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Unit4
SpaceExplorationReadingforWritingChina’sfirstastronaut:YangLiweiThefirstChinesewomantoreachspace:LiuYangHowmuchmoneyhasChinaspentonitsspaceprogram?However......Theearthisstillfacingpoverty,hunger,pollution,disease......povertyhungerpollutiondiseaseIsexploringspaceawasteoftimeandmoney?Why?argumentativeessay1 Whatgenreisthisarticle?(题材)2 Whatistheissue(议题)?It’sanargumentativeessay.Isexploringspaceawasteornot?Tip1:Topicsentenceisusuallythefirstorthelastsentence.Pickoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph.Para1Para2Para3Para4Para5Firstly,exploringspacehasalreadymadeadifferenceinthefightagainstworldhunger.Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromotedtechnologicalimprovementsthatbenefitusall.Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelpedpeopletothinkabouttheworld'sproblemsandeventofindwaystosolvethem.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstop....However,othersfeelthisisashallowview...Inclosing,exploringspaceprovidestheworldwithmanydifferentbenefits.IntroductionBodyConclusionDifferentpointsReadforstructure
Evidence1Evidence2Evidence3TosummarizetheargumentTorepeatthepoint
Countriesaroundtheglobearespendingbillionsofdollarsandlotsoftimeonvariousspacemissions,whethertoMarsorotherplanetsmuchfurtheraway.Somepeoplearguethatweshouldstopwastingtimeandmoneyexploringspace.Instead,weshouldfeedtheworld’spoorandfindimmediatesolutionstootherproblems,suchaspollutionandfataldiseases.However,othersfeelthisisashallowviewwhichfailstorealizehowexploringspacehelpsus.PointIntroducethetopicDifferentpoints
Firstly,exploringspacehasalready
madea
difference
inthefight
against
worldhunger.It
hasdirectly
resultedin
themanysatellitesthat
noworbitEarth.
Anumberof
thesatellitesrecorddataonlandandweatherpatterns.Thenthedataistransmittedtoscientistson
Earth.Aftercarefulanalysis,thescientists
canprovideusefulrecommendationsand
adviceforfarmers.
Asaresult,space-based
sciencehashelpedfarminginitseffortsto
growenoughfoodtofeedEarth’sincreasing
population.Evidence1Howdoesthewritersupporttheargument?Byexplaining
Secondly,spaceexplorationhasalreadypromoted
technologicalimprovementsthatbenefitusall.
High-endproductsaroundtheworldaremade
toahigherstandardnowbecauseof
advanced
technologywhichwasfirstcreatedtomeetthe
requirementsforspaceexploration.
Forexample,
spacetechnologieshavehelpedtheresearch
anddevelopmentofdifferenttypesofnew
material.Theyhavealsohelpedcompaniesmakebetterheart
monitors
andothermachinesthat
doctorsregularlyuse.Today,spacetechnologies
arewidelyusedinallkindsofindustries,and
everydayproductssuchasGPS,memoryfoam(乳胶泡沫)
pillows,andsmartphonecamerasarechanging
ourlives.Evidence2Bygivingexamples
Howdoesthewritersupporthisargument?
