托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：highschoolbuiltinyourcommunity

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托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：highschoolbuiltinyourcommunity

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Doyoulikeanewhighschoolbeingbuiltinyourcommunity?

Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatanewhighschoolmaybebuiltinyourcommunity.Doyousupportoropposethisplan?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailsinyouranswer.

写作思路绽开结构分析

说到教育的话题一般以支持为主比较简单拓展思路。大家可以说教育是百年大计(afundamentaltaskcrucialforgenerationstocome)，当然要同意。社区的孩子就近上学很便利，削减了路上可能发生交通事故的可能性;可以提高社区文化氛围(将有更多的书店，音像店);进而促进社区经济富强;提高就业率等等。尽管社区可能变得嘈杂一些，但是总体上还是应当支持的。

本话题高分范文赏析

Thebasicprerequisiteofsuccessforanycommunityistheeducationofitscitizens.Becausetheadvantagesofahighschooleducationinmytownarepresentlyavailabletoonlyalimitednumberofstudentseveryyear,Iwholeheartedlysupporttheconstructionofanewschoolfacilitytoserveourcommunity.Thecompetitiontogetintohighschoolinmytownisfierce.Therearethreemiddleschoolsintown,butonlyonehighschool.Becausethenumberofapplicantstothesinglehighschoolfarexceedstheavailablespacesinthehighschool,onlytherichestandmostqualifiedstudentsareabletogotoschool.Theskillstaughtinhighschoolincludingadvancedmath,analysis,andhigh-levelreadingandwritingareimportanttoeverycitizen,nomatterwhatprofessiontheylaterchoose.Eveniftheyaremanuallaborers,theabilitytocriticallyanalyzeproblemstaughtinhighschoolwillmakethembetterandmorehighlyskilledworkers.Beyondteachingpracticalskillstomorelocalchildren,anotherhighschoolwillgivechildrenmoreopportunitytoattendcollege.Holdingacollegedegreeisalmosttheonlywayapersoncanbeassuredofgettingastable,highpayingjob.Evenadegreefromatwoorthreeyearjuniorcollegecanmeantheabilitytomakeasalarythousandsofyuanannuallyhigherthanahighschooldiploma.Becauseourcurrenthighschoolissosmall,manybrightchildrenwithpromisingcollegecareersaheadofthemhavenowayofevenobtainingthehighschooldiploma!Wemustmakesuretheroadtohighereducationremainsopenforasmanyyoungpeopleaspossible.Finally,ifwecannotaffordtoopenthishighschool,ourtownwillhaveaseriousproblemwiththenumberofunemployedyouthswhograduatefrommiddleschoolwithnothingtodo.Iftheycannotfindgoodjobs,theymightbetemptedtocommitcrimes,usedrugs,or,iftheyaregirls,engageinprostitution.Givingthesechildrenanotheroptionwouldbothsavethemandhelpsociety.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：humanactivityimproveordamagetheearth

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Doeshumanactivityimproveordamagetheearth?

SomepeoplebelievethattheEarthisbeingharmed(damaged)byhumanactivity.OthersfeelthathumanactivitymakestheEarthabetterplacetolive.Whatisyouropinion?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

写作思路绽开结构分析

看完题目大家先不要急于选择。其实两种观点无论是哪个都过于含混。Humanactivity指的是什么?比如饮食起居，东南亚地区把某种海豚(dolphin)吃得almostextinct;US人养宠物鹦鹉(parrot)，导致南美洲许多稀有品种(rarespecies)濒临灭亡;又比如科学讨论，好的例子许多，比如电的创造;不好的也许多，克隆(clone)技术、基因重组(geneengineering)技术，可能导致道德(moralvalue)的沦丧(deteriorated;ruined);诺贝尔的创造(炸药explosive)毕竟杀了多少人?塑料袋(plasticbags)的创造，导致了多少whitepollution?战斗：从来都是灾难。生化武器，比如炭疽病毒(anthrax)所以比较合理的结论应当是：人类的行为对地球的影响，有好的，也有坏的。很难说哪一种更多。大家可以从这个角度来绽开。

本话题高分范文赏析

Theenvironmentisusuallychangedtobenefithumanlife.Carsandroadsmaketransportationfastandeasy,factoriesmakeproductsthatmakeourlivesmorecomfortable,publicservicesincitieslikewatertreatment,electricity,andwastedisposalmakeourlivesmoreconvenient.Alloftheseadvances,however,comewithasignificantenvironmentalcost.

