中考英语作文课件(19张)

中考英语作文课件(19张)第一页，共38页。中考专题复习课Writing第二页，共38页。书面表达:

是中考英语中的必考题，占卷面总分的12.5%，分值为15

分。第三页，共38页。文章的形成过程：单词短语，结构+符号

句子段落文章如何把这些组织一篇文章？分析文章的形成过程首先，我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mindmap.在map的帮助下，我们就能有效的到达我们的目的地。第四页，共38页。分析结构

Mikeiscrazyaboutfootball!Heloveswatchingfootballmatches.Ofcourse,helovesplayingfootballtoo.Heoftenspendsaboutonehourplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hisparentsdon’tlikethisandhaveaskedhimtogohomebefore5.30.Hethinksitisimportantforhimtospendsometimeonhishobbies.

Hewisheshisparentscouldgivehimtheirsupportforhishobbies.

IntroductionMainbodyConclusion第五页，共38页。DiscussionHowtoWriteEnglishCompositions第六页，共38页。抄组集连抓审作文集句成段组段成篇审清题意连词成句抓住要点抄写规范

Writingskills—sixsteps第七页，共38页。自从实施教育新政策，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇:makegooduseof,interestgroupssocialactivities,dosports,netbar不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

……第八页，共38页。Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第九页，共38页。第一步:审清题意认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息具体做法：用笔勾画第十页，共38页。自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：不良现象和行为（至少3点）1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏3.……看法我认为……建议（至少3条）合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

……注意:100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数主题体裁人称结构时态字数已知信息未知信息以一般现在时为主第十一页，共38页。第二步：列出写作提纲（Outline）。具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！第十二页，共38页。Introduction

Mainbody

ConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWriteanoutline花太多时间在兴趣爱好上迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏

------------合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

------第十三页，共38页。Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.

Phrases:________________________________________________________________________2.Listsomekeywordsaboutopinions.

Phrases:________________________________________________________________________

3.Listsomekeywordsaboutsuggestions.

Phrases:________________________________________________________________________

第三步：抓住要点，列关键词第十四页，共38页。1.Listsomekeywordsaboutproblems.

spendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies

becrazyabout

playcomputergames

watchtoomuchTV

refusetodohomework2.Listsomekeywordsaboutopinions.notgoodforourhealthandstudydoharmtofocusonPaymoreattentionto

1.花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.迷恋网吧，上网打游戏......第十五页，共38页。3.Listsomekeywordsaboutsuggestions.

plantimecarefullyachieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbiestakepartindifferentafter-schoolactivitiesjoininterestgroupsdosomesports

dosomehousework合理安排时间参加兴趣小组

第十六页，共38页。spendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesrefusetodohomeworkwatchtoomuchTV

becrazyabout

playcomputergames

What’sworse,1.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutproblems.

sothatManystudentsspendmuchtimeontheirhobbiestheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.someofthemwatchtoomuchTV,othersstudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Nowadays,

westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.

Butquiteanumberofstudentsdon’tknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Wedon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.2.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsaboutopinions.

第四步：连词成句第五步：集句成段，组段成篇第十七页，共38页。第五步：集句成段，组段成篇wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.cansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,andtakepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.However,howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?ForexampleBesidesthese,AndalsoweWe注意添加主题句，连接词！plantimecarefullyachieveabalancebetweenstudyandbobbiestakepartindifferentafter-schoolactivitiesjoininterestgroupsdosomesports

dosomehousework3.Makesentenceswiththekeywordsabout

suggestions.

Therearemanythingswecando.第十八页，共38页。Howtogivethiswritinganend?

Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!Whynotputourfreetimetobetteruse?Itisagoodwaytohaveamorecolorfulfuture.第十九页，共38页。范文展示Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”.Nowadays,

westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsdon’tknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Theyspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomuchTV,What’sworse,somestudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Wedon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.However,

howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?Therearemanythingswecando.Forexample,wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Andalsowecansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.Besidesthese,wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!第二十页，共38页。howtowriteagoodcomposition开头:开门见山中间结尾:书面表达六步法（审-抓-连-集-组-抄）抓要点,列短语短语扩句找连接词连句成段与主题相呼应，紧扣主题第二十一页，共38页。1.压线2.斜度一致3.扁4.饱满5.间隔第二十二页，共38页。常见错误时态是否正确主谓是否一致要点是否全面人称是否正确语序是否有问题语言是否符合习惯固定短语是否恰当第二十三页，共38页。如今，中国掀起了广场舞(publicsquaredancing)热潮。对于这种现象，人们褒贬不一。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文，谈谈广场舞的利与弊，并提出解决措施。要求：1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；尽量运用本讲的重点句子。2．词数：80－100词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：遭受sufferfrom；音量volume第二十四页，共38页。Nowadays，public

