butthespringinessIhadoncepossessedwasgone.Still,IwascloseenoughtoovertakeBlakeifhewastired,soIdidn’tgiveuphopecompletely.Wewereapproachingahill,amilefromthefinishline,sowhateverhappenedonthehillwouldalmostcertainlydeterminewhocrosseditfirst.AsImovedupthehill,myattentionwanderedforafewminutes.WhenIlookedup,Blakewasmovingaway,firstfiveyards,thenten,thenmore.TherewasnohopeofcatchingBlake.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SuddenlyBlakeslowedandsatontothegroundpainfully._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Areportertookapictureofthismovingsceneandposteditonline._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·山东济南·统考一模）作者参加跑步赛跑，一开始跑的很轻松，后来遇到Blake，决定和他一起跑，但是后来作者想超过他，所以作者紧紧地跟在他后面跑，但是越跑越困难，但是作者仍然没有放弃希望，继续追赶他。SuddenlyBlakeslowedandsatontothegroundpainfully.Areportertookapictureofthismovingsceneandposteditonline.________________________________________帮助——陪着一起走——到达终点——受到赞扬——感悟SuddenlyBlakeslowedandsatontothegroundpainfully.___________________________________________________________________________________________Areportertookapictureofthismovingsceneandposteditonline._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________突然，布莱克慢了下来，痛苦地坐在地上。一位记者拍下了这动人的一幕，并把它传到了网上。Blake腿抽筋，我决定帮助他和他一起跑向终点。描写作者受到很多人的赞扬，非常开心自己做了一件正确的事情。SuddenlyBlakeslowedandsatontothegroundpainfully.ThenIhurriedupandranuptohim,onlytofindthathislegwascramping.Itriedtohelphimstandandmoveforward,butherefused.HeaskedmetorunaftertheotherssothatIcouldgetthefirstplace.Ithoughtforasecondanddecidedtoaccompanyhimforarest.Thenweranslowlyforwardtogether.

Althoughweranslowlyandwereovertakenbyothers,Ifeltrelaxedandwefinallycrossedthefinishlinetogether.Areportertookapictureofthismovingsceneandposteditonline.Duringthetime,thephotogotalotoflikes.Manystrangerssenttheemailstopraisemeabouttheincident.Infact,Iwasalittlehesitantatthebeginning,butthemomentIdecidedtohelpBlake,Ifeltcalmandrelaxed.I’mhappythatIdidtherightthing.（2023春·广东广州·高三校联考开学考试）ItwasfourweeksbeforeNewYear,andouryouthgroupwantedtodosomethingtogetherasaNewYearprojectforourcommunity.Theconceptwasgreat,butnoneofusseventeen-year-oldshadanyideawhattodo.“Maybewecouldhaveafooddrivetohelpthehomeless,”JohnsuggestedatourSundaynightmeeting.“Butwehavedonethatmanytimes,answeredBrianwithafrown.Tenminutespassedwithoutanyproposalgoodenoughtowinourhearts.FinallyIdecidedtospeak.“Whydon’twethinkaboutourprojectforafewdaysandthencomebackwiththreeorfoursuggestionswecanvoteon?”Everyoneagreedtowaitaweekbeforedeciding.IknewtimewasrunningouttogetsomethinggoingbeforeNewYear,butIhadnocluewhatweshoulddo.Duringthefollowingweek,oneideaafteranotherranthroughmymind,butIwasstillindecisive.Thursdayafterschool,Iwanderedintothekitchenasmydadpreparedfordinner.Sensingmyuneasiness,heaskedwhattroubledmewithoutevenlookingup.“Well...it...”Iletoutalongbreath.“OuryouthgroupwantstodosomethingforNewYear,butwedon’tknowwhattodo...”“Hmm.”Mydadthoughtoutloud.“There’saseniors’homeI’veworkedwithclosetoSt.Joseph’sHospital.Theresidentsdon’tgetoutmucharoundNewYearwiththesnowandice.ItmightbeanideatotakethemouttoseetheNewYearlightsaroundhere.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。NextSundayevening,ouryouthgroupmet.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnNewYear’sDay,thebuswerentedarrivedattheseniors’homeinthesnow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023春·广东广州·高三校联考开学考试）作者跟朋友们打算做有意义的事情来过新年，正在作者毫无头绪时，父亲建议他们带养老院的老人们去街上看灯饰，最后，作者跟朋友们精心准备，带养老院的老人们去街上看灯饰，老人们很开心，非常感谢他们的故事。

