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现在是2页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Reasons:SpeedingTireddrivingDrunkdrivingCarelessdrivingUsingcellphones

whiledriving......?现在是3页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Topic:Usingcellphoneswhiledriving

1.It'sadangerousdistractiontodrivers.

2.Itshouldbeforbidden.Para2:Argument(论点)1Para3:Argument(论点)2Para4:SuggestionPara5:ConclusionTip1:StructureisaguidetofindthemainpointsPara1:Viewpoint(观点)现在是4页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Para1Cellphonesareusedeverywhere,butontheroadtheyareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.afactaviewpointPara1:ViewpointTip2:Theviewpointofanargumentativewriting（议论文）shouldbeincludedinasummary.现在是5页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Mainpointsofthesummary现在是6页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二1.Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodrivers.Para2:Argument(论据)1usinganotusingaonthephoneontheroadunpredictablecarefulIt'sdangerous.It'ssafe.Driversusingaphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusing.DriversAttentionDrivingResult(Support)现在是7页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.Mainpointsofthesummary现在是8页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Para3:Argument(论据)22.Cellphonesusedontheroadshouldbeforbidden.①②atleast1,000deathsperyearagainstthelawandstrictlyenforcedlawsareneedtoforbidtheuseofcellphonesincarsAnexample：phonesusedbydriversdrunkdrivingSimilarly（Support)现在是9页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.现在是10页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Q1：Beforeusingacellphone,whatquestionshoulddriversaskthemselves?Para4:SuggestionSuggestion1：Suggestion2：Isthiscallreallythatimportant?Yes.No.Driversneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.UseaphonewiselyNotuseaphone（Support)现在是11页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.现在是12页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Para5Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.AsprofessionalracerJohnAndrettisays,“Drivingsafelyisyourfirstresponsibility.”Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.Para5:Conclusionaquote(引语)Tip3:Aquoteisusuallyusedtosupportanideaand

shouldbenotincludedinasummary.现在是13页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.Point5：Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.现在是14页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二1.Cellphonesusedontheroaddangerouslydistractthedriversandshouldbebanned.Skills:1.词性转换法2.近义替换法3.正话反说法4.语态互换法5.句式变化法Skillsofrestatement(重述):“Point1”asanexamplePoint1：①Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodrivers

and②shouldbeforbidden.2.Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingdangerouslydrawawaydrivers'attentionandshouldnotbeallowed.3.Weshouldforbidusingcellphonesontheroad

fortheirharmfuldistractiontodrivers.4.Driversshouldbepreventedfromusingcellphoneswhiledrivingbecausetheycanbedangerouslydistracted.并列句复合句简单句6.主语变身法现在是15页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Haveatry:workingroupsof4tocreateagoodsummaryPoint1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.Point3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.Point5：Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.现在是16页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Factors

Checkingpointscompleteconcisecoherentcorrectobjective2.Nodetailsin40~80words1.Coverthemainpointsusingyourownwords4.Nogrammaticalmistakes5.Nopersonalopinion3.UsetransitionalwordsifpossibleLearntousethechecklist:4C+1O现在是17页\一共有19页\编辑于星期二Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingcandistractthedriversandshouldbebaned.Drivershaveahigherrateofaccidentswhenusephones.Accidentsaredanger,whichincluderunningoffaroadandcrashingintotrees,fences.Justlikedrunkdriving,lawsareneededtorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Driversshouldusephoneswithgreaterresponsibilityforsafe.Inconclusion,cellphonesareimportantinemergenciesandshouldbeusedwisely.Afterall,weonlyhaveonelifeatall.(89words)copyoriginalwordsΛToensuresafedriving,drivershadbetternotuset