2023年浙江首考读后续写真题讲评课件 高三英语二轮复习写作专项+

2023年1月浙江高考读后续写真题蜂鸟报恩Iwasinvitedtoаcookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahumming

bird,desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-websandwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedаpieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherIremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredher

headandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhaps

she

hadbeenstruggling

against

thewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.However,sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foralongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Forаmoment,allwerespeechless.Then

someonesaid,Shemusthavecometo

say

good-bye.Para1.Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummningbirdappeared.

Readforbasicinformation.storywhenwherewhowhatBriefsummary:Isavedahummingbirdinafarm.thehummingbirdandIduringthecookoutinthefarmIsavedahummingbirdPara1.Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummningbirdappeared.

蜂鸟到第二段才出现，所以第一段不能写我与蜂鸟相遇的情节。Analysethegivensentences.给出的句子一般为过渡句，首先提到了我和农场，为避免叙述跳跃，接下来的叙述也应从我或者农场开始同理，第二段的叙述应从我或者蜂鸟开始。第二段开头点名我准备离开，注意第一段结尾与第二段开头的衔接Para1.Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Raisequestionsforthegivensentences.1.WhatwasIthinkingofwhenIenteredthefarm?2.WhatdidIdowhenIwasinthefarm?3.HowdidIfeelwhenIarrivedthefarm?HowaboutwhenIleftwithoutseeingthehummingbird?1.WhatdidIfeelwhenIsawthehummingbird?2.Whatdidthehummingbirddowhenitsawme?3.Didthehummingbirdcomealone?1.WhatwasIthinkingofwhenIenteredthefarm?thehummingbirdWeatherthebrokenwindowgotfixedornot?Wouldtherebeanotheranimaltrappedinthemilkinghouse?3.HowdidIfeelwhenIarrivedthefarm?excitedcurioushopetoseethehummingbirdagainHowaboutwhenIleftwithoutseeingthehummingbird?disappointed

worriedthrilledandexcited

relieved

1.WhatdidIfeelwhenIsawthehummingbird?happyexcitementfloodedovermeIheavedasighofrelievebeseizedwithhappinessExpressionsaboutbird1.拍动翅膀：2.婉转歌唱:3.翅膀:4.盘旋：5.啄：falpchirpflyaroundpeckwing翻译句子：1.那只蜂鸟又浮现在了我的脑海中。（固定搭配）2.一阵失落涌上心头。（心理描写）3.我下车四处张望，却没发现它的影子。Thehummingbirdcametomymind.Asenseoflosswelledup.Ialightedandlookedaround,butfoundnosignofit.翻译句子：1.我看到它十分高兴。（时间状语从句）2.当看到它时，我如释重负，眼里含着泪光。（用一.....就...句型）3.我把车停在路边，急忙走向农场，充满了期待。（形容词短语作状语）Iwasseizedwithhappiness

.At

，Ifeltrelievedwithsparkinmyeyes.Iparkeddownthestreetandrushedtothefarm,

.Appreciatethesample.Para1.Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Thinkingaboutthebrokenwindowoncetrappedthehummingbird,Ialightedfromthecarandmademystraightwaytothemilkinghousetocheckit.Thewindowhadbeenrepairedwellandnospider-webshadbeenseen.Thehummingbirdcametomymindagain.Iwalkedoutofthemilkinghouse,lookedaroundbutfoundnosignofthehummiingbird.Withasenseofloss,Isighedandopenedthedoorofmycar.Appreciatethesample.Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummningbirdappeared.Atthesightofit,myheartwaswildwithpleasure,thinkingthehappyreunioniscoming.Thehummingbirdapproachedasitflappeditswingsandchirpedhappily.Iopenedmypalmandletitstay.“Howareyoudoing?Myoldfriend!”Isaidexcitedlywithhappytearsinmyeyes.Thehummingbirdopeneditsmouthandputablueburryinmypalmandstartedtoflyaroudme.“Thankyou!”IsaidinalowvoiceandIsawhereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.thankyou.Para2.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummningbirdappeared.Atthesightofit,myheartwaswildwithpleasure,thinkingthehappyreunioniscoming.Thehummingbirdapproachedasitflappeditswingsandchirpedhappily