NextSundayevening,ouryouthgroupmet.OnNewYear’sDay,thebuswerentedarrivedattheseniors’homeinthesnow.提议父亲的建议——朋友赞同——准备——达到养老院接老人——陪老人们看夜景，灯饰——老人们感谢

NextSundayevening,ouryouthgroupmet.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnNewYear’sDay,thebuswerentedarrivedattheseniors’homeinthesnow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________下个星期天的晚上，我们一群年轻人碰面。在新年那天，我们租的公交车在雪天到达了养老院。描写作者跟朋友们商量在新年那天做什么有意义的事情，作者提出父亲给的建议，大家赞同，精心准备。描写作者和朋友们到养老院，带着老人们去街上看灯饰，老人们很开心，非常感谢他们。

NextSundayevening,ouryouthgroupmet.MyfellowsputforwardseveralsuggestionsandIalsocontributedDad’sideafordiscussion.Tomypleasantsurprise,theNewYearlightstourwontheirhearts.Wecalledtheseniors’homeandtheywerethrilledaboutourproposal.Thefollowingweeks,wewerebusyliningupeverythingforthetour,includingthebustodrivetheseniorsalongtheplannedroute.OnNewYear’sDay,thebuswerentedarrivedattheseniors’homeinthesnow.Despitethecold,thesnowaddedamagicalwhiteblankettotheneighborhood.Allresidentsslowlyfoundseatsonthebusandthetourbegan.ThespectacularlightdisplayslituptheirfacesandIevensawsomeeyesfillingup.Returningtotheseniors’home,theycouldn’tstoptalkingaboutallthey’dseenandthankedusagainandagain.Lookingattheirexcitedandgratefulfaces,we’dneverfeltwarmer.（2023·福建漳州·统考二模）OnaFridayeveninginDecember,twoweeksbeforeChristmas,Ilostmyjob.Ihadn’tseenitcoming.Iwasexcitedfortheweekend,whenmydaughter,Kristil,then12,andIplannedtogetourChristmastree.ThenIlistenedtomyvoicemail.“We’resorry,butyourworkassignmenthasendedasoftoday.”Myheartsank.Mypaycheckwassurvival,IdideverythingIcouldtogiveKristilagoodlife,butthereweresomethingsmylovecouldn’tfix.Thenextdayaswesearchedforourtree,IstruggledtobecheerfulasIeyedtheChristmastreeprices.KristilnoticedIwasworriedandItoldherIhadlostmyjob.Shewantedtogivemethe$100thatGrandmagaveher,butIrefused.Mondaymorning,IdroppedKristilatschoolandsetoffonmymoney-makingpursuits.Iheadedtothepawnshop(当铺)withagoldringmymotherhadgivenme,andtheygaveme$70.Nextwastheantiquesstore.IsoldsixPreciousMomentsstatuettesfor$150.Iendedtheday$220richer.Overthenextweek,Ifuriously(猛烈地)appliedforjobsasmybankaccountgrewsmaller.Ifeltasiftheworldwasclosinginonme.Onaweekendafternoon,IdroppedKristilinawealthygatedcommunityforabirthdayparty.Idrovehomedefeated.Backathome,Iglancedoutthewindow.Ithadbeensnowingallmorning.Inoticedasmallwomanstrugglingtoopenhercardooragainstthewind.Asshegotout,Irealizeditwasmyoldprofessor,SisterEsther.Ihadn’tseenhersincewe’dmetforlunchthreemonthsago.I’dfirstmetSisterEsther10yearsearlier,whenIwasherstudentatEdgewoodCollege.AfterIgraduated,SisterEstherkeptintouch,meetingmeforluncheveryfewmonths.Ihadgrowntoloveherlikefamily.Irushedtothefrontofmybuilding.“Whatareyoudoingoutinthisweather?”Iaskedaswehugged.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右;