Finally,sendingastronautsintospacehashelped
peopletothinkabouttheworld'sproblemsand
eventofindwaystosolvethem.Seeingpictures
ofourplanetasanislandinablackseamadepeoplerealisethatourplanetsresourcesare
limited.Inordertoprovideforsucharapidlyincreasingpopulation,scientistsaretryingto
findotherplanetsthatcouldonedaybeournew
home.Thegreatestattentionatpresentison
MarsbecauseitisclosertoEarth.Inthefuture
humansmayliveonbothplanets.Evidence3
Howdidtheauthorshowthesupportingdetails?Bygivingexamples
BodypartAnalysisparagraph2论点1fightagainst
worldhungerSupportingdetailsparagraph3论点2promotedtechnologicalimprovementsSupportingdetailsparagraph4论点3thinkabouttheworld’sproblemsSupportingdetailsrecorddata,providerecommendationandadvice,growenoughfoodnewmaterial,machine,changingourlivespicture,resources,MarsTip2:Inordertomakeourargumentstrong,weneedtoprovidesuitablesupportingdetail.Tip3:Inordertomakeourarticlemorecoherent,weshouldexpressouropinionandendintheclosingpartproperly.Underlinethesentencethatrepeatsthewriter'sopinioninthelastparagraph.结尾重申主题首尾呼应Introduction
Mainbody
Mainbody
Mainbody
ConclusionThe
structureofthepassageisgeneral-particular-general(总-分-总)However
Firstly
Secondly
FinallyInclosingTheauthorusedmanytransitionalwordstodevelopineveryparagraphs.Whatarethey?Tip4:Tomakeourarticlemorelogical,weshouldusesomelinkingwords.(连词)Languagefeaturesofanargument体裁:议论文人称:第三人称、第一人称时态:一般现在时为主要点:2.1分论点1+细节
2.2分论点2+细节
2.3分论点3+细节2.4……结论Practice引出话题1.Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat+主题
人们普遍担忧关于……的问题2.Nowadays,主题isbecomingincreasinglypopular/serious.现在,……变得越来越流行/严重3.With
thedevelopmentof……,moreandmorepeoplechoosetodo+主题随着……的发展,越来越多的人选择做……阐明观点引出话题1.Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat+主题
人们普遍担忧关于……的问题2.Nowadays,主题isbecomingincreasinglypopular/serious.现在,……变得越来越流行/严重3.With
thedevelopmentof……,moreandmorepeoplechoosetodo+主题随着……的发展,越来越多的人选择做……阐明观点1.Theopinionsconcerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.2.Peopletakedifferentattitudestowards/holddifferentopinionson/takedifferentviewsonthisproblem/thisissue.人们对此有不同看法。人们认为……1.Some/Mostholdtheopinionthat...一些/大多数认为……2.Some/Mostareinfavoroftheideathat...一些/大多数赞成……的观点3.Peoplewhoarefor/againsttheideathinkthat...支持/反对这个想法的人认为……4.Somepeopleholdtheviewthat...whileothersarguethat...有些人认为…而另一些人认为…Para1模板
Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuewhether/that
(某个主题,需以句子形式呈现).Butitiswellknownthat
theopinionsconcerningthishottopicvaryfrompersontoperson.(人们普遍担忧关于……的问题。但是众所周知,关于这个热门话题的观点因人而异。)如何过渡1.Fromtheir/mypointofview,therearethreefactorscontributingtothisattitude/problem,whichareasfollows.在我看来,导致这种态度/这个问题的原因有三,具体如下。2.Itcanbeillustratedfromthefollowingpoints.可以从以下几点解释。3.Itturnsoutbeneficial/harmfulfromthefollowingaspects.从以下几方面来说,它是有益的/有害的。
如何衔接论据?表示递进关系:Inthefirstplace;firstofall;tobeginwith;firstly;what’smore;furthermore;moreover;besides;what'sworse;tomakemattersworse;
worsestill表示列举事实:suchas;
forexample/instance;
take...forexample;
表示解释:thatistosay;inotherwords表示观点:inone’sopinion,
inone’sview,
fromone’spointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforsb,
personally
如何增加支撑性细节事实细节——列举具体的实例;补充相关信息Ilikereadingbooks.Ilikereadingbooks,suchasnovels,shortstories,magazinesandnewspapers.I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.I'dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible,wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences.数据细节——罗列相关数据Studentstookanactivepartinthewritingcompetition.Studentstookanactivepartinthewritingcompetition.Totally758studentssubmittedtheirworksand100ofthemwonaprizebecauseoftheircreativemindsandexpressivewords.引用——引用谚语或名人名言,增加说服力和可读性Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillsucceed.Chancefavorsthepreparedmind.Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillsucceedaslongasyousparenoeffortforit.②逻辑细节——补充条件、原因、结果、目的等逻辑性内容First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople.Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople,whichhelpmeunderstandhowapersoncanworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.
Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Para2
Somepeoplebelieve(正方观点)
Therearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitude,whichareasfollows:inthefirstplace,
(原因一)
.Furthermore,(原因二)
.Para3
However,theflipsideofthecoinis(反方观点).Ontheonehand,(原因一).Ontheotherhand,(原因二).
Para4
Inmyopinion,(个人观点).Firstofall,_________.Inaddition,_________.Inaword,onlythrough...canwehaveabrightfuture
总之,只有通过……我们才能有一个光明的未来正方反方1.生活离不开钱1.钱不是万能的2.钱可以解决很多问题2.钱买不到健康3.钱使生活更舒适3.太在乎金钱会失去人生的意义最近你校学生就“钱是否能带来幸福”这一话题进行了一场激烈的辩论,辩论的内容如下所示:请
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