深圳优质课教案 中学英语写作专题 非谓语动词用于写作

StepI.ReviewandFindIFindoutthemistakesofsentencesandcorrectSpeakEnglishfluently,weshouldreadEnglishaloudeverymorning.Walkthepark,shesawanoldfriend.Deeplymovethefilm,cried.II.Summarize____________________非谓语动词

________________________________________III．intheblanks_______(get)warm,Timsatnearthefire.Theystoodthereforhalfhour_____(watch)starsinthesky.______(stand)atthefootofahighmountain,apersonfindhimselfsmall.Isawathief_____(catch)bythepoliceman.Theletter_______(post)todayreachinaweek.Step2.LearnandPracticeUsenon-finiteverbstocombinethesesentences.A．）想玩。2）叫Andy帮照看他的狗。1）wantedplayMike.2）askedAndytohelphimtakecarehis用不定式todo合并两个句子___________________,askedAndytohelphimtakecarehissheep.B.1)Andy看见了一只骆驼。2)Andy总立刻摸骆驼。1）Andysawacamel.2）Andyalwaystoucheditimmediately.用现在分词doing合并句子_______________,Andyalwaystoucheditimmediately.C．1)陈军被他爸爸批评了。2)陈奕军上去不开心。1)ChenYijunwascriticizedbyhisfather.2）Yijunlookedunhappy.用过去分词done合句子，Yijunlookedunhappy.Tips:writeasentencewithnon-finiteverbs./6

Step3.Learnandmin）A.TranslationCombination翻并合并保持良好的心态arightattitude）重要，它可以有助于我们放松和勇敢地克服困难。保良好的心态很重要。_______________________________________________________________________________它可以有助于放松和勇敢地克服苦难。_______________________________________________________________________________Combination:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B.建议原因

有足够睡眠是必要的能效地提高我的学习让们保持健康身体用一个含有非谓语动词的句子表达表格的内容DividethemintosimplesentencesandTranslate:1.__________________________________________________________________________2.__________________________________________________________________________3.__________________________________________________________________________Combination:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Summarize:句型：Step4.PracticeandPromotion（10）写作内容：考试临近，为了让我们放松，我们班决定去春游spring大我们就出发了，由一个有经验的同学带领着。我们爬上山，说着笑着。当我们到达山顶时，我们就开始野餐。吃大餐，我们享受着美景，激动又开心。/6

写作要求：根据以上内容，用5个句子写一段话。尽量每个句子使用非谓语动词。Translation:1.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________赏：用谓动作语升子例1.信息点—节）庆祝活动：除夕夜，全家团圆，吃团圆饭，看春晚。OntheEveofthethefamilygethaveabigfamilyfeastaswellenjoySpringFestival点评：/6

改写：例信点---（基李连杰的个人看法）担忧：最近一些相关负面新闻的影响；展望中国慈善事业将吸引更多人参与。信息表述ThoughheisworriedabouttheeffectsofsomerecentnegativeLiexpectsthatthecharityworkinChinawillattractmorepeopletoparticipateinitthefuture.点评：改写：运非语词定提句例1.信息点---壹金创建时间2007年4月19日倡理念；每人每月捐一元成一个相互关爱的大家庭。信息表述：foundationestablishedonApril19，andpromotestheideathatamonthlydonationofoneyuanfromeachindividualhelpsformabigfamilywhereeveryonecareseachother.点评：改写：例信点---节：是歌手；首播：湖南卫视；效果：为热情的观众和有才华的参赛带来别样的感觉。信息表述：’maonHunanSatellite，offerssomethingdifferentbothviewerswhoexcitedcontestantsaretalented.点评：改写：/6

欣：用谓动优语衔与贯非谓语动词不仅可以作为提升句子的手段可以作为句与句之间的衔接手段而基础写作内容上下贯通，一气呵成，优化语篇。例信点约内卢）简介】位置：位于巴西东南部；人口：约六百万，是巴西第二大城市；旅游资源：世界上最奔放的狂欢节；魅力足球；美丽的自然景色。信息表述：Brazilsecondlargestcityinthesoutheastwithapopulationofmillion，RiodeJaneirogreattouristdestination.Staying，’llexperienceallthefollowingthemostexcitingcarnivalinthe，realattractionoffootballandbeautifulnaturalscenery.例信点---新交规出台背景反通规则2.不明驾驶现象规开始实施时间：2013年1月1日信息表述：wethepastmanyChinesedriversbroketrafficrulesanddroveinbadmanners.Tosolvethese，’strafficrulestookeffectJanuary2013.Step5.Homework:Gooverwhatwehavelearned.Writinganarticle.《爸爸去哪儿wherewe）个节目广受欢迎。这个节目走红有以下几个原因：1.因为五个孩子很可爱，很招人喜欢为让孩子成长、发展，节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会。通过沟通，父亲和孩子们建立了亲密关系，值大家学习与其他节目相比，如歌唱类，英语比赛等，这种亲情类节目更受大家的关注和喜爱。写作要求：根据以上内容，用5个句子写一段话。尽可能多使用非谓语动词。__