square

dancing

is

becoming

more

and

more

popular.Mostofthepublicsquaresarecrowdedwithdancers，especiallyinthemorningandevening.Weallagreethatpublicsquaredancingisagoodwaytokeephealthy，especiallyfortheold.Besides，itismoneysaving.Butitalsocausesnoisepollution.Manypeoplesufferfromthenoisecausedbytheloudmusic.Theycan'twork，studyorsleepwell.Theyfeelveryangryandsomeevenarguewiththedancers.Inmyopinion，thedancersshouldturndownthevolumewhiledancing.Inaddition，ourgovernmentshouldbuildmorepublicplacesforthem，suchassquaresandparks.Wehopethatpeoplecanhavefundancingwithoutdisturbingotherpeople.第二十五页，共38页。范文展示Hello,everybody!It’stimeagainforourEnglishBroadcastingProgram.Today’stopicis“HowtoMakeBetterUseofOurSpareTime”.Nowadays,

westudentshavemuchmorefreetimethanbefore.Butquiteanumberofstudentsdon’tknowhowtousethetimeproperly.Theyspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.AlsosomeofthemwatchtoomuchTV,What’sworse,somestudentsoftengotothenetbarandarecrazyaboutplayingcomputergames.Wedon’tthinkit’sgoodfortheirstudyandhealth.第二十六页，共38页。However,

howcanwemakebetteruseofoursparetime?Therearemanythingswecando.Forexample,wecanplanourtimecarefullyandtryourbesttoachieveabalancebetweenourstudyandhobbies.Andalsowecansetupandjoindifferentkindsofinterestgroups,takepartinsomegoodsocialactivities.Besidesthese,wecandosomesports.Ifwehavetime,weshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.Let’smakebetteruseofourfreetimeandmakeourliferichandcolorful!第二十七页，共38页。ThestructureofthearticleIntroductionMainbody

ConclusionSummary

ProblemsSuggestionsopinions

第二十八页，共38页。写作：第一步就是要认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息第二步就是要列出写作提纲（列关键词、连词成句、集句成段、组段成篇）写作前：确定人称、时态写作后：查错改错第二十九页，共38页。中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。写作实践你的烦恼你的做法个头不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少学会沟通，友善待人学习压力大，课外活动少…（自主发挥，至少两点）第三十页，共38页。变换句式并列句复合句结果状语从句Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbies.Theycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeontheirhobbiesandtheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeSomestudentsspendsomuchtimeontheirhobbiesthattheycan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime第三十一页，共38页。思路构建构思列纲提出问题①I'mnottallandI'mnotgood­-looking.②Myparentscan'tunderstandwhatIdoandsay.Ihavefewfriendsatschool.③Ihavetoomuchpressureinstudy.Ihavefewafter­schoolactivities.提出建议①Idon'tcareaboutthese,andIbelieveinmyself.②IcommunicatewiththemandI'mfriendlytomyclassmatesatschool.③Irelaxmyself:Idosportsorlistentomusic.Igoshoppingwithmyparentsorfriends.第三十二页，共38页。自我展示Helloeveryone,I’mLiHua.I’dliketotalkaboutmyproblemsandhowIdealwiththem.

I'mnottallandI'mnotgood­looking.ButIdon'tcareaboutthese.Ialwaysbelieveinmyself.Myparentssometimescan'tunderstandwhatIdoandsay.Ihavefewfriendsatschool.SoIoftencommunicatewiththemandI'malwaysfriendlytomyclassmatesatschool.Ihavetoomuchpressureinstudytooandoftenhavefewafter­schoolactivities.SoIoftenrelaxmyself.WhenIhavefreetime,Ioftendosportsorlistentomusic.SometimesIgoshoppingwithmy第三十三页，共38页。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!parentsorfriends.Inthisway,wecangetbettergradesandenjoythecolorfullife.高分点评：本文采用“总—分—总”的写作结构。首先提出了分享问题与解决方法的意愿，然后谈论每个问题及解决的方法，最后用礼貌性的语言作出总结。本文作者能够较好地处理表格中所提供的写作信息，并能发挥自主性，提出自己的合理建议。第三十四页，共38页。①短语：careabout,believein,communicatewith,befriendlyto;relaxoneself;goshopping②句型：WhenIhavefreetime,Ioftendosportsorlistentomusic.时间状语从句的运用，使文章中的句子显得不那么单调。Inthisway,wecangetbettergradesandenjoythecolorfullife.这句是给出高分的精彩句子。第三十五页，共38