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[[系PAGEPAGE110:10—10:1540•30••1301：201212Directions：Forthispart,youallowed30towriteashortessayOnExcessivePackaging.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven[系[系PAGEPAGE22：201112Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.1.体裁+2.内容要求：汉语提纲+3.字数：140-3:201212Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledEducationPaysbasedonthestatisticsprovidedinthechartbelow(Weeklyearningsin2010).Pleasegiveabriefdescriptionofthechartfirstandthenmakecommentsonit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.4:201306Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceoflearningbasicskills.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.5：201312Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexinwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreceface-to-facecontact.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.（DearAndy,-Howareyou?YourmotherandIarefine.Webothmissyouandhopeyouarengwell.Welookforwardtoseeingyouagainthenexttimeyourcomputercrashesandyoucomedown-stairsforsomethingtoeatLove,MomandDad.）1.2.翻译：英译汉→汉译英→3.背写：思路+→amajorityof绝大多数→ahostof数量多[系[系PAGEPAGE4→avarietyof→越来越多的moreandmore→anincreasingnumberof→peopleinmounting/large我认为：I→Iamconvincedthat→Tomy有必要做Itisexceedinglynecessaryfor to →itisofgreatnecessityfor to young→youngsters/teenagers/非常、很→rather/particularly/exceedingly/提升/提高→ →strengthen→Important→significant/Enough→TOEFL写作为例：话题：OnEnglishLearning1.2.3.IncontemporaryworldEnglishlearninghasgainedgreatpopularityanditisofgreatsignificanceforyoungsterstolearnEnglishwell.(句)Basedonasurvey,amajorityofinternationalorganizationsorfirmsacknowledgethattheypreferrecruitingemployeeswhocanspeakEnglishfluently.(法表述)(句)Forinstance,itcanbenoticedthatalargenumberofstudentshavedifficultymemorizingwords.Frequently,itisalsodifficultforthemtounderstandtherulesofgrr.Inaddition,thoughsomearegoodatreadingorwriting,theycannotexpressthemselveslyinEnglish.Thenhowtogetagoodcommandof学好thislanguageIamconvincedthatpracticemakesperfect.Onlypracticecanhelponetomastertherulesofgrrandrememberwords.Anditisalsothroughpracticethatonecanspeakandwritefluently,andthereisnootherway.IfwetryourutmosttopracticeEnglisheveryday,thefutureofourEnglishlearningwillbepromisingandhopeful.(180words)161992-HowIOvercamemyDifficultiesinLearning1993-1994-1997-3.又如PracticeMakes2000-HowIFinanceMyCollege2000-IsaTestofSpokenEnglish2003.122005.1200562006-620076欢迎辞 etoour20071220106CET-4DueAttentionShouldBeGivento201112NothingSucceedswithoutaStrong[[系PAGEPAGE720136Theimportanceofngsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomething1：20136月之“做小事和成大事”Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofngsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180（引入图画）Givenisasimplebutthought-provokingcartoon图画描述：人/物++环境+文字)theyoungster/guyexpresseshisworriesabout“disposingofthenuclearwastetohissurprisehisfatherpointstothedustbinand)responds/answersIfyoucanemptythedustbinhere,youcandoanything.” (图画联系主旨)Obviously,thispicturecanbenaturallyassociatedwiththeimportanceofngsmallthings:(评论)ifyoungstersintendtoachievesuccess,itisadvisableforthemtobeginwithlittlethings.(现象概述)Incontemporarysociety,ithas eatrendforahostofteenagerstoignoretinythingsinlife:cleaningrooms,washingclothesandemptyingdustbins.(相关人+感受Meanwhileanincreasingnumberofyoungpeoplefinditratheruselessorunnecessarytodealwiththese things.(举例Acaseinpointistheboyinthepicture.（2）Takingalookaround,wecannoticeagreatmanyyoungpeopleliketheboyinthepicture.However意义)itisthesesmalltasksthatenableyoungsterstobuildupadequateknowledge,abilityandexperience.