HumanactivitydoessignificantdamagetotheEarth.Oneofthemaineffectsofhumanactivityonanareaiswaterpollution.Dumpingwastematerialsfromhumanactivityintoriversandstreamsispopularbecausethewasteseemstodisappeardownstream.Themainsourcesofwaterpollutionarefactorywaste,oilandgasrunofffromhighways,anduntreatedhumanwaste.Whenthiswastedumpedintorivers,thewaterdownstreambecomesundrinkableandunusableforagriculture,andalsokillsplantandanimallifeintherivers.Cleanairandwaterisaprerequisitenotonlyforhumanlife,butalsoforalllifeontheplanet.Butairisnowbeingpollutedbymoderntransportation,notablygas-poweredautomobiles,aswellaselectricalgeneratorsthatburnfossilfuelsandpourpollutingchemicalwasteintotheair.Thismakestheairmuchlesshealthytobreathe.Theair-bornepollutionalsofallsbacktotheearthintheformofacidrain,whichdestroysplantlifeandhumanbuildings.Anotherseriouslong-termeffectofairpollutionisglobalwarming.Forthepastseveraldecadesscientistshavenotedadisturbingriseintheaveragetemperatureoftheearththatcausedbytheriseofgreenhousegases,airpollutantscreatedbyburningfossilfuels,intheatmosphere.Scientistsbelievethatifhumanscontinuetoincreasetheamountofgreenhousegasesintheatmosphere,thetemperatureoftheearthwillcontinuetorise.Eventually,thiscouldmeltthepolaricecapsandcausedevastatingcostalfloodingallovertheworld.MajorcitieslikeHongKong,Shanghai,andDalianmightbetotallydestroyed.

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：personallivesoffamouspeople

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Isittruethatmediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamouspeople?

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Television,newspapers,magazines,andothermediapaytoomuchattentiontothepersonallivesoffamouspeoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities.Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplainyouropinion.

写作思路绽开结构分析

这个观点是比较片面的，当中忽视了一个大众的需求问题，所以选择不能同意这个观点。有些媒体(大众传媒massmedia)表现得过于关注名人。但是真正的起因(therealcause)却是大众(thepublic;thebroadmassesofthepeople)本身——大众过于关注名人以及名人的私生活。媒体不过是在迎合大众(catertotheneedsofcustomers;过去几年里,电视始终迎合大众的口味。Inthepastseveralyears,televisionhasbeenplayingtothegallery.)，由于媒体也是商业机构(commercialorganization)，也要盈利(profit-driving)。不是全部媒体都在一味迎合大众，也不是全部的televisionprogram,newspapercolumn都在关注名人。

本话题高分范文赏析

Itistruethattelevisionprogramsconcerningpersonallivesofcelebritiesalwaysreceivethehighestaudiencerating.Itisalsotruethatnewspapersandmagazinesareconstantlyreportingstories,whichareusuallybeyondconfirmation,aboutfamouspeople,andthatautobiographieswrittenbypublicfiguresarealwaysonthetop10best-sellerslist.Itseemsthatweliveinaworldwhereafewindividualsaredrawingnearlyallattentions.Nevertheless,itisnotexactlyprecisetocriticizethemassmedia,includingtelevision,newspapers,magazinesandsoforth,forpayingtoomuchfocusonthepersonallivesoffamouspeoplesuchaspublicfiguresandcelebrities.Infact,itisthepublic,toalargeextent,ratherthanmassmedia,thatispayingtoomuchattentiononpersonallivesofcelebrities.

Mostorganizationsofmassmediaindustry,beinginherentlycommercial,aredrivenbybusinessmotivations.Televisionprogramproducers,aswellascolumnistsandwriters,arealwaysawareofwhatthepublicwanttosee,thereforetendtopandertotastesofthepublic.Toputinanotherway,themassmediaisaudience-oriented,andthephenomenoniswellinterpretedandmanipulatedthatwhenfamouspeoplesuchasactors,athletesandrockstarsgivetheiropinions,manypeoplelisten.Itisthenatureofthepublic,whoarecuriousenoughaboutpersonallivesoffamouspeople,