(2)开头已给出。SisterEsthersaidshecalledmyofficeandknewIwasn’tworkingthereanymore,soshecametoseeme._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenIopenedtheChristmascardshegaveme,Iwasshockedatanunexpectedgift._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·福建漳州·统考二模）作者在圣诞节前丢了工作，接下来的的一周，作者想尽快找到工作挣钱，买下圣诞树。随后的周日下午，作者带着女儿Kristil去一个富裕的封闭式社区参加一个生日聚会，让作者心灵备受打击。回家后，就在作者看着下雪的窗外的时候，看到了曾经的老师Esther。SisterEsthersaidshecalledmyofficeandknewIwasn’tworkingthereanymore,soshecametoseeme.WhenIopenedtheChristmascardshegaveme,Iwasshockedatanunexpectedgift.拜访——进到家里——寒暄——送出礼物——打开礼物——震惊——感激SisterEsthersaidshecalledmyofficeandknewIwasn’tworkingthereanymore,soshecametoseeme.__________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenIopenedtheChristmascardshegaveme,Iwasshockedatanunexpectedgift.____________________________________________Esther说她打电话到我办公室知道我不在那里工作了，所以她来找我。当我打开她给我的圣诞卡时，我被一份意想不到的礼物吓了一跳。我欢迎Esther的到来，同时带她进屋。Esther说她来给我和女儿带来了圣诞贺卡和礼物。打开礼物后我发现了里面的现金，我对Esther的这份“及时雨”表示感激。SisterEsthersaidshecalledmyofficeandknewIwasn’tworkingthereanymore,soshecametoseeme.IneverforgotthesacrificeittookformygrandparentstosharewhatlittlefoodtheyhadduringtheDepression.Andthatmymothercontinuestodothesame.Tothisday,Thanksgivingatherhomealwaysincludesatleasttwoguestswhoare“downontheirluck”.Nonehaveleftherhomewithoutafewbucksintheirpocketsandagrocerybagfullofleftovers—justincasetheywanttoshare.WhenIopenedtheChristmascardshegaveme,Iwasshockedatanunexpectedgift.Intothepackageplacedadollandalargeenvelop.Itoretheenvelopcarefullyandhundred-dollarbillspouredontothefloor.TearsofgratitudepuddledinmyeyesasIpickedupthepreciousgift,whichcouldhelpmegetthroughthetoughtimeandbuytheChristmastreethatIpromisedtogivemydaughter.Feelinggratitude,IhuggedSisterEsthertightlyandthankerhersincerely.（2023·广东佛山·统考一模）Iranafterthetrain,shouting,“Heymister,can’tyouseeme?”Itwashopeless,asnoconductorisgoingtoslowdownfora60-year-oldmanwhogottothestationseveralminuteslate.Theyabsolutelydidn’tknowhowimportantthatday,thattrainridewastome!Iwasonmywaytoaninterviewforwhatcouldhavebeentheopportunityofalifetime.Ithrewbothmyhatandmyartcasedownindepression,andsatdownonthenearestchair,wiping(擦掉)thesweatfrommyfaceandbreathingheavily.Iwouldhavetowaitawholedayforthenexttrain,andbythenmyappointmentwiththegalleryownerwouldhavegivenuponme.Perhapsitwasforthebest.Itwas,afterall,thefirsttimein40yearsanyonehadshownsuchaninterestinmyart.Maybeifthegalleryownerhadseenallmypaintings,hewouldhavechangedhismindaboutofferingmespaceonhiswalls.Disappointmentfilledmysoul.ShouldIdialthegalleryandgetaninterviewonadifferentday?ButPierreGianniwastheownerofthemostwell-knowngalleryinNewYorkCity.Whywouldhegiveararesecondchancetoanelderlynobodywhenhehadthenewest,coolestyoungartiststochoosefrom?Cometothinkofit,perhapstheseinsecuritiesweretheveryreasonIhadneverbeenofferedashowbefore.Iwastooafraidtotry.Ifoundcountlessexcusesnottooffermyworkuptobeseenandperhapscriticized.ItoldmyselfitwouldhurttoomuchifIfailed,butthetruthwasthatIhadnevertried.Finally,Igatheredallmycouragetodialthegallery,onlytofindmyantiquecellphonehadbrokendown.ItwasattheverymomentthatIwasintotaldespairanddecidedtogohome.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SuddenlyIfeltatouchonmyshoulder.____________________________________________________________________________________________ThenextmorningIgottothegalleryontime._____________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·广东佛山·统考一模）在赶往面试的路上，作者因没赶上火车而沮丧。更让作者失望的是，他不知道画廊老板皮埃尔是否会对他的画感兴趣，给他展出的机会。当作者鼓足勇气给皮埃尔打电话时，却发现手机坏了。这时，一位老人走过来把手机借给作者。SuddenlyIfeltatouchonmyshoulder.ThenextmorningIgottothegalleryontime.陌生人帮助——联系上画廊老板——同意推迟面试—