(万能总结)Asamatteroffact,inligentpeopleinlargenumbershavecometorealizethesignificanceofngsmallthingsforsomethingngsmallthingsbringsusskills,arousesourenthusiasm/passionforsuccess,andhelpsustomakeprogress. (观点：尾段首句万能AsacollegestudentIamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforyoungsterstoenhanceourselvesbyngsmallthings.(万能建议)Thus,weshouldeducateadvocateandencourageourfriendsclassmatesandacquaintancestocultivatethis(1:)Sparingnoeffortstodosowecanwitnessahopefulandpromisingfutureofourlife,workandstudy.(2Dobearinmindnosmallprogressno1.2.3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessaybasedonthepicturebelow.YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexinwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreceface-to-facecontact.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.[系[系DearAndy,-Howareyou?YourmotherandIarefineWebothmissyouandhopeyouarengwellWelookforwardtoseeingyouagainthenexttimeyourcomputercrashesandyoucomedown-stairsforsomethingtoeatLove,MomandDad.Apparently,thiscartooncanbenaturallyassociatedwiththeimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicate:Internetmakesourcommunicationconvenient,butifindividualsintendtokeep/maintaincloseandharmoniousrelationshipwithothers,itisnotadvisableforthemtochatonly/merelybytheInternet.Incontemporarysociety,ithas eatrendforahostofyoungsterstospendmuchtimeinyingPCgames,QQandWechat.Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofparentsfinditratherdifficulttohaveopportunitiestochatwithteenagersfacetoface,becauseofInternet.Acaseinpointistheguyandhisparents:heseldomseeshisparents,andonlywhenhiscomputercrashes,willhecomedownstairstoseehisparents.补充TakingalookaroundwecannoticeagreatmanyexampleslikethefamilyinItisInternetthatdoesnotenableteenagerstospendadequatetimeincaringaboutparentsandsignificantthings.Asamatteroffact,inligentpeopleinlargenumbershavecometorealizethenegativeinfluencesofInternet:coldorindifferentrelationship.ItisInternetthatdoesnotenableteenagerstospendadequatetimeincaringaboutparentsandsignificantthings.→Itisface-to-facecontactthatenableshumanstofeelthetruelove,careandtrustinAsacollegestudentIamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforyoungsterstostrengthenourcommunicationinreallife.Dobearinmind:electroniccommunicationcanneverreceface-to-facecontact.(200词)孩子家长家庭社会素质意识学生老师学校社会素质意识话题相关人相关物社会素质意识32012-Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledEducationPaysbasedonthestatisticsprovidedinthechartbelow(Weeklyearningsin2010).Pleasegiveabriefdescriptionofthechartfirstandthenmakecommentsonit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.(引出图表)ThisisasimplebutenlighteningchartbyUSBureauofLabor:(图表描述万能)in2010,ithad eatrendfordoctors,mastersandbachelorstoearnmoremoneyinaweekinUS$1551,$1272and$1038.Meanwhile,otherindividualscouldnotenjoysatisfactoryearnings,iftheyhadnodegrees.[系[系(图表联系)Obviously,thischartcanbenaturallyassociatedwiththecloserelationbetweeneducationandsalaries:（图表内容评论）ifindividualsintendtoacquire/getbetterearnings,itisadvisableforthemtogainhigherdegrees.（现象）IncontemporaryAmerica,itisacommonphenomenonforahostofcompanies/firmscorporations/organizationstohireemploy/recruitdoctorsandmastersandpaythembettersalaries.(相关人+感受)Andanincreasingnumberofyoungstersfinditratherdifficulttogetbetterjobs,iftheydonotreceivebettereducation.(意义)Itiseducationthatenablesthemtobuildupadequateknowledge,skillsandabilitytodealwithimportanttasks.(总结)Asamatteroffactemployeesandemployersinlargenumbershavecometorealizethesignificanceofhigherdegrees.（观点）AsacollegestudentIamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforyoungsterstoenhanceourselvesbystudyinghardandgettingbetterdegrees.（号召）Dobearinmind:educationis/meansaworthyinvestment.201112Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.(话语引入)Thisisahumorousbutenlighteningremarkbysmokers:“Quittingsmokingisthissayingcanbenaturallyassociatedwiththeimportanceofstrongwill:（话语评论）ifasmokerintendstoquitsmoking,itisadvisableforhimtohaveadequatewilltosufferthepaininthisprocess.