英语教材解读人教九年级上册九年级Unit7Writing

FreeTalkWhatcanyoudoathome?Whatcan’tyoudoathome?Whatrulesdoyouthinkshouldbechanged?

Withapartner,discusssomerulesathomethatyouagreeordisagreewith.Makesomenotesinthechart.RuleWhyyouagreeordisagreewithitHowyouthinktheruleshouldbechangedSampledialogue:A:Doyouhavelotsofrulesathome?B:Yes,ofcourse.OnlyonSaturdayafternooncanIgoshoppingwithmyfriends.A:That’sterrible.B:AndIcan’tplaycomputergamesonweekends.Ithinktheyshould…Whataboutyou?A:I…Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.Usethefollowingexpressionstohelpyou:Idonotagreewith…IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…Iwouldliketo…Icould…ifI…字数：80词左右【写作任务】【写作注意点】注意语法、句法及衔接词的灵活运用。（1）审清作文体裁、时态、语态、人称等细节。（2）列好提纲，确定好内容情节，划分段落。

（3）运用美词、美句，书写美观。

（4）注意词汇拼写、大小写以及标点符号。【写作思路】引出观点Idonotagreewiththerulethat…列出原因Thisisbecausetheruleaffectsmysociallife…给出建议IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…观点总结Icould…ifI…【分值评定】本题总分15分，按所给内容要点和行文评分。评分时应注意三个方面：内容要点完整；语言正确，行文流畅；书面整洁、美观。分值评定（1）细节内容（包括句式、语法）：引出观点Idonotagreewiththerulethat…（3分）列出原因Thisisbecausetheruleaffectsmysociallife…（3分）给出建议IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…（3分）观点总结Icould…ifI…（3分）(2)书写，标点及行文（3分）Sharingthewritingingroups(1)Doyouusethetense,spelling,punctuation,capitalizationcorrectly?(2)Isyourwritingcompleteorcoherentlywritten?(3)Canyoudescribeyourselfinaconciseway?(4)Arethereanycomplexsentencesinyourwriting?【范文展示】IdonotagreewiththerulethatImustbehomefordinnereveryday.Thisisbecausetheruleaffectsmysociallife.Ittakesawayopportunitiesformetospendtimewithmyfriends.Asaresult,mylifeisquiteuninterestingsometimes.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtohavedinnerwithmyfriendsonceinawhile.Forexample,IwouldliketohangoutwithmyclassmatesuntilafterdinneronsomeFridays.IhopemyparentswillallowmetodothisifIpromisenottostayouttoolateandifthereisnoimportantfa