2023年公共英语五级写作指导

2023年公共英语五级写作指导

第一部分：逆境

一.评分标准：语言第一位;结构其次位;内容第三位;

二.滔滔不绝意识流：

1)自由分段不行取;(compact)

2)语言杂乱不行取;(concise)

3)一段文章不行取;(concrete)

三.无话可说真难过：

立论法：广告效应，(P114)电脑时代，技术转变生活，高校学费上涨，学习和胜利的关系，(P154:伴侣和家庭，电视上瘾,劣质产品,城乡差距),环境爱护的'重要性

驳论法：是否应当购买外国货,是否应当禁放烟花爆竹

四.思维跳动断层多：

启：first,atpresent,firstofall,aboveall,atthefirstplace,ontheonehand,foronething,tobeginwith,为第一观点。

承：second,ontheotherhand,inaddition,additionally,moreover,whatismore,furthermore,third,lastbutnotleast,为其次观点

转:But,however,nevertheless,onthecontrary,unlike,otherwise,conversely,unfortunately,whereas,unfortunately,surprisingly,ironically

合：Accordingly,therefore,asaresult,consequently,inconclusion,tosumup,ingeneral,onthewhole,byandlarge,inbrief,brieflyspeaking

因果：dueto/owingto/thanksto/asaresultof+名词

___inorderto+动词

Alongwith/Coupledwith+名词

As/since/because+句子

CoupledwithAisBthatcontributesto(isresponsiblefor)C

引用：Asthesayinggoes,assomebodyputit,

句型首尾：Givenalltheabovefactors,itissafetoreachtheconclusionthat

Takingintoaccountalltheabovefactors,itisreasonabletoreachtheconclusion

五、低级错误常消失:

三全都：主谓全都;时态全都;人称全都;两不能：不能串句，不能断句

其次部分：写作流程和模版

Issue

1)起始段写法

方法(1),先复述原题,表明立场

Thespeakerassertsthat_________.Althoughthespeakerspositionisnotwhollyinsupportable,farmorecompellingargumentscanbemadefor_______.

1.复述原题,指出其简单性,说明自己的立场

Theissuethat_______isacomplexone,sinceitinvolvesaconflictbetween_____and_______.Inmyview,thefinaljudgmentshoulddependonacase-by-caseanalysisoftwokeyfactors.

2.复述两种立场,表明立场

Sincethe1960s,therehasbeensomeheateddiscussiononthe________.Somepeoplemaintainthat__________,whileotherpeoplearguethat_______.Bycomparison,Itendtofavorlatterpointofview.

2)中间段写法

方法(1)有让步的同意

Tobeginwith,comparedwiththepast,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthe________.Asaresult,________.Withthetimegoesby,itisnaturalthat________.Whatsmore,(缘由2)thepatternof______asawholealsoundergoescertaindramatictransformation.So_________.(缘由3)Finally,thecountryhas,forthepastdecades,witnessedanupsurgeof______.Sonowadays,avarietyofmoderntechnicaldevicesareavailable.Byandby,theyoungpeoplefinditmoreconvenienttocontacttheirparentsthroughtelephoneorE-mailsinsteadofstayingwiththeirparents.Thosewhoadvocate_________mightpointoutthat______.Evenso,thesituationisnotabsolute,norisitthemostcriticalelement.Asamatteroffact,______.

方法(2)有让步的不同意

Admittedly,thosewhopreachabouttheso-calledadvantagesof_____docontainsomeelementoftruth.Forinstance,__________.Nevertheless,thesearguerstendtoneglectthreeotheressentialfactors,themostimportantofwhich,Ipropose,isthat________.Additionally,numerousstudieshaveshownthat_________.Finally,suppose______who______.Surelyenough,____________.

方法(3)拒绝选择立场

Sincethe1960s,theworldhaswitnessedsomedramaticchangesinthe_______.Undersuchconditions,itisnotuncommonthat______________.Forexample,________.Insomeotherinstances,however,theabove-mentionedsituationisnotalwaysadequate.Forinstance,suppose_________who_______.Surelyenough,_________.Anotherexceptiontothisapproachisthecaseof_______.Admittedly,theseareexceptionalcases,yettheydoexist.

3)结论段

方法(1)重申立场

Inconclusion,__________.

方法(2)重申立场,提一些建议措施

Giventheconsiderationsabove,itissafetoconcludethat______hasexertedimpactsonthesustainabledevelopmentof_____,butwhatmeasuresshouldbetakentoarrestandreversethissituation?______areexpectedtolaunchcomprehensiveprojectsthatattachdueimportanceto______.Foranotherthing,peopleinurbanareas,______inparticular,areexpectedtoenhancetheirawarenessthat_______.Manyoptionsstillexist,andhumanbeingscanstillhaveabrightfutureunderaharmoniousfamilyatmosphere.Asanoldsayinggoes,"______.'

ISSUE写作"五不能'

1)观点不能缺乏角度

2)观点肯定不能化

3)专业术语不能过多

4)例证陈腐不能陈腐

5)不能过度依靠个人经受

Argumentation

1)起始段

方法(1)

Sincethe1960s,therehasbeensomeheateddiscussiononthe______.Somepeoplemaintainthat_________.Whattheypreachaboutdoescontainsomeelementsoftruth,however,throughdecadesofobservationandpractice,itturnsoutthattheirstatementhasmanyrestrictions.

方法(2)

Theauthorofthisargumentclaimsthat_________.Tosupportthisclaimtheauthorcitescertainevidenceinvolvinghisownexperienceandobservationwiththeissue.However,closescrutinyofthisevidencerevealsthatitlendslittlecreditfortheauthorsassertion.

方法(3)

Thestatementendorsedinthisremarkisthat_______.However,thisargumentinvolvesthesortofgrossoversimplificationandemotionalappealtypicalofeloquenceandrhetoric.Forthisreason,itisratherconvincing.

2)拓展段:首先承认前者观点的合理之处,然后找到至少两点坏处

方法(1)

Admittedly,thosewhopreachabouttheso-calledadvantagesof_____docontainsomeelementoftruth.Forinstance,__________.Nevertheless,thesearguerstendtoneglectthreeotheressentialfactors.First,______.Second,_______.Thirdandlast,_______.Tosumup,thenotionheldbytheauthorisnotjustified.

方法(2)

Themajorproblemwiththisargumentisthat__________.Anotherproblemthatunderminestheargumentaboveisthat_______.Grantedthat________,itdoesntfollowthat__________.

方法(3)

Admittedly,theideaheldbythosewho__________doescontainanelementoftruth.Forexample,accordingtothesurvey,_________.Butthesearguerstendtoignoretwootheressentialaspects.First,thearguersfailtotakeintoaccountthepossibilitythat__________.Inthissense,______isnotalwayssynonymousto________.Second,thearguersassertiondoesntprovidesufficientdatatonarrowdowntheexactextentofthefinancialloss.Therefore,anyfurtherconclusionaddressingtheproblemofspaceresearchmustbebasedonthoroughinvestigation.Asamatteroffact,___________.Inthisrespect,moneyreturnisnotthesolehallmarkofthespaceresearch.Givenreasonsabove,theargumentabove,underacarefulexamination,turnsouttobegroundlessinitshastyconclusion.

3)结论段写法

方法(1)总结漏洞

Inconclusion,thearguersevidencelendslittlecrediblesupporttoherclaim.Topersuadepeoplethatspac