(现象)Incontemporarysociety,ithas eatrendforsomeyoungsterstofacevariousdifficultiesinlifeandstudy.Meanwhile,ahostofteenagersfinditexceedinglydifficulttoachievesuccess,iftheyhavenostrongwill.Acaseinpointisquittingsmoking.(意义Itisourstrongwillthatenablesustobuildupenoughconfidencehopeandcourage.Asamatteroffactinligentpeopleinlargenumbershavecometorealizethesignificanceofstrongminds.(法描述)However,accordingtoasurvey,amajorityofsuccessfulpeopleadmitthatastrongwillisthekeytotheirsuccess.Asacollegestudent,Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforyoungsterstoenhanceourselvesbydevelo/cultivatingstrongwill.Accordingly,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriendsandclassmatestoconquerdifficultieswithourstrongwill.Dobearinmind:nostrongwill,no2014年Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthefollowingquestion.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.Supposeaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtovisit,whatisthefirstceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?地很受欢迎，经常被用作馈赠外国友人的（149词）Ifaforeignfriendofmineiscomingtovisit,GreatWallwouldbethefirstceIwouldliketotakehimtovisit.Firstly,GreatWallcanbenaturallyassociatedwith’slonghistory,becauseitwasbuiltinQinDynasty.Thus,ifforeignersintendtofeelthedistinctiveancientarchitecture,itisadvisableforthemtovisitGreatWall.Secondly,everyyear,itisatrendforahostofforeignerstovisitthisce,eventopleadersofothernations.AcaseinpointisObama.Third,itisvisitingGreatWallthatenablesforeignfriendstoacquireknowledgeof’shistoryandenjoythenaturalbeautyatthesametime.Asamatteroffact,individualsinlargenumbershavecometorealizethatGreatWallisanicecetovisitforAsacollegestudent,IamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityformetointroduceGreatWalltomyforeignfriends.Meanwhile,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriends,classmatesandacquaintancestointroduceGreatWalltotheirforeignfriends.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthecartoonbelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexintheparents’over-expectationforkidsandgivesuggestions.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180[系[系youngstertrieshisutmosttorushtothe“fullmark”ofmajorcourses–English,Physics,Mathand ;hisparentsstandbesideandencouragehim,buttooursurprise,theyallignorepsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.(图画联系)Obviously,thispicturecanbenaturallyassociatedwithparents’expectationforchildren:(评论)ifyoungstersintendtoenjoyahappystudy,itisadvisableforparentstobesensibleinexpectation.(现象)Incontemporary,ithas eatrendforahostofparentstohopetheirkidstobeexcellentinstudy.(相关人+感受)Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofteenagersfinditratherdifficulttomeetparents’hope.(举例)Acaseinpointistheguyinthepicture:heistired,buthehastocontinue.(危害)Itisparentsunrealisticexpectationthatdoesnotenablekidstobuildupadequatepsychologicalquality,moralityandconfidence.(总结)Asamatteroffact,inligentpeopleinlargenumbershavecometorealizethenegativeimpactsofthistrend.(观点)Asayoungster,Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforparentstorespectkids’interestandchoices.(建议)Thus,parentsshouldeducate,advocateandencouragetheirchildrentoparticipateinmoresocialactivitiesandenhancetheirpsychologicalquality.•••词性、单复数、时态、语态等201012Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.为了让孩子独立,父母应该(句)Incontemporaryfamilies,ithas eatrendforahostofparentstoprepareeverythingfortheirkids:food,clothes,tuition,andevenmarriage.(事实描述)Inthemeanwhile,anincreasingnumberofchildrenfinditexceedinglycomfortabletoliveinparents’love.(举例描述)Takingalookaround,wecannoticeagreatmanyparentsandchildrenliketh